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beautiful fanfic and loves how the mc isn't clueless about relationships just a perfect fanfic except on the updates but perfect after that
The grammar is bad, it's understandable but it's really noticeable as well. Story Development is frustrating as well, the only enjoyable part are the excerpts from the OG source, any Original content from author just made this worse. Character Design is bad, OCs and MCs are the worst! So edgy and unneccessary. I assume this is completed already so 5 stars for the updates. The World building is negligible, mid at best.
im still at early chapters someone please spoil at me , please tell me romance is with rachel
very great although not that much details in here like characters he does show a drawn picture but tell more about the ability all in all love and is definitely the best fan fiction I've read also author where you at π
The novel's extra is one of my favorites i hope that the update speed gets faster for this . Although the grammar is a mess i love the story..
not gonna lie i was excited for this, i thought maybe this would be a fanfic where they fixed some of stuff from the original but my god was i wrong. the first chapters and what do we get? one of those cringy af mcs, yeah the mc is the chaos/destruction/murder kind of dragon with ultimate power that can control all elements, master of hand to hand combat, all weapons are mastered by him and destroy the universe with his mere presence. yeah one of those self insert mcs that make the author feel good about themselves. honestly i was expecting for the mc to become something like hajin, a normal guy who was thrown into that crazy world, and choose an unorthodox class and make it op. but no we get the mc that has mastered all kind of weapons and still chooses a basic sword.
Hey, Author I found this Art somewhere... This looks pretty much like Christopher. (Except for the Dark roots in his hair)
well I do love your book its not the reason I'M COMMENTING i wanted to ask if I could put your characters in my fanfic? its a fanfic about the authors pov. I mean the novels extra to lazy to delete that first one.
thank you author sama for writing this fanfic. no one writes about The Novel's Extra and doesn't drop it. I like the story and how your building the romance. :)
hope you create your own original novel not fanfic, i love this novel and it is also good just hopin that you create your own, you're a good author tbh.
It's overall Good so far and hope it remains that way Although the cursing is a bit above normal, its ignorable and after reading story up to the current point, I am getting used to all the cursing from the MC. Background is interesting like how the MC has travelled to other worlds and stuff. Character designs are Good. Story development is Nice but the character development is a bit slow, but its ignorable. Writing Quality is good. Although there are some grammar mistakes, its not so much that it becomes hard to read, only at some points in the Novel so far, so compared to the other novels, its still to the minimum. Updates are a Bit slow now, but its understandable considering the length of each chapter. Although I do hope that the update frequency fastens a bit. Overall, the only thing I want more is the character development, Also hoping for Rachel to meet Evandal soon, it'd be even better if the Relationship betweem Cristopher and Rachel gets a boost a little sooner. Overall, I'd want to give it a 5- star, but since as said, the updates are a but slow now, so it'd be a 4.8 stars for Now. Though I can always change that if it gets better Keep up the good work, and hope you're safe. Thanks for reading the review, have a good day!
Honestly not much to say. This SI(?) fanfic is interesting and pretty comedic, well at least to meβ¦ anyways tho, itβs a good fanfic and I would recommend
Just repeating what I already said in the last Chapter (139). Being honest here, I didn't expect this to be so GOOD, I just started reading this book in my free time, and now here we're in the last chapter in just 3 days. I already love it the main story of TNE, and now I must say that I loved this story until now, and I have great expectations for this fan fic. Thanks for all these chapters author-nim, you sure are doing a great job here. γΎ(β§β½β¦*)o (Also author-nim, please more Rachel messages scenarios. She is the BEST girl, and I need MOAR of THIS (Β΄β½`Κβ‘Ζͺ))
the first thing I want to talk to is.....you should give tag #fanfiction , I really apreciate your Braveheart to make this fanfiction and keep update the story. please keep the spirit you have till the end . sorry if there is some Miss spelling, English is not my native language.
