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The best fanfic. Fuyona is the most well developed orginal character i've seen His relation with the canon characters are unique, i still want to see Zabuza working under his command but the rest is perfect. Congrats
Spoiler enthüllenpretty decent .............................................................................................................................
Good story embodied in the hidden fog village and has two Kiki Genkai has a good relationship with many people there are many original characters developed a new combat style
I loved it, it was truly interesting how he changed a lot of plots and I really enjoyed how he never met the main cast or befriending naruto, not that I hate that its just really common for the oc to be born into konoha either with a family or in an orphanage which gets boring after a period of time, so once again I give my regards to the author.
Best naruto fanfiction not about konoha. Slow pace, stability of grow, not cartoon characters, interesting and original story, action, romantic line, strong enemies, feud building, real LOR, cruel Shinobu world. Novel for those who older than 20 at least.
Great story set in the Hidden Mist. Character is creative and well developed. Maybe he should decide on a girl, but we shall see. Overall, well written and enjoyable
This fic is one of the best i have ever read im very excited for new chapter and hope you dont break up i Would also be happy if you update the fic more often [img=update]
Not that bad but not super good just a story to pass the time ................................................................................................
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Likable MC and other characters have depth to them. They’re not one dimensional which I like. Chapters are longer than average, so don’t let the amount of chapters fool you in thinking it’s short. The speed of update is similar to George RR Martin writing his books, which is not ideal. This is understandable since I can see that you are writing multiple stories at the same time. A lot of spelling, and some grammar mistakes but I can ignore it since I can easily understand it. It also helps that I like your writing style as it’s easy to follow along the story. I hope you keep the action a little bit more simpler than it already is tho but don’t get me wrong I like how the action is written. Keep it up my dude, and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to everyone.
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I'll admit that I've had this in my library for a while and kept on procrastinating to read it. I'm a fool. Although he gets powerful a bit to fast the story itself is very good.
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The chapter is interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
Don't make the new Mizukage appease Suna.. They don't have any S class shinobi to really pose a danger to the mist village.. Suna is also the weakest village. So For, him to go out of his way to make peace with them would only show, others his weakness.. Don't make him the new Sarutobi Hiruzen... He should focus on his own village.. the civil War didn't even start so mist is in really strong position.. Have mist be neutral towards other village for the time being.. And remember this is Yuki's Story not Naruto's.. So Don't create useless plotlines to fit Naruto in his life..
Author is good i cant say anything about grammar cos i suck at it and well updating stability it suck but still good chapters and keeping me entertained overall good story lol
Absolutely loved this story for so many reasons-as soon as i picked it it, that was my Sunday gone, its a unique naruto fanfic that i highly reccomend, 10/10
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Salah satu fanfic Naruto terbaik yang saya baca. Latar belakang cerita yang tidak Konoha-sentris selalu sangat menarik. Satu-satunya hal yang menggangu adalah MC yang terlalu tunduk pada Mizukage sebelum timeskip 3 tahun pelatihan Sage. MC juga sangat mempengaruhi cerita dengan membuka identitas Obito. Padahal jika menurut cerita, Naruto saat ini masih bocah, mungkin di akademi? Ini akan memicu pergerakan Akatsuki secara signifikan (harusnya), terkecuali penulis memiliki cara lain untuk menghindari plot tersebut. Dan sangat menarik untuk menantikannya.
Definitely one of the best books i Ive ever read on here this book so great that Its the only book that i can patiently wait on without feeling anxious bC i know you do great work
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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This is a pretty good fic compared to the other Naruto fics on the website . Its definitely the best one. Good grammar with very few spelling mistakes. Nice character and thank god you didn't use the STEAL SHARINGAN /HASHIRAMA cells trope and made the MC progress more using his natural abilities .
Definitely the best Naruto Fanfic. Everything about the story is great, but you have to wait for a while for it to update[img=update][img=update]
i cant say anything, just look at the star, u will never be dissapointed ....................................................................................................................................
