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Honestly there's like no story middle of it and it's pretty pointless it's not even a reincarnation story or transmigration you might as well just have an OC character because the characters memories literally get erased Midway through the story
It's a da*n shame that the author most likely died from Covid. This story is one I found by chance and I greatly enjoyed it. I will read this once every year in honor of this author. I recommend reading it even though he/she is gone.
Did not live up to expectations, fanfiction impregnated with tough xenophobia towards everything non-human..................................................
The fic was supposed to be how a person acts when he becomes the emperor of mankind but instead we have emperor of mankind instead because the mc got his counciousness destroyed Most of the fic is not even about the Emperor it's just a summary of events and for 2 minutes maybe sometimes the mc aka the Emperor comes around says things that have no effect on anything and then we are back to summarization It's boring Unoriginal It could have been something good but no
The World Background lore is somewhat similar so thats good, the stability of updates ok but the story plot is a bit eh driven randomly for s fact, the writing quality is fine I guess. This is not a constructive critcism but the characters are not really well into the lore, they sometimes switch from stern to child to teen to stern such as Roboute Gulliman who acted like a casual but sometimes as a stern commanders, the emperor as well,he doesnt want to be a god and doesnt have any attachment to his primarchs yet acts as if he does, in fact I am pretty sure the emperor can only have little to no empathy to normal humans and even primarchs, he could only empathize with other people as old as him like Ollenius Pious or Malcador
5* no questions ask. Only good stuff here. I just hope the author will come back to update this story. I hope that author is still safe because he just poof out of activity.
Great story !! Now, a serious question. IS THE AUTHOR STILL LIVE? because no one normal would give up the book without informing their readers.
i realy like this story ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
one of my favorite fanfics on web novel. if you haven't read it I recommend it, it is a pretty good read.it does have a few grammar mistakes here and there but overall a great read especially if you like interstellar combat. the rest of this is for the author. while I hope you continue to post new chapters doing so, for books like these (space operas) can get really repetitive. so far you have done a great job and are doing just fine so if anyone tells you otherwise at least as of writing this (chapter 120), just know they are in the minority. some recommendations in case you need new ideas or need the inspiration to keep this from becoming repetitive. first off there is this guy called combat veteran reacts, who reacts from a more military standpoint to war hammer videos. this guy would have been more useful early on in this book but it seems I found your book too late. The second is a game called endless space 2. it's a strategy game about conquering space, and you can play as over eight different species.so it is great if you want a more fleshed-out civilization to work with without wasting your brainpower. if you don't want to buy the game I recommend you watch ssethtzeentach's video reviewing endless space 2 at the very least you will get some new ideas for alien races to use. as I have found after writing this you never went into much detail into the alien races, now that I think about it... other than that I can only wish you good health and to have a great day. oh, and if those heretics at the games workshop give you any trouble there is a whole battalion of flashlights ready to purge.
Love this fic not really good at explaining but give it a try there is nothing to lose pretty good in my opinion. Though at first the charcter loses his memories it return later in the story.
This has to be the best novel I've read! So, in this novel it is'nt just in Star Wars, but rather includes other series later on. I mean, who would of thought that the Imperium can kill entire galatic superclusters just with the intensity of a average ship beam?
I like the warhammer 40k universe in there own universe but not like this. I like the gungans and many races in star wars and mass effect. in the 40k universe all the vile Xenos in that universe want to kill our in slave every one else's but bring the imperium of man in to star war or mass effect is a bad idea. That amount of racism will make them the bad guy's every time i had hope when synopsis said some one form or world was made the god emperor with that power he could fix all the bad part but no. I can not read any story that has one of my favorite aspects from one universe completely destroy two others. like come on the mc and all of the imperium like are worse then the Sith or the yuuzhan vong. so i stop at chapter 13: 10
I never played Warhammer 40k, Star Wars and Mass Effect, but this is amazing. You can read and understand this without prior knowledge on the world ib place. Only if you will, than you can search on wiki's for more extra knowledge.
bit by bit the author seems to erase what makes warhammer 40k and humans so awesome in this universe, really quite disappointing after ch 10 explain to me, what is the logic of there being a warhammer40k fanfic without everything that makes warhammer40k fantastic, the obvious decadence, the constant human fear of warp and xenos invasions, really, deplorable this "warhammer40k" fanfic
Wow, it's pretty good, although the Xenophobia and Gothicness can definitely be improved. The imperium doesn't have that Gothic feeling which kinda lowers my enjoyment.
author, do you have a discord server? ? . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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I love so muuuuch this story ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Great story, a bit confusing in the beginning but a good fic nonetheless. limit filllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllled
Intense as hell at the beginning but got better as the plots goes on. Overall, fully recommend to read![img=update]
Honestly there's like no story middle of it and it's pretty pointless it's not even a reincarnation story or transmigration you might as well just have an OC character because the characters memories literally get erased Midway through the story
It's a da*n shame that the author most likely died from Covid. This story is one I found by chance and I greatly enjoyed it. I will read this once every year in honor of this author. I recommend reading it even though he/she is gone.