The turning point that made me love this novel was when mc got himself a fckbuddy and just like Angelica I cant for the life of me, ever get rid of this mona lisa from my library. I wont deny being annoyed by Olivia and MC at the start (the power up didnt bother me much, but his cannot-be-hidden-and-also-growing-and-glowing stigma did. was actually glad theres hope in helping Hajin not fall so much) but I always held hope when MC had said "if girlfriend then not Olivia" lol not the exact words but more or less. I just want to praise how special our mc is. I love the indifference and practicality despite the seemingly sheer helplessness in dealing with his genuine emotions. Also for... fate, if it exists. Although there was the drastic addition of Christopher, there werent much change in the TNE storyline which is a plus for me. It was eerie at first when the storyline got written word for word (there were changes sure) but tbh to see an actual scene from the TNE may have excited me more then it should, which is undoubtedly a plus. There are also many things to note of that makes this novel worth the read >MC mentality and approach (just read the chapters without olivia although she gets better. tbh even after being discplined i still want to tape her mouth and limbs whenever i see her and place her in a queen sized bed with yi yeonghan) >The fact that MC is actually too OP where it feels like hes an actual extra. where everything he does feels like a snippet of a famous strong dude. Id say, growth(in strength) is what makes a protagonist and a Cristopher doesnt grow, he only unseals >Improvements in strengthening department (the laws sure that was sweet, but strengthened Hajin? fk yes) >More Yeonha misunderstandings >Yi Byul >Rachel (actually author can we have more message scenarios. idk if shes endgame but evandel has more for you otherwise) >DevilDex I just read it today and finished midterms part3. thank you for making me surpass the weekly reading mission in one day. i will sue you for this 18 hours of happiness
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Pretty good, I read a bit and itβs not bad, I say itβs very involed and it seems pretty sensible then some other things on this website as it does seem real so I sayβ¦ Good job!
I really want to like this fanfic as I'm a big fan of TNE but reading this feels like the author is just writing the dialogue for word count and the story feels like the author could write this in any other novel and say it as that fanfic of that particular novel. Though I'll still continue reading lol. Maybe its just my preference but I hope this fanfic gets better. *Sorry if my english is a bit confusing Im still learning.
In the first chapters the MC goes from being a person who transmigrates to a novel a week before it starts, to being a person who has been traveling from world to world for a hundred years and ends up in that world ten years before the plot begins. I don't know where the sudden change came from, but it's quite confusing, as the first chapter talks about how you have transmigrated after reading the novel.
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I'm going to read the novel's extra before reading this so I will give it 1 star so far so people don't think I'm a bot :/
the story, grammar, dialogue, and characters improve as the story progress. It is actually quite impressive as the author is not a native english speaker originally. Imo the characters is done very well because I can still feel the familiarity of the orignal characters personality. to those who are irked by the OC's personality give it some time and you will actually laugh at his antics and interactions to the characters. Overall I recommend to give this novel a try. Another plus for me is that the author is actually responding to criticisms positively.
Here take this 5 star!! I have been looking for a fanfic for this novel and f*** why did this not show up any sooner!! Just knowing theres a fanfic for the novels extra already makes me excited!!
i hope that author will update more chapter or make a weekly chapter.btw olivia is too annoying and make me feel soo cringe.quality of this fanfic is getting better each chapter
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Author, Good job!! The start was somehow a but weak because of that swearing and your depression reflected in the text, but late chapters are really very well written! Such an interesting work must go to the moon in rankings!!
It's a fanfic so there are a lot of Lee way to add some spice here and there since novel extra is quite easy to understand due to MC is the author and he explain or hint what's what so. I'll be taking some of your twist here and there when writing mine It will be a long wait due to fat fingering the keys in my phone but I will make it for sure. so look forward to it. thanks for the inspiration and positive support for me. btw I'm gonna test with your fanfic by inserting mine in the story tweaking a bit some events for my ship or not. also the fanfic Im thinking about is crossover of EER and NE
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Redoing my review Dont want to make a low review and make the fanfic go hiatus forever since its a good fanfic even with a Op mc Mc is Op af and had to get nerf, we havent really touched about his background and how he got it so it might have some lore to it so i wont complain and the world is slowly changing so that he wont be op as well. The beginning you will probably hate him or just questioning what his doing but just keep reading i think? i might be just reading 2 fast but i think his slowly changing and his mindset kinda changed when he gets his little witch (0o0) ( Kinda want to c a possessive dad just because his its like a 180 from his character and actually wants to be a father figure to fill in that hole in his heart? past?) Romance idk yet theirs alot of love interest and their is already a mom and kinda want it to just be the mom to be w mc but eh. Just keep it up. Alot of readers are kinda hating the part of his toxic personality and op powers but im guessing your going to fill that up later
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I Would rate it higher but I want to know one thing and one thing alone what is the archer girl oc does he end up with her and if he does can you tell me so I Can drop it
beautiful fanfic and loves how the mc isn't clueless about relationships just a perfect fanfic except on the updates but perfect after that
The grammar is bad, it's understandable but it's really noticeable as well. Story Development is frustrating as well, the only enjoyable part are the excerpts from the OG source, any Original content from author just made this worse. Character Design is bad, OCs and MCs are the worst! So edgy and unneccessary. I assume this is completed already so 5 stars for the updates. The World building is negligible, mid at best.
im still at early chapters someone please spoil at me , please tell me romance is with rachel
very great although not that much details in here like characters he does show a drawn picture but tell more about the ability all in all love and is definitely the best fan fiction I've read also author where you at π
The novel's extra is one of my favorites i hope that the update speed gets faster for this . Although the grammar is a mess i love the story..
not gonna lie i was excited for this, i thought maybe this would be a fanfic where they fixed some of stuff from the original but my god was i wrong. the first chapters and what do we get? one of those cringy af mcs, yeah the mc is the chaos/destruction/murder kind of dragon with ultimate power that can control all elements, master of hand to hand combat, all weapons are mastered by him and destroy the universe with his mere presence. yeah one of those self insert mcs that make the author feel good about themselves. honestly i was expecting for the mc to become something like hajin, a normal guy who was thrown into that crazy world, and choose an unorthodox class and make it op. but no we get the mc that has mastered all kind of weapons and still chooses a basic sword.
Hey, Author I found this Art somewhere... This looks pretty much like Christopher. (Except for the Dark roots in his hair)
well I do love your book its not the reason I'M COMMENTING i wanted to ask if I could put your characters in my fanfic? its a fanfic about the authors pov. I mean the novels extra to lazy to delete that first one.
thank you author sama for writing this fanfic. no one writes about The Novel's Extra and doesn't drop it. I like the story and how your building the romance. :)
hope you create your own original novel not fanfic, i love this novel and it is also good just hopin that you create your own, you're a good author tbh.
It's overall Good so far and hope it remains that way Although the cursing is a bit above normal, its ignorable and after reading story up to the current point, I am getting used to all the cursing from the MC. Background is interesting like how the MC has travelled to other worlds and stuff. Character designs are Good. Story development is Nice but the character development is a bit slow, but its ignorable. Writing Quality is good. Although there are some grammar mistakes, its not so much that it becomes hard to read, only at some points in the Novel so far, so compared to the other novels, its still to the minimum. Updates are a Bit slow now, but its understandable considering the length of each chapter. Although I do hope that the update frequency fastens a bit. Overall, the only thing I want more is the character development, Also hoping for Rachel to meet Evandal soon, it'd be even better if the Relationship betweem Cristopher and Rachel gets a boost a little sooner. Overall, I'd want to give it a 5- star, but since as said, the updates are a but slow now, so it'd be a 4.8 stars for Now. Though I can always change that if it gets better Keep up the good work, and hope you're safe. Thanks for reading the review, have a good day!
Honestly not much to say. This SI(?) fanfic is interesting and pretty comedic, well at least to meβ¦ anyways tho, itβs a good fanfic and I would recommend
Just repeating what I already said in the last Chapter (139). Being honest here, I didn't expect this to be so GOOD, I just started reading this book in my free time, and now here we're in the last chapter in just 3 days. I already love it the main story of TNE, and now I must say that I loved this story until now, and I have great expectations for this fan fic. Thanks for all these chapters author-nim, you sure are doing a great job here. γΎ(β§β½β¦*)o (Also author-nim, please more Rachel messages scenarios. She is the BEST girl, and I need MOAR of THIS (Β΄β½`Κβ‘Ζͺ))
the first thing I want to talk to is.....you should give tag #fanfiction , I really apreciate your Braveheart to make this fanfiction and keep update the story. please keep the spirit you have till the end . sorry if there is some Miss spelling, English is not my native language.
