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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
To Author, All in all it is quite good. All i hope is that it doesn't get dropped. To Author, My own idealism as a fan take it or leave it - MC : 1. Personality :- Pratical with mix of idealist+realist+antihero with a true Netural good persona and a bit of comedy,(Vegan MC food choice). 2. Skills and abilities :- Assassin specialist(as Mr/Mrs. Author stated), Fuinjutsu specialist(Mix of coding and runes-his own creation), Dojutsu(mix of all dojutsu in shinobi-verse- original justu), His own energy[mix of - Chakra(mix/combination of Physical Energy+Spiritual Energy)+Nature+Sage+Chi/Mana energies] = Permanent sage mode(without any tattoo but make it like cultivation with endless levels/potential), Learing all techniques in Shinobhi-verse with using his own energy(author kindly name it), Time+Space Technique specialist, and other bloodlines you name it. 3. Goal :- 1. Become the strongest individual in Shinobi-Verse and create a group [with the inspiration of Kamar-taj+Shield+Avengers from his past life(Name should given by author)]. 2. To make the planet habitual to live pollution free not to become like Earth. 3. Making the planet energy richer to live eternally with regen factor. 4. Elimination of hostile clans like otsuski, Kara, etc. 5. Make cultivation like techniques. 6. Creation of new science, math and tech without harming the nature and tecaching the world on it. 7. Changing the ideology of village system that - they should protect it but village is not the whole world/universe. * List of all types of techniques in Shinobi-Verse - NINJUTSU, TAIJUTSU, GENJUTSU, Bukijutsu(weaponary) SPECIAL JUTSU TYPES(BΕJUTSU , the Balls of the Quest for Truthand others etc.,), BUNSHINJUTSU, CHAKRA FLOW, FΕͺINJUTSU, JINCHΕͺRIKI ABILITY, JIBAKUJUTSU(offensive techniques depending on the Kanji he performs in the air, such as creating fires, and using the Kanji to attack an enemy), JUINJUTSU(The Cursed Seal), SECRET JUTSU(Clan's special techniques), CHAKRA ABSORPTION JUTSU, COLLABORATION JUTSU, Kinjutsu(Forbidden Technique), KUSARIGAMAJUTSU(poison attach weapons), KyΕ«jutsu(long range jutsu/Bow Technique), MEDICAL NINJUTSU, NINTAIJUTSU(Ninja Body Techniques-fighting style that combines Ninjutsu and Taijutsu), SENJUTSU[Comibination of Chakra(the spiritual and physical energy), nature, sage energies], SHURIKENJUTSU(weapon throwing techniques), TENSEI-NINJUTSU(Reincarnation Techniques), Bloodline types - DΕJUTSU(Eye Jutsu), KEKKEI GENKAI, KEKKEI TΕTA(Element combination), KEKKEI MΕRA(Bloodline final form like Rinnegan, Kaguya Εtsutsuki's Byakugan, Tenseigan, etc.). *If MC can master all these techniques then it would be treat to read.(as jack of all trades also master of all). Thanks! Yours sincerely, Reader.
So I have officially restarted this story and itβs going a bit differently as the main character is not going to be unbalanced with different skills. I am trying to build him up as an Assassin type fighter hence the title image. The story is also a tad bit different still a bit similar but the main goal is that the mc will live his life doing whatever he wants and stopping Madara is something he will do.
Muito Bom a fanfic amei de mais.... e Γ© raro encontrar fanfics deste nΓvel mas tem o problema de stability updates, gostaria de saber se estΓ‘ em hiatu ou foi droped (dropada) pelo autor.... mas se nao por favor volte a escrever Γ© uma otima historia
It would be nice if the future organization of the mc is an outfit like the akatsuki and a number like the espada also that they are all a mask or the numbers are engraved for the mc I think he should wear no mask
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The topic of this book is really interesting. The story is going well so far but the writing may need some work. Just saying though. it's basically 5 stars for me.
I love this book, but the writing quality is a bit down i cant understand what some of the words are saying and it takes me a long time to undersyand if i do. I also dont really like how the story developement is but ill traut you to finish it.
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I like this κβ‘κ I really hope MC doesn't turn into the stereotype "I will forgive the world" tho.. What type of path will 'Menma' walk?
This is a pretty god fanfic so far with a nice plot I do hope to see more author and do make sure to take breaks to not burn yourself out ππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I like it ........................................................................... *ehem* shisui *ehem* x menma *ehem* maybe HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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I like this but there just hasnt been a lot of updates... Im pretty sure the story hasnt been updated for over a month. I love this story, but Id also like it if it were to improve its update stability...
