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the first hundred chapters are the most interesting and well written, it's a pity that then the quality of the novel has fallen dramatically. Especially the useless clone chapters. Or the fact that MC lets go of his enemies every time - settlers or clones of the dragon emperor. Yes, he explains that they have life-saving techniques or artifacts, but most of them should not have such things as they come out of ordinary society. Extremely long chapters. It was one of the xiangxia that I really LOVED, but now it's not readable. :(
I really love the novel as it contains all the standard cultivation novel themes in one book. However, the dialogue between characters gets weird and robotic. The worst thing is that the author does not upload frequently, or the novel would of been higher rated, which of get more readers. I am frustrated and anxious for every update, checking everyday with a sliver of hope. Wish the author would start writing new chapters soon.
This novel started well, then you have a sharp drop then well again then another sharp drop now i don't really now. At first i liked it it was somewhat novel for me, then the mc started having problems with his cultivation and i liked this too somewhat ( it was a first) however the author has a tendency to waste chapters like the first time he had problem with cultivation was fine, the second time no with the second time we have a lot of chapters where i don't really feel anything like the mc goes from place a to place b and things happen but at the end the mc is still the same. we also have the clones of the mc which are a totally fillers if you jump them you lose nothing the clones also have problems with cultivation so no progress for them at all ( we have DOZENS of chapters on the clones that are totally pointless, the novel has what? 300 chapters? maybe not 1/3 but definitly 1/4 of the novel is only on the extremely boring life of the clones). The clones wouldn't really be that big of a problem but the author only publishes like 2/3 chapters a week so you can really feel those fillers. Still at the i somewhat like the novel even tought the clones are slowly grinding down my rating.
honestly couldn't tell if I even liked the story as they were only three short chapters available to read and chapters 4 through 25 are paywalled by Amazon. which is stupid as most cultivation novel readers don't even know whether they like a cultivation novel until somewhere between chapter 15 and 30 and that's dependent on other factors such as the length of chapters and how much content was in those chapters. so those are key chapters to hooking in new readers to support you on your patreon or whether they want to read more and by the book off Amazon. your marketing strategy is stupid as you don't show enough content to actually hook in new readers to want to buy it.
Nah I’ll tell you right now don’ even bother to start you can’t even access the first 25 chapters because the author decided to sell it separately on Amazon
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its awesome story . read it-------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The novel is... OK? The starting was quite fantastic and the ideas are quite good. The main problem here is why would author post useless chapters without any contents? Asking readers to read somewhere on another platform? I really hate it. There is only 'The chapters 1 to 25 or 26 to 50 are posted on Bla Bla Bla' made me mad! Why would you post chapters here? I feel like that you are using this platform as an advertisement for gathering readers. Note: I have read only first 45 chapters only. Now comes the review about story. The problem in this novel is: The main problem here is every'thing' distains MC. For god's sake, he's someone from a huge background but from the very start, even the mobs and side characters are showing distain and I'll intent toward MC as if he's a beggar and useless person. Evey single place, Every single event, MC is distained by people and MC and his supporters do not do a thing or don't even know a thing. My head hurts while reading such novels! Why would you write something like that? Is MC a mascot? Is MC a goody guy who spares everyone? I can't say... The background is very confusing. Is he someone with strong background? or is he from a normal/mid level background? Everyone distains him and makes me confused. Then the world background is also very confusing. What are the ranks of Aristocrasts? One guy says he's from Gu or whatever empire he is and show distain to MC and it turned out that he have a weak background. He was acting so arrogant that I felt that he had same background as MC. It's so bad that it started to kill my remaining brain cells. The chapters are messed. Some chapters are available on one site, while some are only available on other sites. It's so troublesome that I had to switch 3 different platforms to get a good amount of chapters to read.
Great grammar and story/plot considering its a cultivation novel. The mc is neat, also the characters are significant enough that if you read straight through it would be easy to know who's who. I like the side story too
We need to change the cover, the book is lost among the others, I think it will be better this way ......................................................
