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ìs the author going to continue? if not, I don't want to invest in this story, only to lose.
Best novel of this genre I found so far, and there's no harem either I hope author finishes this one day
Hey just an honest review. I really like this story. I laugh at the main characters antics ever time. The interaction are so different and I like the diversity. I do still feel a Goal or villain need to be introduced to give more direction in the story but I still enjoy it. I am looking forward to more and sincerely hope you will continue writing. 🥺 PS. I know you asked for some feed back like 2 releases before your break. I put it in after since I gave it some thought feel free to read it if you haven't already. 👍
After going through many novels, this novel is one of the most awesome novels that I have read. I hope that the author would update more chapters quickly please.
This is a good novel When will the publication of new chapters resume? Oooooooooooooooooooooooo🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲oooooooooo
Nice work of art @mysterious_pen But why ain't you updating and please what happened to the one on light reader. It been long since you updated it
Hello, Let me just start out with saying I very much enjoy this book. I will admit the slow updates get to me but anything worth while always takes time in my opinion. So more then willing and able to wait. Author please continue this book as it brings me much joy and a look forward to seeing it further along. I know in chapter 170 you left some negative remarks but don't put yourself down. You have a great idea going and I look forward to seeing it grow. I did leave a comment for some ideas if you would like to check back on it. (To lazy to rewrite the whole thing). I can't wait ( really I can take your time lol) for the next chapter. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
hey author why aren't u posting any new chapters for this novel " I can extract everything " it's nearly been a month without any update -- release mass chapters update noweee
if you're expecting this novel to be good then you'll be disappointed, mc has a low IQ and trashy reasoning. Like I know he has extraction system, but that doesn't mean he don't need to cultivate, come on he spend two years on the first chapters like for nothing, he didn't even train his weapon skills much less cultivate, its just like he is living mortal life.
I like MC character and wold development. It's good but updating stability is quite low. I wonder why? Well it is good for people with mature mind. It's worth reading in free time...
I like it. It is the only story that I have ever given any gifts. I would recommend it to everyone. I have read everything that isn't privilege.
I read a lot of slow pace story, idiot MCs, and those who want to be so called "low-key" this is definitely up there, the MC is one of those genuine idiot who want to "follow the flow" and becoming "low-key" so he doesn't really want strength that much, hench 60 chapters and only in the second qi. The story is repetitive in term of flow, and it's extremely boring. Sure there's a comedy tag on it maybe that's why the characters is idiotic, but i fail to find the comedy in this.
This novel is better than most other novels on this site with one major issue, the MC's intelligence, there are many ways the Mc can get powerful quickly but that would not be a good story so the authors makes the MC do dumb things and not think of others. A better way to write cheat novels in my opinion is to give your self points and use those points to create a system, positive aspects cost points depending on how op it is, negative aspects increase points based on how terrible the draw-back is. You can think of writing like a Dungeon Master in a rouge-like tabletop game like DnD, you want to make a compelling story but can't make it too easy for your Players ( MC/readers ), you also can't make the game harder by forcing plot points ( making the MC make dumb decisions ), so you make rules to what and what not the Players ( MCs ) can do via their characters ( cheats/systems ). I realized that this is less of a review and more of writing advice from a reader but Your story can be better author, your idea is original-ish but your execution is lacking as stated by the negative reviews. I am sure you realized this because you rewrote the story and added a limit to the system but you can't make your MC dumb to compensate for the power scaling. An idea for a negative aspect if you ever rewrite this a second time is to make your MC practice to break-through with the system just removing all the repetitive processes ( the MC has to get the idea of how to advance and can do it if given enough time to be able to advance to unlock the ability to advance, so you might as well remove the comprehension points feature ). Do take my advice with a grain of salt as I am not a writer, best of luck.
Cheat system, but with minimal faceslapping, and a decently intelligent MC. I wish there were more chapters, because this is pretty good.
