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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionThe novel was already complete, so 5 stars and the writing quality was excellent. The author did a great job on give the story its own originality even though it was a fanfic. Most fanfic mc start it in the same leaf village, but not this one. It’s one of the better fanfics I read . I could even say it’s the best completed fanfic . Since so many good fanfic don’t get completed. However the mc is basically a background character in the later half . You can all say it was foreshadowing for the end . Which wasn’t even that great. The Mc heroines did have some depth in the beginning. But later on , they was basically all the same characters just different names. Don’t get me wrong though, you could tell some personality differences, just very minor. However Konan sill had the best character depth. Anyway this is just my opinion, I do applaud the author for completing the novel. Keep up the great work. I will check of you have any other novels out to read . Goodluck fellow readers.
I really liked this story even though harem stories aren’t my favorite. There were some times when I thought the author skipped some of the emotional bonding with the main character and his wives and I thought some of the things that took multiple chapters to complete could’ve been done shorter, but I’m not a writer and I still liked the story.[img=recommend]
one of the best fanfics, top 3 Naruto fanfic for me and best that's finished. overall great story
This is one of those stories where if the character isn't the MC or part of the harem they are constantly torn down until there is nothing particularly likeable or interesting about them. Especially male characters. Don't expect any tension surrounding any of the fights, every one of them is either a curbstomp, a fakeout followed by a curbstop, or a 'fake' fight where one side (usually MC aligned) will just end things by revealing something the other party had no way of knowing about but because they didn't know/prepare they are a foolish disappointment.
This story is just bad. I couldn't really get past the second chapter and I watched the ninth out of curiosity and it's disgusting. I don't know why this has such good ratings, I was tricked into watching this. Damn the bots that give 5 stars.
Good story, although mc is not very superpowerful. But mc is more prominent to the sealing technique. I think this is a fresh fanfic to read, 4 stars are quite recommended.
probably one of the better fanfictions i read. decided to write a review after my second read thru. also one of my favorite Naruto fanfics. enjoyed your occasional commentary and rants as well. a great fic.
This is good but to much slice of life if you want to do a Naruto fanfic then do it right like he has so many things he could do like he could of took Mishima but bc YOU don’t like her that doesn’t mean there is opportunity to use her like he says he sees them as people but he treats them as just items like if he wanted Ringo then he could of got her easily by just showing her what the hokage is like
It is one of the best Naruto ff on WN ✅ Highly Recommended. It was fun & all until 430 after that it is more of a slice of life and I almost stopped reading at that point but still finished it. Great Work Author & all the best for your future endeavours 👍
es muy malo la historia da un giro 360 para mal ...........................................................................................................................................
Good but got the edo tensei wrong the strength of the resurrected person is limited by the strength of the person sacrificed to use the jutsu but overall a great book/fanfiction I would like another book or chapter of rei in another world please 🙏
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It was really good at the start but I dropped it at the arc focusing on Naruto. Like I wouldn’t of minded if it changed povs like a couple chapters with team 7 and then a couple with the mc but it was a straight 100+ chapters of jus team 7 like I’m not here to read a fanfic centered around Naruto I’m here for the oc. Author straight up ruined the story. It wouldn’t of been so bad if he just alternated povs or smt but he just had to make a whole volume without the mc. If I wanted to read about team 7 I’ll just go read the ln. I was really enjoying this fanfic as well until he ruined it
This novel is one of, if not the best fanfic about Naruto, not just because of the masterfully build world and characters, but on how the author approach the concept of chakra and fuinjutsu, there's not many who do that, overall, an almost perfect novel
It started off good, but when the MC merges his soul with his harem, I didn't like it. Then he goes to Kiri, it could have been cool, but he doesn't care about Kiri, then they become the Yozora, a mercenary group, but they don't do anything, when there's going to be a cool fight, the MC lets other people fight, the idea of artificial jewelry is wonderful, but it's not used because they simply don't want to use it And they keep playing with their enemies, all the battles that would be cool for the MC to fight, he either leaves to his girls, or something crazy happens, so many cool characters wasted, That's why I don't like harem, like it showed the Uchiha awakening the Rinnegan, but it doesn't show her doing anything with it other than helping Kaguya free herself, while Temari has so much screen time,Dude, who cares about this character, seriously? Anyway, I could spend hours talking about all these problems.
