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Honestly it was pretty decent until chapter 38-39 came along and it crashed and burned for me
I really enjoyed reading this and dont understand all the negative reviews its a good story and sure plenty of people dont like the ending but in opion this story is a solid read
completely ruined after it turns out he's not theo not and its basically a mix of tokyo ghoul universe and dc. even though this was supposed to be A ghoul in dc not multiple ghouls in dc. author seems to not care what anyone thinks so far so that also ruins it.
This plot is all over the place, side characters, particularly women are reduced to cardboard cutouts. Random edginess is inserted for no reason and the MC acts cringe. Characters like Raven and batman act in ways drastically uncharacteristic of themselves. This story honestly feels like it was written by someone on crack.
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(SPOILER WARNING) I really can't get past the first few chapters since every time he meets someone new he instantly get's away with something, for batman he stole 120k and said "It's for my mother who's suffering from cancer" and batman thought "Either way this is probably stolen," and did nothing about it. He met Raven after eating a human, and he said "I'm kind of like you" and she immediately joined him, He told catwoman that he needs to eat humans and she gets over it in 1 sentence, he gave her basically the lore of ghouls, telling her what he needs to eat and what he can't eat, mind you he's not even 12 at this point there's no reason for him to know everything when he just became a ghoul (He ate her food before but the one time hi didn't he suddenly became a ghoul and somehow figured out he could eat dead bodies and coffee) The interactions are so fast that the story is basically trash, there's no substance to the story and I honestly can't get into it. I read a review asking if this was harem and the author replied with what i believe to be a yes considering one was saying "nice" and the other said "why a harem, it ruins the story" I haven't seen any novels about ghouls(from tokyo ghoul) and I'm disappointed with how much of a wreck this is. Before I forget, author i don't care what your opinion on my review is, be it positive or negative.
Good novel! I just don't like MC personality. It's not my type. .................................................................. Except that everything is good.
I enjoyed this a lot. The main reason was being able to see all the ups and downs the mc went through. It was a nice break from the happy-go-lucky books I’v been reading.
Useless start! If the kid wants to get a few things left with Selena is the worst idea, he doesn't do anything useful and Batman will never accept it and also, I still can't figure it out the fact that the author talks about pedophilia about an 8 year old kid as if it were nothing, no matter if the mind is an adult, it's so con, the author wants his harem so much that he doesn't don't know what to do and spoil the story, it could have been great, but don't expect too much from this site.
A good story at the start, it got derailed in the middle. The author just turns the mc into a pseudo Ken... It is irritatingly bad how the story gets changed in the middle.
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I read the whole thing, and besides the ending which i personly dont like it was a great novel and you should give it a read.
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I liked to read this but I didn't understood one thing, where was rize at the end? .............................................................
It was good in the first arc but after that, it's trash I quit at chapter 38 just in case it got better but it didn't, In my opinion, you shouldn't have brought Tokyo ghoul in it should have just stayed Jasper. I also want raven and him together but then again this is only my opinion and you are the author so write what you like.
I thought you said this wasn’t a harem. ...........................................................,.,.,......,.,,,,.........….,.,.,.,c,.,c,., ,
don't mind me I just do this to reverse troll the author eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I like this but all I can think is should've kept Rize and all u do is give the mc despair u just choose hes gonna have the worst life but be the strongest hero the amount of fcking despair is too much and it puts me off this fic...
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This novel gave me trust issues and the author is a borderline sadist that tools with my feelings. SO! I am going to give the author a good **** you and leave.
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The words that came into my head for this novel are; One bad stroke of the brush is all it takes to ruin a master piece.
Kaneki on steriods. No cap. He's also a KING ....._.._._.._._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._._._._._._._._._._._.._._.._._.._.._.._._._._.[img=recommend]
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The story has amazing characters and a plot that kept me on my toes. The world development could be improved. I hope the author keeps writing, because this is a really good story.
man i dont think ive ever been so utterly disappointed in a story before this started off interesting enough and just kinda turned into a trainwreck the farther it went dont get me started on those last like 15 chapters or however long the jason and darkseide part went that was just a whole new level of terrible its like you just completely gave up on the story and just started throwing out whatever random crud you can think of. i wanted to at least say something Positive about this story but i genuinely cant think of anything like a couple of the jokes made me laugh but overall i was just so mindlessly bored if i had anything else to have read i would have abandoned this story like 20 chapters in.
