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so far good ... but I don't like the novel .... if you guys after for a novel that is much like to fast and rush and a idiot, naive type MC then it's for you ... but not for me 😂 I dropped it after 9 chapter
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Honestly I don't know why so many people have perfect 5 star reviews for this book, because in my eyes this book is far from perfect. Writing Quality I gave writing quality 2 stars for the amount of grammar mistakes and because the way the story is wrote has no flow. Usually in good stories you can find yourself immersed and actually imagining yourself in the situation, but in this book it just feels like I am reading the words without any purpose and without imagining anything. The way the story is written just feels choppy, and just lazily put together by someone that doesn't have a lot of time on his hands. I recommend getting a proof reader to revise your work. Story development Story development is actually pretty good in this story, that's why I gave it a 4 star. Some things you need to fix though is how fast paced the whole thing is and you have to kind of buildup the story more before you get to the main plot. Character Design This is my least favorite aspect of this book other than the writing quality because of how illogical some people think in this book. For example, on chapter 1 the Dean get's a admission letter from another school that he has never heard of, and doesn't even know the location of. And the funniest thing yet is that the Dean actually thinks that the MC going to an unknown school in the middle of nowhere is a good idea. It's almost like the dean is setting the MC up for failure, or just hates him. Think about it, if you were the dean of a school and some random person just shows up in front of you and hands you a admission letter for one of your students, from a school that you don't even know of, would you let your student go there? The answer is no, any logical person would not let their brightest student go to a mysterious unknown academy/school. The character design actually makes me cringe sometimes because of how bad it is, because it makes everyone in the book seem like an illogical idiot. World Background Like I said in story development, there needs to be more buildup instead of just cutting to the chase like how this book does. You need to buildup the story while giving details on the world around the MC to actually let your reader be immersed in what he/she is reading. But in this story it seems like I am reading words, but not connecting the words to form an image inside my head. Conclusion Now, despite all I have said in this review on how not good this novel is, I am definitely not bashing the author or deliberately trying to bring down the author for his work. I actually respect the author for taking a chance and going down the journey of writing stories, and that is the reason I am giving you criticism so you can someday maybe become a great author and appeal to many other readers. I hope you, the author, the best in the future.
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Okay, let me start off by saying that this was a very pleasant read! :D The writing is absolutely delightful, the writing is descriptive enough for me to be immersed in the story and setting. The world building and the concept, I'd say it's pretty good! It's pretty easy to digest and very well prepared. Added to my library, and would recommend all of you to do so as well :)
give a try , as picky as i am, i will say yea i like it😎............... ....................................................................
Dang! I love this book so much,this is so interesting to read..Highly recommended..I love how you write the flow of the story..every chapter is so exciting! wish you all the success author-sama.! Good job!
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5/5 because this book deserves it. Great job author 👏👏👏 Reading from the initial chapters, one would already get hooked and would make you follow Luis' adventures and what happens next. Great story plot and writing style. Cheers to you author-nim, keep it up 😇
So far the story has been interesting. Inspired by Harry Potter, but then again that's not a bad inspiration to take from. Waiting to see what conflicts our young MC will have in his future.
First two chapters of the story that I have read so far, it's really interesting! I like the MC Luis for talking back to that bitch girl. He's not the type of MC that would let anyone humiliate him and he fights back in words! One of the kind story that I like! I really recommend this to everyone to read it! Love it! ^_^
Hawt ako mweheheh . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Oo na Hawt nako
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first chapter is topnotch and the story back ground of the main character is epic.. the novel is well thought and has a lot of potential.. a very recommended novel to read..
plot is awesome, the world background is well thought. MC looks great.. all in all the novel has a good potential.. i haven't read the rest of the chapters but it looks good.. first chap is epic
story is great and the plod is awesome.. first chap is epic.. it is a very nice start.. it is clear that the author has a nice view of the story which also means that the plot is not all over the place.. great job!
Nice story friend. I liked Luis. Elena, Elanie and Elanor too. And opening ceramony by a demi-god war is a strong entrance too. I added it to my library, waiting for next chapters too.
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first chap is marvelous and exciting.. at only 6 chaps but the story is well made.. I love the style and the way that the author describes things.. great job
This book has only 6 chapters, yet so marvelous. I wonder in which direction the story will go ? I just can't wait to read more of this story.
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the story line is good, first chap is epic.. the way that the author write the fight scenes are so realistic and good.. i haven't read the preceding chapters but I will now, great job author, more powers to you. I hope u update soon
Hi! I am the author! This review is for some guides and information you might need to know about the story. 1. Please bear with the story. Some of the chaps need to be edited so don't be mad when you read some typo or grammatical errors. 2. This story revolves around Magic and Mystery. Don't expect that every piece of information will be revealed immediately. 3.For now, my story will be posted every two days. Please read the author's notes that you might read so that you will be informed on when will I decide to update daily. 4. Comments and reviews will be highly appreciated. I will include some special dedications after 30 chaps or so. 5. Enjoy the novel! I highly appreciate criticisms but not outright rudeness! Lovelots from the author!
