The Legend of Min Hong

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cutelit4ever

Wow, the way the author delivers his masterpiece is really fascinating. I mean, it is a truly good story, the conversation and the action itself makes you want to read more and more. I like it ♥ Hope to read more from you, author sama.

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buhahaha

I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.

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Juin

Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.

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type12345

I like the story very much. My problem is that it seems to be extremly similar to Desilate era. While adding the additional cheats to the Mc, the stories seen way too similar.

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Chrazi87

Ch. 1-13 don't seem to have anything to do with the rest of the story. Has there been some mistake? I'm confused. It's like somebody dropped those chapters in and deleted the originals.

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DaoistCrazy1122

Amazing potential, good grammar, and well thought out!!!! This a superb story I hope you don't drop this because I love this story I hope you make this 1000+ chapters and make many more cultivation realms

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wavy95

even though only 10 chapters released so far. author starts with interesting story line... I look forward to the rest of chapters to be released... Author-san 🙏💯❤️

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syxhdud

The fact that it is an original, and you could still come up with this kind of suspenseful synopsis, makes reading this novel worth the time. Then there's the treasure, 'The Eye of Myriad Universe'. Catchy name, cool synopsis, and a unique cover page. You have my attention. [img=update]

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Rikku_Voide

This book is 5 stars. Although it is 'inspired' by some famous works, it still doesn't change that its a good one. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Shoab_Ahamed

During the first 40 chapters I was very frustrated reading this novel because it was almost the exact carbon copy of Desolate era. I like desolate era but I did not want to read something exact similar to it. But I managed to endure and believe me I was glad that I did not drop this novel because it was fricking great. I all recommend all of you to stick to it until the end. Dear author you did a great job there but I think you should change your writing style a bit since you write a lot of chapters about some things which were not necessary like you spend 5 chapter just explaining the abilities of eye of myriad dao which could have been done in just about 2.5 chapters. So what I want to say is that you focus a lot on unnessary chapters. Anyway keep up the good work.

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Redgar_347

Well I think I have read enough to give a review of what I think about the novel. Since this is author's first work, he has taken a lot of ideas from other novels, you are sure to find a lot of references but only in the starting chapters. Although the general introduction of the early life of our Main character in the new world is inspired by 'Desolate era' , but this doesn't change the fact that this is an original work since the essence of the main plot is completely different with unexpected events. There are few grammatical mistakes in some chapter otherwise it's quite nicely written with enough content in each chapter so that you could fully enjoy it. No major info dumps in the start. It's neither a slow paced nor a fast paced story but yeah at some point you might surely think that things have gotten sometime too fast or slow. •>Main character:- Our mc is a great assassin from earth, died after being betrayed by his contracter. He was cold blooded man who was all alone after he lost everything but this doesn't effect his character in his new life, he is loving guy who cares a lot for his family. Not a dumb guy for sure but the one who plans everything in his mind only at the cost of asking a lot of silly questions. If I could describe him in as little words as possible I would say he is emotionally driven. •>World building:- The world is slowly opening up for our mc. You can sit back and enjoy as the world unfold infront of you.🍿 •>Mc power:- My dao friends don't worry about our mc being weak. You all should know that he has a powerful cheat..... author-nim. •>Family/clan:- Not the traditional wuxia families where the mc and his family is harassed by the clan for any random reason. Infact he is most loved. Still there are a few points that might get left out but overall I would say, give this novel a try, it's worth your time and coins. For our dear author-nin.... Surely doing a great work on writing this novel and keeping us entertained and . Keep on writing and stay healthy 🙏🏼🙏🏼

It is amazing how the writer was able to combine mystery, the supernatural and humanity. Awesome!!!!!!!!! It is a good read and I look forward to more from the author.

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TheSilverPrince

I have not read this novel.. but i have already given it 5 star. I have read your previous novel and found it really good.. Dude how do could u write 2 novels at once? I mean.. it takes me 2 hr to write one.. and i am only doing fanfiction. Do u only make a living from these novels or do u also work on other things.. cause i cannot seem to comprehend u doing other work. How do u manage time? Give me some tips

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Aether_007

Everything about the novel is good... but you destroy smut scenes either you write it right or you don't write it.. those who want to read them would not want to see mall and car and different stuff in there... i hope you will change it.. of you write it then write it right

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Isaac_Isaac_8149

Is it me or is chapter 3 similar to the beginning of The Desolate Era? It quite literally has the same words but different meaning like "perception" and "spiritual sense". Did the author take inspiration from Desolate Era????

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Dreamstrafe

okay i gotta say, this is one of my favorite novels ever. I'm up to date at chap 258, and it's been super refreshing to read a novel like this. I've always been a fan of the process of comprehending universal laws/daos and the mysticism that comes with it and this has plenty of that later on. Origin-tan keeps the novel fresh, and there aren't tons of cliques throughout the novel. the mc end up in a relationship later on, and at least so far, they haven't used the worst clique ever (at least in my book) which is the main heroine being placed in a coma or kidnapped away from mc where he has to get super strong to meet her again. the character development makes the characters feel like living breathing people, and if you have some time and coins i would 200% recommend you taking time to read this. also, plz gift stones and coins, so we can see the end of this story eventually. it would be really sad if this novel gets dropped. Origin-tan we love you, and keep up the hard work!!! おつかれ さま でした!

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Justin_Toh

I absolutely love this book, and I will add them to my collection to follow up. Thank you very much for the wonderful story! The book cover is interesting too! :)

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DeflectingBlade

Too many references ..But i Am in love with this novel and the way it’s progressing ......,............................,,, ...,..............