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I haven’t read this book yet but have you dropped this novel author?? It’s been a while since you last dropped a chapter and I was looking forward to reading it.
Where is new chapter please give me new chapter...............................................................,..................................................................................... New cahpter and I give you 5 star..........,..............................,......
Muito boa ff meu amigo, curou meu tédio por um bom tempo. Uma das poucas que realmente instigou curiosidade e antecipação, obrigado. Continue com o bom trabalho
It’s seems like u want him to become perfect like he now every alien real name, can do literally anything I don’t like it, not every human is perfect but I don’t see any humanity in him like a perfect Ben 10 If u wanna make a fanfic let the mc lose there previously life memory that would be much better.
The greatest quality of the authors many works, is the Main character. the main character Is best described as beyond good and evil, a person separated from morality. A person capable and willing to act For his own betterment, and to Shape the world around him to his will.
I like the idea but here what i don’t like: 1. The unecessarly crossover that don’ t do anything to drive the plot forward, if u want to add crossover in the story that is ok but u need to ask ur self tow questions before adding the crossover ( is this character is going to effect the plot or not and if this character is suitable to the world) 2. The mc is supposed to have knowledge of the ben 10 university but he doesn’t use them ( only one time he used to get dr animo to join the forever kight and that the last time he used) 3. Like sometimes u don’t show us what happened in the plot ( like how the ben 10 is in the forever kight ) 4. Why did u make mc graduate college it doesn’t make sense u could have just let him go to school normal of doing that he can have character development Or worldbuiling 5. Why don’t u make it when he used his knowledge about the ben 10 unvi some events change ( so he can be careful about using it). 5. U add the mana system but it doesn’t get used ( like he can create spell and us e them ) so that the watch get used less bec that why he got Cought by vilgax and if he doesn’t have the watch he can use magic. (He can crate a spell that could hid the watch on his wrist ) Mc joining the forever knights could cerate more than 20 to30 chp just of mc trying to climb the rank .
Ben 10 became popular in facebook groups, and they made me look for ff and original episodes of the series, when do you update author? I see you active but without updating any of your stories
It was great I really enjoyed it but even though I like the long chapters there are too few of them and I finished the story too fast. I just wish there were more chapters otherwise it was great👍
fanfic in my top 10 on ben 10 omniverse amazing the development of the plot and despite having few chapters it does not leave anything to be desired... in fact it leaves something to be desired yes, a continuation excellent[img=update]
Bueno, no iba a hacer la reseña, porque pensaba que sería el único agua fiestas del lugar, pero como no es así, comentaré a detalle lo mejor que pueda los puntos que no me gustaron de la historia. 1. Me gustó ese inicio, fue explosivo e interesante, lleno de posibilidades, la actitud de Gwen hacia Ben tuvo sus motivos y la aparición de Lucy si fue una sorpresa, de la que no estuve a favor, pero lo dejé pasar como la magia fanfic. 2.Todo empezó a ir mal (por lo menos para mí) cuando me fijé que el papel del ben original pasó a ser parte de Lucy, los primero capítulos de ben 10 están grabados en mi mente, y los diálogos los reconozco fácilmente, así que desde ese punto sospechaba de que la historia era una copia del desarrollo original o que tomaría ese rumbo, un punto negativo bastante común en los fanfics y que solo les gusta a los que tienen poca memoria, recién entran al mundo del fanfiction o simplemente nunca han visto ben 10. 3.El protagonista es inteligente o eso dice el autor, pero no lo demuestra, claro, hace planes, manipula sutilmente, pero prácticamente está arriesgando a su familia y a las personas que quiere salvar por motivos desconocidos que no se podrán explicar fácilmente, el debería saber que la trama favorecía a Ben como protagonista, pero desde su punto de vista, debería plantearse la realidad de que alguien puede morir, de que sirvió todo ese conocimiento que supuestamente adquirió si copia todo lo que hizo un niño de 10 años sin experiencia y sin sentido del peligro. 4. Ya mencioné que el desarrollo es una copia, pero el problema radica en hacer luchas difíciles cuando no es necesario, no solo conoce las debilidades de sus enemigos sino que también conoce sus fortalezas, puede solucionar cosas que pondrán en grave riesgo sus vidas, pero no lo hace ni lo hará, si la trama sigue el curso por el que va. Escribo esto no con la intención de molestar, ni bajar a propósito la calificación de la historia, solo soy honesto y me gustaría que se tomen en cuenta estos puntos, trato de ser lo más lógico aquí para que se transmita correctamente lo que quiero decir y talvez el autor empatice conmigo en algún punto, yo creo que así atraerás más lectores y mantendrá a los ya existentes, aunque en este punto dejaré la historia, es una pena, ya que no tengo nada más que leer, ya leí todo lo que valía la pena y lo demás es un asco argumental, pero no pierdo las esperanzas, por lo menos aún no, ya perdí la esperanzas de fanfiction, Whattpad, Wunxia World, entre muchas otras páginas.
