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It’s all over the place the author rips off several others sources on WebNovel as well as one piece
Laugh so hard with the one piece reference, like seriously haki and devil fruits hahahahahaha you got me really there author san🤣🤣🤣🤣........
I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body,and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works
I am impressed by the plot. Giving the writing quality a chance to improve. The plot itself is really good and it’s not a waste of time. I like how the author portrayed his.characters.
Well, I just want to support a friend. The plot of this story is great and if everyone gives it a try, I am sure you guys will like it. Try it and you will love it!
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
My brain has turned into mush by reading the first 2 chapters, I think I've developed autism from the mass geocide that's destroyed my brain cells
Another non Chinese author trying to write a Chinese book with nothing new except the system and doesn't realize a lot of people have gotten tired of the regular Chinese cliche.
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The grammar is dead, need proof reading. I'm pulling my own eyes out after this review posted due to very bad Chinese to English translated novel. I would jump down a sea of crocodiles for the nouns and adjectives misplaced everywhere. Also, after my death, please ask the author to take up English classes, not just copy word to word from raw novel websites, it hurts my very soul that I am now entering reincarnation.
This work is sheet the author bqlance lot of powerful art, bloodline, body. But the MC is a piece of sheet. What is this? Why are their are cultivation realm if the MC can fight a cultivator that have a 6 realms than him what is this sheet!! fok off author
Why does wvery fantasy cultivation novel always have harems in it I didnt read the book and im randomly rating stars so dont take it to heart
Grammar could be better other then that astoundingly solid novel that fits all my tastes Only othe Problem besides grammar is its not fully free of course ik the author needs some way to make money so M just joking really.
I don't really read cultivators book but this one is a definite must read! Check it out! Keep up the good work author!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The grammar is so bad it makes me wanna throw up. Everything else is completely fine, but then you have the most simple mistakes that shouldn’t even be there if he just reread what he was putting doen
The story is good and the plot and the world-building the mistakes on grammar are understandable. There are so many info dumps and filler every chapter there is another info and in the next chapter, there is also. It's like never-ending info, you can make an auxiliary chapter about powers and all so even if we have forgotten what you write because of many info we can read it. The relationship is forced sometimes that's why it is sometimes awkward.
I tried reading this story but I just couldn't get past the terrible grammar. The fact that I have to read over a single sentence multiple times before I find out what he's trying to say is absolutely ridiculous. It would be a wonderful story if the grammar and writing is fixed but until that day I suggest not to read
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Really good premise especially about founding his Legions army. Nepali honi chance payo bhane garx ni. Bro i am also from Nepal and have recently gotten into this genre during this lockdowns and started writing recently , and had seen your comment about discord for Nepali Authors in the webnovel Could you hook me in & also i am pretty new to this Webnovel platform and don't know about its coin system could you enlighten me.
Why is the He written inseid quotation marks? Is he a female actually? Or Is he in deep stages of denial. .
I haven't completed the book but it got me hooked from the first chapter. This is the first time I am reading a book about cultivation but I can say it was worth it. The author has a wild imagination which he portrayed perfectly and the world background is also detailed. I like the way the author introduced the world to the readers in the very first chapter. I hope the author continues on with the book.
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Each chapter is as long as twice or thrice of normal fantasy novels. Though I read 90 chapters only, it took me 2 days to do so and I think that much must be worth 200+ ch. Also the story and plot is awesome. I love OP and here it is OP. Moreover it's balanced as the mc also gets to suffer a lot but this is what makes it intriguing. The mc has potential to surpass the heaven itself as the heaven were fearful to even seal his talent. (That in itself shows the enormous potentials it has). The novel also has many twists and turns like how he got other bloodlines from System, how he got new physique in lucks and opportunities and there were events out of expectation, like the betrayal of his adoptive grandfather(to which there is reasonable story as well). Most importantly, The mc knows when to take heed of system and so it's not dependent on system. The MC's hardwork is more provident as you read the chapters and understands that Mc has the determination and understanding that only he himself can become stronger. I don't think that giving arts and techniques to others is bad since every mc has his friends, brothers or subordinates that they bring to the top in a cultivation level, moreover once you read you will realise the it's not that much OP techniques given to other, compared to what our Mc itself have. With the best world building you could ever have, I already have the general view of the Martial world, also called outer realm, only by reading the 90 chapters. The universe is the world they live in and there are outer realms where mc is born, also dragon realm, heavenly realm, and wonderful plot along with that hidden in a story where the heavenly realm is the plotter villian of his parents and him. There is also that Nine heavens and ten Earth mentioned by a random war spirit which could possible be past life mystery. Updating stability is awesome, It only took me two days to finish the novels but author released 4 chapters in that time, leading from the growth of ch90 to 94.. Also the author is talkative and answer your queries, he is tolerating the cricitism and answering to that! He is the best author you could get.. Moreover as you slowly read, you will realise the awesomeness of growth type novels as the MC's personality slowly changes.. As for writting quality? You could hardly get spelling or grammatical mistakes, equal to impossible. Hmm I'll only say this, for me this novel belongs to the best of the novels in my heart. You might feel dissapointed with the turns of events and sometimes unreasonable but what you don't know is that, there is no unreasonable acts in the novel! and if you continue reading, everything will be slowly revealed, just like a wonderful art of revealing.
