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So, i cant really talk about update stability, but the rrest s a pretty good read. Actually, im just here to give the book some stars xD Ah, yeah, and its a Harry Potter Fanfiction :D
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Im not the biggest HP fan but i do love what You have done with it. its very addictive reading everything youve got going on and your take on Dumblesnore
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one of my favourites couldn't put it down at all, it's so engrossing I lost track of time and just kept reading, I was sad it ended but it absolutely deserves 5 stars
lol why in each of your story always ends up with mc that is much more weaker than his wife/wives. .
AMAZING READ, i can only recommend it. I just wrote one adjective, but i could probably add another 20 more😂👍 1. Writing qualtiy: Exceptional, close to no mistakes in grammer and so on I dont know if that falls under this category, but i might look like you have lttle to read, because its 260 chapters, but they are all pretty long - over 30h of reading time.👍 2. Story development: Also pretty good, we have 3 different worlds out of other stories, which are good interlinked + there is a huge mystery aspect throughout the story, which makes it really enjoyable. and lets not forget the general storyline, which follows the different canons pretty well and has a unique touch to it. Even though the plot makes plenty of use of the canons, its still enjoyable on it own.👍 3. Character design: nice aswell, MC is unique and has different character-developments and changes throughout the story (example: looner -> more open and socialized and so on) The canom characters are also not just the same as in the canons, but the author gave the ones, who are important for the plot, unique touches aswell.👍 4. Update Stability: its finished, but i heard and saw that author uploaded the novel in around 2 months with 5 chapters a day, which is more than exceptional (if you take the word-count in account) + The ending is GOOD and is one chapter with iver 15k words....oof poor author, lucky fan/reader *cheeky smirk*👍 5. Worldbackground: i cant say that much, because the worlds are out of other stories (its a fanfic), but there are splendidly connected and author gave them his own touch.👍 All in all: i enjoyed it to the extreme and the only one who suffered from it is my sleeprythm..... GREAT HAREM MEMBERS <-- Mc doesnt collect girls, but all have a place in the story and are unique + Main Wife Luna❤ THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT READ❤😁
This book is great but i felt like it progressed too fast and it is hard to keep up with it. The quality of the book however, is terrific meaning that it has very little grammatical errors.
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
I dont normally write reviews and I doubt the author will see this but. I felt I had to make a review because this was by far the best book I read your a great author with unlimited potential keep up the good work but don't over work yourself your health comes first thank you for writing this book ill definitely be reading any others that come out or that has come out thank you for your time
IT'S GOOD, TOO TOO GOOD WITH CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND ALSO STORY MAKING TO BE TRUE SOMETIMES BUT ALSO TO BE ABLE TO INTEGRATE WITH THE ENVIRONMENT AND ALSO THE CHARACTERISTICS OF THE WORLDS THAT TO BE TRAVELLED WITH IN THE STORY
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Damn.. reading chapter 68 while listening to the song mood🙀 bruhh Masterpiece🔥 was an understatement 5 stars this novel deserve it👍dont know about the after chapters but i really recommend new readers to read this😀
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one of the best fanfic I ever read. You should read it.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
el inicio fue increíble el mc es interesante y tuvo un buen comienzo y la historia era divertido de leer
thanks,,,,,its really a great book,please continue to write more stories like this....,.....................................................
