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overall it's a really good story my biggest issue is that the Prophecy in the Harry Potter world kind of went nowhere which is really disappointing
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Книга интересная, если добавишь больше описания других миров и время нахождения в них - будет хорошо. Хочется продолжения. Но деньги из России не получится отправить, так что извини. Желаю, чтобы твоя мама вылечилась!
the story is good but is the story dropped if not when will you update the new chapter
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Is this still alive? For I have read this at its infancy and has love every little bit of it...yet it has been so long since it's last update so I must again say Is this Dead?
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Me gusta bastante tu shistoria Sigue así y no la dejes caer Espero ver que otros mundos irá para adquirir poder, no conozco el nivel de peligro del mundo así que espero grandes cosas !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hasta ahora de lo que llevo de lectura me esta gustando, espero ver que no chetes al prota sin ninguna lógica. Gracias!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! &$$&
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Here is a guy who can make himself have the capabality of a GOD with all the oppurtunities his Dimension hopping can bring.. And now his playing humanity and limiting himself, knowingly he can fix all pesky problems if his really trying his best and to lessen the casualty of his people. Cause right now all i see is a guy playing Kingdom building on a game and not a guy whos living in it. If you want a story and can handle and ignore a UNIVERSE SIZE plothole the author forced to the story due to his ability, then read it. Other than those plothole everything is great.
Good read, though, it is a little rough around the edges. Really need an editor as well, some grammatical mistakes can really dampen the reading experience.
Still one of my most favorite novels on this site. Great characters and story and love the progression. It keeps me looking forward to every new update. Seriously recommend for everyone.
Love the story and the characters are interesting keep up the excellent and I will keep reading your story Also would like to see more about any other worlds he might go to later just a note about possible ones that you are thinking about would be fine
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Five star review and congratulation for your first 100 chapter.. I don't hope for much apart from steady update and normal length of chapter..
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overall it's a really good story my biggest issue is that the Prophecy in the Harry Potter world kind of went nowhere which is really disappointing
Spoiler enthüllen Книга интересная, если добавишь больше описания других миров и время нахождения в них - будет хорошо. Хочется продолжения. Но деньги из России не получится отправить, так что извини. Желаю, чтобы твоя мама вылечилась!
the story is good but is the story dropped if not when will you update the new chapter
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Spoiler enthüllen Is this still alive? For I have read this at its infancy and has love every little bit of it...yet it has been so long since it's last update so I must again say Is this Dead?
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Me gusta bastante tu shistoria Sigue así y no la dejes caer Espero ver que otros mundos irá para adquirir poder, no conozco el nivel de peligro del mundo así que espero grandes cosas !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hasta ahora de lo que llevo de lectura me esta gustando, espero ver que no chetes al prota sin ninguna lógica. Gracias!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! &$$&
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Here is a guy who can make himself have the capabality of a GOD with all the oppurtunities his Dimension hopping can bring.. And now his playing humanity and limiting himself, knowingly he can fix all pesky problems if his really trying his best and to lessen the casualty of his people. Cause right now all i see is a guy playing Kingdom building on a game and not a guy whos living in it. If you want a story and can handle and ignore a UNIVERSE SIZE plothole the author forced to the story due to his ability, then read it. Other than those plothole everything is great.
Good read, though, it is a little rough around the edges. Really need an editor as well, some grammatical mistakes can really dampen the reading experience.
Still one of my most favorite novels on this site. Great characters and story and love the progression. It keeps me looking forward to every new update. Seriously recommend for everyone.
Love the story and the characters are interesting keep up the excellent and I will keep reading your story Also would like to see more about any other worlds he might go to later just a note about possible ones that you are thinking about would be fine
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Spoiler enthüllen Five star review and congratulation for your first 100 chapter.. I don't hope for much apart from steady update and normal length of chapter..
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Still Missed this, its been a long................................................................................................................................................................................