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The story has potential but the translation needs some work. I suggest using Grammarly, help with grammar. If you live in china, it might be hard to use it (I think it's a google owned asset now) so maybe use a VPN to get around it.
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Great novel........................................ ......... can anyone tell me original link or name of this novel.....................
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I feel like it can be a great fanfic. but although the translation is good it still has a few times that it seems to a mtl. could do with a clearer translation
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Too many grammatical errors. I highly recommend grammarly/proofreader or English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. above average potential when it comes to the story itself.
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The story has potential but the translation needs some work. I suggest using Grammarly, help with grammar. If you live in china, it might be hard to use it (I think it's a google owned asset now) so maybe use a VPN to get around it.
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Great novel........................................ ......... can anyone tell me original link or name of this novel.....................
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I feel like it can be a great fanfic. but although the translation is good it still has a few times that it seems to a mtl. could do with a clearer translation
leave review if you like so i know this fanfic worth my time thanks support me in patreon and paypal belamy20 leave review if you like so i know this fanfic worth my time thanks support me in patreon and paypal belamy20
Too many grammatical errors. I highly recommend grammarly/proofreader or English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. above average potential when it comes to the story itself.