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If you are tired of those harem or completely overpowered pokemon fan fiction novels, worry not, because this novel is for you! A normal guy, no system, no heck, just pure memories of the anime. There are very little mistakes, even if there are, I re-read the chapters before anyone and correct them
Ouch. Not a subtle read in the beginning. I had no problems with the current reading level. I generally enjoyed the start, but as it progresses further it would then turn bland. Not enough details, development with the pokemon, or even a set goal. I encourage the improvement of the author! <3
It can't be that bad, I hope it's just a humorous parody.... The MC is cardboard, there is no story, all the action is stupid and illogical, the battles are terrible.
Nice bro, es una historia interesante con buen desarrollo de personaje principal, buen desarrollo de peleas, villanos y varias cosas menos importantes peor que juntas hacen que sea una historia disfrutable y no tan llena de clichés como algunas más de este género, suelo leer historias en otros idiomas para mejorar mi dominio, pero realmente disfrute leer esta vez
I look at it's over emotional summary and than i look at it's coded NPC like MC with no personality . No interaction with his Pokemon and not even using his pokedex .
the mc is a pokemon abuser and generally unlikable. he takes offense to everything and is insanely entitled. mc "clenches his fist in rage when the pokemon dosent want to come with him" and proceeds to beat it half to death for "daring to refuse my offer" its like a chinese young master. trash novel.
its a meh but i enjoyed it. even with its plot holes. like the mc, why his like that parents, environment, so on and so forth. good over all, would recommend.
Really good though, I don't know why people give it such a low rating. The mc is still showing character growth.
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Bipolar, sociopathic, narcissist 16 yr old captures 4 op pokemon in one day, abuses them till they evolve/learn a move while gaslighting them into thinking they are worthless and then sais... "WOW I DID THIS" randomly jumps in during plot to beat up team rocket then leaves people to die just for funsies?
Is this redo? cuz if its the same then... its kind of too much something... i dont know what but if it is redo i probably would read it if it werent well... im dropping it...
it's too plain....no theory, no background,no conversation,no emotions or feeling between trainer and it's Pokemon (it felt like NPCs)… idk about others but this seems a bit forceful with kota's personality and story pacing like superspeed. I can’t get over how the conversation is worded, im out( not a bad storie so far but I have a lot of ticks in Pokémon stories that make me not want to read them).
I like the way the novel is proceeding! no useless romance! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. MORE!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!! !! !!
Just leaving a review. A pretty good Pokemon fanfiction without any magic in it which should be fantastic. I have already read too many Pokemon fanfiction novels where the main character has magical powers. Not talking about 'aura' but real magic which shouldn't be in them to begin with.
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Dammmm, never knew this fanfic existed, like I read the one-piece fanfic from the same author but forgot he was writing a new one. The main character seems neutral evil. Unquie in it own way, not everything is canon but it doesn't matter.
Pretty good fanfic :) A lil character development where mc turns nicer would be sick, but besides that no real complaints. good to the point
So far i have enjoyed the story hope u dont drop this fanfic novel and continue....................................................................................
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Wooo the description hooked me.Really rare to find good quotes but are not clinche. （＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）
Pretty good fanfic :) A lil character development where mc turns nicer would be sick, but besides that no real complaints. For some reason it wont let me post until I write more words so this sentence is now here.
If you are tired of those harem or completely overpowered pokemon fan fiction novels, worry not, because this novel is for you! A normal guy, no system, no heck, just pure memories of the anime. There are very little mistakes, even if there are, I re-read the chapters before anyone and correct them. Even so, there might be one or two mistakes which is not corrected because i am a human, and human do make mistakes. I update the chapters almost everyday! And if you want mass release, try convincing me!! And don't forget to check out my other fan fiction novel- "One Piece: I am Psychopath" Thank you!
