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This is a masterpiece it stands above many novels and you feel for the characters last chapter I read mc friend dies and it’s sad but it has a sort of realism because he didn’t have plot armor so he was captured as a gladiator and he made 2 friends a boy and a girl the boy died this isn’t harem the main love interest is in Sparta but he is in Rome
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This is one of the best (at least for me) novel I have ever read. I am at around 400th chapter, story is going well so far. I want to know, if the story is over at 470 chapters or there is another part/book?
It is decent however I my suspicions it takes inspiration from where which is completely alright however it is common practice to state as such. I believe it takes inspiration from The Mech Touch. A novel about Ves Larkinson who wishes to become a mech pilot but doesn't and ends up designing mechs, the use of "exotics" are similar in both novels however that doesn't detract from the novel itself.
Normally, I don't read books likw this, but I have to say, Great, your book is great! I love the first chapter especially. Now I feel like my writing skills are mediocre 🤧
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Love it, keep up the good work author. Really promising plot and amazing world building and characters. Please keep up with the good work!
portals, high technology and no internet, lack of any communication between people? hard to believe. Please work on worldbulding . . . . .
NGL, it started slow for the first two chapters. And though I did not like Chapter 2, it covered a lot of the world history, lore, characters, etc. Starting with chapters 3 & 4, it really picks up. Not only with the action but the survival. The MC encounters augmented animals and has to figure out tactful ways to survive the onslaught of dangerous beasts. To make it better, this story maintains sarcasm even though the survival which keeps a sense of realism to the story. As a veteran myself, I found a lot of this relatable. Definitely a good read to keep in my reading list.
Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates.
Author's review and Tags list: Sci-fi, Action, Adventure, Military, Mechs, Genius male lead, Robots, and A. Is, Martial arts, Exobeasts, Futuristic earth. The novel is mostly filled with lots of action. A little romance, will be introduced in the later chapters. I'm aiming for 1,000 chapter range. Like this review, so others can see this tag.
This book wowed my creative imagination! It shown me a new world, full of excitement and thrill. This is worth the read! Very impressive! Salute to the author. Job well done! 🤩
great start, I'm believing that he will be a spartan to the end, honestly got some chill reading this, but for all the right reason. Mc could borderline be a legend soon.
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As someone who is pretty picky with which book I review, all I gotta say is I can’t wait to read the new chapters every day. I won’t explain much like the other reviews, all I can say is read it!
Amazing book, the book and and the author are gems. The first chapters got me hooked and now, I can't seem to drop my phone, I'm so anxious to read the next chapters. Lovely book.
hopefully, he doesn't get ass r.a.p.e.d as "training" because fun fact, the spartan kids got fingered among other things by their trainers as part of their training. ow and the spartan women would make fun of the spartan men/kids who showed a slight bit of weakness and many died by committing suicide....finally it has been recorded that spartan women were "thicc" because they too did a shit ton of training, not to fight but to birth babies as that was their only job so they had leg days every day lmao
i love this story. frequent updates, good supporting characters. with some character interaction and minor sub-plots nice transition. most of all mc is not some idiot that wound not although being attack. but there are two some problems: 1 there not much Adventure like want was promised 2 Romance is weak to the point of not being there.
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Absolutely ingenious! I was fascinated after reading only the synopsis! A fast paced and highly entertaining tale,complex and exhilarating.Wonderful work!
The writting is neat! the way it introduced the world is perfect and the characters are absolutely relatable in some ways .i love it and truly recommend it!!
I love how the story is being described and I can relate to the characters on it. It got me hooked from the synopsis and I will definitely read this until the end 😊 Kudos writer!
Hey, guys. I want to write another review on my book, this is my alternate account. I don't have much to write again, it's just if you are reading this book I'll really love it if you leave a comment so that I can connect with you guys and please don't forget to leave your power stone behind. It'll be in safe hands here.
The story background seemed very interesting as I moved on, the author's way of captivating and describing the characters was very much detailed. Overall, the novel appears to be a very reader-friendly one. keep it up.
"THE CONSPIRACY OF THE ELITES" is a masterpiece.. Wow! Author you wow me! This is indeed my kind of read, it the synopsis has set the right irresistible pace to drag readers in to find out more in our world of advance technologies, where the digital system runs with d current AI believed to be super intelligent than man.. Then, what will be the fate of mankind when technologies takes? While I was reading the synopsis, this was the question prompted in my heart. I wish to continue to read, because the author has done a commendable job.. I recommend this book as an excellent read. Kudos to this amazing author.
the author has done a very good job in creating such a good story background... I find each chapter so far really interesting and I would definetly recommend this book.... once again good job author... keep it up... I will wait for more chapters....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins]
I will say that no one should pass up on this book, this is an amazing read and I'm telling you from experience, I love the way the author gives us insights into the world on each chapters this work has a lot of potential and I hope it gets to go places, I'd totally recommend this
From the cover alone you will know that this is a great book. This book is one in a million. Just thumbs up..This book is amazing. So captivating. This is indeed has a nice plot. Lovely character. Badass. Love eveything.. goodjob author. Thumbs up.😀😃
okay, wont lie, its too stretched out but tbvh from the first 10 chapters all that i understood was why readers are so devoted to this novel! its truly exasperating to read a work of fiction like this, HOW DO U EVEN COME UP WITH SUCH PLOTS WTHHHHH I'm shookkk.
