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Aight so, Writing quality is not too bad but there are some mistakes, the one that irked me the most was author writing "Eli jang" the most, just write Eli dude :I There were many plotholes, the story was forced, some things he said were done differently, for example his wish to customize his body was skipped, also the mafia captain said that he'd have MC fight the strongest dude there but he made everyone fight him, not to mention that he won despite being 11 and only having trained for 1 month. The romance is also forced, dude's getting jealous over a girl who's not his girlfriend. world background is kinda also messed up as by MC taking away Eli should've caused some kinda butterfly effect but it didn't. I wouldn't recommend reading this unless you wanna waste your time.
I like the idea but you need to include the mc more in the story rather than making him a sidecharacter and there is not enough information about Mc's appearance and one of the main essence of lookism is the fights which I can't find in here I hope you take this comment into consideration to improve this story
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good story please don't drop it This story have too much characters of similar power levels to gun or more , But is .. ..... .. ........................ .......................................
For me it's a bit boring, not very exciting. The character in the beginning is too OP. It's cool how he has instant mastery but the character doesn't have that many conflicts that make the story interesting. There isn't that much character development. I also think the story would be better if there were more interactions with other characters of lookism.
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I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I ENJOYED!
You Should Add Katekyo Hitman Reborn And Have His Family Under The Vongola Family He Will Have More Challenges That Way. Dying Will Flame With All Flames Mastery.Or Add Kenchi Strongest Disciple Or Baki And Kendra Ashura These Animes Would Be A Good Fit For Your Story.
A very good fanfic. The story is quite good. All I wanted to say is that please don't drop it. Please I really love this and add more of the lookism and less weak hero if you can as I or most of the people like Lookism more than weak hero. ThankYou.
I think mc is really strong and his instant mastery doesn't make him instantly op but with some training he will practically be able to beat anyone in either weak hero or lookism
It's the best looking fanfic so far from the far few of it. Keep it up I'll give you my stonesπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Lookism is one of my favorite manga/webtoon to read. I have been around since the beginning of it. This fanfic gets a instant 5 from me just for that.
I look Lookism! 5 STAR for author [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This is why, Jin joined the mafia..............................................................................................................
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I will vote 5 stars because its a lookism fanfick. there are literally no fanfick for lookism. It really pisses me off. Also **** the 140 rule
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Hey Author-san Does the MC will have Love Interest?Or Wife? Girlfriend? Harem or No Harem?? . .. ... .... .... ..... ...... ....... ........ ......... .......... ........... ............
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This is really good, the author still need to learn writing more tho, but overall itβs pretty good. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This fanfic is amazing, although itβs a bit annoying about the update, itβs got a potential in it. π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
Alright I see tou have more chapter's on this one cause I'm coming from the novel section. Other wise a book that deserves five stars.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Aight so, Writing quality is not too bad but there are some mistakes, the one that irked me the most was author writing "Eli jang" the most, just write Eli dude :I There were many plotholes, the story was forced, some things he said were done differently, for example his wish to customize his body was skipped, also the mafia captain said that he'd have MC fight the strongest dude there but he made everyone fight him, not to mention that he won despite being 11 and only having trained for 1 month. The romance is also forced, dude's getting jealous over a girl who's not his girlfriend. world background is kinda also messed up as by MC taking away Eli should've caused some kinda butterfly effect but it didn't. I wouldn't recommend reading this unless you wanna waste your time.
I like the idea but you need to include the mc more in the story rather than making him a sidecharacter and there is not enough information about Mc's appearance and one of the main essence of lookism is the fights which I can't find in here I hope you take this comment into consideration to improve this story
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Spoiler enthΓΌllen good story please don't drop it This story have too much characters of similar power levels to gun or more , But is .. ..... .. ........................ .......................................
For me it's a bit boring, not very exciting. The character in the beginning is too OP. It's cool how he has instant mastery but the character doesn't have that many conflicts that make the story interesting. There isn't that much character development. I also think the story would be better if there were more interactions with other characters of lookism.
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I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I enjoyed it! I ENJOYED!
You Should Add Katekyo Hitman Reborn And Have His Family Under The Vongola Family He Will Have More Challenges That Way. Dying Will Flame With All Flames Mastery.Or Add Kenchi Strongest Disciple Or Baki And Kendra Ashura These Animes Would Be A Good Fit For Your Story.
A very good fanfic. The story is quite good. All I wanted to say is that please don't drop it. Please I really love this and add more of the lookism and less weak hero if you can as I or most of the people like Lookism more than weak hero. ThankYou.
I think mc is really strong and his instant mastery doesn't make him instantly op but with some training he will practically be able to beat anyone in either weak hero or lookism
It's the best looking fanfic so far from the far few of it. Keep it up I'll give you my stonesπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Lookism is one of my favorite manga/webtoon to read. I have been around since the beginning of it. This fanfic gets a instant 5 from me just for that.
I look Lookism! 5 STAR for author [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This is why, Jin joined the mafia..............................................................................................................
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I will vote 5 stars because its a lookism fanfick. there are literally no fanfick for lookism. It really pisses me off. Also **** the 140 rule
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Hey Author-san Does the MC will have Love Interest?Or Wife? Girlfriend? Harem or No Harem?? . .. ... .... .... ..... ...... ....... ........ ......... .......... ........... ............
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This is really good, the author still need to learn writing more tho, but overall itβs pretty good. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This fanfic is amazing, although itβs a bit annoying about the update, itβs got a potential in it. π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯
Alright I see tou have more chapter's on this one cause I'm coming from the novel section. Other wise a book that deserves five stars.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
good job....................................................................................................................................
demanding a new update!! !! !! !! ufjehueusjsjjfnrjisixucjdjksixciuf