Spoiler enthüllenThe story is good. But to give a fair review in the starting chapters I did feel some issues which others maybe ok with. The personality of characters changed a few times. The MC of the story appeared almost like a side character just adding exposition and more narration details. And I have left comments in parts I did not like and almost dropped it. However I am glad I continued to read. The story quality became much much amazing later on. The personality of each character stabilized and author has maintained a consistent mix of fun/sarcasm in personalities of characters. There no longer seems to be contradictions in the writing and honestly the plot eventually becomes much better. So TLDR: I had complaints initially but the series is long and if you continue reading you'll find that writing, narration, Plot and personality of characters becomes amazing and this is a 5 star story in the end if you can be little patient.
well I read the other reviews on this and skipped it like five times before I decided to give it a go. I really shouldn't have used the reviews. the story is not perfect nor the best naruto fanfic I've read, but it is a good read. enjoyed a great deal. Lots of filler chapters, MC passing up on opportunities for more power, but overall a good read.
was the first fanfic I read, I liked it but the ending seemed kind of rushed. At the end I thought he'd get a bigger harem since it talked about who liked him.
Can't say its the best but after reading the whole thing it grown on me and it made me sad that its over. it was a good read. I totaly recommend reading it.
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The soul merging thing just ruins the entire story, also a lot of bashing on canon characters which I am not really a fan of.
I'm not gonna lie this fan fic is the single worst thing that isn't a Chinese novel I've ever read it was painful to read like it literally hurt the MC wasn't even the mc anymore because his partner had all his abilities plus her own so she basically was him but just better then the senseless harem that had no business there tbh it was kinda stupid people say it gets better as it goes on but I just couldn't get that far this is brainrot in novel form read at your own risk
One of the worst Naruto novels out there.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
The novel was already complete, so 5 stars and the writing quality was excellent. The author did a great job on give the story its own originality even though it was a fanfic. Most fanfic mc start it in the same leaf village, but not this one. It’s one of the better fanfics I read . I could even say it’s the best completed fanfic . Since so many good fanfic don’t get completed. However the mc is basically a background character in the later half . You can all say it was foreshadowing for the end . Which wasn’t even that great. The Mc heroines did have some depth in the beginning. But later on , they was basically all the same characters just different names. Don’t get me wrong though, you could tell some personality differences, just very minor. However Konan sill had the best character depth. Anyway this is just my opinion, I do applaud the author for completing the novel. Keep up the great work. I will check of you have any other novels out to read . Goodluck fellow readers.
I really liked this story even though harem stories aren’t my favorite. There were some times when I thought the author skipped some of the emotional bonding with the main character and his wives and I thought some of the things that took multiple chapters to complete could’ve been done shorter, but I’m not a writer and I still liked the story.[img=recommend]
one of the best fanfics, top 3 Naruto fanfic for me and best that's finished. overall great story
This is one of those stories where if the character isn't the MC or part of the harem they are constantly torn down until there is nothing particularly likeable or interesting about them. Especially male characters. Don't expect any tension surrounding any of the fights, every one of them is either a curbstomp, a fakeout followed by a curbstop, or a 'fake' fight where one side (usually MC aligned) will just end things by revealing something the other party had no way of knowing about but because they didn't know/prepare they are a foolish disappointment.
This story is just bad. I couldn't really get past the second chapter and I watched the ninth out of curiosity and it's disgusting. I don't know why this has such good ratings, I was tricked into watching this. Damn the bots that give 5 stars.
Good story, although mc is not very superpowerful. But mc is more prominent to the sealing technique. I think this is a fresh fanfic to read, 4 stars are quite recommended.
probably one of the better fanfictions i read. decided to write a review after my second read thru. also one of my favorite Naruto fanfics. enjoyed your occasional commentary and rants as well. a great fic.