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A good storyline and a good improvement . Characters lika alive till now . Why till now because there are future chapters and i didn't read them . I can't speak about future so . Yes . Till now ~(^°^)~ . Author write he will continue this novel but because chapters are long and need calculated improvements i lt can have a lot time . . . I wanna say thanks for writing this fanfic author . You are best (maybe not but it is cheering up so take it like you are really best : > ༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ ...)
I love it. One of the few Ben 10 fanfics I've read that are done right. I love the subtle mind manipulation too, that was nice. I look forward to more
Oh yes, finally something good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And very good this is for sure one of the best writers He writes very well but it takes a long time to Launch a new chapter which annoys me and makes me in a bad mood
Por fin un buen fanfiction de ben 10, solo me gustaría que actualizara mas rápido. Si te gusta ben 10 y siempre quisiste un fanfic de esta serie, este es una buena opción para leer.
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I love how different this ben is and how you made the characters different from one another and I appreciate your whole dedication on researching on the show, please keep it up I love this story please.
the mc for some reason hide his identy (this alone made this story unreadable for me, i hate mc that hide their identy without any reason. the original Ben dont hide).what's more unreadable it's how this fic fallow the original and mc simple permit everything happen even when he know the way to stop before happen If I wanted to see original Ben i simple go and watch the cartoon this is a fanfiction so the story is the copy of original
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The story progression is good so far. Contrary to other fanfics that have tens of chapters with around 1000 or so words per page, this fix is the opposite. It has too little of pages, yet the words contained in each chapters easily exceeds 3000 words. And, no, it's not comprised of filler or info dump. That's just how good it is. The only downside of this fic? It's the updating stability.
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I've been finding novel like this so far. This is the first ben 10 novel that i really loved it. Thanks for writing this great novel. P.S. I would have give you 10 stars if I could.
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Ei bruh, é dificil de entrar em contato contigo, voce quer entrar para um grupo do discord que so tem autores br da webnovel? Umu, umu, umu, umu
The only thing that would make this book better is if it uploaded faster…………………………🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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I haven’t read this book yet but have you dropped this novel author?? It’s been a while since you last dropped a chapter and I was looking forward to reading it.
Where is new chapter please give me new chapter...............................................................,..................................................................................... New cahpter and I give you 5 star..........,..............................,......
Muito boa ff meu amigo, curou meu tédio por um bom tempo. Uma das poucas que realmente instigou curiosidade e antecipação, obrigado. Continue com o bom trabalho
It’s seems like u want him to become perfect like he now every alien real name, can do literally anything I don’t like it, not every human is perfect but I don’t see any humanity in him like a perfect Ben 10 If u wanna make a fanfic let the mc lose there previously life memory that would be much better.
The greatest quality of the authors many works, is the Main character. the main character Is best described as beyond good and evil, a person separated from morality. A person capable and willing to act For his own betterment, and to Shape the world around him to his will.
I like the idea but here what i don’t like: 1. The unecessarly crossover that don’ t do anything to drive the plot forward, if u want to add crossover in the story that is ok but u need to ask ur self tow questions before adding the crossover ( is this character is going to effect the plot or not and if this character is suitable to the world) 2. The mc is supposed to have knowledge of the ben 10 university but he doesn’t use them ( only one time he used to get dr animo to join the forever kight and that the last time he used) 3. Like sometimes u don’t show us what happened in the plot ( like how the ben 10 is in the forever kight ) 4. Why did u make mc graduate college it doesn’t make sense u could have just let him go to school normal of doing that he can have character development Or worldbuiling 5. Why don’t u make it when he used his knowledge about the ben 10 unvi some events change ( so he can be careful about using it). 5. U add the mana system but it doesn’t get used ( like he can create spell and us e them ) so that the watch get used less bec that why he got Cought by vilgax and if he doesn’t have the watch he can use magic. (He can crate a spell that could hid the watch on his wrist ) Mc joining the forever knights could cerate more than 20 to30 chp just of mc trying to climb the rank .
