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my guy this story is good the mc is very real and deff compared to typical cultivation protagonistes some problemes concerning the updating stability otherwise it is fine Try using grammarly it works well if you want to write in english good luck!!
i would rather squeez the pure ass juice out of a fresh steaming turd and feed it to my disabled brother then read this book. 5/5 :) its aight
Talent absorbing or spirit root is bullshit and by the character of young master mother she should have been killed long ago no matter how cunning she is there are smart people
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Nice story but the grammar and the development of the character /world are bad.........................................................................................................
I saw R-18 tag, I came. I read Netori in synopsis, I am interested. I know the Author, I add this to library. . I read he got contract, I prepare to leave. . . . . . Well, I will try to read later when the accumulated chapter is more than 30s.
It is solely my duty to give my own novel 5 stars. As I said, this is about a mob character in the cultivation world. There will be a lot of violence or probably a rape scene. MC is scum that will do everything to survive in the madness world. At the same time, MC is natural good. He will not kill others because of some fees or not ruthless MC. MC will hold his Earthling's sense sometime. He will help strangers especially those who have talent in cultivation. There is no netorare and I am a man of my tags. I hope you guys followed my lowly novel
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my guy this story is good the mc is very real and deff compared to typical cultivation protagonistes some problemes concerning the updating stability otherwise it is fine Try using grammarly it works well if you want to write in english good luck!!
i would rather squeez the pure ass juice out of a fresh steaming turd and feed it to my disabled brother then read this book. 5/5 :) its aight
Talent absorbing or spirit root is bullshit and by the character of young master mother she should have been killed long ago no matter how cunning she is there are smart people
Spoiler enthüllen Nice story but the grammar and the development of the character /world are bad.........................................................................................................
I saw R-18 tag, I came. I read Netori in synopsis, I am interested. I know the Author, I add this to library. . I read he got contract, I prepare to leave. . . . . . Well, I will try to read later when the accumulated chapter is more than 30s.
It is solely my duty to give my own novel 5 stars. As I said, this is about a mob character in the cultivation world. There will be a lot of violence or probably a rape scene. MC is scum that will do everything to survive in the madness world. At the same time, MC is natural good. He will not kill others because of some fees or not ruthless MC. MC will hold his Earthling's sense sometime. He will help strangers especially those who have talent in cultivation. There is no netorare and I am a man of my tags. I hope you guys followed my lowly novel
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp I'm level 2 please like 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