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Well this is my second review. The story is geting only better. You have no idea what can and will happen next. We could see another people from different worlds, Gods doing their whimsy, opresors, and unsuspecting people. The main charecter gets us trough this well and smoothly. He changes with story. Not like you see normaly in novels having some 'Oh right I was kinda jerk' oh no that here he changes WITH story meaning As story progresses he changes you meet scientist at the start he changes into crazed then quels his madnes a bit and so on. What authors do in hundereds of chapters you may find here only in ten. Visiting another world? 3 chapters. MC having plot armor? Nah no way not in this world. Yes he is bit protected but in no way that wouldn't make sense. All in all I can proudly say that this made it to my TOP 10 list among things like 'My hounted house of horrors', Now for you author. You have potencial. Do not waste it please. Do not throw away quality for speed. Do not stress yourselg too much. You are doing great. Personaly I allways wanted to write my own story but I just don't have the ability to write about one person. I can make ton of good side characters but never the main one. Your writing is one of ways I wish mine to end up as.
This is an excellently written novel. The premise behind it is a little odd, but if you like it, you will love this, just like I have. The world around the main character feels like it moves independently, and not like it all revolves around him.
I enjoy this story greatly. a little shacky at the start but uses that for character development and makes the story even better. I only wish there were more chapters.
This story is simply incredible. The MC is a percent mad scientist and the originality brings fresh air to the isekai genra. Love the songs btw.
I love this. Everything so far is great. I'm going to keep reading with great interest, also please keep going because I know you are going to get even better in the future.
You need a proofreader or proofread it yourself, lots of mistakes. But story seems to go pretty good only on chapter 4 so what I know ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
5/5 story for me. I always loved stories with bit dark undertone. But this makes it to my top 20 easily. Story is original as are the characters and powers are tweked fantasy world. I Love it!
this is amazing I gave fallen in love with it please have more it's dark and amazing it reminds me of when I first discovered reseident evil love please keep writing 💚
10/10 story as expected from the author of summoning went wrong. FILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILL
Well this is my second review. The story is geting only better. You have no idea what can and will happen next. We could see another people from different worlds, Gods doing their whimsy, opresors, and unsuspecting people. The main charecter gets us trough this well and smoothly. He changes with story. Not like you see normaly in novels having some 'Oh right I was kinda jerk' oh no that here he changes WITH story meaning As story progresses he changes you meet scientist at the start he changes into crazed then quels his madnes a bit and so on. What authors do in hundereds of chapters you may find here only in ten. Visiting another world? 3 chapters. MC having plot armor? Nah no way not in this world. Yes he is bit protected but in no way that wouldn't make sense. All in all I can proudly say that this made it to my TOP 10 list among things like 'My hounted house of horrors', Now for you author. You have potencial. Do not waste it please. Do not throw away quality for speed. Do not stress yourselg too much. You are doing great. Personaly I allways wanted to write my own story but I just don't have the ability to write about one person. I can make ton of good side characters but never the main one. Your writing is one of ways I wish mine to end up as.
This is an excellently written novel. The premise behind it is a little odd, but if you like it, you will love this, just like I have. The world around the main character feels like it moves independently, and not like it all revolves around him.
I enjoy this story greatly. a little shacky at the start but uses that for character development and makes the story even better. I only wish there were more chapters.
This story is simply incredible. The MC is a percent mad scientist and the originality brings fresh air to the isekai genra. Love the songs btw.
I love this. Everything so far is great. I'm going to keep reading with great interest, also please keep going because I know you are going to get even better in the future.
You need a proofreader or proofread it yourself, lots of mistakes. But story seems to go pretty good only on chapter 4 so what I know ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
5/5 story for me. I always loved stories with bit dark undertone. But this makes it to my top 20 easily. Story is original as are the characters and powers are tweked fantasy world. I Love it!
this is amazing I gave fallen in love with it please have more it's dark and amazing it reminds me of when I first discovered reseident evil love please keep writing 💚
10/10 story as expected from the author of summoning went wrong. FILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILLFILL