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Truth be told this is the best marvel fic I've read in my whole life. There's so unnecessary harem. There's no unnecessary characters ( like X-Men). And also chapters are big, like way big. If compared to nowadays marvel fic's than this is pure gold at its finest form. Can't fully express how intense the fic is. The concept or the way it's portrayed is phenomenal. So Please try it guys. The author is a perfectionist, trust me you'll never regret it.
im going to be honest with all of you all, the MC id definitely stupid but he does it because he has the strength to be. A lot of the things are going to follow canon of MCU but there will be a couple of twists. At the end of the day, i only read it because of MC and Gwen Stacy love.
When I read the summary it sounded interesting. Now that I have actually read it I can say with all certainty ... This... is BLOODY!... BRILLIANT!! I recommend that everyone who reads my review read the book it will have you laughing, emotional and in awe at the OP-ness of the MC be because it's OP done right.
Love the concept, hate the execution. MC has the mental capacity of a 10 year old. Even compared to morons like Goku he's still a bit too dumb. Goku is atleast tolerable.
Story was good. Never expected story to go this way. Did feel hirritated at few part of the story 'cause of MC's way yet finishing this was fulfilling
sorry but this is a steaming pile of shit. don't use a race where you just nerf him for shits and giggles. if you want a story where he progresses like everyone does, don't give him power that can demolish a world so easily. and what's up with all the unstable edgy mc? want a new sasuke? he breaks down every other moment like a baby. seriously? if your anywhere near your mc traits, you should get some help
I enjoy the premise and willing to give a lot of leeway to stories that follow along those lines, so I honestly say that this was very disappointing. The MC is just an overpowered fanboy that's there along for the ride. His actions don't change the original plot at all, even when they should. Even before he forgets the storyline, he does nothing and is vindicated by the Ancient One that any change he does will only lead to a worse future. He saves Quicksilver, who seems to not appear afterwards, because that would imply the MC is relevant. He easily beats Cp Marvel, who equals and even overpowers Thanos yet he couldn't stop Thanos directly? And the entire romance with Black Widow makes no sense. There's no reason for her to desire him, especially when she knows he already has someone. She's not some hormonal teenager...
It was a really funny story. sometimes a little too stupid but in the hole definitely a story you could read the best was: "do you need a Hand?" I cried out of laugh
The ff is a good enough one Good pop culture references great job with the finishing could have stopped that half way through the last chapter but you didnt flop it like some others AND THANKS A LOT FOR COMPLETING IT for once a person managed to do that doesnt happen a lot so thanks again 4 star just for that
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
1)Very stable story from the 1st chapter, 2)the story/scenario drags somewhat but the gags make up for it, 3) I rewrote this review cuz I was disappointed with the ending, the ending was very sloppy, the concepts | worlds introduced could have been expanded on or should never be introduced just for the heck of it with no purpose at the end of the novel 4) very hasty and ending felt the authors intention of wrapping up but he still introduced other worlds 5) very long chapters so dont worry it has so little chapters 6) wish powers(with long cooldown) were used for amusement and inefficiently 7) if the novel was this short then the author should not have made him have amnesia at the end which made him have hasty power up for wrapping up even though my review might sound grumpy I enjoyed this novel until the last 2 chapters which ruined it for me
this was a good read. its a little short for my taste and the character need to have more challenges then what was there. i think he should have had Natasha along with Gwen and more powers. Shenron should have been set free to be a pet or something just to be different but it was still a great story and i loved it. GREAT JOB AUTHOR👍🤗👏
I liked it but the first chapter or 2 wasnt good and the second half of the last chapter wasnt good either. He references his other fan fics and it doesnt work well unless you've read all his other fan fics, but it's worth reading light heartedly cause it made me laugh out loud which is nice. The comedy is honestly one of the only real reason to read it cause other than the comedy it just follows the same path as the mcu movies. There's good action in it sometimes though.
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Awesome fanfic really loved it....................................... Keep up the good work author san hope to read good ones like this from you in the future 🙃🙃🙃
Well it's amazing, short but satisfying I was intending to give 4.5 stars But some people started giving 1 star so **** them, the characters interaction with each other is amazing(or that's what I feel), Well all amazing except, what happend to Natasha
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Good story. I very much enjoyed it and would recommend it to those who like to read anime character powers in comicbook settings.