The turning point that made me love this novel was when mc got himself a fckbuddy and just like Angelica I cant for the life of me, ever get rid of this mona lisa from my library. I wont deny being annoyed by Olivia and MC at the start (the power up didnt bother me much, but his cannot-be-hidden-and-also-growing-and-glowing stigma did. was actually glad theres hope in helping Hajin not fall so much) but I always held hope when MC had said "if girlfriend then not Olivia" lol not the exact words but more or less. I just want to praise how special our mc is. I love the indifference and practicality despite the seemingly sheer helplessness in dealing with his genuine emotions. Also for... fate, if it exists. Although there was the drastic addition of Christopher, there werent much change in the TNE storyline which is a plus for me. It was eerie at first when the storyline got written word for word (there were changes sure) but tbh to see an actual scene from the TNE may have excited me more then it should, which is undoubtedly a plus. There are also many things to note of that makes this novel worth the read >MC mentality and approach (just read the chapters without olivia although she gets better. tbh even after being discplined i still want to tape her mouth and limbs whenever i see her and place her in a queen sized bed with yi yeonghan) >The fact that MC is actually too OP where it feels like hes an actual extra. where everything he does feels like a snippet of a famous strong dude. Id say, growth(in strength) is what makes a protagonist and a Cristopher doesnt grow, he only unseals >Improvements in strengthening department (the laws sure that was sweet, but strengthened Hajin? fk yes) >More Yeonha misunderstandings >Yi Byul >Rachel (actually author can we have more message scenarios. idk if shes endgame but evandel has more for you otherwise) >DevilDex I just read it today and finished midterms part3. thank you for making me surpass the weekly reading mission in one day. i will sue you for this 18 hours of happiness
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Pretty good, I read a bit and itβs not bad, I say itβs very involed and it seems pretty sensible then some other things on this website as it does seem real so I sayβ¦ Good job!
I really want to like this fanfic as I'm a big fan of TNE but reading this feels like the author is just writing the dialogue for word count and the story feels like the author could write this in any other novel and say it as that fanfic of that particular novel. Though I'll still continue reading lol. Maybe its just my preference but I hope this fanfic gets better. *Sorry if my english is a bit confusing Im still learning.
In the first chapters the MC goes from being a person who transmigrates to a novel a week before it starts, to being a person who has been traveling from world to world for a hundred years and ends up in that world ten years before the plot begins. I don't know where the sudden change came from, but it's quite confusing, as the first chapter talks about how you have transmigrated after reading the novel.
ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ ββ
I'm going to read the novel's extra before reading this so I will give it 1 star so far so people don't think I'm a bot :/
the story, grammar, dialogue, and characters improve as the story progress. It is actually quite impressive as the author is not a native english speaker originally. Imo the characters is done very well because I can still feel the familiarity of the orignal characters personality. to those who are irked by the OC's personality give it some time and you will actually laugh at his antics and interactions to the characters. Overall I recommend to give this novel a try. Another plus for me is that the author is actually responding to criticisms positively.
Here take this 5 star!! I have been looking for a fanfic for this novel and f*** why did this not show up any sooner!! Just knowing theres a fanfic for the novels extra already makes me excited!!
i hope that author will update more chapter or make a weekly chapter.btw olivia is too annoying and make me feel soo cringe.quality of this fanfic is getting better each chapter
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Author, Good job!! The start was somehow a but weak because of that swearing and your depression reflected in the text, but late chapters are really very well written! Such an interesting work must go to the moon in rankings!!
It's a fanfic so there are a lot of Lee way to add some spice here and there since novel extra is quite easy to understand due to MC is the author and he explain or hint what's what so. I'll be taking some of your twist here and there when writing mine It will be a long wait due to fat fingering the keys in my phone but I will make it for sure. so look forward to it. thanks for the inspiration and positive support for me. btw I'm gonna test with your fanfic by inserting mine in the story tweaking a bit some events for my ship or not. also the fanfic Im thinking about is crossover of EER and NE
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Redoing my review Dont want to make a low review and make the fanfic go hiatus forever since its a good fanfic even with a Op mc Mc is Op af and had to get nerf, we havent really touched about his background and how he got it so it might have some lore to it so i wont complain and the world is slowly changing so that he wont be op as well. The beginning you will probably hate him or just questioning what his doing but just keep reading i think? i might be just reading 2 fast but i think his slowly changing and his mindset kinda changed when he gets his little witch (0o0) ( Kinda want to c a possessive dad just because his its like a 180 from his character and actually wants to be a father figure to fill in that hole in his heart? past?) Romance idk yet theirs alot of love interest and their is already a mom and kinda want it to just be the mom to be w mc but eh. Just keep it up. Alot of readers are kinda hating the part of his toxic personality and op powers but im guessing your going to fill that up later
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I Would rate it higher but I want to know one thing and one thing alone what is the archer girl oc does he end up with her and if he does can you tell me so I Can drop it