This is good but to much slice of life if you want to do a Naruto fanfic then do it right like he has so many things he could do like he could of took Mishima but bc YOU don’t like her that doesn’t mean there is opportunity to use her like he says he sees them as people but he treats them as just items like if he wanted Ringo then he could of got her easily by just showing her what the hokage is like
It is one of the best Naruto ff on WN ✅ Highly Recommended. It was fun & all until 430 after that it is more of a slice of life and I almost stopped reading at that point but still finished it. Great Work Author & all the best for your future endeavours 👍
es muy malo la historia da un giro 360 para mal ...........................................................................................................................................
Good but got the edo tensei wrong the strength of the resurrected person is limited by the strength of the person sacrificed to use the jutsu but overall a great book/fanfiction I would like another book or chapter of rei in another world please 🙏
What is L + ratio? L + ratio is used as a mocking insult on social media, often in reply to a post or opinion considered particularly bad. The letter L is used as a slang term for loss (as in the opposite of win). The word ratio is used in its social media sense referring to a situation in which a post has a high proportion of replies compared to likes or reposts, which usually indicates a barrage of negative replies criticizing and often mocking the post.
It was really good at the start but I dropped it at the arc focusing on Naruto. Like I wouldn’t of minded if it changed povs like a couple chapters with team 7 and then a couple with the mc but it was a straight 100+ chapters of jus team 7 like I’m not here to read a fanfic centered around Naruto I’m here for the oc. Author straight up ruined the story. It wouldn’t of been so bad if he just alternated povs or smt but he just had to make a whole volume without the mc. If I wanted to read about team 7 I’ll just go read the ln. I was really enjoying this fanfic as well until he ruined it
This novel is one of, if not the best fanfic about Naruto, not just because of the masterfully build world and characters, but on how the author approach the concept of chakra and fuinjutsu, there's not many who do that, overall, an almost perfect novel
It started off good, but when the MC merges his soul with his harem, I didn't like it. Then he goes to Kiri, it could have been cool, but he doesn't care about Kiri, then they become the Yozora, a mercenary group, but they don't do anything, when there's going to be a cool fight, the MC lets other people fight, the idea of artificial jewelry is wonderful, but it's not used because they simply don't want to use it And they keep playing with their enemies, all the battles that would be cool for the MC to fight, he either leaves to his girls, or something crazy happens, so many cool characters wasted, That's why I don't like harem, like it showed the Uchiha awakening the Rinnegan, but it doesn't show her doing anything with it other than helping Kaguya free herself, while Temari has so much screen time,Dude, who cares about this character, seriously? Anyway, I could spend hours talking about all these problems.
Spoiler enthüllenThe story is good. But to give a fair review in the starting chapters I did feel some issues which others maybe ok with. The personality of characters changed a few times. The MC of the story appeared almost like a side character just adding exposition and more narration details. And I have left comments in parts I did not like and almost dropped it. However I am glad I continued to read. The story quality became much much amazing later on. The personality of each character stabilized and author has maintained a consistent mix of fun/sarcasm in personalities of characters. There no longer seems to be contradictions in the writing and honestly the plot eventually becomes much better. So TLDR: I had complaints initially but the series is long and if you continue reading you'll find that writing, narration, Plot and personality of characters becomes amazing and this is a 5 star story in the end if you can be little patient.
well I read the other reviews on this and skipped it like five times before I decided to give it a go. I really shouldn't have used the reviews. the story is not perfect nor the best naruto fanfic I've read, but it is a good read. enjoyed a great deal. Lots of filler chapters, MC passing up on opportunities for more power, but overall a good read.
was the first fanfic I read, I liked it but the ending seemed kind of rushed. At the end I thought he'd get a bigger harem since it talked about who liked him.
Can't say its the best but after reading the whole thing it grown on me and it made me sad that its over. it was a good read. I totaly recommend reading it.
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The soul merging thing just ruins the entire story, also a lot of bashing on canon characters which I am not really a fan of.
I'm not gonna lie this fan fic is the single worst thing that isn't a Chinese novel I've ever read it was painful to read like it literally hurt the MC wasn't even the mc anymore because his partner had all his abilities plus her own so she basically was him but just better then the senseless harem that had no business there tbh it was kinda stupid people say it gets better as it goes on but I just couldn't get that far this is brainrot in novel form read at your own risk
One of the worst Naruto novels out there.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
Ah man it's gaited me reading this, but suddenly theres harem. Very good novel.