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grammar was barley bareable at the start but it just got absolutely unreadable later. like how can you get worse? you should be getting better.
why not a ghoul in dc instead lol .........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Tiene buenos puntos a desarrollar pero la historia es repetitiva y algo abirrida el personaje carese de ambiciones u objetivos ademas de la falta de telaciones sociales esta bien que sea solitario pero el personajes carece de cualquier relacion que le sirva de ancla u apollo hasta batman tenia amist des como alfred , los robins , la liga de la justicia ademas de sistintas relaciones amorosas y es eso de lo que carese este personaje
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The story is really great so far. A lot of gore but I won't complain. Only thing is that there is some MAJOR writing mistake really thats really hard to follow. He should really recheck his text for those mistakes. I think he suffer from dysphasia or dyslexic.Maybe write a warning about it??
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sometimes I can't understand some of the paragraphs in here...but the story makes up for it so nice job. other then that I hope he slowly becomes a slightly better person
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The character design seems interesting and the backstory of the character is also quite good but the grammar is quite hard to understand/follow. You also use a lot of unnecessary terms that can confuse the reader.
The story is Good but sometime the author get lost between translations. The "I am Confusion" meme is best used here so eat your heart out lads. P.S: The last line was a joke about the story
It's not bad, but honestly it's not good, it's absurdly boring ... The protagonist has no feelings, he has no interactions with other people (besides caitlyn), the chapters seem more monologues, it's like there is no "substance", the chapters are empty, there are only descriptions, descriptions of powers, descriptions of moments, description of "missions" ... It's like a giant piece of the novel is missing, the author is relying only on the series, so he jumps from moment to moment, it's like he doesn't follow a straight line, so there is no character development or anything like that, the MC only exists to eat, to become stronger and to be a character in "The Flash" series...
honestly this is awesome keep up the good work................................................................................................
The story definitely grows on you. I was sort of turned off in the beginning with him needing to eat people like tokyo ghoul but it goes away the more you read. Aside from that its a fun read and I’m excited to see the league’s reaction to him
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8ts a good story and the pic is lancelot from fate before he bacame the berserker so yeah........................................................................
story is good and all. I really didn't had any problem with cannabilism in the beginning as the guy was doing whatever he could do survive and only went after criminals but from chapter 26 or 27 onwards he became animal, so can't say I liked that. Though from the way the story was going I knew this would happen but was hoping he would continue to kill criminals only.
This really a good one. This may not be careful one of the best ones but this got great potential. It's just there's too much gore so if you're a bit light-hearted and not into that then please don't read this. The MC is is kinda dark. He's between the line of a villain and an antihero. Just a bit of a suggestion to the author, you should put some of the thoughts behind the MC's action. It will be great if you show the psychology of the MC. As of now, he's still going in the flow of the original story. This fanfic's still needs a bit more of character building if not, he may just end up as a psychotic power hungry cannibal who can't stop eating. This is a great fanfic. Thanks for the work.👍👏
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Its matches one Russian novel i have read and the name of novel is same , what the mc is going thru is same and that he gains abilities from eating some special people is the same.
stories pretty good need to work on grammar a little little Gory for my taste but still pretty good anyone who's into the really dark zombie brain eating bone marrow sucking type monster will enjoy this hope the author keeps it up and good luck
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If you like cannibals then this is your story. Not badly written story kinda just gives mc what he wants bit not totally unbelievable. Eating people is just not my thing.
I really like the concept behind this, I hope that it doesn't go the route of giving the mc so many abilities they dont even know what to do with them but it's doing good so far. plus 20 chapters in only a few days I cant ask for more. just a few times where there are some inconsistencies like 1 paragraph later or even in the same paragraph which is slightly confusing, so maybe just look over it once if you dont already.
pls fix the voting option!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there isn't any for a great story like this but for other bullshits like with harem and shit like novels there is one
Looking forward to this.....................................................................................................................
very good keep up the work...................................................................................... . .. . . .