Did not live up to expectations, fanfiction impregnated with tough xenophobia towards everything non-human..................................................
The fic was supposed to be how a person acts when he becomes the emperor of mankind but instead we have emperor of mankind instead because the mc got his counciousness destroyed Most of the fic is not even about the Emperor it's just a summary of events and for 2 minutes maybe sometimes the mc aka the Emperor comes around says things that have no effect on anything and then we are back to summarization It's boring Unoriginal It could have been something good but no
The World Background lore is somewhat similar so thats good, the stability of updates ok but the story plot is a bit eh driven randomly for s fact, the writing quality is fine I guess. This is not a constructive critcism but the characters are not really well into the lore, they sometimes switch from stern to child to teen to stern such as Roboute Gulliman who acted like a casual but sometimes as a stern commanders, the emperor as well,he doesnt want to be a god and doesnt have any attachment to his primarchs yet acts as if he does, in fact I am pretty sure the emperor can only have little to no empathy to normal humans and even primarchs, he could only empathize with other people as old as him like Ollenius Pious or Malcador
5* no questions ask. Only good stuff here. I just hope the author will come back to update this story. I hope that author is still safe because he just poof out of activity.
Great story !! Now, a serious question. IS THE AUTHOR STILL LIVE? because no one normal would give up the book without informing their readers.
i realy like this story ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
one of my favorite fanfics on web novel. if you haven't read it I recommend it, it is a pretty good read.it does have a few grammar mistakes here and there but overall a great read especially if you like interstellar combat. the rest of this is for the author. while I hope you continue to post new chapters doing so, for books like these (space operas) can get really repetitive. so far you have done a great job and are doing just fine so if anyone tells you otherwise at least as of writing this (chapter 120), just know they are in the minority. some recommendations in case you need new ideas or need the inspiration to keep this from becoming repetitive. first off there is this guy called combat veteran reacts, who reacts from a more military standpoint to war hammer videos. this guy would have been more useful early on in this book but it seems I found your book too late. The second is a game called endless space 2. it's a strategy game about conquering space, and you can play as over eight different species.so it is great if you want a more fleshed-out civilization to work with without wasting your brainpower. if you don't want to buy the game I recommend you watch ssethtzeentach's video reviewing endless space 2 at the very least you will get some new ideas for alien races to use. as I have found after writing this you never went into much detail into the alien races, now that I think about it... other than that I can only wish you good health and to have a great day. oh, and if those heretics at the games workshop give you any trouble there is a whole battalion of flashlights ready to purge.
Love this fic not really good at explaining but give it a try there is nothing to lose pretty good in my opinion. Though at first the charcter loses his memories it return later in the story.
This has to be the best novel I've read! So, in this novel it is'nt just in Star Wars, but rather includes other series later on. I mean, who would of thought that the Imperium can kill entire galatic superclusters just with the intensity of a average ship beam?
I like the warhammer 40k universe in there own universe but not like this. I like the gungans and many races in star wars and mass effect. in the 40k universe all the vile Xenos in that universe want to kill our in slave every one else's but bring the imperium of man in to star war or mass effect is a bad idea. That amount of racism will make them the bad guy's every time i had hope when synopsis said some one form or world was made the god emperor with that power he could fix all the bad part but no. I can not read any story that has one of my favorite aspects from one universe completely destroy two others. like come on the mc and all of the imperium like are worse then the Sith or the yuuzhan vong. so i stop at chapter 13: 10
I never played Warhammer 40k, Star Wars and Mass Effect, but this is amazing. You can read and understand this without prior knowledge on the world ib place. Only if you will, than you can search on wiki's for more extra knowledge.
bit by bit the author seems to erase what makes warhammer 40k and humans so awesome in this universe, really quite disappointing after ch 10 explain to me, what is the logic of there being a warhammer40k fanfic without everything that makes warhammer40k fantastic, the obvious decadence, the constant human fear of warp and xenos invasions, really, deplorable this "warhammer40k" fanfic
Wow, it's pretty good, although the Xenophobia and Gothicness can definitely be improved. The imperium doesn't have that Gothic feeling which kinda lowers my enjoyment.
author, do you have a discord server? ? . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .
Sory exp😔 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I love so muuuuch this story ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Great story, a bit confusing in the beginning but a good fic nonetheless. limit filllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllled
Intense as hell at the beginning but got better as the plots goes on. Overall, fully recommend to read![img=update]