The best fanfic. Fuyona is the most well developed orginal character i've seen His relation with the canon characters are unique, i still want to see Zabuza working under his command but the rest is perfect. Congrats
Spoiler enthüllenpretty decent .............................................................................................................................
Good story embodied in the hidden fog village and has two Kiki Genkai has a good relationship with many people there are many original characters developed a new combat style
I loved it, it was truly interesting how he changed a lot of plots and I really enjoyed how he never met the main cast or befriending naruto, not that I hate that its just really common for the oc to be born into konoha either with a family or in an orphanage which gets boring after a period of time, so once again I give my regards to the author.
Best naruto fanfiction not about konoha. Slow pace, stability of grow, not cartoon characters, interesting and original story, action, romantic line, strong enemies, feud building, real LOR, cruel Shinobu world. Novel for those who older than 20 at least.
Great story set in the Hidden Mist. Character is creative and well developed. Maybe he should decide on a girl, but we shall see. Overall, well written and enjoyable
This fic is one of the best i have ever read im very excited for new chapter and hope you dont break up i Would also be happy if you update the fic more often [img=update]
Not that bad but not super good just a story to pass the time ................................................................................................
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Likable MC and other characters have depth to them. They’re not one dimensional which I like. Chapters are longer than average, so don’t let the amount of chapters fool you in thinking it’s short. The speed of update is similar to George RR Martin writing his books, which is not ideal. This is understandable since I can see that you are writing multiple stories at the same time. A lot of spelling, and some grammar mistakes but I can ignore it since I can easily understand it. It also helps that I like your writing style as it’s easy to follow along the story. I hope you keep the action a little bit more simpler than it already is tho but don’t get me wrong I like how the action is written. Keep it up my dude, and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to everyone.
omment Cabelinho: second, thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks th thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
I'll admit that I've had this in my library for a while and kept on procrastinating to read it. I'm a fool. Although he gets powerful a bit to fast the story itself is very good.
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The chapter is interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
Don't make the new Mizukage appease Suna.. They don't have any S class shinobi to really pose a danger to the mist village.. Suna is also the weakest village. So For, him to go out of his way to make peace with them would only show, others his weakness.. Don't make him the new Sarutobi Hiruzen... He should focus on his own village.. the civil War didn't even start so mist is in really strong position.. Have mist be neutral towards other village for the time being.. And remember this is Yuki's Story not Naruto's.. So Don't create useless plotlines to fit Naruto in his life..
Author is good i cant say anything about grammar cos i suck at it and well updating stability it suck but still good chapters and keeping me entertained overall good story lol
Absolutely loved this story for so many reasons-as soon as i picked it it, that was my Sunday gone, its a unique naruto fanfic that i highly reccomend, 10/10
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very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Salah satu fanfic Naruto terbaik yang saya baca. Latar belakang cerita yang tidak Konoha-sentris selalu sangat menarik. Satu-satunya hal yang menggangu adalah MC yang terlalu tunduk pada Mizukage sebelum timeskip 3 tahun pelatihan Sage. MC juga sangat mempengaruhi cerita dengan membuka identitas Obito. Padahal jika menurut cerita, Naruto saat ini masih bocah, mungkin di akademi? Ini akan memicu pergerakan Akatsuki secara signifikan (harusnya), terkecuali penulis memiliki cara lain untuk menghindari plot tersebut. Dan sangat menarik untuk menantikannya.
Definitely one of the best books i Ive ever read on here this book so great that Its the only book that i can patiently wait on without feeling anxious bC i know you do great work
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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This is a pretty good fic compared to the other Naruto fics on the website . Its definitely the best one. Good grammar with very few spelling mistakes. Nice character and thank god you didn't use the STEAL SHARINGAN /HASHIRAMA cells trope and made the MC progress more using his natural abilities .
Definitely the best Naruto Fanfic. Everything about the story is great, but you have to wait for a while for it to update[img=update][img=update]