Shinobi Prince (Naruto FanFic)

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Aeternabilis

Not trying to be harsh but I am honestly surprised that every review is 5 star? I mean if you like happy go lucky stories I guess that it is a decent story. From reading this story, personally, I would not recommend it as something to get invested in. Maybe if you have nothing to do and like the type of stories I mentioned above. The mc is a naive child (meant to have been an ***** in past life) who is a fanboy of kohona. It is honestly a waste of a good idea for a story. I mean when I went to read this story and from the title plus synopsis, I thought that this story would be about the prince of fire country. So I thought he would grow up as the prince, he knows and has chakra so obviously, he will train that. I thought that he would as a prince get personalised trainers, maybe the king might have a secret legacy that is in the family passed down. Hell, maybe the mc would be a master swordsman and not use chakra but something else. All things where he grows up in the capital to eventually take up being the daiyamo? Instead, much to my disappointment, we follow the mc, while a genius in chakra is very childish/stupid. This would be fine if he wasn't a reincarnation who was previously an *****. I wouldn't even mind if he was just a little childish from being young and it affecting his mind. But he is just way over the top if that makes sense? If this wasn't bad enough he is an utter fanboy of naruto/kohona. He wants to become a shinobi, a child soldier, calls the Hokage jijy, playing around with all the clan's children etc. He doesn't seem to care about any dangers and will give up being a prince just to become a shinobi and much much more. I mean I came to read this story because I was expecting the mc to be a prince of fire country as I haven't read a naruto story about this and found it interesting. Not the same old boring asf naruto story. I'm just rly disappointed because I felt this story had potential and was going to be something different, something new. Hope this helped if you want to read or not. Also, hope that the author can take on what I have written and gl to them. It seems I expected something that wasn't here and was instead just a happy go lucky vibe?

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Majeh7

This looks interesting keep up the great work and don't listen to haters......................................................................

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MoonTree

holy cow, it's amazing, I also imagine "mc" looking like "jin mori" with the blue crown and the stone staff! this fic has been perfect so far, I look forward to the next chapter

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racecarsthegodcar

other then story updating cause i don’t know if author has a schedule or not but other then that great start to a naruto story

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ICallOutIdiots

So far so good! Cant wait for the next update tho.. still this is pretty good even if theres only 4 chApters. Djdjdjjddjjddjdjdjdjdjj

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WMLazyDayDream

This has nothing to do with Jin Mori at all but it's actually a really good Naruto SI with an OP protagonist that isn't an Uchiha, jinchuriki, bloodline user or just plainly bs. So all around good story misleading cover.

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noobageddon_

Hmm this is actually quite good. Well its to early to tell about the plot, but i like the things that happend so far. The writing quality is soo good(compare to ithers in this site). Its immersive. Gj👍🏻

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Monkkey97

So far the story is fantastic, I hope it continues like this [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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MagnumUs

It is a really interesting development. I can see The young lord becoming a successful ninja and also Fire lord. This is a really unique storyline. Kudos

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Daoist708179

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Vymlock

Man I enjoy your story,it is very well written and it is born from an original idea few people has dared to portrait on Narutoverse fanfiction. Just make a better use of the MC's starting position of a Daimyo's heir and explore new fields other writers haven't done before,like showing the life in the court,interactions with nobles,the exploration of the Land of Fire's feudal system,the burdens of rulership... Tenshin is not a civilian or an orphan who wants to be a ninja,he is lucky to be royalty and while the Konoha training arc you have already started is a thing you should remember what Tenshin has waiting for him back home,all the responsability he will have back there. A strong Daimyo that wields both courtly power and ninjutsu is a good goal to strive for,a good manager and a warrior all the same. Just continue and listen to comments like mine that only want for the story to be unique,to improve do not fall on the usual badmouthing shits that make Web Novel their home. As a Writer one has to search for good criticism among insults,I wish people was more behaved but it is what it is and you must not let it keep you down man. Best Wishes! And please do not let Tenshin's tale end with this nonsense.

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Manoj_kumar_Gupta

A story with good characterisation of both kids and *****.Only problem I have with this fic is that Tenshin is learning Justus too quickly. Overall a good story with great character development and realistic enough.

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Abel_Njenjera

I love how unique the story is but I do believe it could do with a bit more world building and character depth. And the english while not the best is far from the worst I have had to endure on this site

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leyrin

Keep up the great work .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Angelsakurat2

update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. v. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update

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FlipFlopFckBoy

This fanfic is trully fresh amidst countless trashy "died and whishes" themed fanfic. I havent had read author who put MC as the heir of Fire Daimyo, most of them like "Meh I'm Senju plus Uchiha, so here I come rinnegan" type of MC. The adoration and excitement of MC in one way or another make sense, not to mention what I think as a quite important plot the pseudo-jinchuriki is really good. Tons of Naruto fanfic didnt even bother to mention that, and the way he got the power is also quite 'original' as he didnt wish for anything morover there are plot and reason behind it. For you all god damn sucker who liked trashy fanfic then this wont be your cup of tea. For those who sick of cliches filled thrashy fanfic then you might want to try this one. Its really enjoyable.

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ssdxd

I'm going to be honest I'm on the kyubi chapter and I dont like were it's going. I think he should stay as a daimyo that knows how to fight. I think it's stupid pushing him to be a shinobi having him as a daimyo sounds way better. I thought this was going to be a daimyo story not him becoming a shinobi and fighting for a village. I will read the other chapters but if it's just him being a shinobi in kohona I'm dropping it. the summary drew me in if he becomes a shinobi and fights for kohona I'm gone. like the writing just felt I was lied to

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CodeSpectre

So far the book has not disappointed at all and i hope it remains as entertaining as it is right now....The only problem is how much of a genius the MC is cuz if it keeps going like this he might become too OP too fast...Well that's the only concern i have and hey author don't let the haters get to you and please don't drop it mid way

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Lascivious

Please do continue to write, don’t let the haters get to you, you’re doing an amazing job. loving the story so far. writing this review to give you some motivation and continue writing future chapters. Please don’t drop.

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Harasamasa223

Author keep up the interesting story... ....... .................... ... ....... .................... ... ....... .................... ... ....... ....................