I find the concept of the novel quite innovative with the mc having an op system, but only regarding his current cultivation level and said system will grow with the mc. The problem with this novel is that is simply boring with almost zero interesting events surrounding the mc and stupidity of the mc, which can be seen especially in the auction arc.
love this book but updating stability is very low, like seriously man c'mon only 4-10 chapter in a month. ............................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
why are you not updating the chapters 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
sir why don't you update chapter regularly. 😔 I like to read this novel but author didn't update chapter . so disappointed ☹️.😔😔😔😔😔☹️☹️
I read to chapter 32 until I couldn't bear it anymore. The MC is a full on clueless retard who doesn't make full use of his system or the amazing advantage he has been given. Instead he is just content with "going with the flow" and being "low-key" as he calls it. Note, I don't have anything against the MC striving to being low-key - in fact, I generally prefer those types of protagonists over face-slapping hot blooded youths that can't take an insult and goes around wrecking havoc everywhere regardless of the consequences. My biggest gripe I have with this novel's MC, is that he's a genuine idiot. Period. (at least that's how I would describe him). He has an amazing system that can extract (or basically copy/duplicate) anything he comes within a certain distance of. But instead of getting close to populated areas in hopes to gain more cultivation points and items from other disciples, he prefers being "low-key", as he calls it, and isolate himself. Another example of him being a downright idiot, is that he can extract medicinal properties of pills and herbs and use them in their purest and uncontaminated way - but when a senior brother asks him to go out with him to visit an auction, he, at firsts, rejects because he was too tired from staying up all night, but then later he changes his mind. So, instead of using the energy that he had collected, he goes in and takes the original pill (BTW, he can extract energy from the same object every 24 hours, so that removes a resource from his daily "farm"), and with the pill, as it wasn't the pure energy, he also takes in the impurities. Another example, is that with the Extract System, he has basically copied the entire humongous first level of the sect library, and we also learn that time doesn't pass when he's in the system space - and he can stay in the system space for as for long as he likes while interacting with the items he has extracted. So why on God in Heaven doesn't he hole up and read and gather as much information as possible? I mean, he could generally become the subject matter expert on every single topic that the sect has in their library on the first level? And these are just 3 examples out of many, many others. E.g., him not willing to raise his cultivation but instead spends it on comprehending idiotic techniques at crazy 1000:1 ratio cultivation points to comprehension points, and so on. Or him choosing bow and arrow because he used it when he was mortal and had experiences with such a weapon (bear in mind who can't use longe range attacks with a close range weapon due to Qi and spells, which effectively invalidates his argument - and it leaves him vulnerable to close range attacks), but then uses expensive comprehension points, that could have been used to diversify his weapon options, i.e. learn a close range weapon, on a spell so he can make a lake in his spatial garden. *sigh* So much potential and it's just wasted on a braindead protagonist. Overall, the translation is okay. The world background is as generic as it comes for a xianxia novel. The updating stability is stable, and the concept for the story was good. The MC just ruins the entire novel in my opinion. In short, stay away if you're looking for an amazing read, however, give it a go if you're bored out of your mind and have nothing else on your reading list. This is basically just another cookie cutter xianxia novel, where the author has an interesting writing prompt idea, but then gave 0 effort in planning and execution.
Amazing, definitely recommend. Great story, power system is iron out. Decent side profession (alchemist, refiner, and formation master). Great mc, good story development and great side characters.
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The pace is a bit too slow, the mc’s intelligent is about average leaning to stupidity, despite having an op system he didn’t advance in cultivation whatsoever and simply a bit too idle, if you can extract anything and store its pure energy form there is kinda no point in learning alchemy and blacksmithing since he can just put effect on random pill and it became an alchemy pills and he can just find relic or something and extract high grade weapons from it. Wasted potential.
A great novel and it is just so sad that its ranking is 200+. Other than writing quality everything is 5 stars. The character is enjoyable and he is a true low key character. But that does not mean he is passive. He is active in the story and unlike I cultivate passively the main character gets to breathe easy for a few months and again and even the events he is in is not as life threatening most of the time. World background is great and I do not know what else to say The writing is okay even with mistakes here and there it isn't to the point of annoying me.
This novel is horrendously one dimensional, it's lackluster to the point where the only reason you could even read it was just to pass time, none of the chapters I've read impress me or make me want to read more, I dropped it when I just couldn't force myself to continue reading it, I blame the author because the concept of the novel itself is amazing its just that it had an awful delivery.
come on man!! he got no reason to stay in the sect anymore !! why stay and be afraid of other finding out your secret and waste your time for a long rime to increase your cultivation ...when you could just go to some city or market occasionally and level when ever he could , it's not like every one's gonna notice him among numerous peoples.... like , it could take him at most a year of traveling to be invincible .....
