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I reall like the story but it is really confusing at the start of some chapters as I have no idea who the heck is talking and whoโs POV weโre seeing the story from. Makes for a lot of guess work
Frankly, at the end of the work I was significantly disappointed. The first 30 chapters before the space training were great. But it seems that after them the author ran out of ideas and does not know what to write. 20 Chapters he wanted to meet with old acquaintances, but did not meet. Half of the chapters are descriptions of something without action or even talking. And those who were supposedly his lovers were, in fact, forgotten. I think that the author simply ran out of plots and just shoves everything he comes up with on the go.
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I'll give 5 stars. I enjoyed this book. It's a different concept and I don't see touhou fanfics that often. It's an underrated strong world with plenty of waifu.
I wonder how long it's going to take for this fic to either stop uploading or finish, because I have no clue where this is heading to.............................................................might take forever.
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Have a 5* rating. Just Include my Rumia from the harem Please! PLEASE! RUMIA IS THE THE BEST, IMMA LET HER BITE MY HUMAN MEAT AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Writing is good and so is the grammar. MC is OP yet it isnโt boring due to his interactions with the other characters. Definetly an enjoyable read. Highly recommended.
Continue this its really good.. just up until the story gets crowded if it ever does. Hope he keeps things as is as is if he gets crowded it won't be the same.
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Writing Quality- 5/5, haven't seen many, if any, errors so far and the descriptions and interactions are just wonderful and logical, but at the same time they are funny. Stability of Updates- 5/5, stable updates, only with a few hitches here and there, but those were unavoidable. Story Development- 5/5, no proper plot and more like just goofing around and having fun, but it's still hilarious and extremely entertaining. Character Design- 5/5, MC is basically in Killua's body with freezer powers and abilities, but buffed, like accidentally destroying galaxies buff. World Background- 5/5, it's a fanfic in Touhou with decent world building, but the MC has never seen Touhou, and everything is described pretty well and doesn't change randomly like in other fan-fics.
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Dropped at chapter three(3) 3/5 stars even though the writing Quality is very good ( 5/5 ) My problem is the MC of this book. Why? The MC gets the whole Experience and powers from Frieza and was a grown dude before coming to the Touhou world but somehow he gets embarresd if someone sees his bum or he talks to a girl. I didnt had such a big problem with that at the start but then it goes on with the troupe of him beeing a "stuttering" "childish" mess when hes talking with a woman. Getting a red face and saying to the woman "Beautyfull", at this point i only waited for him to get nosebleed or smthg. Then he gets lead around his nose to show his powers to her. It feels to me like your typical anime main character. Goody two shoes. The Mc just feels so off, if you read his supposed backstory (experience from Frieza) and get this instead. And again the writing Quality and the english is great and i wish the author the best. I may come back to this novel but for now i will read something else.
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good novel, please don't drop it. I really enjoyed it, and the others must have thought the same. But maybe it's different from some people who don't like auto Overpower MC
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Even though ive never seen the anime lf this world or i think it's a game im not sure but i don't mind id mc is overpowered i like the jokes and plot this world is going towards and i hope you keep going.
so I've read it all, and i love it! so here's The Rating with Other Things: Writing Quality: a great grammar, I saw a little bit of spelling errors but it's completely normal to happen to everyone, so it's fine. so a 5 stars Character Design: everyone that have been showed until now is very good and accurate for Touhou characters, and for the new characters you've made have unique personality and looks. so a 5 stars Story Development: smooth, great, fun, interesting with good and unique interactions and relationships, and with each event happens even though some events ends a lil fast, and needs a little expanding but it still fun and interesting. 5 stars World Background: great backstories that makes sense to the characters and the way how the world works, and the KI involved in the story with magic and how it uses by gods is very interesting and very cool. so 5 stars Stability of Updates: now that instability with updating the story for months and even a year, makes this fic falls down for fans who thinks this fic dropped, or got bored from waiting for it then to move on, which is PRETTY bad for this fic for how unique, original and great it is, so i really hope you to come back by any chance and make more chapters for it, its really good and fun fic and people's loving it so please come back. but for that instability, this will get 3 stars until something happen. we will wait. ( Some Advises): try to do some of touhou canon events but with killua involved in it, and killua spending some time with touhou characters to build some unique relationships and interactions with them, killua getting some new abilities, powers and skills, and some cool fights, this will help this fic a lot to grow and be more better. there is some wikis and people and videos to help with some knowledge. that will help this fic to grow even more to be excellent and fun fic, and to grow for people to have fun with it with you. so i hope you see this and do something about it, it will be a huge shame if this got dropped. so take you're time to make some ideas for it and have fun! we will wait for you. have a nice day.