Dude/Dudette, this is awesome. I've been looking for stories like this ever since I've read History's Strongest Senior Brother, most haven't delivered and forgotten but you've went above and beyond. Whereas in typical cultivation novels you'd feel the transition from one arc to another till it becomes repetitive, yours doesn't. The transition is smooth and the "fillers" you put in between are very enjoyable. It's not tedious to read at all. I think I reached 197 in a day before I thought I needed a rest. However one critique I might have is the amount of characters presented. I know Xiri, Daoyi, Xia Yushan, the mother, the fox clone,the sect master and even the concealed emperor but I almost forgot about the Dragon emperor after the demon arc, what more about the other characters. Also I feel liked the plot has slowed down a bit in the demon arc but I think that's just me realizing I'm running out of chapters to read. all in all This story is solid.
A very interesting, funny and action packed novel. Very realistic compared to other cultivation novels and I also like the way the author likes to shatter some of the typical cultivation tropes, my only disappointment is that updates are not frequent enough, apart from that it is a wonderful read.
Pretty epic. Saw the rating, thought it deserved more hence im writing this review. Starts of as a parody, and then turns into a well written cultivation story.
Started out with decent potential, but lots of word wasting, uninteresting main characters, plot armor antagonists and a general lack of interesting content made it near-unreadable as it went on. Sadly, this shows the writer's insufficient experience and missing care and dedication towards the story as a whole. Too bad.
This is a type of work that get trash as it progresses It was really awesome till first 150 chapters then got really boring till the point that i might have fallen a sleep
Boriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg!!!! Boring 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😪😪😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴 Imagine I really tried to read this book but it's developing too slow.Where is the ROMANCE, THRILL, ACTION and all those things that are NOT BORING AND NOT REAL. l was not looking for a coward, crybaby with no distinguishing character. WHAT MAKES HIM STAND OUT! 👎👎👎👎 NO OFFENSE BORING!
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it's a great book, I hope it is harem not just daoyi........................................................................................
read it ....................................................................................................................................................................
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Story started out great... But it keeps on going downhill... The first problem started when almost all villians always escape even when the MC is equiped with very powerful talismans and artifacts... Even the mother one of the top immortals who is very overprotective ignores the escapees after she finds out... The second problem was the Lovespot arc... Even the way the sect dealt with the problem by helping their bottom level immortal and his wasteful grandson is stupid... Since most of the immortals and the sect master are not their family... Makes it very stupid decision and from the top sect... Makes you wonder how they remained the top sect if they make low level entry mistakes like this... Third problem is Tianyi's trauma which doesn't make sense... For him to be scared of all Nascent Soul Cultivators after he was almost killed by a reincarnated and regressor cultivator with memories and techniques of many cultivators doesn't make sense... The trauma could have been of the dragon emperor, regressors or reincarnators or atleast soul cultivators... Him being afraid of Nascent Soul Cultivators after almost being killed by an abnormal does not make sense... Last and the newest is the recent problem... All of a sudden Yushan who has been a role model senior brother and a good sect cultivator at heart is obsessed with Daoyi... He is so focused on her that he is souring relationships with everybody... For a person who valued relationships this came out of left field... The major problem with all these is that they are main points with affect the plot and they are dragging the novel down... Makes it seem like the author forgets about most things he writes therefore ends up contradicting himself...
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............................................................................................................................................... It's good!
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I read this book up to chapter 37 and dropped it. I can no longer tolerate the fact that villains always manage to escape at the last moment. Also the reason that I dropped this book is the nerf mc in chapter 25
Great cultivation novel. I don't really want to write a long review so I'm just writing this sentence for the character count. But really, read this novel. it's really good.
