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I will wait till this Novel accumulate more chapters till 40-50. Nothing against you but I hate waiting for chapter. But to encourage you to keep writing I am giving it 5. Keep writing. If it reaches 200 chapters it will be hit.
Wooo****** awesome book. This book captured my attention, it is actually fast pace. This book takes you straight to the point, every detail is well explained. We need more books like this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Sinopsis ESTE LIBRO ESTÁ EN UNA PAUSA hasta mayo de 2023 (10 capítulos), el 29 de septiembre (15) capítulos y el 30 de diciembre u octubre de 2023 (más de 30 capítulos). ¡Hasta entonces! Esta es su sipnosis actual hace 2 años prometio y critico otras novelas de sistema diciendo que no queria caer igual. Dentro de 1 año pondra otra etiqueta igual y seguira diciendo lo mismo. No recomiento leer a un autor que critica y dice que va a hacer una novela mejor cuando ni siquiera cumple con su palabra. Todo son excusas y criticas a otra persona, deberia mirarse a si mismo. No entiendo como la gente le valora con 5 estrellas para darle animos, cuando no pasa ni de 44 capitulos
This novel is good but it’s just too much writing in it and the characters writing is really bad but not to the point that I can’t read I’m more into little writing so I didn’t read that much of it There to much information in one page
Hi! This is an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
Writing quality is pretty good. Author has some grammatical errors but it's easy to overlook them. Story development is very detailed. Author thoroughly explains the settings, the mc's thought process/actions. Cool thing author does is showing different POVs of the same scenarios which gives you a broader view of what's happening. Only thing author mainly needs to work on is the updating stability aspect which I'm sure will be gone soon after they get into a steady writing environment. Overall, story is amazing and keeps making you wanting more. Yikes, I wrote a lot 😬😄
the book is really dark with a lot of plot twist. the writing improves after 15. this author has a unique persepective of what readers who crave action want.
Finally the Author who understand and know my taste and that is why you deceive the 5 stars .............................................. .................................. ................
I have not read this as of typing this but the synopsis literally put what I can only describe as the creepiest smile on my face. I want to read this with all my heart and soul now. I'm going in! LEEEROOOOOOOOY JENJIIIIIINS!
havent read it yet but synopsis literally has me dying to read it it has all the hidden and horrifying desires I have 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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the charater development is awesome. the writing gets better after chapter 9. the MC isnt upur tpically stupid mc and he doesnt want to save the world. which is so refreshing!
This story is about a sociopath who suddenly is in a situation where he gets powers and a fresh start to continue being an evil one. Here you won't find the typical goody two shoes, but something akin an honorable bad guy: he'll treat you well if you treat him well, and will destroy you completely if you cross him (regardless if you've treated him well before). So far the story goes well. There're issues with grammar and spelling that sometimes cause a bit of confusion, but nothing too serious. If you wish to try your luck with an evil MC, this story looks promising. 😈
Amazing!!! Scenery and characters brought to life !!!! The humor keeps btinging me back😂. im rooting for everything Alex is Doing!!!!
really good place in the book so far mc is ruthless and dark it's an amazing change compared to save the world type mcs and it's got a good balance of humor mixed in
This book is straight up oerfect love it lots man i can honestly see myself acting like the mc in my daily life this book just sucks u in like u were the mc love it
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This book is similar to a real anime series, it locks you in and you never want to stop reading it. I am looking forward for the author to release a second book. It was mind blowing. It is worth the time reading.
fast is goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Hey, the author here! first time writing a book. Originally I wrote this because it upset me that some system novel novels that have an awesome name but are a little disappointing. I hope that I don't want to fall in the same category. I am not so strong with grammar but I hope to improve as I write.
I will wait till this Novel accumulate more chapters till 40-50. Nothing against you but I hate waiting for chapter. But to encourage you to keep writing I am giving it 5. Keep writing. If it reaches 200 chapters it will be hit.
Wooo****** awesome book. This book captured my attention, it is actually fast pace. This book takes you straight to the point, every detail is well explained. We need more books like this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Sinopsis ESTE LIBRO ESTÁ EN UNA PAUSA hasta mayo de 2023 (10 capítulos), el 29 de septiembre (15) capítulos y el 30 de diciembre u octubre de 2023 (más de 30 capítulos). ¡Hasta entonces! Esta es su sipnosis actual hace 2 años prometio y critico otras novelas de sistema diciendo que no queria caer igual. Dentro de 1 año pondra otra etiqueta igual y seguira diciendo lo mismo. No recomiento leer a un autor que critica y dice que va a hacer una novela mejor cuando ni siquiera cumple con su palabra. Todo son excusas y criticas a otra persona, deberia mirarse a si mismo. No entiendo como la gente le valora con 5 estrellas para darle animos, cuando no pasa ni de 44 capitulos
This novel is good but it’s just too much writing in it and the characters writing is really bad but not to the point that I can’t read I’m more into little writing so I didn’t read that much of it There to much information in one page
Hi! This is an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
Writing quality is pretty good. Author has some grammatical errors but it's easy to overlook them. Story development is very detailed. Author thoroughly explains the settings, the mc's thought process/actions. Cool thing author does is showing different POVs of the same scenarios which gives you a broader view of what's happening. Only thing author mainly needs to work on is the updating stability aspect which I'm sure will be gone soon after they get into a steady writing environment. Overall, story is amazing and keeps making you wanting more. Yikes, I wrote a lot 😬😄
the book is really dark with a lot of plot twist. the writing improves after 15. this author has a unique persepective of what readers who crave action want.
Finally the Author who understand and know my taste and that is why you deceive the 5 stars .............................................. .................................. ................
I have not read this as of typing this but the synopsis literally put what I can only describe as the creepiest smile on my face. I want to read this with all my heart and soul now. I'm going in! LEEEROOOOOOOOY JENJIIIIIINS!
havent read it yet but synopsis literally has me dying to read it it has all the hidden and horrifying desires I have 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL COOL
the charater development is awesome. the writing gets better after chapter 9. the MC isnt upur tpically stupid mc and he doesnt want to save the world. which is so refreshing!
This story is about a sociopath who suddenly is in a situation where he gets powers and a fresh start to continue being an evil one. Here you won't find the typical goody two shoes, but something akin an honorable bad guy: he'll treat you well if you treat him well, and will destroy you completely if you cross him (regardless if you've treated him well before). So far the story goes well. There're issues with grammar and spelling that sometimes cause a bit of confusion, but nothing too serious. If you wish to try your luck with an evil MC, this story looks promising. 😈
Amazing!!! Scenery and characters brought to life !!!! The humor keeps btinging me back😂. im rooting for everything Alex is Doing!!!!
really good place in the book so far mc is ruthless and dark it's an amazing change compared to save the world type mcs and it's got a good balance of humor mixed in
This book is straight up oerfect love it lots man i can honestly see myself acting like the mc in my daily life this book just sucks u in like u were the mc love it
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Gooooooooooood goooooood goooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood
This book is similar to a real anime series, it locks you in and you never want to stop reading it. I am looking forward for the author to release a second book. It was mind blowing. It is worth the time reading.
fast is goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Hey, the author here! first time writing a book. Originally I wrote this because it upset me that some system novel novels that have an awesome name but are a little disappointing. I hope that I don't want to fall in the same category. I am not so strong with grammar but I hope to improve as I write.