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I reall like the story but it is really confusing at the start of some chapters as I have no idea who the heck is talking and whoโs POV weโre seeing the story from. Makes for a lot of guess work
Frankly, at the end of the work I was significantly disappointed. The first 30 chapters before the space training were great. But it seems that after them the author ran out of ideas and does not know what to write. 20 Chapters he wanted to meet with old acquaintances, but did not meet. Half of the chapters are descriptions of something without action or even talking. And those who were supposedly his lovers were, in fact, forgotten. I think that the author simply ran out of plots and just shoves everything he comes up with on the go.
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I'll give 5 stars. I enjoyed this book. It's a different concept and I don't see touhou fanfics that often. It's an underrated strong world with plenty of waifu.
I wonder how long it's going to take for this fic to either stop uploading or finish, because I have no clue where this is heading to.............................................................might take forever.
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Have a 5* rating. Just Include my Rumia from the harem Please! PLEASE! RUMIA IS THE THE BEST, IMMA LET HER BITE MY HUMAN MEAT AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Writing is good and so is the grammar. MC is OP yet it isnโt boring due to his interactions with the other characters. Definetly an enjoyable read. Highly recommended.
Continue this its really good.. just up until the story gets crowded if it ever does. Hope he keeps things as is as is if he gets crowded it won't be the same.
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Writing Quality- 5/5, haven't seen many, if any, errors so far and the descriptions and interactions are just wonderful and logical, but at the same time they are funny. Stability of Updates- 5/5, stable updates, only with a few hitches here and there, but those were unavoidable. Story Development- 5/5, no proper plot and more like just goofing around and having fun, but it's still hilarious and extremely entertaining. Character Design- 5/5, MC is basically in Killua's body with freezer powers and abilities, but buffed, like accidentally destroying galaxies buff. World Background- 5/5, it's a fanfic in Touhou with decent world building, but the MC has never seen Touhou, and everything is described pretty well and doesn't change randomly like in other fan-fics.
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Dropped at chapter three(3) 3/5 stars even though the writing Quality is very good ( 5/5 ) My problem is the MC of this book. Why? The MC gets the whole Experience and powers from Frieza and was a grown dude before coming to the Touhou world but somehow he gets embarresd if someone sees his bum or he talks to a girl. I didnt had such a big problem with that at the start but then it goes on with the troupe of him beeing a "stuttering" "childish" mess when hes talking with a woman. Getting a red face and saying to the woman "Beautyfull", at this point i only waited for him to get nosebleed or smthg. Then he gets lead around his nose to show his powers to her. It feels to me like your typical anime main character. Goody two shoes. The Mc just feels so off, if you read his supposed backstory (experience from Frieza) and get this instead. And again the writing Quality and the english is great and i wish the author the best. I may come back to this novel but for now i will read something else.
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good novel, please don't drop it. I really enjoyed it, and the others must have thought the same. But maybe it's different from some people who don't like auto Overpower MC
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Even though ive never seen the anime lf this world or i think it's a game im not sure but i don't mind id mc is overpowered i like the jokes and plot this world is going towards and i hope you keep going.
so I've read it all, and i love it! so here's The Rating with Other Things: Writing Quality: a great grammar, I saw a little bit of spelling errors but it's completely normal to happen to everyone, so it's fine. so a 5 stars Character Design: everyone that have been showed until now is very good and accurate for Touhou characters, and for the new characters you've made have unique personality and looks. so a 5 stars Story Development: smooth, great, fun, interesting with good and unique interactions and relationships, and with each event happens even though some events ends a lil fast, and needs a little expanding but it still fun and interesting. 5 stars World Background: great backstories that makes sense to the characters and the way how the world works, and the KI involved in the story with magic and how it uses by gods is very interesting and very cool. so 5 stars Stability of Updates: now that instability with updating the story for months and even a year, makes this fic falls down for fans who thinks this fic dropped, or got bored from waiting for it then to move on, which is PRETTY bad for this fic for how unique, original and great it is, so i really hope you to come back by any chance and make more chapters for it, its really good and fun fic and people's loving it so please come back. but for that instability, this will get 3 stars until something happen. we will wait. ( Some Advises): try to do some of touhou canon events but with killua involved in it, and killua spending some time with touhou characters to build some unique relationships and interactions with them, killua getting some new abilities, powers and skills, and some cool fights, this will help this fic a lot to grow and be more better. there is some wikis and people and videos to help with some knowledge. that will help this fic to grow even more to be excellent and fun fic, and to grow for people to have fun with it with you. so i hope you see this and do something about it, it will be a huge shame if this got dropped. so take you're time to make some ideas for it and have fun! we will wait for you. have a nice day.