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This novel is my most favourite novel,I just love to read this novel,In Webnovel this novel is behind when compared to RoyalRoad if u want to read more chapter go for RoyalRoad
Great story but I dropped it at chapter 25 cus the almighty plot just decided that he was too strong so he gave him nerf (injured cannot cultivate, wasted 4 years) I don't like nerfs
Its a wonderful story. u can actually relate to d side characters, especially MCs mother, she isn't the usual xianxia uber powerful relative cutout
It was good at first but it became total boring after that I don't know but when there is no circumstances in the story, it should at list be a funny story. I don't know... its just my oun perspective
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the first hundred chapters are the most interesting and well written, it's a pity that then the quality of the novel has fallen dramatically. Especially the useless clone chapters. Or the fact that MC lets go of his enemies every time - settlers or clones of the dragon emperor. Yes, he explains that they have life-saving techniques or artifacts, but most of them should not have such things as they come out of ordinary society. Extremely long chapters. It was one of the xiangxia that I really LOVED, but now it's not readable. :(
I really love the novel as it contains all the standard cultivation novel themes in one book. However, the dialogue between characters gets weird and robotic. The worst thing is that the author does not upload frequently, or the novel would of been higher rated, which of get more readers. I am frustrated and anxious for every update, checking everyday with a sliver of hope. Wish the author would start writing new chapters soon.
This novel started well, then you have a sharp drop then well again then another sharp drop now i don't really now. At first i liked it it was somewhat novel for me, then the mc started having problems with his cultivation and i liked this too somewhat ( it was a first) however the author has a tendency to waste chapters like the first time he had problem with cultivation was fine, the second time no with the second time we have a lot of chapters where i don't really feel anything like the mc goes from place a to place b and things happen but at the end the mc is still the same. we also have the clones of the mc which are a totally fillers if you jump them you lose nothing the clones also have problems with cultivation so no progress for them at all ( we have DOZENS of chapters on the clones that are totally pointless, the novel has what? 300 chapters? maybe not 1/3 but definitly 1/4 of the novel is only on the extremely boring life of the clones). The clones wouldn't really be that big of a problem but the author only publishes like 2/3 chapters a week so you can really feel those fillers. Still at the i somewhat like the novel even tought the clones are slowly grinding down my rating.
honestly couldn't tell if I even liked the story as they were only three short chapters available to read and chapters 4 through 25 are paywalled by Amazon. which is stupid as most cultivation novel readers don't even know whether they like a cultivation novel until somewhere between chapter 15 and 30 and that's dependent on other factors such as the length of chapters and how much content was in those chapters. so those are key chapters to hooking in new readers to support you on your patreon or whether they want to read more and by the book off Amazon. your marketing strategy is stupid as you don't show enough content to actually hook in new readers to want to buy it.
Nah I’ll tell you right now don’ even bother to start you can’t even access the first 25 chapters because the author decided to sell it separately on Amazon
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its awesome story . read it-------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The novel is... OK? The starting was quite fantastic and the ideas are quite good. The main problem here is why would author post useless chapters without any contents? Asking readers to read somewhere on another platform? I really hate it. There is only 'The chapters 1 to 25 or 26 to 50 are posted on Bla Bla Bla' made me mad! Why would you post chapters here? I feel like that you are using this platform as an advertisement for gathering readers. Note: I have read only first 45 chapters only. Now comes the review about story. The problem in this novel is: The main problem here is every'thing' distains MC. For god's sake, he's someone from a huge background but from the very start, even the mobs and side characters are showing distain and I'll intent toward MC as if he's a beggar and useless person. Evey single place, Every single event, MC is distained by people and MC and his supporters do not do a thing or don't even know a thing. My head hurts while reading such novels! Why would you write something like that? Is MC a mascot? Is MC a goody guy who spares everyone? I can't say... The background is very confusing. Is he someone with strong background? or is he from a normal/mid level background? Everyone distains him and makes me confused. Then the world background is also very confusing. What are the ranks of Aristocrasts? One guy says he's from Gu or whatever empire he is and show distain to MC and it turned out that he have a weak background. He was acting so arrogant that I felt that he had same background as MC. It's so bad that it started to kill my remaining brain cells. The chapters are messed. Some chapters are available on one site, while some are only available on other sites. It's so troublesome that I had to switch 3 different platforms to get a good amount of chapters to read.
Great grammar and story/plot considering its a cultivation novel. The mc is neat, also the characters are significant enough that if you read straight through it would be easy to know who's who. I like the side story too
We need to change the cover, the book is lost among the others, I think it will be better this way ......................................................
