"Hmm, this task is quite complicated." Fei murmured while thinking deeply, and then let a sigh out of his mouth saying "Well, I better enjoy my time with my friend instead of thinking too much." With that thought in his mind, he walked out of the pagoda.
After that, he entered the first trial area, and in front of him, every one of his group was present. The moment, he entered everyone saw him and cheered before he could say anything. Suddenly, three figures rushed towards him like a hungry tiger, pouncing in his body.
"Thud" Just by the impact of them, Fei fell hard on the ground. He was completely defense, so he couldn't stand straight. Due to the impact, Fei was shouting in fake pain "Ouch, which elephant fell over me?"
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