Liked this novel since it started, then it was on hiatus, and now that I come back to read, there are so many changes to the story. The Extraction System has a new ability of stealing something from someone. Honesty, don't like the new version.
A good story! But the problem is you make the MC too lazy, coward and stupid. Doing unnecessary and useless things for the word count. So much filler chapters it's getting boring and the rating of the story for me is getting lower lower.
I love this book An extremely powerful story of a young Southern Negro, from his late high school days through three years of college to his life in Harlem. His early training prepared him for a life of humility before white men, but through injustices- large and small, he came to realize that he was an "invisible man". People saw in him only a reflection of their preconceived ideas of what he was, denied his individuality, and ultimately did not see him at all. This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. The boy's dismissal from college because of an innocent mistake, his shocked reaction to the anonymity of the North and to Harlem, his nightmare experiences on a one-day job in a paint factory and in the hospital, his lightning success as the Harlem leader of a communistic organization known as the Brotherhood, his involvement in black versus white and black versus black clashes and his disillusion and understanding of his invisibility- all climax naturally in scenes of violence and riot, followed by a retreat which is both literal and figurative. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power. This is Ellison's first novel, but he has complete control of his story and his style. Watch it.
this book is a great read. typical cultivation story with a bit of a twist. the mc still is able to "cultivate" much faster than those around him, but you can actually feel qualitative growth, rather than the almost instantaneous power many other mc's seem to gain. mc is very likeable, and quite funny at times. really hope the author is just on a break and will immediately (like 10 minutes from now) start uploading chapters again!!! for those questioning why i gave 5 *'s on updating stability, i kindly point the reader to the authors PERFECT last month! he managed to put out the same number of chapters every day. if that's not stability, i don't know what is!
Writing Quality: 4 Stars The Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh... English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels. The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good. Stability of Update: 2 Stars Writing novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity. Story Development: 5 Stars The pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady. The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base. Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important. Character Design: 5 Stars The main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon. The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people. Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies. For more information, you can read it yourself... World Background: 5 Stars The Author said, "It was good... I think."
ìs the author going to continue? if not, I don't want to invest in this story, only to lose.
Best novel of this genre I found so far, and there's no harem either I hope author finishes this one day
Hey just an honest review. I really like this story. I laugh at the main characters antics ever time. The interaction are so different and I like the diversity. I do still feel a Goal or villain need to be introduced to give more direction in the story but I still enjoy it. I am looking forward to more and sincerely hope you will continue writing. 🥺 PS. I know you asked for some feed back like 2 releases before your break. I put it in after since I gave it some thought feel free to read it if you haven't already. 👍
After going through many novels, this novel is one of the most awesome novels that I have read. I hope that the author would update more chapters quickly please.
This is a good novel When will the publication of new chapters resume? Oooooooooooooooooooooooo🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲oooooooooo
Nice work of art @mysterious_pen But why ain't you updating and please what happened to the one on light reader. It been long since you updated it
Hello, Let me just start out with saying I very much enjoy this book. I will admit the slow updates get to me but anything worth while always takes time in my opinion. So more then willing and able to wait. Author please continue this book as it brings me much joy and a look forward to seeing it further along. I know in chapter 170 you left some negative remarks but don't put yourself down. You have a great idea going and I look forward to seeing it grow. I did leave a comment for some ideas if you would like to check back on it. (To lazy to rewrite the whole thing). I can't wait ( really I can take your time lol) for the next chapter. ( ◜‿◝ )♡
hey author why aren't u posting any new chapters for this novel " I can extract everything " it's nearly been a month without any update -- release mass chapters update noweee
if you're expecting this novel to be good then you'll be disappointed, mc has a low IQ and trashy reasoning. Like I know he has extraction system, but that doesn't mean he don't need to cultivate, come on he spend two years on the first chapters like for nothing, he didn't even train his weapon skills much less cultivate, its just like he is living mortal life.
I like MC character and wold development. It's good but updating stability is quite low. I wonder why? Well it is good for people with mature mind. It's worth reading in free time...
I like it. It is the only story that I have ever given any gifts. I would recommend it to everyone. I have read everything that isn't privilege.