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Not gonna lie this was good. it's been a while since the last update like for me it's been a few weeks.ππππππππππππππππππππππππ
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
To Author, All in all it is quite good. All i hope is that it doesn't get dropped. To Author, My own idealism as a fan take it or leave it - MC : 1. Personality :- Pratical with mix of idealist+realist+antihero with a true Netural good persona and a bit of comedy,(Vegan MC food choice). 2. Skills and abilities :- Assassin specialist(as Mr/Mrs. Author stated), Fuinjutsu specialist(Mix of coding and runes-his own creation), Dojutsu(mix of all dojutsu in shinobi-verse- original justu), His own energy[mix of - Chakra(mix/combination of Physical Energy+Spiritual Energy)+Nature+Sage+Chi/Mana energies] = Permanent sage mode(without any tattoo but make it like cultivation with endless levels/potential), Learing all techniques in Shinobhi-verse with using his own energy(author kindly name it), Time+Space Technique specialist, and other bloodlines you name it. 3. Goal :- 1. Become the strongest individual in Shinobi-Verse and create a group [with the inspiration of Kamar-taj+Shield+Avengers from his past life(Name should given by author)]. 2. To make the planet habitual to live pollution free not to become like Earth. 3. Making the planet energy richer to live eternally with regen factor. 4. Elimination of hostile clans like otsuski, Kara, etc. 5. Make cultivation like techniques. 6. Creation of new science, math and tech without harming the nature and tecaching the world on it. 7. Changing the ideology of village system that - they should protect it but village is not the whole world/universe. * List of all types of techniques in Shinobi-Verse - NINJUTSU, TAIJUTSU, GENJUTSU, Bukijutsu(weaponary) SPECIAL JUTSU TYPES(BΕJUTSU , the Balls of the Quest for Truthand others etc.,), BUNSHINJUTSU, CHAKRA FLOW, FΕͺINJUTSU, JINCHΕͺRIKI ABILITY, JIBAKUJUTSU(offensive techniques depending on the Kanji he performs in the air, such as creating fires, and using the Kanji to attack an enemy), JUINJUTSU(The Cursed Seal), SECRET JUTSU(Clan's special techniques), CHAKRA ABSORPTION JUTSU, COLLABORATION JUTSU, Kinjutsu(Forbidden Technique), KUSARIGAMAJUTSU(poison attach weapons), KyΕ«jutsu(long range jutsu/Bow Technique), MEDICAL NINJUTSU, NINTAIJUTSU(Ninja Body Techniques-fighting style that combines Ninjutsu and Taijutsu), SENJUTSU[Comibination of Chakra(the spiritual and physical energy), nature, sage energies], SHURIKENJUTSU(weapon throwing techniques), TENSEI-NINJUTSU(Reincarnation Techniques), Bloodline types - DΕJUTSU(Eye Jutsu), KEKKEI GENKAI, KEKKEI TΕTA(Element combination), KEKKEI MΕRA(Bloodline final form like Rinnegan, Kaguya Εtsutsuki's Byakugan, Tenseigan, etc.). *If MC can master all these techniques then it would be treat to read.(as jack of all trades also master of all). Thanks! Yours sincerely, Reader.
So I have officially restarted this story and itβs going a bit differently as the main character is not going to be unbalanced with different skills. I am trying to build him up as an Assassin type fighter hence the title image. The story is also a tad bit different still a bit similar but the main goal is that the mc will live his life doing whatever he wants and stopping Madara is something he will do.
Muito Bom a fanfic amei de mais.... e Γ© raro encontrar fanfics deste nΓvel mas tem o problema de stability updates, gostaria de saber se estΓ‘ em hiatu ou foi droped (dropada) pelo autor.... mas se nao por favor volte a escrever Γ© uma otima historia
It would be nice if the future organization of the mc is an outfit like the akatsuki and a number like the espada also that they are all a mask or the numbers are engraved for the mc I think he should wear no mask
Nice. .. . . . .. . ..... . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . .
The topic of this book is really interesting. The story is going well so far but the writing may need some work. Just saying though. it's basically 5 stars for me.
I love this book, but the writing quality is a bit down i cant understand what some of the words are saying and it takes me a long time to undersyand if i do. I also dont really like how the story developement is but ill traut you to finish it.
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
I like this κβ‘κ I really hope MC doesn't turn into the stereotype "I will forgive the world" tho.. What type of path will 'Menma' walk?
This is a pretty god fanfic so far with a nice plot I do hope to see more author and do make sure to take breaks to not burn yourself out ππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I like it ........................................................................... *ehem* shisui *ehem* x menma *ehem* maybe HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
don't drop. more moooooooooooreeeeeeeeeeer chapters. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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I like this but there just hasnt been a lot of updates... Im pretty sure the story hasnt been updated for over a month. I love this story, but Id also like it if it were to improve its update stability...
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Not gonna lie this was good. it's been a while since the last update like for me it's been a few weeks.ππππππππππππππππππππππππ