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
so far good ... but I don't like the novel .... if you guys after for a novel that is much like to fast and rush and a idiot, naive type MC then it's for you ... but not for me 😂 I dropped it after 9 chapter
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Honestly I don't know why so many people have perfect 5 star reviews for this book, because in my eyes this book is far from perfect. Writing Quality I gave writing quality 2 stars for the amount of grammar mistakes and because the way the story is wrote has no flow. Usually in good stories you can find yourself immersed and actually imagining yourself in the situation, but in this book it just feels like I am reading the words without any purpose and without imagining anything. The way the story is written just feels choppy, and just lazily put together by someone that doesn't have a lot of time on his hands. I recommend getting a proof reader to revise your work. Story development Story development is actually pretty good in this story, that's why I gave it a 4 star. Some things you need to fix though is how fast paced the whole thing is and you have to kind of buildup the story more before you get to the main plot. Character Design This is my least favorite aspect of this book other than the writing quality because of how illogical some people think in this book. For example, on chapter 1 the Dean get's a admission letter from another school that he has never heard of, and doesn't even know the location of. And the funniest thing yet is that the Dean actually thinks that the MC going to an unknown school in the middle of nowhere is a good idea. It's almost like the dean is setting the MC up for failure, or just hates him. Think about it, if you were the dean of a school and some random person just shows up in front of you and hands you a admission letter for one of your students, from a school that you don't even know of, would you let your student go there? The answer is no, any logical person would not let their brightest student go to a mysterious unknown academy/school. The character design actually makes me cringe sometimes because of how bad it is, because it makes everyone in the book seem like an illogical idiot. World Background Like I said in story development, there needs to be more buildup instead of just cutting to the chase like how this book does. You need to buildup the story while giving details on the world around the MC to actually let your reader be immersed in what he/she is reading. But in this story it seems like I am reading words, but not connecting the words to form an image inside my head. Conclusion Now, despite all I have said in this review on how not good this novel is, I am definitely not bashing the author or deliberately trying to bring down the author for his work. I actually respect the author for taking a chance and going down the journey of writing stories, and that is the reason I am giving you criticism so you can someday maybe become a great author and appeal to many other readers. I hope you, the author, the best in the future.
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Okay, let me start off by saying that this was a very pleasant read! :D The writing is absolutely delightful, the writing is descriptive enough for me to be immersed in the story and setting. The world building and the concept, I'd say it's pretty good! It's pretty easy to digest and very well prepared. Added to my library, and would recommend all of you to do so as well :)
give a try , as picky as i am, i will say yea i like it😎............... ....................................................................
Dang! I love this book so much,this is so interesting to read..Highly recommended..I love how you write the flow of the story..every chapter is so exciting! wish you all the success author-sama.! Good job!
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5/5 because this book deserves it. Great job author 👏👏👏 Reading from the initial chapters, one would already get hooked and would make you follow Luis' adventures and what happens next. Great story plot and writing style. Cheers to you author-nim, keep it up 😇
So far the story has been interesting. Inspired by Harry Potter, but then again that's not a bad inspiration to take from. Waiting to see what conflicts our young MC will have in his future.
First two chapters of the story that I have read so far, it's really interesting! I like the MC Luis for talking back to that bitch girl. He's not the type of MC that would let anyone humiliate him and he fights back in words! One of the kind story that I like! I really recommend this to everyone to read it! Love it! ^_^
Hawt ako mweheheh . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Oo na Hawt nako
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first chapter is topnotch and the story back ground of the main character is epic.. the novel is well thought and has a lot of potential.. a very recommended novel to read..
plot is awesome, the world background is well thought. MC looks great.. all in all the novel has a good potential.. i haven't read the rest of the chapters but it looks good.. first chap is epic
story is great and the plod is awesome.. first chap is epic.. it is a very nice start.. it is clear that the author has a nice view of the story which also means that the plot is not all over the place.. great job!
Nice story friend. I liked Luis. Elena, Elanie and Elanor too. And opening ceramony by a demi-god war is a strong entrance too. I added it to my library, waiting for next chapters too.
ssfx3yuchens here with a honest review! I didn't realize I forgot to post a review after reading. So far the premises have been interesting and I like the way the story is told. I'll need more chapters to see where the story goes! I like it!!😉😉😉 one of the male lead stories that I read on and on without realising it's male lead at all! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
first chap is marvelous and exciting.. at only 6 chaps but the story is well made.. I love the style and the way that the author describes things.. great job
This book has only 6 chapters, yet so marvelous. I wonder in which direction the story will go ? I just can't wait to read more of this story.
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Spoiler enthüllen the story line is good, first chap is epic.. the way that the author write the fight scenes are so realistic and good.. i haven't read the preceding chapters but I will now, great job author, more powers to you. I hope u update soon
Hi! I am the author! This review is for some guides and information you might need to know about the story. 1. Please bear with the story. Some of the chaps need to be edited so don't be mad when you read some typo or grammatical errors. 2. This story revolves around Magic and Mystery. Don't expect that every piece of information will be revealed immediately. 3.For now, my story will be posted every two days. Please read the author's notes that you might read so that you will be informed on when will I decide to update daily. 4. Comments and reviews will be highly appreciated. I will include some special dedications after 30 chaps or so. 5. Enjoy the novel! I highly appreciate criticisms but not outright rudeness! Lovelots from the author!