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The best oc-si-mc bleach fic I've read so far. Sadly it has been a long time when it was last updated. While there were some logical errors like how he integrated with Ichigo and his friends so fast while barely interacting with them and Mc sometimes blurting things out which would ring quite a few alarm bells with characters like Kisuke or Yoruichi it still got better with every chapter. Especially MCs powers are unique and in the Bleach world not too OP.
This story is an interesting one, if this was updated maybe daily or once a week, then this story would be one of the best bleach fics out there, a unique and beautiful story that doesn't give ichigo bulls**t power up and focuses more on the growth of the new mc and not just a copypaste of the anime with an oc added to it, I hope to see this story's return.
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Shame, this story had a lot of potential, I even felt excited on what the MC plans to do but this story has such a terrible update schedule, I'll change my review when this story will be brought back from the dead, that is all, thank you.
Spoiler enthรผllenI stopped counting capitalization mistakes (and reading this mess) after I hit a hundred. The plot may be interesting, but the writing quality is garbage.
very good story. do not let author fall by the wayside,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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This chapter (and the next one) will pretty much change change where the story is heading towards so hope you all are on board with This chapter (and the next one) will pretty much change change where the story is heading towards so hope you all are on board with
the book is great,, and definitely one of the best fanfictions in webnovel! I love this book, and hope more people read it. however,, the updating stability is pretty low but I kept it at 5 because the book was way too good to get any ratings less than 5 stars
literally one of the best novels on bleach.... loved it.... hope the author comes back.... kind of sad to see a good novel dropped... plz come back author we need this novel.... I want to see till the end
when is next chapter jdjdjjdjd*jjjdjdjjjdndjjdididjjdjnfndnd kn bdjdjdjdjddddjdmcjdjdndjfjdjdhej bin j c2 jeep just ce dcr no e no dc e no d
Good bleach system fan fiction I guess? I mean it's good but no chapters. More More More More More More More More More More More More exp exp
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THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFIC I'VE EVER READ!!! GONNA NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! PLIZZZZ UPDATE CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! .........................................................
Man i'm giving this straight 5 Just because i wanna see more. Please continue this author don't give up on it. I really love the way the your oc fits in to the story. You changed a few things but everything fell into place seamlessly in my opinion. So pleaaaaasseee author i need more.
Pretty much the best Bleach fiction out there. Mc is really powerful, but not stupidly so, he pushes ahead the curve but is not in a way that every other character becomes irrelevant. There also isn't the usual massive angst against original characters. And overall actual story and character development is nice. Romance part is also quite well done as there's actual development there, not just mc picking girls like weeds. My only issue was talking system, but even that was kinda rectified later in the story. Overall, really well done :)
I love the story, I'm completely hooked. Only thing is I was expecting more lemons. writing wise this is genius, however examining the synopsis previous to reading made me think it would include a bit more lewd content. good fanfic though, highly above average.
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The best oc-si-mc bleach fic I've read so far. Sadly it has been a long time when it was last updated. While there were some logical errors like how he integrated with Ichigo and his friends so fast while barely interacting with them and Mc sometimes blurting things out which would ring quite a few alarm bells with characters like Kisuke or Yoruichi it still got better with every chapter. Especially MCs powers are unique and in the Bleach world not too OP.
This story is an interesting one, if this was updated maybe daily or once a week, then this story would be one of the best bleach fics out there, a unique and beautiful story that doesn't give ichigo bulls**t power up and focuses more on the growth of the new mc and not just a copypaste of the anime with an oc added to it, I hope to see this story's return.
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Shame, this story had a lot of potential, I even felt excited on what the MC plans to do but this story has such a terrible update schedule, I'll change my review when this story will be brought back from the dead, that is all, thank you.
Spoiler enthรผllenI stopped counting capitalization mistakes (and reading this mess) after I hit a hundred. The plot may be interesting, but the writing quality is garbage.
very good story. do not let author fall by the wayside,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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This chapter (and the next one) will pretty much change change where the story is heading towards so hope you all are on board with This chapter (and the next one) will pretty much change change where the story is heading towards so hope you all are on board with
the book is great,, and definitely one of the best fanfictions in webnovel! I love this book, and hope more people read it. however,, the updating stability is pretty low but I kept it at 5 because the book was way too good to get any ratings less than 5 stars
literally one of the best novels on bleach.... loved it.... hope the author comes back.... kind of sad to see a good novel dropped... plz come back author we need this novel.... I want to see till the end
when is next chapter jdjdjjdjd*jjjdjdjjjdndjjdididjjdjnfndnd kn bdjdjdjdjddddjdmcjdjdndjfjdjdhej bin j c2 jeep just ce dcr no e no dc e no d
Good bleach system fan fiction I guess? I mean it's good but no chapters. More More More More More More More More More More More More exp exp
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THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FANFIC I'VE EVER READ!!! GONNA NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! PLIZZZZ UPDATE CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! .........................................................
Man i'm giving this straight 5 Just because i wanna see more. Please continue this author don't give up on it. I really love the way the your oc fits in to the story. You changed a few things but everything fell into place seamlessly in my opinion. So pleaaaaasseee author i need more.
Pretty much the best Bleach fiction out there. Mc is really powerful, but not stupidly so, he pushes ahead the curve but is not in a way that every other character becomes irrelevant. There also isn't the usual massive angst against original characters. And overall actual story and character development is nice. Romance part is also quite well done as there's actual development there, not just mc picking girls like weeds. My only issue was talking system, but even that was kinda rectified later in the story. Overall, really well done :)
I love the story, I'm completely hooked. Only thing is I was expecting more lemons. writing wise this is genius, however examining the synopsis previous to reading made me think it would include a bit more lewd content. good fanfic though, highly above average.