Ben 10 became popular in facebook groups, and they made me look for ff and original episodes of the series, when do you update author? I see you active but without updating any of your stories
It was great I really enjoyed it but even though I like the long chapters there are too few of them and I finished the story too fast. I just wish there were more chapters otherwise it was great👍
fanfic in my top 10 on ben 10 omniverse amazing the development of the plot and despite having few chapters it does not leave anything to be desired... in fact it leaves something to be desired yes, a continuation excellent[img=update]
Bueno, no iba a hacer la reseña, porque pensaba que sería el único agua fiestas del lugar, pero como no es así, comentaré a detalle lo mejor que pueda los puntos que no me gustaron de la historia. 1. Me gustó ese inicio, fue explosivo e interesante, lleno de posibilidades, la actitud de Gwen hacia Ben tuvo sus motivos y la aparición de Lucy si fue una sorpresa, de la que no estuve a favor, pero lo dejé pasar como la magia fanfic. 2.Todo empezó a ir mal (por lo menos para mí) cuando me fijé que el papel del ben original pasó a ser parte de Lucy, los primero capítulos de ben 10 están grabados en mi mente, y los diálogos los reconozco fácilmente, así que desde ese punto sospechaba de que la historia era una copia del desarrollo original o que tomaría ese rumbo, un punto negativo bastante común en los fanfics y que solo les gusta a los que tienen poca memoria, recién entran al mundo del fanfiction o simplemente nunca han visto ben 10. 3.El protagonista es inteligente o eso dice el autor, pero no lo demuestra, claro, hace planes, manipula sutilmente, pero prácticamente está arriesgando a su familia y a las personas que quiere salvar por motivos desconocidos que no se podrán explicar fácilmente, el debería saber que la trama favorecía a Ben como protagonista, pero desde su punto de vista, debería plantearse la realidad de que alguien puede morir, de que sirvió todo ese conocimiento que supuestamente adquirió si copia todo lo que hizo un niño de 10 años sin experiencia y sin sentido del peligro. 4. Ya mencioné que el desarrollo es una copia, pero el problema radica en hacer luchas difíciles cuando no es necesario, no solo conoce las debilidades de sus enemigos sino que también conoce sus fortalezas, puede solucionar cosas que pondrán en grave riesgo sus vidas, pero no lo hace ni lo hará, si la trama sigue el curso por el que va. Escribo esto no con la intención de molestar, ni bajar a propósito la calificación de la historia, solo soy honesto y me gustaría que se tomen en cuenta estos puntos, trato de ser lo más lógico aquí para que se transmita correctamente lo que quiero decir y talvez el autor empatice conmigo en algún punto, yo creo que así atraerás más lectores y mantendrá a los ya existentes, aunque en este punto dejaré la historia, es una pena, ya que no tengo nada más que leer, ya leí todo lo que valía la pena y lo demás es un asco argumental, pero no pierdo las esperanzas, por lo menos aún no, ya perdí la esperanzas de fanfiction, Whattpad, Wunxia World, entre muchas otras páginas.
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A good storyline and a good improvement . Characters lika alive till now . Why till now because there are future chapters and i didn't read them . I can't speak about future so . Yes . Till now ~(^°^)~ . Author write he will continue this novel but because chapters are long and need calculated improvements i lt can have a lot time . . . I wanna say thanks for writing this fanfic author . You are best (maybe not but it is cheering up so take it like you are really best : > ༼ つ ◕◡◕ ༽つ ...)
I love it. One of the few Ben 10 fanfics I've read that are done right. I love the subtle mind manipulation too, that was nice. I look forward to more
Oh yes, finally something good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And very good this is for sure one of the best writers He writes very well but it takes a long time to Launch a new chapter which annoys me and makes me in a bad mood
Por fin un buen fanfiction de ben 10, solo me gustaría que actualizara mas rápido. Si te gusta ben 10 y siempre quisiste un fanfic de esta serie, este es una buena opción para leer.
............................................................................................................................................................................ Extremamente boa...................................essa fic..................................
I love how different this ben is and how you made the characters different from one another and I appreciate your whole dedication on researching on the show, please keep it up I love this story please.
the mc for some reason hide his identy (this alone made this story unreadable for me, i hate mc that hide their identy without any reason. the original Ben dont hide).what's more unreadable it's how this fic fallow the original and mc simple permit everything happen even when he know the way to stop before happen If I wanted to see original Ben i simple go and watch the cartoon this is a fanfiction so the story is the copy of original
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The story progression is good so far. Contrary to other fanfics that have tens of chapters with around 1000 or so words per page, this fix is the opposite. It has too little of pages, yet the words contained in each chapters easily exceeds 3000 words. And, no, it's not comprised of filler or info dump. That's just how good it is. The only downside of this fic? It's the updating stability.
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Spoiler enthüllen I've been finding novel like this so far. This is the first ben 10 novel that i really loved it. Thanks for writing this great novel. P.S. I would have give you 10 stars if I could.
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Ei bruh, é dificil de entrar em contato contigo, voce quer entrar para um grupo do discord que so tem autores br da webnovel? Umu, umu, umu, umu
The only thing that would make this book better is if it uploaded faster…………………………🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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