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Vary good story, but fight in the mind was a bit weird. Should of expected it though with being able to make anything happen in your mind. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Very good A ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++for this story!
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I don't get why you authors don't use tag for special things in the novel the MC is Baya oc with knowledge of his powers nothing else the MC has given up the memories of his parents the world he is going to and the Rob so the author took everything that was interesting and removed it such shame it's like an oc with shindu power with a skip button for the when he knows how to use his power such a disappointing thing really if you want to go the Rob way don't remove the memories of just don't mention or allude to it just write some of and do it it's just disingenuous to write this way
La calidad fino algunas partes que corregir pero fino pero malísima actualización no para mi tiene que ser máximo 1 semana y tiene que ser largo para sea buena y legible
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Vary good story, but fight in the mind was a bit weird. Should of expected it though with being able to make anything happen in your mind. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Very good A ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++for this story!
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I don't get why you authors don't use tag for special things in the novel the MC is Baya oc with knowledge of his powers nothing else the MC has given up the memories of his parents the world he is going to and the Rob so the author took everything that was interesting and removed it such shame it's like an oc with shindu power with a skip button for the when he knows how to use his power such a disappointing thing really if you want to go the Rob way don't remove the memories of just don't mention or allude to it just write some of and do it it's just disingenuous to write this way
La calidad fino algunas partes que corregir pero fino pero malísima actualización no para mi tiene que ser máximo 1 semana y tiene que ser largo para sea buena y legible