todo fue perfecto, gracias por la historia. ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,
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First 100 chapters story was pretty good. After traveling to another plane he seemed to he able to find countless god tier items everytime he walked, then proceeds to act as an OP young master who kills people that look at his wives. He also seems to be blessed by legendary creatures due to being an elf, yet completely ignores the items they give him. He also keeps helping yun che who he calls a brother, yet not once has yun che actually helped him other than when he arrived on the profound continent. Yun ches wives make absolutely no sense, he meets a new girl every day basically and talks about how much he loves them completely ignoring the fact he has 50 other wives and countless children. Also when cross heals or gives legendary items to some random girls, they never thank him and then meet yun che once and become his wife. Even when cross saves people they still somehow fall for the weak(in comparison to cross) yun che. Cross also becomes OP way too fast, it states about him going from the start of the god realm to becoming a true god in 5 years when other people take thousands of years. His wives are made OP more than cross yet dont use their opness, eg luna, she literally got the ability to look into the future, easily read minds, and detect everything in a 500 kilometer radius. while cross has none of those abilities. Once he becomes a true god it turns out his children, which have had zero relevance to the story and have lived their whole lives inside cross internal dimension, are more talented than cross, how does that even make sense, the dude literally destroyed everything in 5 years, if he had been born in a higher realm he probably could have killed everyone When he was 10, and yet his children are somehow more talented, complete rubbish. cross also kills complete realms potentially holding millions if not billions of people, because he didnt like there leaders. makes lots of sense. It states while they were in the profound continent that luna looked into the future ans saw brotherhood or burma killing them and their family, and the only way around that is if cross trains by himself. so they leave for a higher realm which has tons of high level resources, increasing their cultivation rapidly, making them (when cross attends the god convention) stronger than cross, and even after that the brotherhood didnt appear, so they basically abandoned cross and got op, while cross using worse reasources eventually caught up, and they reunite even though the brotherhood didnt appear. Basically causing cross to live without his children and family for absolutely no reason for 5 years while also slowing him down. Going back to the profound continent where he abandoned his parents and sisters, aswell as all his friends, never mentioning them again after they arrived at the profound continent, even though he stayed their for literally 10 years, there was zero mention of his friends other than two small meetings with daphne and one of hermione. Cross literally cripples himself by using only his strings as a mace for ages even though there are countless mystical arts that he learns and never uses once, because apparenlty his self made techniques which even he admitted needing improvement are better than beings who used to be true gods before they left their inheritances behind. Cross is told to be the last blood elf, with inherited memories, and yet doesnt no half the shit when it comes to the cultivation power system, he also has an ability where only the elf god ancestor had before him, yet he never uses it after getting his own armor and mace, even though they are literally invisible op sharp strings which can instantly kill people. he just decides not to use it for zero reason. After they leave the Harry potter world he also almost never again uses the blessings of the tree of life, even though they are incredibly op. The stort itself feels more like two completely seperate storys stuffed together. one good harry potter story that could have had incredible development which sadly wasnt developed and a shitty cultivation world wuxia novel with countless young master syndrome children, that always use stereotipical quotes. The younf master also only go after cross and yun ches wife even though when they attend the tournaments there are supposedly countless beauties their, if so then why at every tournament does cross kills someone for looking at his wives, it gets ild very fast. there is also the problem were only cross and yun che find the countless random inheritance and godly items, like they will walk into a random forest, yun che will rescue a ten year ild girl about to get raped by bandits, and while he does that corss finds the goldy items that the bandits ignored for zero reason, then yun che will return 6 years later and collect the little girl he was grooming with 2 months later her becoming pregnant and yun che running of into another trap either finding another wife ans never mentioning them again, or getting himself stuck in stupid traps were all his wives think he died only for him to reapper a year later with a bunch more woman.
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I loved it very good, it has a lot of future I really liked the novel and the protoganist and his personality I hope it doesn’t change, harem is very incredible they have personalities and they fight to stay strong not in the shadow of the protoganist, thanks for the novel I hope many more chapters
la historia empieza bien pero después se vuelve cada vez peor(según mi gusto), además el relato de la historia en general es rápido o acelerado aunque puede no ser necesariamente malo, pero hace que la historia tengo muy poca densidad o detalle a las cosas; el romance quizás no esta mal aunque dificil dado la personalidad del MC, el MC es el tipico que actua duro pero es un tonto total y casi sumiso con sus conocidos en especial pareja, no creo que esto sea totalmente fanfic ni novela privada, algunas líneas de tiempo a nivel del mundo se cruzan y bueno aunque el mundo afuera nunca se menciona detalladamente si sabes de HP sabes que algo anda mal como en los primeros capitulos de HP aun no existían celulares a lo mucho teléfonos antiguos(mugglos) pero aparentemente alli sieso debería suceder cuando en el mundo HP harry potter ya es un adolescente mayor), bueno el mundo en si no se describe mucho para saber cual es la interpretación del autor para el mundo dado que obviamente esta es su versión. en fin doy buena calificación por las cosas que se merece pero no me gusto la historia, no tiene mucha densidad y el MC es basura buen eso esto
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it's better than others. Because in other fanfics they become more powerful than Voldemort under 20 chapters and their also in 2nd year. I hate self insert fan fics
Awesome author, well thought out and well written story I get amazing content every day and can't wait to see more. Please keep up the great work,
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I can’t wait for the next chapters to come out I wonder if there will be other book that continue of where this book left off after it’s finished I hope there will be I can’t WAIT !
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This novel is great if you only count the first 70 chapters because after that the only thing it turns into is the mc following scum che around in the atg world watching him pick up women while the mc follows him like a lost puppy so the story is straight garbage after 70 chapters mc is like a hormonal Middle Aged woman who just has mental out bursts for no reason
So, i cant really talk about update stability, but the rrest s a pretty good read. Actually, im just here to give the book some stars xD Ah, yeah, and its a Harry Potter Fanfiction :D
Spoiler enthüllen OK thanks for the use of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the day of the
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Im not the biggest HP fan but i do love what You have done with it. its very addictive reading everything youve got going on and your take on Dumblesnore
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Spoiler enthüllen one of my favourites couldn't put it down at all, it's so engrossing I lost track of time and just kept reading, I was sad it ended but it absolutely deserves 5 stars
lol why in each of your story always ends up with mc that is much more weaker than his wife/wives. .
