Ancient Tears BloodLine

LV 3

Monsoon_Mangoes

Usually,I am not a fan of system novels, but this book has sparked my curiosity and I ended up reading. It was totally worth it!!! The plot itself appears promising and the characters are well written. The story develops through the main protagonist, Zach.. Instead dumping every information all at once.The story literally gives light to the journey of Zack to an orphan through a great warrior. Author have a pretty good command over the language and explains the story in simple terms, (which I haven't seen on other system novels) Kudos to the author, keep up the good work 👍👍👍

LV 2

Dan_immortal

I really enjoyed your novel I hope you continue this wonderful novel until the end Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

This sure reminds me of sci-fi movies I have seen in the past. With a mix of martial arts in it, then I am hooked! After reading ten chaps, I must say the chapters were short. But they were enjoyable indeed! I think it was still not its best version and I can see that it has still some parts of improvements. I praise the author's creativity and imagination, as it was hard to think of your own unique world in the first place. Kudos! You are very talented and don't stop writing. Master your own writing style and discover it yourself in the future. I am rooting for you [img=recommend]

LV 13

Jose_blabla

This book has the potential and it was worth my time reading it. The grammars are ok, some mistakes here and there but it doesn't matter, at least I could convey what they meant

LV 11

Duraika

Very descriptive nice storytelling and over whole the background is lovely, this is a great fantasy sci fi vibe. The world-building and the plot has been carefully put effort into and well thought out and just the whole novel is a great start and this is a good novel for anyone who into these type of novel

LV 5

SorcererCat

This is a good LN. Some odd ways of doing things here and there, but a good novel over all. Well worth the read. I just wish there were more chapters.

LV 1

A_Gitagon

The power system alone was already enough to hook me. But then again this novel has all the things I look for in a novel. The chapters that I've read are also very interesting.

LV 13

Akira_Monadelle

I greatly admire this author's creativity. The writer's intentions are clear and the novel has a solid plot. The plot is common in anime and comics but the writer managed to make it very interesting. However, the story is greatly flawed and plagued by errors from all aspects of English. Grammar, punctuation and capitalization could use some serious work. Majority of the sentences and names started with common letters and words that were supposed to start with common letters started with capital letters. Person's names, names of places and sentences should begin with capital letters. The sentences were poorly structured and most of them were run-on sentences. Punctuation marks, especially the comma was misused and end marks were not used at the end of some sentences.When they were used, they were used incorrectly. For example, some questions ended with full stop. The dialogue in the novel seems a bit too artificial, there were no emotion behind the words and the conversations just didn't come across as realistic. The story flowed but it was very confusing. The author went from thing to another messily without proper transitions. The wording of some sentences made things even more confusing. It was as if some sentences were missing some words or had the wrong words. I recommend that the author use Grammarly or Proofreader when writing to get rid of most of the errors. Overall, the novel has a lot of potential and the author has a very active imagination. The errors are the only draw back since the plot is pretty solid. I hope the author can only get better as they write. [img=recommend]

LV 4

Ice_Princesss

The story has a lot of potential and I must say I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. There is little to no errors in grammar or spelling so it shows that you really paid attention to that. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

LV 2

SabergKeys

This is written amazingly, even if I'm not a fan of short-length chapters, I got to say that reading this always gives me the urge to continue. It is an amazing book, I'll be sure to keep reading it and I'll support you author, keep up the good work. And, though there are errors that disturbs my flow of reading, an update can easily fix it.

LV 1

Brandongould

This is brandon gould I am sorry that it took me a while to respond to this review swap but here is my review Of the chapters that I have read I think that this is a interesting book with a unique concept. The world is detailed enough to where I can get a genreal sense of what it looks like. besides a few minor puncion errors the story is still writtin well enough to where you can understand what is going on and the story is well paced I will be sure to read more to see what happens next

LV 3

Book_Pen

UNIQUE!! The writer's creative and imaginative skills are at par. Indulging fantasy and sci-fi is an unique concept. But the chapters could be made longer and there were few grammatical errors, which weren't that problematic. Overall, it's an interesting plot. Keep going!!!

LV 12

evilmunky45

You have strong and great concept to work with, it felt pretty original, but the grammar makes me lose some of the immersion sometimes, but looking past that, I was able to enjoy the mechanics of the world you have built, keep it up!

LV 2

Samcrowned00

Definitely, the author indeed noted that English is not his first language even so, he had do so great with the right diction to describe the event of this book. The world background is great and the story development is excellent. The writing technic is over all great and I easily recommend this book to everyone.

LV 2

CannibalTurtle

Quite a good read so far. The story is well paced and there's a sense of adventure when you read. The world background is also intriguing and the future chapters will be something to look forward to.

LV 4

ViciousPepper

Interesting... Seems like some interstellar Sci-fi novel with a touch of Xianxia. The quality of writing is improving as the story progresses further. The story has potential and can retain the readers. the main character so far is likable and I hope it stays like that. A good story so far... I can definitely see the author has cooked up something interesting. A great read!!

LV 1

Gaureeey

THIS GIVES ME A S.A.O vibe! well planned plot so far, read 10 chapters and I'm elated because to a person who loves the stimulation of graphic and visual imagery, its pretty good to kill time and kinda help yourself dissolve into it, the only thing is i wish your character had some flawsss because that would create more realisticity you get me? short chapters, easy read, not a too complex world build (towards the beginning as far as I've read), the cover disappoints tho because its ambiguous to the content of the book pretty mmuchhhh.... the author has unused potential, could write better definitely has the ability just wondering why its very brief in a few chappies, nevertheless, looking forward to read AHEAD CHAPTER 10 TO UNLOCK MORE!

LV 2

EnnaGenna

This is such a nice fantasy type. I reaişy enjoyed while reading. And I highly recommend everybody. Thank you for sharing this one, author...✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌

LV 2

Elixer_Yuu

A great read! Truly! If I were point out the specialty of this novel, I would, certainly, say that the world building is the strongest point of this novel. Really liked it and looking forward to future chapters. And dear author, the cover's way too bland. Please change it. Yuu, signing out!

LV 2

Silent_Listener

Good job author. Keep it up. ..........................................................................................................................