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Very bad writing and too much filler it sucks ........................................................................................................
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Don't me mind the stars. This is the review after we reached the last volume. This novel itself for its own story is too bad. My character pacing was too bad, the world background wasn't explained, updates were not stable, story development was way off the mark. As for the writing quality, don't even get started on that one. But actually, I got a pretty damn good idea and this idea is going to save this novel. I have started a series 'Eternal Series', I've got the idea for five stories including this, while a total number of stories will be eight. Fighting For Eternity is going to be the first and the last story for this series. This story holds much more than a casual story. It holds the idea, spoilers, and background for other stories. So I suggest reading it if you like the first hundred free chapters. My second book 'Magic and Martial War God' and the third book 'Eternal Faith' follow a different yet connected story with Fighting For Eternity. So you can read the free chapters on all three stories and then finally decide whether to read it nor not. Of course, If you don't read one of these novels while not reading the previous one, it doesn't matter. You just need to enjoy and if you can't find enjoyment, drop it.
It’s all over the place the author rips off several others sources on WebNovel as well as one piece
Laugh so hard with the one piece reference, like seriously haki and devil fruits hahahahahaha you got me really there author san🤣🤣🤣🤣........
I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body,and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works
I am impressed by the plot. Giving the writing quality a chance to improve. The plot itself is really good and it’s not a waste of time. I like how the author portrayed his.characters.
Well, I just want to support a friend. The plot of this story is great and if everyone gives it a try, I am sure you guys will like it. Try it and you will love it!
👌🌍😂😂😂😂👌👌👌😂😂😂👌👌👌😂😂😂😂👌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👌🔥👌🔥🔥👌🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥😂🔥🔥😂😂🔥
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
My brain has turned into mush by reading the first 2 chapters, I think I've developed autism from the mass geocide that's destroyed my brain cells
Another non Chinese author trying to write a Chinese book with nothing new except the system and doesn't realize a lot of people have gotten tired of the regular Chinese cliche.
ifidgkgdkfsjsfjafnjfzcmvkzhsgkfzfxkstsfdhStkrajafkFKfKjfjdJffkaktataktskkgstkskfsgskfskkfslgskyddglktsrkaxgkgsfmkrfhkjWhehehshdhsjjsjsoakkqpwgwgwjwksj vs hw
The grammar is dead, need proof reading. I'm pulling my own eyes out after this review posted due to very bad Chinese to English translated novel. I would jump down a sea of crocodiles for the nouns and adjectives misplaced everywhere. Also, after my death, please ask the author to take up English classes, not just copy word to word from raw novel websites, it hurts my very soul that I am now entering reincarnation.
This work is sheet the author bqlance lot of powerful art, bloodline, body. But the MC is a piece of sheet. What is this? Why are their are cultivation realm if the MC can fight a cultivator that have a 6 realms than him what is this sheet!! fok off author
Why does wvery fantasy cultivation novel always have harems in it I didnt read the book and im randomly rating stars so dont take it to heart
Grammar could be better other then that astoundingly solid novel that fits all my tastes Only othe Problem besides grammar is its not fully free of course ik the author needs some way to make money so M just joking really.
I don't really read cultivators book but this one is a definite must read! Check it out! Keep up the good work author!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The grammar is so bad it makes me wanna throw up. Everything else is completely fine, but then you have the most simple mistakes that shouldn’t even be there if he just reread what he was putting doen
The story is good and the plot and the world-building the mistakes on grammar are understandable. There are so many info dumps and filler every chapter there is another info and in the next chapter, there is also. It's like never-ending info, you can make an auxiliary chapter about powers and all so even if we have forgotten what you write because of many info we can read it. The relationship is forced sometimes that's why it is sometimes awkward.
