Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)

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Anubis_Creationz

Shameless author here. I hope you guys have fun reading this. I decided to share this with you guys because of how much I love Marvel fics. There's not a lot of good Marvel SI stories out there. This is my contribution to the community. I hope this inspires to write your own fic. I am also sorry for any mistakes I make in the future. I am very open to suggestions and new ideas and have already taken tons of inspiration from you guys. If you have a suggestion or a cool idea don't be afraid to share. Who knows you may find your idea in the fic while reading. Pointing out mistakes or suggestions are welcome. Usless complaining is not. And if you feel the urge to complain. Take a breath and remove the book from you library and read something else. Anyways hope all of you have fun. 😊😁

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Phoenix1998

This is a really good story. I am really liking so far. Please let him take away kitty and jean right away from xaviers.This is a really good story. I am really liking so far. Please let him take away kitty and jean right away from xaviers.

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SitOnBread

Mc has a trash personality, he's meant to be smart but acts dumb and he also has trash parents that will let a 16 year old travel the world alone. In conclusion, it is a typical marvel fanfic.

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WeavingSpider

Hello fellow reader and Author, this my review while i am at chapter 12 of this novel/fanfic The good things : - Its writing quality is better than many novels on this site 3/5 - A new, atleast for me, Marvel character, (never heard of Cipher) - Updates are okay to - Nice long chapter The bad things : - every paragraph starts with " I " - dialogue are mostly written in a cluster within paragraphs - too much info dumping (could be used for future interaction or dialogue between the mc and someone else) - The Mc himself, he jumps if a door opens, stutters when he talks to a girl and doesnt even wear some kind of mask to hide who he is. ( see kingpin part ) He also talks out loud with his "smartwatch/AI, in a Library or on street, what screams to be overheard by someone or something (Shield ...) To sum up, Interesting novel with great potential and okayish writing quality but which might need an editor to truly shine. Also some chapter would be nice to see our Mc interacting with the world and the people living within. I will read the rest of the novel too and might update in the comment section of this review. So far a 3.5/5 stars Where 5 stars is a book which i will read several times and 1 star is trash with too many clishes and bad writing quality or a MC acting like a anime character around woman. If you read till here, you have read 1579 words written by me and i thank you for taken this time for my review. Bless you all with a cup full of warm tea and have a nice day or night beautyfull people, apache helicopter or whatever you might be.

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pizzq

FOUND IT! GREAT STORY! LOVE YOUAUTHORESHSGSGGSHAYDHDBEUWUAKAKDJDJDJSISJDHHSUAIAHAVSJWKAISIDHDJWKWKZJJZJDHDHAJSJSJFHEJAJAJDJUXUXUCHFUDHEHEHDH

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skandha

MC is supposed to be smart and have future knowledge considering he has read Marvel comics and knows the movies. Initially it was good but the later chapters, MC is nerfed and becomes dumb. Which is disappointing really.

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Jeremy_Rizzo

Very good fanfic. For a long time I could not find a normal fanfic about magicians. Now I found it to everyone I recommend. Thank you, I liked it very much. I look forward to continuing. I hope you won't abandon.

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Grey1902

FANTASTIC!!!!! truly a great read didn't even know who the character was before this but definitely going to look it up now thanks to this book. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND READING THIS you won't regret it

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ScottyTheD

Really enjoying the story, it's a good read, not too heavy but there's emotion. There's a good ratio of dialog and description so it doesnt read like a power point presentation. There's a great main character, his decisions make sense for him, the world is described really well but not to a ridiculously detailed level. The author guides your imagination, they don't push and shove it. 13 chapters in and I hope it keeps going like it is, keep up the good work.

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Pimple_Face_13

This isn’t a proper review...................haven’t even read it yet..........but once I saw bull**** I was in.................................

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Mortem_Black

This is honestly the best story I've read on this site and I've spent over 3000 hours here...... So please update, this.....I need this.......

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Nandak

MC had potential but he wasted it. the plot could have been much better but it couldn't.,..... . .....,........... . ...................

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Kenji_Shimura

Not that good not that bad either....................................... .................................................................. .... ....

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Phoenix1998

Wow. Really good. Cant wait to read more. Wow. Really good. Cant wait to read more. Wow. Really good. Cant wait to read more. Wow. Really good. Cant wait to read more.

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Anubis_Creationz

Hey everyone, it's me author san. To be honest with you guys, the fic has a bit of a rough start, but you will see it improve as the story moves forward. The grammar is okay not the best , but it's definitely readable, it won't take away from the experience. I am improving with each new chapter though, so you should see a visible improvement as you get more into the story. There wasn't much character interaction until later in the novel when he finally meets some of the main characters ,but that issue is fixed in later chapters. The chapters are usually between 1500-2000 words. The story progression is moving along nicely haven't heard any complaints about it yet. Overall it's a nice read, there are some mistakes here and there, but nothing that will ruin the experience. I hope you enjoy the story, and let me know what you guys think in the comments. ✌️

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West

Write a review Reading Status: C20 Writing Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design World Background The total score 5.0

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OluwaTbright

Well,This is really good. You took a character virtually unknown in the Marvel universe and developed him. The character development is quite incredible. For that,thumbs up to you.

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SRJ_facts

this is one of the epic fanfic i have read . you wont feel bored . Every chapter is Very interesting. and thankfully its not a harem. Author, thank you for writing such a great novel

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Somnifer

Great writing and story plot. Very good progression of the story so far and he has a good idea where he seems to be going. Thank you for your hard work and keep it up! I wouldn't say no to 10X as many chapters :)