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Been following the author since his last work, " Domeric Bolton". Having high hopes about this new book, hope that this is up to par to the last book.
i liked your work auther the only thing, i'm dissatisfied is that u have left the story in a cliffhanger, I hope u start updating as soon as possible.
Honestly you'll only like this story if you wanna read it for ***. The MC is a horny bastard with no reedeming qualities and his powers just make him worse.
author will you still continue your GOT fanfic???????????.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . .
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The story's ok for now. Just please do not use the CYOA/skills to manipulate love interests. It's just boring for story development and leaves a bad taste in people's mouths.
There are some mistakes here and there but not enough that it would distract you from the story. The mc is alright as well, he's pretty smart.
this is nice ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Been following the author since his last work, " Domeric Bolton". Having high hopes about this new book, hope that this is up to par to the last book.
i liked your work auther the only thing, i'm dissatisfied is that u have left the story in a cliffhanger, I hope u start updating as soon as possible.
Honestly you'll only like this story if you wanna read it for ***. The MC is a horny bastard with no reedeming qualities and his powers just make him worse.
author will you still continue your GOT fanfic???????????.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . .
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
The story's ok for now. Just please do not use the CYOA/skills to manipulate love interests. It's just boring for story development and leaves a bad taste in people's mouths.
There are some mistakes here and there but not enough that it would distract you from the story. The mc is alright as well, he's pretty smart.
is in hiatus or abandonned ?