I tried reading this story but I just couldn't get past the terrible grammar. The fact that I have to read over a single sentence multiple times before I find out what he's trying to say is absolutely ridiculous. It would be a wonderful story if the grammar and writing is fixed but until that day I suggest not to read
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Really good premise especially about founding his Legions army. Nepali honi chance payo bhane garx ni. Bro i am also from Nepal and have recently gotten into this genre during this lockdowns and started writing recently , and had seen your comment about discord for Nepali Authors in the webnovel Could you hook me in & also i am pretty new to this Webnovel platform and don't know about its coin system could you enlighten me.
Why is the He written inseid quotation marks? Is he a female actually? Or Is he in deep stages of denial. .
I haven't completed the book but it got me hooked from the first chapter. This is the first time I am reading a book about cultivation but I can say it was worth it. The author has a wild imagination which he portrayed perfectly and the world background is also detailed. I like the way the author introduced the world to the readers in the very first chapter. I hope the author continues on with the book.
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Each chapter is as long as twice or thrice of normal fantasy novels. Though I read 90 chapters only, it took me 2 days to do so and I think that much must be worth 200+ ch. Also the story and plot is awesome. I love OP and here it is OP. Moreover it's balanced as the mc also gets to suffer a lot but this is what makes it intriguing. The mc has potential to surpass the heaven itself as the heaven were fearful to even seal his talent. (That in itself shows the enormous potentials it has). The novel also has many twists and turns like how he got other bloodlines from System, how he got new physique in lucks and opportunities and there were events out of expectation, like the betrayal of his adoptive grandfather(to which there is reasonable story as well). Most importantly, The mc knows when to take heed of system and so it's not dependent on system. The MC's hardwork is more provident as you read the chapters and understands that Mc has the determination and understanding that only he himself can become stronger. I don't think that giving arts and techniques to others is bad since every mc has his friends, brothers or subordinates that they bring to the top in a cultivation level, moreover once you read you will realise the it's not that much OP techniques given to other, compared to what our Mc itself have. With the best world building you could ever have, I already have the general view of the Martial world, also called outer realm, only by reading the 90 chapters. The universe is the world they live in and there are outer realms where mc is born, also dragon realm, heavenly realm, and wonderful plot along with that hidden in a story where the heavenly realm is the plotter villian of his parents and him. There is also that Nine heavens and ten Earth mentioned by a random war spirit which could possible be past life mystery. Updating stability is awesome, It only took me two days to finish the novels but author released 4 chapters in that time, leading from the growth of ch90 to 94.. Also the author is talkative and answer your queries, he is tolerating the cricitism and answering to that! He is the best author you could get.. Moreover as you slowly read, you will realise the awesomeness of growth type novels as the MC's personality slowly changes.. As for writting quality? You could hardly get spelling or grammatical mistakes, equal to impossible. Hmm I'll only say this, for me this novel belongs to the best of the novels in my heart. You might feel dissapointed with the turns of events and sometimes unreasonable but what you don't know is that, there is no unreasonable acts in the novel! and if you continue reading, everything will be slowly revealed, just like a wonderful art of revealing.
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Very bad writing and too much filler it sucks ........................................................................................................
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Don't me mind the stars. This is the review after we reached the last volume. This novel itself for its own story is too bad. My character pacing was too bad, the world background wasn't explained, updates were not stable, story development was way off the mark. As for the writing quality, don't even get started on that one. But actually, I got a pretty damn good idea and this idea is going to save this novel. I have started a series 'Eternal Series', I've got the idea for five stories including this, while a total number of stories will be eight. Fighting For Eternity is going to be the first and the last story for this series. This story holds much more than a casual story. It holds the idea, spoilers, and background for other stories. So I suggest reading it if you like the first hundred free chapters. My second book 'Magic and Martial War God' and the third book 'Eternal Faith' follow a different yet connected story with Fighting For Eternity. So you can read the free chapters on all three stories and then finally decide whether to read it nor not. Of course, If you don't read one of these novels while not reading the previous one, it doesn't matter. You just need to enjoy and if you can't find enjoyment, drop it.