The Fat God System

LV 13

Klemantoni

I've read till chapter 9 and I leave because there's nothing that I can relate to in the mc. He has no personality. The only thing we know about him is that he's fat, poor, have good grades, gets bullied and he's also stupid. Bye, I'm out...

LV 5

EXPLOSIONGOD

A novel that is worth your time. Had better Grammer than most orginal novels not perfect but pretty good. Has a unique plot but it does have a superficial character the bully that seems to hate the main character for no reason. Overall has a lot of potential would recommend. My suggestion for improvement would be more in depth characters.

LV 11

isharislynkia

So speechless. This book deserves a merit! Your writings flow is elegant and fascinating! I could feel the vibes of the story and the plot twists and turns is truly a rock wohoo! Guys, I recommend you all to read to this book you won't be disappointed trust me! This author deserves the best and his fluent words flow like a lake..I've been avidly reading this in the first place. C'mon try it out, you couldn't wait to find you along in the journey! The paragraph and writing isn't messy, no grammatical errors so far and very neat writing which pleasant in the eyes. It was portrayed beautifully ahh can't wait for more releasee hehe💗🎉🎉

LV 14

GalacticRage

Great starting out and really like the concept, I would definetly recommend to everyone to keep reading along with this story I can feel that it will be pretty fantastic

LV 2

ChadFacts

The dialogue and fight scenes are VERY bad. Even after 20 chapters I don't understand his abilities. The concept of the system is great, but the implementation of it in the story is not. I can't stand the really unrealistic characters and unrealistic dialogue. The writing quality isn't all it is hyped up to be either. Sure, the writer has virtually zero grammatical errors. However, that isn't all that matters with writing quality. It is too dull, boring, static. It needs to be more colorful and deep, but this is just... it feels like someone K-12 trying to write a book for a school project.

LV 1

KeiKei18

The execution was not crude nor awkward, the stability of the updates is quite good. However, even though this novel has 2 quite good points, I don't know why this novel has high-ranking at all. Maybe, others saw what I didn't see, felt what I didn't feel, I don't know. Perhaps I got tired of Mcs who have systems got little bean of brain in their ass, I don't know. The character design is quite good; bully, battle-maniac, idiots. Quite good combination.

LV 4

GOD_OF_ENAS

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LV 10

Ritankar_Sarkar_

The story is indeed a piece of work very carefully designed to be called a novel. I was almost speechless while reading your novel. Hope you get more attention from the readers! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 5

Just_A_Man

I am not up to date with the latest chapter but when I say it's the world and the main character is carrying this novel. I have never seen people who's first option in everything is violence even up to adults or people with experience. Like they're other options to these things. The only thing I attribute it to is that it's a different world from our own. I sincerely hope that the story just grows up a bit more and that adults act like they have experience and not kids trying to act mature. It's good novel it's just needs some restructuring with some of the characters.

LV 11

Ugly_Baby

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LV 11

WillowWhisper

Honestly it’s a solid Webnovel pretty good just wish the system gave him more daily missions other than that you should really give it a try

LV 3

Abood_Ghoul_3288

very good so far the only criticism i could say about this novel is properly the lack of description for example i would appreciate it if the author added more knowledge about things introduced like the academy the number of students and other misc the same for the system as i noticed that when ever the mcs transform their is a change of personality and many more stuff other than that its pretty amazing considering that it still in the early chapters

LV 1

KMDA

Very good story, enjoyed every bit of it. Would definitely recommend to all readers. Unless you hate system stories you should enjoy it. If people are worried that this is just another copy of mvs or something its not the story is unique. Read it

LV 4

Dio99

Wow this book is so underrated. I'm surprised that it's not as popular as it should be. Legit it's great at least on the same quality as those trail novels. I can't wait for more chapters. 👍👍👍

LV 4

Lazy_Asshole

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LV 2

Jr_Wyatt

This seems like a great start to a good novel i just hope that the author can get more views are recognition for this. keep up the great work really looking forward to this one.

LV 4

tezz

well written weak - to - strong novel! I look forward to Hugh's future character development and his increase in strength! I hope he remains the low key character we all deserve

LV 4

joshy_rob

the main character has no personality at all. his main personality trait is being a coward who gets bullied everywhere and controlled. up to chapter 90 or so and it's the same schtick. even worse, I feel like I've read the same chapters over and over because the author feels the need to describe boring fights with only four types of animals. the transformation isn't interesting when I need to read 2 more chapters I him being tired. there's not much to read even with 200+ so why bother?

LV 2

Chained_Spear

Truly a great novel, nothing is as it seems and if a character seems to fit a cliche then be ready for a suprise because no characters in this book easily fit into a mold. They are dynamic, emotional personas that can change and adapt to suit thier environment. Worth reading just to get a taste of what good plot and writing looks like.

LV 1

HGB

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