If you are tired of those harem or completely overpowered pokemon fan fiction novels, worry not, because this novel is for you! A normal guy, no system, no heck, just pure memories of the anime. There are very little mistakes, even if there are, I re-read the chapters before anyone and correct them
Ouch. Not a subtle read in the beginning. I had no problems with the current reading level. I generally enjoyed the start, but as it progresses further it would then turn bland. Not enough details, development with the pokemon, or even a set goal. I encourage the improvement of the author! <3
It can't be that bad, I hope it's just a humorous parody.... The MC is cardboard, there is no story, all the action is stupid and illogical, the battles are terrible.
Nice bro, es una historia interesante con buen desarrollo de personaje principal, buen desarrollo de peleas, villanos y varias cosas menos importantes peor que juntas hacen que sea una historia disfrutable y no tan llena de clichés como algunas más de este género, suelo leer historias en otros idiomas para mejorar mi dominio, pero realmente disfrute leer esta vez
I look at it's over emotional summary and than i look at it's coded NPC like MC with no personality . No interaction with his Pokemon and not even using his pokedex .
the mc is a pokemon abuser and generally unlikable. he takes offense to everything and is insanely entitled. mc "clenches his fist in rage when the pokemon dosent want to come with him" and proceeds to beat it half to death for "daring to refuse my offer" its like a chinese young master. trash novel.
its a meh but i enjoyed it. even with its plot holes. like the mc, why his like that parents, environment, so on and so forth. good over all, would recommend.
Really good though, I don't know why people give it such a low rating. The mc is still showing character growth.
Spoiler enthüllen Bipolar, sociopathic, narcissist 16 yr old captures 4 op pokemon in one day, abuses them till they evolve/learn a move while gaslighting them into thinking they are worthless and then sais... "WOW I DID THIS" randomly jumps in during plot to beat up team rocket then leaves people to die just for funsies?
Is this redo? cuz if its the same then... its kind of too much something... i dont know what but if it is redo i probably would read it if it werent well... im dropping it...
it's too plain....no theory, no background,no conversation,no emotions or feeling between trainer and it's Pokemon (it felt like NPCs)… idk about others but this seems a bit forceful with kota's personality and story pacing like superspeed. I can’t get over how the conversation is worded, im out( not a bad storie so far but I have a lot of ticks in Pokémon stories that make me not want to read them).
I like the way the novel is proceeding! no useless romance! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. MORE!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!! !! !!
Just leaving a review. A pretty good Pokemon fanfiction without any magic in it which should be fantastic. I have already read too many Pokemon fanfiction novels where the main character has magical powers. Not talking about 'aura' but real magic which shouldn't be in them to begin with.
Spoiler enthüllen Dammmm, never knew this fanfic existed, like I read the one-piece fanfic from the same author but forgot he was writing a new one. The main character seems neutral evil. Unquie in it own way, not everything is canon but it doesn't matter.
Pretty good fanfic :) A lil character development where mc turns nicer would be sick, but besides that no real complaints. good to the point
So far i have enjoyed the story hope u dont drop this fanfic novel and continue....................................................................................
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
🤤😵🌛🌛😵🤤😵🤤😫😵🤤🤤😵😵🤤🥴🤢🤢🥴🤢🥴🤤🥴🤢🥴🤢🥴🤢🥴🤢🌞🤤😵😧😕😧😟😕😟😕😟😠😟😠😠🤭🤨🙂😝😝😊😝🙂😝😝☺️😝☺️😑☺️😝☺️😝☺️😜🥱😜🥱😐🥲🙂😗🙂🙂🙂🥲😀😃
Wooo the description hooked me.Really rare to find good quotes but are not clinche. （＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）（＾_＾）
Pretty good fanfic :) A lil character development where mc turns nicer would be sick, but besides that no real complaints. For some reason it wont let me post until I write more words so this sentence is now here.
If you are tired of those harem or completely overpowered pokemon fan fiction novels, worry not, because this novel is for you! A normal guy, no system, no heck, just pure memories of the anime. There are very little mistakes, even if there are, I re-read the chapters before anyone and correct them. Even so, there might be one or two mistakes which is not corrected because i am a human, and human do make mistakes. I update the chapters almost everyday! And if you want mass release, try convincing me!! And don't forget to check out my other fan fiction novel- "One Piece: I am Psychopath" Thank you!