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Loving this book. Believable way of thinking of the MC, very nice writing style and a great setting. Not much action, but a very nice book to read.
Here and there a little inconsistency and minor writing flaws, but overall incredibly enjoyable. Very nice fantasy setting as well. Can't wait for future chapters.
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I must say, this story is hella nice, it has some unique points about it, and although it is regretful that the athur is abit busy lately and unable to post dailly, i still like the story.
Me gusta mucho este estilo de historia de sistema tienda, y como van mejorando su entorno; esperaré con ansías más capítulos. Gracias por no abandonar la novela, solo reuniré paciencia para esperar los nuevos capítulos 🤩🤩🤩💖💖💖
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I love this book it is eell thought out 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️😂💕😍😂❤️😍😂😂😭😔😭☺️👌👌😒☺️😍😩👑☺️😍💕😍💕👑😔😂😍☺️😭😩😭💕😭😩💕👍😩👍😩👍
Very similar in premise to Astral Pet Store (APS) so if you like that then you will probably like this one. Early on there are what I felt are breaks in the logic that make the MC feel rash and on the stupid side. It feels like these are a result of the author info dumping while setting up the multiple worlds the MC will be traveling through. Although, when read in context with the story, it seems like the MC just lets the fact that he has a system goes to his head for a few chapters: I have system->I must become all powerful->Only best for me, no weaklings allowed (jk a little :P). This is made a little worse because the author is hurrying to get into the actual story and explain the base mechanics of the story. So it would have benefitted from a few more chapters in the intro, maybe a little interaction with the little sister before she goes to school or something to break up the info dump and make the MC's thought process seem more organic than arrogant? Anyway, while parts of the early story feel a bit forced, it is still a good story that goes in a different direction from APS as it focuses more on the adventure aspect (in what I have read so far).
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this is a really good book and it definitley shows that they know what they are doing. I have read too many books where it is just a repeat of the same plot over and over and this book is a good refresher of how they should be written.
pretty nice and good story , usage of the system plot isn't the op , its more on equivalent exchange tho I hope it add some romance or harem and a lot of action ill awaits the nxt chap
This novel is a copy of APS, you have about 20-25% chance that the author is going to reply to comments about plotholes or grammar mistakes and from what Ive seen, a 100% chance he wont fix them after saying he will, and there are a lot of grammar mistakes or just poorly written sentences, many of which could be fixed by the author rereading his chapters but he clearly doesnt do that. However, the book is pretty interesting so it gets 3 stars
i liked the novel.sadly too few chapters and it looks like an astral pet store copy. still,it is beautifuly written ,worth a read. i want more chapters :/
I really like your novel! I always wait everyday for the update since the MC is good at balancing things. Anyways, I hope you can update lots of chapters soon. Oh, nevermind. Haha.
Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed,
MC reincarnateds on a new world where humans battle against spirit beasts and use tame beast and companions to cultivate and combat hostile beast, and apparently he reincarnated on an alternate version of himself (or at least that is what I understand). Sounds pretty much like another one of those novels but, so far, on the 30 chapters I've read, the novel has been developing interestingly. Yes, his cheat sounds like Astral Pet Store and some Cultivation Cook novel but I like the mechanics of his cheat like store, I like the isekai elements and how the author integrated them, and I like the MC personality so far: Not a cold psycho, not a shameless perv, not a naive otaku or a rightful Mary Sue. The novel so far doesn't required spirit stones but when it requires them, I'll expend in them if keeps this good development.
الرواية جميلة لكن تاخير برفع الفصول شكرا لك على رواية استمر برفع الفصول الباقي شكرا يامبدع ١١١١١١١٢١١٣٣٤٥٦٧٧٨٩٩٠٠٠٧٦٦٥٤٢١١١١تلنفعقعقث٦غايعاعت٧رفهفهفهففعف٧ف٧فهففففهفهعقحخ٦هه٥٥هص٦٦خث٦ثث٥ه٦خقق٦خق٦خق٦خقخ٦خ٦قق٦خق٦خفخ٦خ٦فس
its like tge astral pet store novel but i like this novel more than the astral pet store i also like the attirude of the MC toward his sister and the other so far so good keep up the good work and i hope that this will not be dropped and be a premuim for early chapter
I love this book. I wish you could update it tomorrow or maybe today because I can't wait anymore. It's like Astral Pet Store and I love that story.
