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I is over all a good read 📚 🙂 👌🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
One of the Good novel about pet or monster tamer. It very sad that this novel has to droped. I thank RoadBlock92 for good novel. ..................................................................
This was a good story but the author has stopped writing it. The author says they will never pick up writing it again. It is too bad the idea was goid.
gave up the novel so will never be finished. dosent matter that it was an amazing book now since it will never have an ending................
I thoroughly enjoyed this system driven story. The mc is a friendly and kind teenager who loses his dad in a monster rampage. His mother and sister were in another city when the attack occurred and his older brother was in a dungeon hunting monsters so only he and his father were at home. Due to injuries received during the monstrous attack mc fell into a coma and his mother was told she should turn off his life support. However unable to face such a horrific decision she and his little sister stayed at his bedside for several days and just as they were a out to give up mc awoke with a new system in his head.
this book great when will more chapters come out I want to read the rest of it. do you know when it will be available to read. and how many chapters at a time.
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DO NOT READ, THIS STORY IS DROPPED. sad but true. was a pretty good story and was moving in a really good direction. Now I have to say blah to meet the requirement, yay.
was an enjoyable read with dynamif characters and a unique system that really drew you in but the author had some kind of religious dilemma over the novel so instead of trying to tweak bits to make it suitable to continue they gave up on writing it. Wish they would've tried to continue on with a different approach or something but cant be helped
It’s just a great book and I just love this ,please make more chapters and more interesting storyline Please Please please when does the Main character come and save the day.
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loving this book so far, got a great structure and not many spelling mistakes however in the latest chapters it goes on about the side characters and not about the mc who is who I want to read about. but apart from that great job and keep up the good work
hey love this novel it has a few errors but surprisingly not that many and the story is a great concept. I liked the character growth as well as all the uses the mc has of the system.
Note: To all my readers, this story is only a fiction. I hope all of you do not take the story seriously. This story is not related to real life. This story is purely a fiction.
I usually like these kinds of stories with the character getting a cheat system and all that, but I have to say that this story goes above what I've seen before in stories such as this. The author seems very nice and I always enjoy authors that are active and put messages into their chapters. I don't know enough about how often the author uploads new chapters so I can't say much on that but I enjoy reading and will continue to do so.
This is a good and refreshing piece of work. The character development and the world background are pretty well done, the interaction between the user, his family and the system are something I find myself enjoying quite a bit while reading this
the story is a really good read but I will say that like all the other stories I like the update time kills me. 🤦🏽♂️SMH. I would still recommend it to others though lol
awesome novel , well defined story at least u know where systems are coming from , with each person having system atleast stats can be seen by everyone , whereas in other novel only mc is privy of that info. and talent is well defined everyone know what theirs is unlike in other novel only some super dooper strong people can feel talent of a person. Keep up the good work buddy u r doing great , and u know pun between system and universe guardian 😂
one of the better stories I have read in a while I like the new take on the system store that the story is going down and the pets r cool as well
for the rest I am not going back and I'm still not sure that I saw was a good friend and a friend who is the most famous person I have been in and I felt like
the core story is great and the characters are really solid I'm on almost 400th chapter and still no harem for you harem haters my big problem with it is the beginning off the book is rough and dont always make sense gets much better as you read but theres lots of repeats such as paragraphs and even some chapters and this author is sooooo long winded and likes to to do a lot of shameless filler (think naruto) not the storyline but filler writing style with great core story
Really loving this story so far!! System stories can be hit or miss with me, but I really like what you are doing with the system. Looking forward to where you take this story. The only criticism I have is the English is not the best, but it is certainly not the worst I've read on this site either.
I really think this novel deserves a high rating, good quality, likable characters, the great clans aren't extremely arrogant they have a good understanding and actual members listen to the elders, no jealousy. The Pokémon aspect is polished and still uniquely its own thing. Main character actually trains hard, and soon his family will not be bottom feeders aswell, no desperate protecting of his family. Good work, keep it up.
Tl;dr at bottom To anyone who is tired of waiting for astral pet store to update and are looking for something similar, i would not recommend this series. It is basically the opposite, in APS the story maily revolves about the store, the system is stingy, and su ping is selfish, and in this the story is mostly focused on lucas training, the system is too generous, and lucas is too kind and borderline useless. And because it seems that this story is building itself up to be the opposite to APS its just not as interesting, I have problems other than the story only being a subversion of expectations set up by APS, the first is that the system is too cheat, there has never really been any challeng for lucas, second the power sytem is a little too specific it becomes ridiculous, and finally the characters are either bland and one dimensional or unlikable. Tl;dr it just feels like the entire schtick of this series is to subvert expectations, ours or the people in the book, and it really suffers for that. Its not abhorrantly bad but ist not that spectacular either.
So far.. it's good. It's different from the astral pet but good. Love the nursery system and was name Sery. hehehe. Love the interaction of the family as well. His goal making the cute monster to be strong was also genius. hehehe
keep it up man your doing great I wish you had a clone or two but hey still doing great and the book is still great as well if you haven't read it yet then .......IDK what your waiting for go...go....read the book..........why are you still here......lol
great read, always interesting,good characters and pets, it has evolution and leveling up and cultivation techniques and a devoted family system for the main character
Hello everyone. This will be my last message here. First of all, I have no intention at all to continue this story. Since I cannot delete the novel, I do some edit based on some opinion I get from asking around because I am afraid the sin will continue. Even so, I cannot continue the story. I am sorry. Second, I read a few comments asking me to give the story to other author. I want to but I cannot do that because the idea is mine and if the story continues, I am considered to take part in the story. So, I am afraid I will still get the sin. So, once again, I am sorry. Lastly, I am really sorry to everyone again. I hope everyone can forgive me. Thank you.