The story was alright for the first few chapters but got really shit over time first of all the MC is a dumbass one of the first things he does after transmigrating is going to see Tony Stark and Nick Fury meeting because he's a fanboy and guess what he gets caught. Secondly, even though he is a Saiyan he is super nerfed I mean he was bleeding from falling rocks even though he achieved SSJ4 also the reason for his transformation to SSJ was really forced. The story has more plot holes than my country has potholes in the roads (trust me its a lot), the MC also has no impact to the events in Marvel seriously the events are all the same as they are in the movies the MC is basically just watching the movies play out. So overall its pretty shit. Writing Quality: 3/5 Stability of updates: 4/5 Story Development: 1/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 1/5
Great.... I Think. The book was absolutely amazing but iT felt a little bit rushed at the end. The romance was great, the action was pretty good, and the story was realistic! If you have feee time you should definitly read it. He delt with natasha poorly but i would overall gove it a 8.5/10
The story is good but situation regarding Natasha really piss me off . I regret reading this book as I am harem guy but the way you wrote this story really hook me up so you deserve my respect but still super upset for how you dealt the situation regarding Natasha
Liked it alot thx autor i bet even mr lee would be happy reading this it may not be the best or more accurate book ever but is still alot of fun loved it.
One of the most basic tests I measure a story by is the "Indiana Jones" test. Sadly, this story fails that test as the MC has no impact on the outcome of the story. From the progression to the end of the story, it's almost exactly the same as the movies. The differences are trivial, where a character may live that otherwise wouldn't have, but no greater impact than that. This story is easily summed up as watching the MCU movies with one extra hero. That's it, there really nothing more to see. Which is sad as this story had potential, the writing was good, and the updates consistent.
Particularly, the ending is horrible ... But aside from that and the protagonist that the author seems to have struggled to spoil, if you can ignore that, the story is not so bad.
This story was so interesting in the beginning but after chapter 10 the writer start doing some shitty things I don't understand is he trying to destroy this story or just end it the Fastest he can
This story was amazing but after chapter 11 every thing is a bull sh*t I don't know what happened is the writer trying his best to destroy the story or what
Hey continue your fanfic price of freedom before this plss ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Long chapters, nice characters build and development, well let's wait a little bit and see what happens, I will edit the review when the ff reaches good numbers of chapters
Truth be told this is the best marvel fic I've read in my whole life. There's so unnecessary harem. There's no unnecessary characters ( like X-Men). And also chapters are big, like way big. If compared to nowadays marvel fic's than this is pure gold at its finest form. Can't fully express how intense the fic is. The concept or the way it's portrayed is phenomenal. So Please try it guys. The author is a perfectionist, trust me you'll never regret it.
im going to be honest with all of you all, the MC id definitely stupid but he does it because he has the strength to be. A lot of the things are going to follow canon of MCU but there will be a couple of twists. At the end of the day, i only read it because of MC and Gwen Stacy love.
When I read the summary it sounded interesting. Now that I have actually read it I can say with all certainty ... This... is BLOODY!... BRILLIANT!! I recommend that everyone who reads my review read the book it will have you laughing, emotional and in awe at the OP-ness of the MC be because it's OP done right.
Love the concept, hate the execution. MC has the mental capacity of a 10 year old. Even compared to morons like Goku he's still a bit too dumb. Goku is atleast tolerable.
Story was good. Never expected story to go this way. Did feel hirritated at few part of the story 'cause of MC's way yet finishing this was fulfilling
sorry but this is a steaming pile of shit. don't use a race where you just nerf him for shits and giggles. if you want a story where he progresses like everyone does, don't give him power that can demolish a world so easily. and what's up with all the unstable edgy mc? want a new sasuke? he breaks down every other moment like a baby. seriously? if your anywhere near your mc traits, you should get some help
I enjoy the premise and willing to give a lot of leeway to stories that follow along those lines, so I honestly say that this was very disappointing. The MC is just an overpowered fanboy that's there along for the ride. His actions don't change the original plot at all, even when they should. Even before he forgets the storyline, he does nothing and is vindicated by the Ancient One that any change he does will only lead to a worse future. He saves Quicksilver, who seems to not appear afterwards, because that would imply the MC is relevant. He easily beats Cp Marvel, who equals and even overpowers Thanos yet he couldn't stop Thanos directly? And the entire romance with Black Widow makes no sense. There's no reason for her to desire him, especially when she knows he already has someone. She's not some hormonal teenager...