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I won't say anythingg else just that this story is worth it of you attention. The rest throw all the power stones and help this story to be featured🥳❤️❤️❤️
I like this novel very much. I like the steady flow of the storyline and the way he describes the meaning of all the materials are not boring at all. The system in this story is not too dominant that i also approve. I thank the author for the continuous updates
Very will written and such a great story! Keep up the good work and write more!❤️ I even believe this novel will some day make it into the top 10 in power rankings
You could probaly fo premium at the rate your going. I just hope you wont quit the novel after some time and letting us all down. Keep up the good work sir. 👌👌👌👌👌👌
Unique and unique and unique in the unique world of the unique nature of the universe itself and the way it works with its own unique culture that makes you look very unique in the modern style with your imagination. 😂😂
Hi everyone, well obviously I had to rate this novel five stars like everyone else. I decided to write this novel due to the web novel competition and I eventually started to like writing. I’m obviously not the best writer and I’d consider myself average? I think? Well, I try to improve myself while writing this novel. I love to read and every time the main characters in those novels did something stupid I would always curse so, I decided to write one myself. Currently, the release rate is one chapter every day and a second one on the weekend for a total of nine chapters per week. Well, that’s all from me, I wish you all a great day!
It’s really good, i hope it doesnt drop🙏👍 …..................................... …..................................... ….....................................
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I love this novel. Best novel I have read yet about a shop owner + system + cultivation + pet/contracted monster. I recommend reading this novel. The synopsis of the novel does not do it justice. My most liked points: - MC is thinking and behaves resourceful and makes smart decisions. He is the focus of the novel and with every chapter one can see him growing and progressing. - System is not sentient and every feature of the System the MC has to first unlock. Which makes every appearing feature satisfying, since the MC has to earn them. System does not tell the MC what his goal is and forces him to do anything = MC is an active one and any of his actions are his choice(very important fact, since I hate passive MC's that are shoved around by the plot). - Interactions with his contracted beast and sister are realistic and pleasant - I like the author's writing style and I have noticed only a few typos.
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Loving this book. Believable way of thinking of the MC, very nice writing style and a great setting. Not much action, but a very nice book to read.
Here and there a little inconsistency and minor writing flaws, but overall incredibly enjoyable. Very nice fantasy setting as well. Can't wait for future chapters.
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I must say, this story is hella nice, it has some unique points about it, and although it is regretful that the athur is abit busy lately and unable to post dailly, i still like the story.
Me gusta mucho este estilo de historia de sistema tienda, y como van mejorando su entorno; esperaré con ansías más capítulos. Gracias por no abandonar la novela, solo reuniré paciencia para esperar los nuevos capítulos 🤩🤩🤩💖💖💖
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I love this book it is eell thought out 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤️😂💕😍😂❤️😍😂😂😭😔😭☺️👌👌😒☺️😍😩👑☺️😍💕😍💕👑😔😂😍☺️😭😩😭💕😭😩💕👍😩👍😩👍
Very similar in premise to Astral Pet Store (APS) so if you like that then you will probably like this one. Early on there are what I felt are breaks in the logic that make the MC feel rash and on the stupid side. It feels like these are a result of the author info dumping while setting up the multiple worlds the MC will be traveling through. Although, when read in context with the story, it seems like the MC just lets the fact that he has a system goes to his head for a few chapters: I have system->I must become all powerful->Only best for me, no weaklings allowed (jk a little :P). This is made a little worse because the author is hurrying to get into the actual story and explain the base mechanics of the story. So it would have benefitted from a few more chapters in the intro, maybe a little interaction with the little sister before she goes to school or something to break up the info dump and make the MC's thought process seem more organic than arrogant? Anyway, while parts of the early story feel a bit forced, it is still a good story that goes in a different direction from APS as it focuses more on the adventure aspect (in what I have read so far).