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grammar was barley bareable at the start but it just got absolutely unreadable later. like how can you get worse? you should be getting better.
why not a ghoul in dc instead lol .........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Tiene buenos puntos a desarrollar pero la historia es repetitiva y algo abirrida el personaje carese de ambiciones u objetivos ademas de la falta de telaciones sociales esta bien que sea solitario pero el personajes carece de cualquier relacion que le sirva de ancla u apollo hasta batman tenia amist des como alfred , los robins , la liga de la justicia ademas de sistintas relaciones amorosas y es eso de lo que carese este personaje
Spoiler enthüllen The story is really great so far. A lot of gore but I won't complain. Only thing is that there is some MAJOR writing mistake really thats really hard to follow. He should really recheck his text for those mistakes. I think he suffer from dysphasia or dyslexic.Maybe write a warning about it??
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sometimes I can't understand some of the paragraphs in here...but the story makes up for it so nice job. other then that I hope he slowly becomes a slightly better person
Spoiler enthüllen The character design seems interesting and the backstory of the character is also quite good but the grammar is quite hard to understand/follow. You also use a lot of unnecessary terms that can confuse the reader.
The story is Good but sometime the author get lost between translations. The "I am Confusion" meme is best used here so eat your heart out lads. P.S: The last line was a joke about the story
It's not bad, but honestly it's not good, it's absurdly boring ... The protagonist has no feelings, he has no interactions with other people (besides caitlyn), the chapters seem more monologues, it's like there is no "substance", the chapters are empty, there are only descriptions, descriptions of powers, descriptions of moments, description of "missions" ... It's like a giant piece of the novel is missing, the author is relying only on the series, so he jumps from moment to moment, it's like he doesn't follow a straight line, so there is no character development or anything like that, the MC only exists to eat, to become stronger and to be a character in "The Flash" series...
honestly this is awesome keep up the good work................................................................................................
The story definitely grows on you. I was sort of turned off in the beginning with him needing to eat people like tokyo ghoul but it goes away the more you read. Aside from that its a fun read and I’m excited to see the league’s reaction to him
Spoiler enthüllen 8ts a good story and the pic is lancelot from fate before he bacame the berserker so yeah........................................................................
story is good and all. I really didn't had any problem with cannabilism in the beginning as the guy was doing whatever he could do survive and only went after criminals but from chapter 26 or 27 onwards he became animal, so can't say I liked that. Though from the way the story was going I knew this would happen but was hoping he would continue to kill criminals only.
This really a good one. This may not be careful one of the best ones but this got great potential. It's just there's too much gore so if you're a bit light-hearted and not into that then please don't read this. The MC is is kinda dark. He's between the line of a villain and an antihero. Just a bit of a suggestion to the author, you should put some of the thoughts behind the MC's action. It will be great if you show the psychology of the MC. As of now, he's still going in the flow of the original story. This fanfic's still needs a bit more of character building if not, he may just end up as a psychotic power hungry cannibal who can't stop eating. This is a great fanfic. Thanks for the work.👍👏
Spoiler enthüllen Its matches one Russian novel i have read and the name of novel is same , what the mc is going thru is same and that he gains abilities from eating some special people is the same.
stories pretty good need to work on grammar a little little Gory for my taste but still pretty good anyone who's into the really dark zombie brain eating bone marrow sucking type monster will enjoy this hope the author keeps it up and good luck
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Spoiler enthüllen If you like cannibals then this is your story. Not badly written story kinda just gives mc what he wants bit not totally unbelievable. Eating people is just not my thing.
I really like the concept behind this, I hope that it doesn't go the route of giving the mc so many abilities they dont even know what to do with them but it's doing good so far. plus 20 chapters in only a few days I cant ask for more. just a few times where there are some inconsistencies like 1 paragraph later or even in the same paragraph which is slightly confusing, so maybe just look over it once if you dont already.
pls fix the voting option!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there isn't any for a great story like this but for other bullshits like with harem and shit like novels there is one
Looking forward to this.....................................................................................................................
very good keep up the work...................................................................................... . .. . . .
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.......love it you should bring it back........