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The premise of the plot is really good and I think it has a great potential. However, the narrative is below average and the constant use of informal words such as "mum", "yh", and "xup" are really a bit hard to read or get used to. If you edit it a bit and add a more vivid narration, I think this will be better received
The plot is interesting and quite unique, the frustration is vivid and the narration convincing. Indeed not bad! So far I've read three chapters and it seems leading me into a better plot. Are you interested in getting this into a writing contest?
I think that this novel is really good and it has its own twists and betrayals that makes the book interesting. Overall a amazing story and a unique plot. Keep up the good work!
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I have not read very far yet but overall a good novel to past time. I don't really like mc personality but it's understandable character so far. It's a good read so thanks for making this.
yeah something happened with my library but I like the book a lot and hope to see how it progresses.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 I think it's different. Just a person with talents who hasn't succeeded . It's real and that's important. So thank you for the good read.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Yeah, I know I dumbed this book for a while now, did that due to lack of motivation and support. But I wanna start updating it back. Please, if you enjoy reading it, try to show your support by voting, sending gifts, and unlocking chapters with paid coins if you are up to the task. I'm a poor author that needs money, please, support. I'll try my best to keep writing a good story.
The premise of the plot is really good and I think it has a great potential. However, the narrative is below average and the constant use of informal words such as "mum", "yh", and "xup" are really a bit hard to read or get used to. If you edit it a bit and add a more vivid narration, I think this will be better received
The plot is interesting and quite unique, the frustration is vivid and the narration convincing. Indeed not bad! So far I've read three chapters and it seems leading me into a better plot. Are you interested in getting this into a writing contest?
I think that this novel is really good and it has its own twists and betrayals that makes the book interesting. Overall a amazing story and a unique plot. Keep up the good work!
Şjxçjxşjfçjijgçjcçjvijgijvijgiıgikvijvijvijcçjcçjcçjvçjcjşvijvjviıgiıgikvijviıgijvikviıgçjjviıgçjcçjgiıfçjcikgikkgiıdşudlyspydşugiohüodludşufiogşuxşulclogşuoşjxihiolhciıfu
I have not read very far yet but overall a good novel to past time. I don't really like mc personality but it's understandable character so far. It's a good read so thanks for making this.
yeah something happened with my library but I like the book a lot and hope to see how it progresses.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 I think it's different. Just a person with talents who hasn't succeeded . It's real and that's important. So thank you for the good read.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Yeah, I know I dumbed this book for a while now, did that due to lack of motivation and support. But I wanna start updating it back. Please, if you enjoy reading it, try to show your support by voting, sending gifts, and unlocking chapters with paid coins if you are up to the task. I'm a poor author that needs money, please, support. I'll try my best to keep writing a good story.