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I love the story, I need to know how it goes. Please dont give up, at least 1 or 2 chapters a week. I love the story, I need to know how it goes
Are you still continuing this story or did you drop it? I was just wondering because there sre no new chapters so?...................... .....
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I really like this LN. It is one of the better system LNs out there. I have read up to chapter 277 and find it quite enjoyable. The MC is currently traveling from world to world via the story-system. The best thing is that there are other people out there in the universe that also have systems. The MC is not the only one with a system. The story so far has hinted at SciFi where it had the invading forces of his world using a spaceship or flying ship of some sort. The hints point at the MC leaving this world later on and traveling the throughout the Universe. The MC at first starts off asking the system questions because he didn't grow up knowing anything about cultivation at all. The MC does make mistakes just like normal people would make mistakes in life too. He does learn from them. The MC is a blacksmith and a Monster tamer. The World has plant monsters too :-)
the books concept is good, especially the main idea, mc has a clear goal, good enough pacing, but the grammar is what threw me off completely and what made me decide to drop this
are you still writing for this book. I love the content so I guess I'm just wondering are you still writing for this book. I love the content so I guess I'm just wondering
I was good. Well, at first, it really is good. But I have read a lot of stories with similar plot, so this kind of plot is cliche for me. But yeah, the author has a good writing quality.
I am really liking your novel. I hope you continue it and do not drop it. I wish you happiness and success. Please keep updating regularly. I am writing more because of 140 character restriction. I hope it's enough.
l like it, I do but there isn't that it factor that makes me want to read everything at once but still it's a good story. ✔️
So far so good. Very consistent, still there are tome when you find yourself questioning some scenario, so it kinda conflicting to me. But the pace of the story is very steady atleast that is whst I felt in the free chapters that I have read. But the Author tries to forcefully creat a mystery then breaks his own rythme by revealing the said mystery in a very lowsy way. Unfortunately not everyone can grasp the style of writing or creating mysteries or leaving hints and revealing it in a bit suspenseful manner. The written style had a bit immaturity and felt the Author hasn't quite settled in his own style. Some story scenarios are a bit awkward and not so refined. Just an honest review, no hate. Ps- Complain all you want about my lack of punctuation & unrefined sentencing along with my barely presentable grammer. I don't care. I am here for xp. I wrote a comment unfortunately not a review.
And a good story, a little generic but fun, look, I'm not a professional critic and stuff and I'm not the best person to kick things off and that's why this thing about the app forces you to put 140 characters and a bag
I have loved the story so far and I’m only starting. I hope you continue your amazing story, and I would definitely recommend this to anyone else.
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It's taking too long for the chapters to be released 😣it's enjoying can't wait for the next chapter 🥺. The story is really great but the rate at which the chapters are released is slow . The story is awesome am looking forward to the next chapter 🥺
too lazy to write just read the book or see other review, hope you enjoy the read as i did..........................................................................................
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كيف هو ام سي هل هو MC آخر من النوع الغبي الذي يساعد دائمًا الأشخاص العشوائيين ويهين الأشخاص الأقوياء بسبب فتاة التقى بها للتو ، وهل سيكون هناك الكثير من الأساتذة الشباب الذين يسيئون إليهم في كل مرة يخرج فيها من منزله أو يخرج أن تأكل شيئًا آمل ألا يكون ساحرًا باردًا ، شخصًا واقعيًا يمكنه التحكم في عواطفه وحاجته الجنسية ، وليس فقط شخصًا لا يفكر إلا بقضيبه ويشعر بالسوء عندما يحتاج إلى قتل أو إيذاء الآخرين خاصة الفتيات مثلي. سأبدأ في قراءتها بوتيرة بطيئة وآمل أن يجيبني أحدهم
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Can't wait for the next chapters 😣it's is really interesting and am enjoying reading them 🤩 please update the rest of the chapters soon as possible 🥺
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Hello everyone, You can see the author tag beside my name. Yes, I am the author of this book. I am here to give some detailed review of the story. - The book will have some grammatical mistakes, so if you can bear those little ones, I can guarantee that you will enjoy the story. - No Harem Since it is a cultivation story, many readers think, it might be a harem; however, I don't plan to add Harem to it. - Starting will a slow; however, it will be smooth after initial world building and characters introduction. - MC will be ignorant about many things in the beginning but he will learn things with time - Romance Some readers asked me whether it has romance or not. Yes, there will be romance; however, it will be short. - The story will be very long. So, please stick with me till the end. Hmm...that's it. I hope it is helpful and if you have any doubts, you can ask here. Thanks for reading my book.
I love the story, I need to know how it goes. Please dont give up, at least 1 or 2 chapters a week. I love the story, I need to know how it goes
Are you still continuing this story or did you drop it? I was just wondering because there sre no new chapters so?...................... .....