AMAZING READ, i can only recommend it. I just wrote one adjective, but i could probably add another 20 more😂👍 1. Writing qualtiy: Exceptional, close to no mistakes in grammer and so on I dont know if that falls under this category, but i might look like you have lttle to read, because its 260 chapters, but they are all pretty long - over 30h of reading time.👍 2. Story development: Also pretty good, we have 3 different worlds out of other stories, which are good interlinked + there is a huge mystery aspect throughout the story, which makes it really enjoyable. and lets not forget the general storyline, which follows the different canons pretty well and has a unique touch to it. Even though the plot makes plenty of use of the canons, its still enjoyable on it own.👍 3. Character design: nice aswell, MC is unique and has different character-developments and changes throughout the story (example: looner -> more open and socialized and so on) The canom characters are also not just the same as in the canons, but the author gave the ones, who are important for the plot, unique touches aswell.👍 4. Update Stability: its finished, but i heard and saw that author uploaded the novel in around 2 months with 5 chapters a day, which is more than exceptional (if you take the word-count in account) + The ending is GOOD and is one chapter with iver 15k words....oof poor author, lucky fan/reader *cheeky smirk*👍 5. Worldbackground: i cant say that much, because the worlds are out of other stories (its a fanfic), but there are splendidly connected and author gave them his own touch.👍 All in all: i enjoyed it to the extreme and the only one who suffered from it is my sleeprythm..... GREAT HAREM MEMBERS <-- Mc doesnt collect girls, but all have a place in the story and are unique + Main Wife Luna❤ THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT READ❤😁
This book is great but i felt like it progressed too fast and it is hard to keep up with it. The quality of the book however, is terrific meaning that it has very little grammatical errors.
Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
I dont normally write reviews and I doubt the author will see this but. I felt I had to make a review because this was by far the best book I read your a great author with unlimited potential keep up the good work but don't over work yourself your health comes first thank you for writing this book ill definitely be reading any others that come out or that has come out thank you for your time
IT'S GOOD, TOO TOO GOOD WITH CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND ALSO STORY MAKING TO BE TRUE SOMETIMES BUT ALSO TO BE ABLE TO INTEGRATE WITH THE ENVIRONMENT AND ALSO THE CHARACTERISTICS OF THE WORLDS THAT TO BE TRAVELLED WITH IN THE STORY
Spoiler enthüllen Damn.. reading chapter 68 while listening to the song mood🙀 bruhh Masterpiece🔥 was an understatement 5 stars this novel deserve it👍dont know about the after chapters but i really recommend new readers to read this😀
Spoiler enthüllen one of the best fanfic I ever read. You should read it.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
el inicio fue increíble el mc es interesante y tuvo un buen comienzo y la historia era divertido de leer
thanks,,,,,its really a great book,please continue to write more stories like this....,.....................................................
todo fue perfecto, gracias por la historia. ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO, ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,ME ENCANTO,
Good meme Story sad to see it End anyway i need 140 characters so here is some filler Sidhshixbdudhsjdhdhishxhsuxvshxbduxhshwjd sjskndhdeosjvekvsobsobsohsohsogsoveoevpevoevosvosvisvieveivsiveiveivduceueciveiv
First 100 chapters story was pretty good. After traveling to another plane he seemed to he able to find countless god tier items everytime he walked, then proceeds to act as an OP young master who kills people that look at his wives. He also seems to be blessed by legendary creatures due to being an elf, yet completely ignores the items they give him. He also keeps helping yun che who he calls a brother, yet not once has yun che actually helped him other than when he arrived on the profound continent. Yun ches wives make absolutely no sense, he meets a new girl every day basically and talks about how much he loves them completely ignoring the fact he has 50 other wives and countless children. Also when cross heals or gives legendary items to some random girls, they never thank him and then meet yun che once and become his wife. Even when cross saves people they still somehow fall for the weak(in comparison to cross) yun che. Cross also becomes OP way too fast, it states about him going from the start of the god realm to becoming a true god in 5 years when other people take thousands of years. His wives are made OP more than cross yet dont use their opness, eg luna, she literally got the ability to look into the future, easily read minds, and detect everything in a 500 kilometer radius. while cross has none of those abilities. Once he becomes a true god it turns out his children, which have had zero relevance to the story and have lived their whole lives inside cross internal dimension, are more talented than cross, how does that even make sense, the dude literally destroyed everything in 5 years, if he had been born in a higher realm he probably could have killed everyone When he was 10, and yet his children are somehow more talented, complete rubbish. cross also kills complete realms potentially holding millions if not billions of people, because he didnt like there leaders. makes lots of sense. It states