This is a masterpiece it stands above many novels and you feel for the characters last chapter I read mc friend dies and it’s sad but it has a sort of realism because he didn’t have plot armor so he was captured as a gladiator and he made 2 friends a boy and a girl the boy died this isn’t harem the main love interest is in Sparta but he is in Rome
Spoiler enthüllen This is one of the best (at least for me) novel I have ever read. I am at around 400th chapter, story is going well so far. I want to know, if the story is over at 470 chapters or there is another part/book?
It is decent however I my suspicions it takes inspiration from where which is completely alright however it is common practice to state as such. I believe it takes inspiration from The Mech Touch. A novel about Ves Larkinson who wishes to become a mech pilot but doesn't and ends up designing mechs, the use of "exotics" are similar in both novels however that doesn't detract from the novel itself.
Normally, I don't read books likw this, but I have to say, Great, your book is great! I love the first chapter especially. Now I feel like my writing skills are mediocre 🤧
Nice Novel Keep it up 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Love it, keep up the good work author. Really promising plot and amazing world building and characters. Please keep up with the good work!
portals, high technology and no internet, lack of any communication between people? hard to believe. Please work on worldbulding . . . . .
NGL, it started slow for the first two chapters. And though I did not like Chapter 2, it covered a lot of the world history, lore, characters, etc. Starting with chapters 3 & 4, it really picks up. Not only with the action but the survival. The MC encounters augmented animals and has to figure out tactful ways to survive the onslaught of dangerous beasts. To make it better, this story maintains sarcasm even though the survival which keeps a sense of realism to the story. As a veteran myself, I found a lot of this relatable. Definitely a good read to keep in my reading list.
Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates. Great story and I hope there are regular updates.
Author's review and Tags list: Sci-fi, Action, Adventure, Military, Mechs, Genius male lead, Robots, and A. Is, Martial arts, Exobeasts, Futuristic earth. The novel is mostly filled with lots of action. A little romance, will be introduced in the later chapters. I'm aiming for 1,000 chapter range. Like this review, so others can see this tag.
This book wowed my creative imagination! It shown me a new world, full of excitement and thrill. This is worth the read! Very impressive! Salute to the author. Job well done! 🤩
great start, I'm believing that he will be a spartan to the end, honestly got some chill reading this, but for all the right reason. Mc could borderline be a legend soon.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email：luffyringdom@gmail.com
As someone who is pretty picky with which book I review, all I gotta say is I can’t wait to read the new chapters every day. I won’t explain much like the other reviews, all I can say is read it!
Amazing book, the book and and the author are gems. The first chapters got me hooked and now, I can't seem to drop my phone, I'm so anxious to read the next chapters. Lovely book.
hopefully, he doesn't get ass r.a.p.e.d as "training" because fun fact, the spartan kids got fingered among other things by their trainers as part of their training. ow and the spartan women would make fun of the spartan men/kids who showed a slight bit of weakness and many died by committing suicide....finally it has been recorded that spartan women were "thicc" because they too did a shit ton of training, not to fight but to birth babies as that was their only job so they had leg days every day lmao
i love this story. frequent updates, good supporting characters. with some character interaction and minor sub-plots nice transition. most of all mc is not some idiot that wound not although being attack. but there are two some problems: 1 there not much Adventure like want was promised 2 Romance is weak to the point of not being there.
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Absolutely ingenious! I was fascinated after reading only the synopsis! A fast paced and highly entertaining tale,complex and exhilarating.Wonderful work!
The writting is neat! the way it introduced the world is perfect and the characters are absolutely relatable in some ways .i love it and truly recommend it!!
I love how the story is being described and I can relate to the characters on it. It got me hooked from the synopsis and I will definitely read this until the end 😊 Kudos writer!
Hey, guys. I want to write another review on my book, this is my alternate account. I don't have much to write again, it's just if you are reading this book I'll really love it if you leave a comment so that I can connect with you guys and please don't forget to leave your power stone behind. It'll be in safe hands here.
The story background seemed very interesting as I moved on, the author's way of captivating and describing the characters was very much detailed. Overall, the novel appears to be a very reader-friendly one. keep it up.
"THE CONSPIRACY OF THE ELITES" is a masterpiece.. Wow! Author you wow me! This is indeed my kind of read, it the synopsis has set the right irresistible pace to drag readers in to find out more in our world of advance technologies, where the digital system runs with d current AI believed to be super intelligent than man.. Then, what will be the fate of mankind when technologies takes? While I was reading the synopsis, this was the question prompted in my heart. I wish to continue to read, because the author has done a commendable job.. I recommend this book as an excellent read. Kudos to this amazing author.
the author has done a very good job in creating such a good story background... I find each chapter so far really interesting and I would definetly recommend this book.... once again good job author... keep it up... I will wait for more chapters....[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins]
I will say that no one should pass up on this book, this is an amazing read and I'm telling you from experience, I love the way the author gives us insights into the world on each chapters this work has a lot of potential and I hope it gets to go places, I'd totally recommend this
From the cover alone you will know that this is a great book. This book is one in a million. Just thumbs up..This book is amazing. So captivating. This is indeed has a nice plot. Lovely character. Badass. Love eveything.. goodjob author. Thumbs up.😀😃
okay, wont lie, its too stretched out but tbvh from the first 10 chapters all that i understood was why readers are so devoted to this novel! its truly exasperating to read a work of fiction like this, HOW DO U EVEN COME UP WITH SUCH PLOTS WTHHHHH I'm shookkk.
The ending is abrut but still pretty good