Dude/Dudette, this is awesome. I've been looking for stories like this ever since I've read History's Strongest Senior Brother, most haven't delivered and forgotten but you've went above and beyond. Whereas in typical cultivation novels you'd feel the transition from one arc to another till it becomes repetitive, yours doesn't. The transition is smooth and the "fillers" you put in between are very enjoyable. It's not tedious to read at all. I think I reached 197 in a day before I thought I needed a rest. However one critique I might have is the amount of characters presented. I know Xiri, Daoyi, Xia Yushan, the mother, the fox clone,the sect master and even the concealed emperor but I almost forgot about the Dragon emperor after the demon arc, what more about the other characters. Also I feel liked the plot has slowed down a bit in the demon arc but I think that's just me realizing I'm running out of chapters to read. all in all This story is solid.
A very interesting, funny and action packed novel. Very realistic compared to other cultivation novels and I also like the way the author likes to shatter some of the typical cultivation tropes, my only disappointment is that updates are not frequent enough, apart from that it is a wonderful read.
Pretty epic. Saw the rating, thought it deserved more hence im writing this review. Starts of as a parody, and then turns into a well written cultivation story.
Started out with decent potential, but lots of word wasting, uninteresting main characters, plot armor antagonists and a general lack of interesting content made it near-unreadable as it went on. Sadly, this shows the writer's insufficient experience and missing care and dedication towards the story as a whole. Too bad.
This is a type of work that get trash as it progresses It was really awesome till first 150 chapters then got really boring till the point that i might have fallen a sleep
Boriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg!!!! Boring 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😪😪😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴 Imagine I really tried to read this book but it's developing too slow.Where is the ROMANCE, THRILL, ACTION and all those things that are NOT BORING AND NOT REAL. l was not looking for a coward, crybaby with no distinguishing character. WHAT MAKES HIM STAND OUT! 👎👎👎👎 NO OFFENSE BORING!
Spoiler enthüllen it's a great book, I hope it is harem not just daoyi........................................................................................
read it ....................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler enthüllen Story started out great... But it keeps on going downhill... The first problem started when almost all villians always escape even when the MC is equiped with very powerful talismans and artifacts... Even the mother one of the top immortals who is very overprotective ignores the escapees after she finds out... The second problem was the Lovespot arc... Even the way the sect dealt with the problem by helping their bottom level immortal and his wasteful grandson is stupid... Since most of the immortals and the sect master are not their family... Makes it very stupid decision and from the top sect... Makes you wonder how they remained the top sect if they make low level entry mistakes like this... Third problem is Tianyi's trauma which doesn't make sense... For him to be scared of all Nascent Soul Cultivators after he was almost killed by a reincarnated and regressor cultivator with memories and techniques of many cultivators doesn't make sense... The trauma could have been of the dragon emperor, regressors or reincarnators or atleast soul cultivators... Him being afraid of Nascent Soul Cultivators after almost being killed by an abnormal does not make sense... Last and the newest is the recent problem... All of a sudden Yushan who has been a role model senior brother and a good sect cultivator at heart is obsessed with Daoyi... He is so focused on her that he is souring relationships with everybody... For a person who valued relationships this came out of left field... The major problem with all these is that they are main points with affect the plot and they are dragging the novel down... Makes it seem like the author forgets about most things he writes therefore ends up contradicting himself...
Spoiler enthüllen ............................................................................................................................................... It's good!
Spoiler enthüllen I read this book up to chapter 37 and dropped it. I can no longer tolerate the fact that villains always manage to escape at the last moment. Also the reason that I dropped this book is the nerf mc in chapter 25
Great cultivation novel. I don't really want to write a long review so I'm just writing this sentence for the character count. But really, read this novel. it's really good.
Spoiler enthüllen This novel is my most favourite novel,I just love to read this novel,In Webnovel this novel is behind when compared to RoyalRoad if u want to read more chapter go for RoyalRoad
Great story but I dropped it at chapter 25 cus the almighty plot just decided that he was too strong so he gave him nerf (injured cannot cultivate, wasted 4 years) I don't like nerfs
Its a wonderful story. u can actually relate to d side characters, especially MCs mother, she isn't the usual xianxia uber powerful relative cutout
It was good at first but it became total boring after that I don't know but when there is no circumstances in the story, it should at list be a funny story. I don't know... its just my oun perspective
it is published in royalroad and being continued there