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Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like this LN. It is one of the better system LNs out there. I have read up to chapter 277 and find it quite enjoyable. The MC is currently traveling from world to world via the story-system. The best thing is that there are other people out there in the universe that also have systems. The MC is not the only one with a system. The story so far has hinted at SciFi where it had the invading forces of his world using a spaceship or flying ship of some sort. The hints point at the MC leaving this world later on and traveling the throughout the Universe. The MC at first starts off asking the system questions because he didn't grow up knowing anything about cultivation at all. The MC does make mistakes just like normal people would make mistakes in life too. He does learn from them. The MC is a blacksmith and a Monster tamer. The World has plant monsters too :-)
the books concept is good, especially the main idea, mc has a clear goal, good enough pacing, but the grammar is what threw me off completely and what made me decide to drop this
are you still writing for this book. I love the content so I guess I'm just wondering are you still writing for this book. I love the content so I guess I'm just wondering
I was good. Well, at first, it really is good. But I have read a lot of stories with similar plot, so this kind of plot is cliche for me. But yeah, the author has a good writing quality.
I am really liking your novel. I hope you continue it and do not drop it. I wish you happiness and success. Please keep updating regularly. I am writing more because of 140 character restriction. I hope it's enough.
l like it, I do but there isn't that it factor that makes me want to read everything at once but still it's a good story. ✔️
So far so good. Very consistent, still there are tome when you find yourself questioning some scenario, so it kinda conflicting to me. But the pace of the story is very steady atleast that is whst I felt in the free chapters that I have read. But the Author tries to forcefully creat a mystery then breaks his own rythme by revealing the said mystery in a very lowsy way. Unfortunately not everyone can grasp the style of writing or creating mysteries or leaving hints and revealing it in a bit suspenseful manner. The written style had a bit immaturity and felt the Author hasn't quite settled in his own style. Some story scenarios are a bit awkward and not so refined. Just an honest review, no hate. Ps- Complain all you want about my lack of punctuation & unrefined sentencing along with my barely presentable grammer. I don't care. I am here for xp. I wrote a comment unfortunately not a review.
And a good story, a little generic but fun, look, I'm not a professional critic and stuff and I'm not the best person to kick things off and that's why this thing about the app forces you to put 140 characters and a bag
I have loved the story so far and I’m only starting. I hope you continue your amazing story, and I would definitely recommend this to anyone else.
No Harem?! But, Romance? Good!, I'm In! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] Please, do Not dropt this movel dear author! Love it! [img=recommend]
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writing 3/5 Story 4/5 character 3/5 updating 4/5 world 4/5 mc is a sheep... could be a good story if he was braver.ಠ,_｣ಠಠ∀ಠಠ﹏ಠʕಠ_ಠʔ(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)ಠ∀ಠ¯\_ಠ_ಠ_/¯ಠ,_｣ಠಠᴥಠಠ_ಠ(⌐■-■)ಠ﹏ಠಠ,_｣ಠಠᴥಠ[̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡ಠ_ಠ)̲̅$̲̅]ಠ_ʖಠ
Spoiler enthüllen Hmm, I'm liking the book the more I read it, its awesome and I hope to enjoy it the more........ .............. ............... ........... @@&@&&@&@&@&@&@&@&@&&@&@&@-@
It's taking too long for the chapters to be released 😣it's enjoying can't wait for the next chapter 🥺. The story is really great but the rate at which the chapters are released is slow . The story is awesome am looking forward to the next chapter 🥺
too lazy to write just read the book or see other review, hope you enjoy the read as i did..........................................................................................
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كيف هو ام سي هل هو MC آخر من النوع الغبي الذي يساعد دائمًا الأشخاص العشوائيين ويهين الأشخاص الأقوياء بسبب فتاة التقى بها للتو ، وهل سيكون هناك الكثير من الأساتذة الشباب الذين يسيئون إليهم في كل مرة يخرج فيها من منزله أو يخرج أن تأكل شيئًا آمل ألا يكون ساحرًا باردًا ، شخصًا واقعيًا يمكنه التحكم في عواطفه وحاجته الجنسية ، وليس فقط شخصًا لا يفكر إلا بقضيبه ويشعر بالسوء عندما يحتاج إلى قتل أو إيذاء الآخرين خاصة الفتيات مثلي. سأبدأ في قراءتها بوتيرة بطيئة وآمل أن يجيبني أحدهم
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Can't wait for the next chapters 😣it's is really interesting and am enjoying reading them 🤩 please update the rest of the chapters soon as possible 🥺
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Hello everyone, You can see the author tag beside my name. Yes, I am the author of this book. I am here to give some detailed review of the story. - The book will have some grammatical mistakes, so if you can bear those little ones, I can guarantee that you will enjoy the story. - No Harem Since it is a cultivation story, many readers think, it might be a harem; however, I don't plan to add Harem to it. - Starting will a slow; however, it will be smooth after initial world building and characters introduction. - MC will be ignorant about many things in the beginning but he will learn things with time - Romance Some readers asked me whether it has romance or not. Yes, there will be romance; however, it will be short. - The story will be very long. So, please stick with me till the end. Hmm...that's it. I hope it is helpful and if you have any doubts, you can ask here. Thanks for reading my book.