I read a lot of slow pace story, idiot MCs, and those who want to be so called "low-key" this is definitely up there, the MC is one of those genuine idiot who want to "follow the flow" and becoming "low-key" so he doesn't really want strength that much, hench 60 chapters and only in the second qi. The story is repetitive in term of flow, and it's extremely boring. Sure there's a comedy tag on it maybe that's why the characters is idiotic, but i fail to find the comedy in this.
This novel is better than most other novels on this site with one major issue, the MC's intelligence, there are many ways the Mc can get powerful quickly but that would not be a good story so the authors makes the MC do dumb things and not think of others. A better way to write cheat novels in my opinion is to give your self points and use those points to create a system, positive aspects cost points depending on how op it is, negative aspects increase points based on how terrible the draw-back is. You can think of writing like a Dungeon Master in a rouge-like tabletop game like DnD, you want to make a compelling story but can't make it too easy for your Players ( MC/readers ), you also can't make the game harder by forcing plot points ( making the MC make dumb decisions ), so you make rules to what and what not the Players ( MCs ) can do via their characters ( cheats/systems ). I realized that this is less of a review and more of writing advice from a reader but Your story can be better author, your idea is original-ish but your execution is lacking as stated by the negative reviews. I am sure you realized this because you rewrote the story and added a limit to the system but you can't make your MC dumb to compensate for the power scaling. An idea for a negative aspect if you ever rewrite this a second time is to make your MC practice to break-through with the system just removing all the repetitive processes ( the MC has to get the idea of how to advance and can do it if given enough time to be able to advance to unlock the ability to advance, so you might as well remove the comprehension points feature ). Do take my advice with a grain of salt as I am not a writer, best of luck.
Cheat system, but with minimal faceslapping, and a decently intelligent MC. I wish there were more chapters, because this is pretty good.
I find the concept of the novel quite innovative with the mc having an op system, but only regarding his current cultivation level and said system will grow with the mc. The problem with this novel is that is simply boring with almost zero interesting events surrounding the mc and stupidity of the mc, which can be seen especially in the auction arc.
love this book but updating stability is very low, like seriously man c'mon only 4-10 chapter in a month. ............................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
why are you not updating the chapters 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
sir why don't you update chapter regularly. 😔 I like to read this novel but author didn't update chapter . so disappointed ☹️.😔😔😔😔😔☹️☹️
I read to chapter 32 until I couldn't bear it anymore. The MC is a full on clueless retard who doesn't make full use of his system or the amazing advantage he has been given. Instead he is just content with "going with the flow" and being "low-key" as he calls it. Note, I don't have anything against the MC striving to being low-key - in fact, I generally prefer those types of protagonists over face-slapping hot blooded youths that can't take an insult and goes around wrecking havoc everywhere regardless of the consequences. My biggest gripe I have with this novel's MC, is that he's a genuine idiot. Period. (at least that's how I would describe him). He has an amazing system that can extract (or basically copy/duplicate) anything he comes within a certain distance of. But instead of getting close to populated areas in hopes to gain more cultivation points and items from other disciples, he prefers being "low-key", as he calls it, and isolate himself. Another example of him being a downright idiot, is that he can extract medicinal properties of pills and herbs and use them in their purest and uncontaminated way - but when a senior brother asks him to go out with him to visit an auction, he, at firsts, rejects because he was too tired from staying up all night, but then later he changes his mind. So, instead of using the energy that he had collected, he goes in and takes the original pill (BTW, he can extract energy from the same object every 24 hours, so that removes a resource from his daily "farm"), and with the pill, as it wasn't the pure energy, he also takes in the impurities. Another example, is that with the Extract System, he has basically copied the entire humongous first level of the sect library, and we also learn that time doesn't pass when he's in the system space - and he can stay in the system space for as for long as he likes while interacting with the items he has extracted. So why on God in Heaven doesn't he hole up and read and gather as much information as possible? I mean, he could generally become the subject matter expert on every single topic that the sect has in their library on the first level? And these are just 3 examples out of many, many others. E.g., him not willing to raise his cultivation but instead spends it on comprehending idiotic techniques at crazy 1000:1 ratio cultivation points to comprehension points, and so on. Or him choosing bow and arrow because he used it when he was mortal and had experiences with such a weapon (bear in mind who can't use longe range attacks with a close range weapon due to Qi and spells, which effectively invalidates his argument - and it leaves him vulnerable to close range attacks), but then uses expensive comprehension points, that could have been used to diversify his weapon options, i.e. learn a close range weapon, on a spell so he can make a lake in his spatial garden. *sigh* So much potential and it's just wasted on a braindead protagonist. Overall, the translation is okay. The world background is as generic as it comes for a xianxia novel. The updating stability is stable, and the concept for the story was good. The MC just ruins the entire novel in my opinion. In short, stay away if you're looking for an amazing read, however, give it a go if you're bored out of your mind and have nothing else on your reading list. This is basically just another cookie cutter xianxia novel, where the author has an interesting writing prompt idea, but then gave 0 effort in planning and execution.