It was a really funny story. sometimes a little too stupid but in the hole definitely a story you could read the best was: "do you need a Hand?" I cried out of laugh
The ff is a good enough one Good pop culture references great job with the finishing could have stopped that half way through the last chapter but you didnt flop it like some others AND THANKS A LOT FOR COMPLETING IT for once a person managed to do that doesnt happen a lot so thanks again 4 star just for that
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
1)Very stable story from the 1st chapter, 2)the story/scenario drags somewhat but the gags make up for it, 3) I rewrote this review cuz I was disappointed with the ending, the ending was very sloppy, the concepts | worlds introduced could have been expanded on or should never be introduced just for the heck of it with no purpose at the end of the novel 4) very hasty and ending felt the authors intention of wrapping up but he still introduced other worlds 5) very long chapters so dont worry it has so little chapters 6) wish powers(with long cooldown) were used for amusement and inefficiently 7) if the novel was this short then the author should not have made him have amnesia at the end which made him have hasty power up for wrapping up even though my review might sound grumpy I enjoyed this novel until the last 2 chapters which ruined it for me
this was a good read. its a little short for my taste and the character need to have more challenges then what was there. i think he should have had Natasha along with Gwen and more powers. Shenron should have been set free to be a pet or something just to be different but it was still a great story and i loved it. GREAT JOB AUTHOR👍🤗👏
I liked it but the first chapter or 2 wasnt good and the second half of the last chapter wasnt good either. He references his other fan fics and it doesnt work well unless you've read all his other fan fics, but it's worth reading light heartedly cause it made me laugh out loud which is nice. The comedy is honestly one of the only real reason to read it cause other than the comedy it just follows the same path as the mcu movies. There's good action in it sometimes though.
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Awesome fanfic really loved it....................................... Keep up the good work author san hope to read good ones like this from you in the future 🙃🙃🙃
Well it's amazing, short but satisfying I was intending to give 4.5 stars But some people started giving 1 star so **** them, the characters interaction with each other is amazing(or that's what I feel), Well all amazing except, what happend to Natasha
Spoiler enthüllen Good story. I very much enjoyed it and would recommend it to those who like to read anime character powers in comicbook settings.
The story was alright for the first few chapters but got really shit over time first of all the MC is a dumbass one of the first things he does after transmigrating is going to see Tony Stark and Nick Fury meeting because he's a fanboy and guess what he gets caught. Secondly, even though he is a Saiyan he is super nerfed I mean he was bleeding from falling rocks even though he achieved SSJ4 also the reason for his transformation to SSJ was really forced. The story has more plot holes than my country has potholes in the roads (trust me its a lot), the MC also has no impact to the events in Marvel seriously the events are all the same as they are in the movies the MC is basically just watching the movies play out. So overall its pretty shit. Writing Quality: 3/5 Stability of updates: 4/5 Story Development: 1/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 1/5
Great.... I Think. The book was absolutely amazing but iT felt a little bit rushed at the end. The romance was great, the action was pretty good, and the story was realistic! If you have feee time you should definitly read it. He delt with natasha poorly but i would overall gove it a 8.5/10
The story is good but situation regarding Natasha really piss me off . I regret reading this book as I am harem guy but the way you wrote this story really hook me up so you deserve my respect but still super upset for how you dealt the situation regarding Natasha
Liked it alot thx autor i bet even mr lee would be happy reading this it may not be the best or more accurate book ever but is still alot of fun loved it.
One of the most basic tests I measure a story by is the "Indiana Jones" test. Sadly, this story fails that test as the MC has no impact on the outcome of the story. From the progression to the end of the story, it's almost exactly the same as the movies. The differences are trivial, where a character may live that otherwise wouldn't have, but no greater impact than that. This story is easily summed up as watching the MCU movies with one extra hero. That's it, there really nothing more to see. Which is sad as this story had potential, the writing was good, and the updates consistent.
Particularly, the ending is horrible ... But aside from that and the protagonist that the author seems to have struggled to spoil, if you can ignore that, the story is not so bad.
This story was so interesting in the beginning but after chapter 10 the writer start doing some shitty things I don't understand is he trying to destroy this story or just end it the Fastest he can
This story was amazing but after chapter 11 every thing is a bull sh*t I don't know what happened is the writer trying his best to destroy the story or what
Hey continue your fanfic price of freedom before this plss ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Long chapters, nice characters build and development, well let's wait a little bit and see what happens, I will edit the review when the ff reaches good numbers of chapters
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