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kenapa ga dilanjutkan lagi thor? ayolah lanjutin lagi, apa lagi saya suka dengan novel fanfic yg Op seperti ini, udah MCnya ga naif, bijak, dan juga ditambah ada NTR.nya jadi saya jadi Tambah suka.. yg penting MC.nya jngan ampe kena NTR:v, tpi keknya ga bakalan deh, soalnya aja anak.nya aja dideketin cowo lain MC.nya langsung marah, apalagi istrinya awkwkwk, tpi ditambah dengan kharisma.nya+systemnya ga bakalan kena NTR MC.nya, awkwkwk.. intinya next ditunggu thorrrrrr!!!! jangan lupa dunia Fairy tail, Apotheosis, dan juga Matrial Peak, jangan Lupa juga comot semua Heroine nya Yang Kai apa lagi Su Yan yg Bodynya Semehoy(ｑβ‘βΏβ‘ｑ)
WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives.
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yahahaha mantap, meski ini R-18 tp gw suka MC pindahΒ² dunia wkwkwkw, novel pertama gw yg FanFict-nya cukup kental hehehehe. Btw yg punya rekomen FanFict bagus tolong komen dong wkwkwk. btw , dari segi penulisan udh bagus, nyaman buat dibaca! good job Thor!
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Mantap ditunggu sampe dunia soul land ..............ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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bruh this looks so interesting, author plz translated to English.................................................................................................
Mantap.........................................mantap..........................mantap.........................................mantap......................... Kalau bisa min pergi juga ku dunia soul land ambil semua wanita disana π
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Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.
Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.
Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.
Mantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππ
Wkwkw... Lanjutkan author Ceritanya bagus dan sangat terasa adengan NTRnya Pokoknya lanjut deh tetep saya kasi bintang 5 ππππππππππππππππππππππ
ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ ΠΡΡΡΠΎ
kenapa ga dilanjutkan lagi thor? ayolah lanjutin lagi, apa lagi saya suka dengan novel fanfic yg Op seperti ini, udah MCnya ga naif, bijak, dan juga ditambah ada NTR.nya jadi saya jadi Tambah suka.. yg penting MC.nya jngan ampe kena NTR:v, tpi keknya ga bakalan deh, soalnya aja anak.nya aja dideketin cowo lain MC.nya langsung marah, apalagi istrinya awkwkwk, tpi ditambah dengan kharisma.nya+systemnya ga bakalan kena NTR MC.nya, awkwkwk.. intinya next ditunggu thorrrrrr!!!! jangan lupa dunia Fairy tail, Apotheosis, dan juga Matrial Peak, jangan Lupa juga comot semua Heroine nya Yang Kai apa lagi Su Yan yg Bodynya Semehoy(ｑβ‘βΏβ‘ｑ)
WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives. WARNING WARNING WARNING MC shares his wives.
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πππ-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
yahahaha mantap, meski ini R-18 tp gw suka MC pindahΒ² dunia wkwkwkw, novel pertama gw yg FanFict-nya cukup kental hehehehe. Btw yg punya rekomen FanFict bagus tolong komen dong wkwkwk. btw , dari segi penulisan udh bagus, nyaman buat dibaca! good job Thor!
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is there an english version ?[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem
Nex chapter min? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Mantap ditunggu sampe dunia soul land ..............ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Mantap kalo bisa banyakin adegan ngewe nya sensei !!! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahajahahaahahhhahhaaaahaahhaa
bruh this looks so interesting, author plz translated to English.................................................................................................
Mantap.........................................mantap..........................mantap.........................................mantap......................... Kalau bisa min pergi juga ku dunia soul land ambil semua wanita disana π
................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .................. .
................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
ππ»ππ»ππππ»πππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»πππ»ππ»ππππππ»ππ»πππππππππππππππππππππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»
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Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.
Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.
Thanks for the chapter keep writing and hope you post soon and keep up and don't drop and waiting for new chapters to read. Great work so keep up.
Mantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππMantap lanjutkan πππ πππ πππ
Wkwkw... Lanjutkan author Ceritanya bagus dan sangat terasa adengan NTRnya Pokoknya lanjut deh tetep saya kasi bintang 5 ππππππππππππππππππππππ