Honestly it was pretty decent until chapter 38-39 came along and it crashed and burned for me
I really enjoyed reading this and dont understand all the negative reviews its a good story and sure plenty of people dont like the ending but in opion this story is a solid read
completely ruined after it turns out he's not theo not and its basically a mix of tokyo ghoul universe and dc. even though this was supposed to be A ghoul in dc not multiple ghouls in dc. author seems to not care what anyone thinks so far so that also ruins it.
This plot is all over the place, side characters, particularly women are reduced to cardboard cutouts. Random edginess is inserted for no reason and the MC acts cringe. Characters like Raven and batman act in ways drastically uncharacteristic of themselves. This story honestly feels like it was written by someone on crack.
......................................................................................................................................................................................................
............................................................................................................................its good..........
(SPOILER WARNING) I really can't get past the first few chapters since every time he meets someone new he instantly get's away with something, for batman he stole 120k and said "It's for my mother who's suffering from cancer" and batman thought "Either way this is probably stolen," and did nothing about it. He met Raven after eating a human, and he said "I'm kind of like you" and she immediately joined him, He told catwoman that he needs to eat humans and she gets over it in 1 sentence, he gave her basically the lore of ghouls, telling her what he needs to eat and what he can't eat, mind you he's not even 12 at this point there's no reason for him to know everything when he just became a ghoul (He ate her food before but the one time hi didn't he suddenly became a ghoul and somehow figured out he could eat dead bodies and coffee) The interactions are so fast that the story is basically trash, there's no substance to the story and I honestly can't get into it. I read a review asking if this was harem and the author replied with what i believe to be a yes considering one was saying "nice" and the other said "why a harem, it ruins the story" I haven't seen any novels about ghouls(from tokyo ghoul) and I'm disappointed with how much of a wreck this is. Before I forget, author i don't care what your opinion on my review is, be it positive or negative.
Good novel! I just don't like MC personality. It's not my type. .................................................................. Except that everything is good.
I enjoyed this a lot. The main reason was being able to see all the ups and downs the mc went through. It was a nice break from the happy-go-lucky books I’v been reading.
Useless start! If the kid wants to get a few things left with Selena is the worst idea, he doesn't do anything useful and Batman will never accept it and also, I still can't figure it out the fact that the author talks about pedophilia about an 8 year old kid as if it were nothing, no matter if the mind is an adult, it's so con, the author wants his harem so much that he doesn't don't know what to do and spoil the story, it could have been great, but don't expect too much from this site.
A good story at the start, it got derailed in the middle. The author just turns the mc into a pseudo Ken... It is irritatingly bad how the story gets changed in the middle.
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I read the whole thing, and besides the ending which i personly dont like it was a great novel and you should give it a read.
La fine fa schifooooooooooooioooooioooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I liked to read this but I didn't understood one thing, where was rize at the end? .............................................................
It was good in the first arc but after that, it's trash I quit at chapter 38 just in case it got better but it didn't, In my opinion, you shouldn't have brought Tokyo ghoul in it should have just stayed Jasper. I also want raven and him together but then again this is only my opinion and you are the author so write what you like.
I thought you said this wasn’t a harem. ...........................................................,.,.,......,.,,,,.........….,.,.,.,c,.,c,., ,
don't mind me I just do this to reverse troll the author eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I like this but all I can think is should've kept Rize and all u do is give the mc despair u just choose hes gonna have the worst life but be the strongest hero the amount of fcking despair is too much and it puts me off this fic...
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This novel gave me trust issues and the author is a borderline sadist that tools with my feelings. SO! I am going to give the author a good **** you and leave.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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The words that came into my head for this novel are; One bad stroke of the brush is all it takes to ruin a master piece.
Kaneki on steriods. No cap. He's also a KING ....._.._._.._._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._.._._._._._._._._._._._.._._.._._.._.._.._._._._.[img=recommend]
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The story has amazing characters and a plot that kept me on my toes. The world development could be improved. I hope the author keeps writing, because this is a really good story.
man i dont think ive ever been so utterly disappointed in a story before this started off interesting enough and just kinda turned into a trainwreck the farther it went dont get me started on those last like 15 chapters or however long the jason and darkseide part went that was just a whole new level of terrible its like you just completely gave up on the story and just started throwing out whatever random crud you can think of. i wanted to at least say something Positive about this story but i genuinely cant think of anything like a couple of the jokes made me laugh but overall i was just so mindlessly bored if i had anything else to have read i would have abandoned this story like 20 chapters in.