I is over all a good read 📚 🙂 👌🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐾🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
One of the Good novel about pet or monster tamer. It very sad that this novel has to droped. I thank RoadBlock92 for good novel. ..................................................................
This was a good story but the author has stopped writing it. The author says they will never pick up writing it again. It is too bad the idea was goid.
gave up the novel so will never be finished. dosent matter that it was an amazing book now since it will never have an ending................
I thoroughly enjoyed this system driven story. The mc is a friendly and kind teenager who loses his dad in a monster rampage. His mother and sister were in another city when the attack occurred and his older brother was in a dungeon hunting monsters so only he and his father were at home. Due to injuries received during the monstrous attack mc fell into a coma and his mother was told she should turn off his life support. However unable to face such a horrific decision she and his little sister stayed at his bedside for several days and just as they were a out to give up mc awoke with a new system in his head.
this book great when will more chapters come out I want to read the rest of it. do you know when it will be available to read. and how many chapters at a time.
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DO NOT READ, THIS STORY IS DROPPED. sad but true. was a pretty good story and was moving in a really good direction. Now I have to say blah to meet the requirement, yay.
was an enjoyable read with dynamif characters and a unique system that really drew you in but the author had some kind of religious dilemma over the novel so instead of trying to tweak bits to make it suitable to continue they gave up on writing it. Wish they would've tried to continue on with a different approach or something but cant be helped
It’s just a great book and I just love this ,please make more chapters and more interesting storyline Please Please please when does the Main character come and save the day.
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loving this book so far, got a great structure and not many spelling mistakes however in the latest chapters it goes on about the side characters and not about the mc who is who I want to read about. but apart from that great job and keep up the good work
hey love this novel it has a few errors but surprisingly not that many and the story is a great concept. I liked the character growth as well as all the uses the mc has of the system.
Note: To all my readers, this story is only a fiction. I hope all of you do not take the story seriously. This story is not related to real life. This story is purely a fiction.
I usually like these kinds of stories with the character getting a cheat system and all that, but I have to say that this story goes above what I've seen before in stories such as this. The author seems very nice and I always enjoy authors that are active and put messages into their chapters. I don't know enough about how often the author uploads new chapters so I can't say much on that but I enjoy reading and will continue to do so.
This is a good and refreshing piece of work. The character development and the world background are pretty well done, the interaction between the user, his family and the system are something I find myself enjoying quite a bit while reading this
the story is a really good read but I will say that like all the other stories I like the update time kills me. 🤦🏽♂️SMH. I would still recommend it to others though lol
awesome novel , well defined story at least u know where systems are coming from , with each person having system atleast stats can be seen by everyone , whereas in other novel only mc is privy of that info. and talent is well defined everyone know what theirs is unlike in other novel only some super dooper strong people can feel talent of a person. Keep up the good work buddy u r doing great , and u know pun between system and universe guardian 😂
one of the better stories I have read in a while I like the new take on the system store that the story is going down and the pets r cool as well
for the rest I am not going back and I'm still not sure that I saw was a good friend and a friend who is the most famous person I have been in and I felt like
the core story is great and the characters are really solid I'm on almost 400th chapter and still no harem for you harem haters my big problem with it is the beginning off the book is rough and dont always make sense gets much better as you read but theres lots of repeats such as paragraphs and even some chapters and this author is sooooo long winded and likes to to do a lot of shameless filler (think naruto) not the storyline but filler writing style with great core story
Really loving this story so far!! System stories can be hit or miss with me, but I really like what you are doing with the system. Looking forward to where you take this story. The only criticism I have is the English is not the best, but it is certainly not the worst I've read on this site either.
I really think this novel deserves a high rating, good quality, likable characters, the great clans aren't extremely arrogant they have a good understanding and actual members listen to the elders, no jealousy. The Pokémon aspect is polished and still uniquely its own thing. Main character actually trains hard, and soon his family will not be bottom feeders aswell, no desperate protecting of his family. Good work, keep it up.
Tl;dr at bottom To anyone who is tired of waiting for astral pet store to update and are looking for something similar, i would not recommend this series. It is basically the opposite, in APS the story maily revolves about the store, the system is stingy, and su ping is selfish, and in this the story is mostly focused on lucas training, the system is too generous, and lucas is too kind and borderline useless. And because it seems that this story is building itself up to be the opposite to APS its just not as interesting, I have problems other than the story only being a subversion of expectations set up by APS, the first is that the system is too cheat, there has never really been any challeng for lucas, second the power sytem is a little too specific it becomes ridiculous, and finally the characters are either bland and one dimensional or unlikable. Tl;dr it just feels like the entire schtick of this series is to subvert expectations, ours or the people in the book, and it really suffers for that. Its not abhorrantly bad but ist not that spectacular either.
So far.. it's good. It's different from the astral pet but good. Love the nursery system and was name Sery. hehehe. Love the interaction of the family as well. His goal making the cute monster to be strong was also genius. hehehe
keep it up man your doing great I wish you had a clone or two but hey still doing great and the book is still great as well if you haven't read it yet then .......IDK what your waiting for go...go....read the book..........why are you still here......lol
great read, always interesting,good characters and pets, it has evolution and leveling up and cultivation techniques and a devoted family system for the main character
Hello everyone. This will be my last message here. First of all, I have no intention at all to continue this story. Since I cannot delete the novel, I do some edit based on some opinion I get from asking around because I am afraid the sin will continue. Even so, I cannot continue the story. I am sorry. Second, I read a few comments asking me to give the story to other author. I want to but I cannot do that because the idea is mine and if the story continues, I am considered to take part in the story. So, I am afraid I will still get the sin. So, once again, I am sorry. Lastly, I am really sorry to everyone again. I hope everyone can forgive me. Thank you.