Amazing, definitely recommend. Great story, power system is iron out. Decent side profession (alchemist, refiner, and formation master). Great mc, good story development and great side characters.
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The pace is a bit too slow, the mc’s intelligent is about average leaning to stupidity, despite having an op system he didn’t advance in cultivation whatsoever and simply a bit too idle, if you can extract anything and store its pure energy form there is kinda no point in learning alchemy and blacksmithing since he can just put effect on random pill and it became an alchemy pills and he can just find relic or something and extract high grade weapons from it. Wasted potential.
A great novel and it is just so sad that its ranking is 200+. Other than writing quality everything is 5 stars. The character is enjoyable and he is a true low key character. But that does not mean he is passive. He is active in the story and unlike I cultivate passively the main character gets to breathe easy for a few months and again and even the events he is in is not as life threatening most of the time. World background is great and I do not know what else to say The writing is okay even with mistakes here and there it isn't to the point of annoying me.
This novel is horrendously one dimensional, it's lackluster to the point where the only reason you could even read it was just to pass time, none of the chapters I've read impress me or make me want to read more, I dropped it when I just couldn't force myself to continue reading it, I blame the author because the concept of the novel itself is amazing its just that it had an awful delivery.
come on man!! he got no reason to stay in the sect anymore !! why stay and be afraid of other finding out your secret and waste your time for a long rime to increase your cultivation ...when you could just go to some city or market occasionally and level when ever he could , it's not like every one's gonna notice him among numerous peoples.... like , it could take him at most a year of traveling to be invincible .....
Liked this novel since it started, then it was on hiatus, and now that I come back to read, there are so many changes to the story. The Extraction System has a new ability of stealing something from someone. Honesty, don't like the new version.
A good story! But the problem is you make the MC too lazy, coward and stupid. Doing unnecessary and useless things for the word count. So much filler chapters it's getting boring and the rating of the story for me is getting lower lower.
I love this book An extremely powerful story of a young Southern Negro, from his late high school days through three years of college to his life in Harlem. His early training prepared him for a life of humility before white men, but through injustices- large and small, he came to realize that he was an "invisible man". People saw in him only a reflection of their preconceived ideas of what he was, denied his individuality, and ultimately did not see him at all. This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. The boy's dismissal from college because of an innocent mistake, his shocked reaction to the anonymity of the North and to Harlem, his nightmare experiences on a one-day job in a paint factory and in the hospital, his lightning success as the Harlem leader of a communistic organization known as the Brotherhood, his involvement in black versus white and black versus black clashes and his disillusion and understanding of his invisibility- all climax naturally in scenes of violence and riot, followed by a retreat which is both literal and figurative. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power. This is Ellison's first novel, but he has complete control of his story and his style. Watch it.
this book is a great read. typical cultivation story with a bit of a twist. the mc still is able to "cultivate" much faster than those around him, but you can actually feel qualitative growth, rather than the almost instantaneous power many other mc's seem to gain. mc is very likeable, and quite funny at times. really hope the author is just on a break and will immediately (like 10 minutes from now) start uploading chapters again!!! for those questioning why i gave 5 *'s on updating stability, i kindly point the reader to the authors PERFECT last month! he managed to put out the same number of chapters every day. if that's not stability, i don't know what is!
Writing Quality: 4 Stars The Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh... English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels. The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good. Stability of Update: 2 Stars Writing novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity. Story Development: 5 Stars The pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady. The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base. Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important. Character Design: 5 Stars The main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon. The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people. Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies. For more information, you can read it yourself... World Background: 5 Stars The Author said, "It was good... I think."