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First I haven't read the story completely, I just want to clarify something. It seems that the author confuses psychopathy with sociopathy, Second what the system said and as I saw about his personality is more a sociopath. The story is good but it's not my thing.
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no suelo dar reseñas pero esta novela se la marece a si que aqui mi opinion que opino del mc: todo un psicopata nada mas por ahora veamos ese harem que va a tener el mc y en espera que se reencuentre con las 2 waifus de su anterior mundo, quisiera ver de corazon como reaccionaria pero estos solo son mis pensamientos y deseos por ahora seguire leyendo y espero que el autor no la abandone hasta que llegue a su final saludos desde colombia
Looking forward to future chapters hope this one won’t get dropped. Thanks for the hard work. ..............................................
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Hi, I‘m giving myself a prideful 5 stars and wanted to point out the aspects: -Action: He will fight and many people will suffer while the fights -R-18: This includes rape or cuckolding and I will make him the worst nightmare of every man -Gore: Blood, Extreme actions of violence and etc. -World development: Since it plays in a cultivation world, the world will have many clans and pavilions. Thus, I will make it naturally a big world -mc: he will go from weak to strong and will manipulate many people, including the humiliating and torturing -System: Its called the Darkness System and its for him to get stronger. It also increases his strength with each dark act and quests will be given. I just hope I will be able to deliver a good novel and hope you will save it in your library!
The story is great, it suits my taste, and its parallel to my inner fantasy it is an amazing novel BUT there is one problem. WHERE IS THE NEW CHAPTERS! I've benn waiting for three months now, this is the only time i made my review, since i noticed there's still no updates.
Hi! I’m still waiting for your reply. If your are interested in our international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *) for more details.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
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Come and create your own suspense stories and thrillers !!! Hey! Come and check out our Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I, where your hard work and talent pay off. If you like suspense stories and thrillers or stories of these sorts, the contest is your world to run. You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. This might be your chance to begin your writing career, and we have a financial support program for every entry. Moreover, you stand the chance to win the big cash! For more information, you may email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *).
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
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I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaringdom*@*gmail.com(delete *).
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First I haven't read the story completely, I just want to clarify something. It seems that the author confuses psychopathy with sociopathy, Second what the system said and as I saw about his personality is more a sociopath. The story is good but it's not my thing.
I just found this book and im already exited, a interesting idea for a story mixed with a good opening makes this story definitly worth a try
MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP! MORE AND NOT STOP!
It's Amazing that's all i can say ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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no suelo dar reseñas pero esta novela se la marece a si que aqui mi opinion que opino del mc: todo un psicopata nada mas por ahora veamos ese harem que va a tener el mc y en espera que se reencuentre con las 2 waifus de su anterior mundo, quisiera ver de corazon como reaccionaria pero estos solo son mis pensamientos y deseos por ahora seguire leyendo y espero que el autor no la abandone hasta que llegue a su final saludos desde colombia
Looking forward to future chapters hope this one won’t get dropped. Thanks for the hard work. ..............................................
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Hi, I‘m giving myself a prideful 5 stars and wanted to point out the aspects: -Action: He will fight and many people will suffer while the fights -R-18: This includes rape or cuckolding and I will make him the worst nightmare of every man -Gore: Blood, Extreme actions of violence and etc. -World development: Since it plays in a cultivation world, the world will have many clans and pavilions. Thus, I will make it naturally a big world -mc: he will go from weak to strong and will manipulate many people, including the humiliating and torturing -System: Its called the Darkness System and its for him to get stronger. It also increases his strength with each dark act and quests will be given. I just hope I will be able to deliver a good novel and hope you will save it in your library!
The story is great, it suits my taste, and its parallel to my inner fantasy it is an amazing novel BUT there is one problem. WHERE IS THE NEW CHAPTERS! I've benn waiting for three months now, this is the only time i made my review, since i noticed there's still no updates.