while they were in the profound continent that luna looked into the future ans saw brotherhood or burma killing them and their family, and the only way around that is if cross trains by himself. so they leave for a higher realm which has tons of high level resources, increasing their cultivation rapidly, making them (when cross attends the god convention) stronger than cross, and even after that the brotherhood didnt appear, so they basically abandoned cross and got op, while cross using worse reasources eventually caught up, and they reunite even though the brotherhood didnt appear. Basically causing cross to live without his children and family for absolutely no reason for 5 years while also slowing him down. Going back to the profound continent where he abandoned his parents and sisters, aswell as all his friends, never mentioning them again after they arrived at the profound continent, even though he stayed their for literally 10 years, there was zero mention of his friends other than two small meetings with daphne and one of hermione. Cross literally cripples himself by using only his strings as a mace for ages even though there are countless mystical arts that he learns and never uses once, because apparenlty his self made techniques which even he admitted needing improvement are better than beings who used to be true gods before they left their inheritances behind. Cross is told to be the last blood elf, with inherited memories, and yet doesnt no half the shit when it comes to the cultivation power system, he also has an ability where only the elf god ancestor had before him, yet he never uses it after getting his own armor and mace, even though they are literally invisible op sharp strings which can instantly kill people. he just decides not to use it for zero reason. After they leave the Harry potter world he also almost never again uses the blessings of the tree of life, even though they are incredibly op. The stort itself feels more like two completely seperate storys stuffed together. one good harry potter story that could have had incredible development which sadly wasnt developed and a shitty cultivation world wuxia novel with countless young master syndrome children, that always use stereotipical quotes. The younf master also only go after cross and yun ches wife even though when they attend the tournaments there are supposedly countless beauties their, if so then why at every tournament does cross kills someone for looking at his wives, it gets ild very fast. there is also the problem were only cross and yun che find the countless random inheritance and godly items, like they will walk into a random forest, yun che will rescue a ten year ild girl about to get raped by bandits, and while he does that corss finds the goldy items that the bandits ignored for zero reason, then yun che will return 6 years later and collect the little girl he was grooming with 2 months later her becoming pregnant and yun che running of into another trap either finding another wife ans never mentioning them again, or getting himself stuck in stupid traps were all his wives think he died only for him to reapper a year later with a bunch more woman.
Spoiler enthüllen I loved it very good, it has a lot of future I really liked the novel and the protoganist and his personality I hope it doesn’t change, harem is very incredible they have personalities and they fight to stay strong not in the shadow of the protoganist, thanks for the novel I hope many more chapters
la historia empieza bien pero después se vuelve cada vez peor(según mi gusto), además el relato de la historia en general es rápido o acelerado aunque puede no ser necesariamente malo, pero hace que la historia tengo muy poca densidad o detalle a las cosas; el romance quizás no esta mal aunque dificil dado la personalidad del MC, el MC es el tipico que actua duro pero es un tonto total y casi sumiso con sus conocidos en especial pareja, no creo que esto sea totalmente fanfic ni novela privada, algunas líneas de tiempo a nivel del mundo se cruzan y bueno aunque el mundo afuera nunca se menciona detalladamente si sabes de HP sabes que algo anda mal como en los primeros capitulos de HP aun no existían celulares a lo mucho teléfonos antiguos(mugglos) pero aparentemente alli sieso debería suceder cuando en el mundo HP harry potter ya es un adolescente mayor), bueno el mundo en si no se describe mucho para saber cual es la interpretación del autor para el mundo dado que obviamente esta es su versión. en fin doy buena calificación por las cosas que se merece pero no me gusto la historia, no tiene mucha densidad y el MC es basura buen eso esto
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it's better than others. Because in other fanfics they become more powerful than Voldemort under 20 chapters and their also in 2nd year. I hate self insert fan fics
Awesome author, well thought out and well written story I get amazing content every day and can't wait to see more. Please keep up the great work,
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I can’t wait for the next chapters to come out I wonder if there will be other book that continue of where this book left off after it’s finished I hope there will be I can’t WAIT !
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This novel is great if you only count the first 70 chapters because after that the only thing it turns into is the mc following scum che around in the atg world watching him pick up women while the mc follows him like a lost puppy so the story is straight garbage after 70 chapters mc is like a hormonal Middle Aged woman who just has mental out bursts for no reason