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Chakra Control

[Author's Note: i want to clear something i never explained up, a civilian is about fifteen in all stats, a genin is about twenty to thirty-five, a chunin is around fifty, and a jonin is between eighty and a hundred... a Kage level shinobi is around two-hundred in all stats]

Now that he's six years old, his protective parents allow him to explore the village without a guardian.

Running through the village with his pocket money in hand, the first place he visits is easily the most iconic place in the Hidden Leaf, Ichiraku Ramen.

Reaching the stall, he sits on a stool next to a boy wearing orange clothes and spiky blonde hair, he looks across at the old man cooking, "Excuse me what can i buy from this?", he says while holding out pocket money.

He hears Naruto's stomach grumble and red eyes, "can i buy me and this boy a bowl of ramen?"

The old man takes the money with a smile and gives him and Naruto massive bowls filled with ramen.

Naruto digs in, "Fank woo", he slurs with his mouth full.

After nodding at the boy next to him, he quickly eats the meal before running off to where he knows is a large pond.

After a few minutes of running, he finally reaches his destination, sitting next to a tree, he sits down and puts a leaf on his forehead.

Focusing his chakra on the leaf and nowhere else is surprisingly easy for him.

After an hour of sticking the leaf to his head, he tries again with five of them, this was a bit harder, focusing on each of the five spots at the same time was difficult,

After two hours, he finally got the hang of it, he didn't have some superior learning but everyone has a specific thing that they're amazing at, his is controlling his chakra.

Heading home, he smiles at his first day without having someone watch over him, he met Naruto and treated him to lunch before training his chakra control.

'It's been a good day, on the way home he sees a child version of Ino sitting on a bench.

Walking over to her, she hears her sniffling, "Hey, what's wrong?"

Jumping in fright at the sudden voice, she looks up at him, "Mother said i shouldn't talk to strangers"

'A sensible girl', he holds out his hand, "Hirashi Goto, nice to meet you"

She hesitates but eventually shakes his hand, "Ino Yamanaka"

He gives her a gentle smile, "See, we aren't strangers anymore, want me to walk you home"

She smiles before nodding, "Yes, please"

As they walk through the street, the sun starts to set over the horizon.

"So you're a Yamanaka, that's pretty cool, your family has that famous body possession jutsu"

Ino blushes at the compliments, "I can't do them yet but my dad will start teaching me soon"

As they talk about their parents among other things, they reach the Yamanaka residence.

"Ino, before you go in, I want you to remember that you shouldn't cry over silly things, a girl's tears are worth more than any material in the world, so you should only cry for things that truly matter, okay?"

Rather than answering, she hugs him tightly before running into her house.

[Achievement: Chivalry Isn't Dead = +3 to Charisma]

As he arrives home, he lets his parents know the reason why he's late and earns a pat on the back from his father, "Good, you handled it like a true gentleman"

After grabbing a snack to eat, he goes into his room and lays on his bed.

'I've not had a mission for a while, hey system, got any missions available?'

[Mission: Show your parents that you have and can control chakra - Reward: 50xp]

[Mission: Find out your nature affinity - Reward: 100xp & 25 Chakra]

[Mission: Learn the Transformation Jutsu - Reward: 250xp & Silver Mystery Box]

'Cool, Mystery Box, i wonder what you can obtain from those'

After accepting all of them, he exited his room and joined his parents in the dining room.

To say they reacted well would be an understatement, mother promised to make a feast tomorrow in celebration and father upped my allowance.

[Mission Complete: Show your parents that you have and can control chakra - Reward: 50xp]

Returning to his room, he sits on his bed once again and overlooks his third quest.

'It just says i need to learn the transformation jutsu, i know the hand signs for it, Dog, Boar, and finish with Ram'

Doing the hand signs, he pictures his mother in his head, and after a poof of smoke, his mother now stands where he was just a moment ago.

Looking in the mirror, he sees that he was successful in his transformation but it isn't perfect.

[Mission Complete: Learn The Transformation Jutsu - Reward: 250xp & Silver Mystery Box]

[Level Up! you have five stat points available and a mystery box waiting for you]

______________________________

Name: Hirashi Goto

Age: 6 Years old

Level: 3 [50/400xp]

Store Points: 0

Health: 100

Stamina: 150

Chakra: 200

Stat Points Available: 5

[Base Stats]

Strength: 10 [Your overall strength, how hard you hit, and how much you can carry]

Dexterity: 10 [Your speed, agility, hand-eye coordination, and stamina]

Intelligence: 11 [Your memory capacity, how fast you learn, and overall intelligence]

Perception: 6 [Your six senses, smell, eyesight, hearing, taste, touch, and instinct]

Charisma: 8 [Your ability to lie, persuade, or intimidate someone]

Vitality: 5 [Your overall health, the more points in this stat, the faster you heal from wounds]

Luck: 10 [Luck affects all things, sometimes in small ways and sometimes in big ways]

Skills: [Chakra Control: Beginner = 0/50]

Inventory: Empty

Store: Closed until wielder reacher ten years old.

______________________________

'System, put all my points into Vitality'

Again, he feels a small surge of power throughout his body for a few moments before it disappears.

'System, open my Silver Mystery Box'

A small silver box drops slowly out of the holographic screen and opens with a bright light, the box starts to disintegrate and reveals in its place...


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