Spoiler enthüllen this is a really good book and it definitley shows that they know what they are doing. I have read too many books where it is just a repeat of the same plot over and over and this book is a good refresher of how they should be written.
pretty nice and good story , usage of the system plot isn't the op , its more on equivalent exchange tho I hope it add some romance or harem and a lot of action ill awaits the nxt chap
This novel is a copy of APS, you have about 20-25% chance that the author is going to reply to comments about plotholes or grammar mistakes and from what Ive seen, a 100% chance he wont fix them after saying he will, and there are a lot of grammar mistakes or just poorly written sentences, many of which could be fixed by the author rereading his chapters but he clearly doesnt do that. However, the book is pretty interesting so it gets 3 stars
i liked the novel.sadly too few chapters and it looks like an astral pet store copy. still,it is beautifuly written ,worth a read. i want more chapters :/
I really like your novel! I always wait everyday for the update since the MC is good at balancing things. Anyways, I hope you can update lots of chapters soon. Oh, nevermind. Haha.
Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed, Utterly enjoyed,
MC reincarnateds on a new world where humans battle against spirit beasts and use tame beast and companions to cultivate and combat hostile beast, and apparently he reincarnated on an alternate version of himself (or at least that is what I understand). Sounds pretty much like another one of those novels but, so far, on the 30 chapters I've read, the novel has been developing interestingly. Yes, his cheat sounds like Astral Pet Store and some Cultivation Cook novel but I like the mechanics of his cheat like store, I like the isekai elements and how the author integrated them, and I like the MC personality so far: Not a cold psycho, not a shameless perv, not a naive otaku or a rightful Mary Sue. The novel so far doesn't required spirit stones but when it requires them, I'll expend in them if keeps this good development.
الرواية جميلة لكن تاخير برفع الفصول شكرا لك على رواية استمر برفع الفصول الباقي شكرا يامبدع ١١١١١١١٢١١٣٣٤٥٦٧٧٨٩٩٠٠٠٧٦٦٥٤٢١١١١تلنفعقعقث٦غايعاعت٧رفهفهفهففعف٧ف٧فهففففهفهعقحخ٦هه٥٥هص٦٦خث٦ثث٥ه٦خقق٦خق٦خق٦خقخ٦خ٦قق٦خق٦خفخ٦خ٦فس
its like tge astral pet store novel but i like this novel more than the astral pet store i also like the attirude of the MC toward his sister and the other so far so good keep up the good work and i hope that this will not be dropped and be a premuim for early chapter
I love this book. I wish you could update it tomorrow or maybe today because I can't wait anymore. It's like Astral Pet Store and I love that story.
Spoiler enthüllen I won't say anythingg else just that this story is worth it of you attention. The rest throw all the power stones and help this story to be featured🥳❤️❤️❤️
I like this novel very much. I like the steady flow of the storyline and the way he describes the meaning of all the materials are not boring at all. The system in this story is not too dominant that i also approve. I thank the author for the continuous updates
Very will written and such a great story! Keep up the good work and write more!❤️ I even believe this novel will some day make it into the top 10 in power rankings
You could probaly fo premium at the rate your going. I just hope you wont quit the novel after some time and letting us all down. Keep up the good work sir. 👌👌👌👌👌👌
Unique and unique and unique in the unique world of the unique nature of the universe itself and the way it works with its own unique culture that makes you look very unique in the modern style with your imagination. 😂😂
Hi everyone, well obviously I had to rate this novel five stars like everyone else. I decided to write this novel due to the web novel competition and I eventually started to like writing. I’m obviously not the best writer and I’d consider myself average? I think? Well, I try to improve myself while writing this novel. I love to read and every time the main characters in those novels did something stupid I would always curse so, I decided to write one myself. Currently, the release rate is one chapter every day and a second one on the weekend for a total of nine chapters per week. Well, that’s all from me, I wish you all a great day!
It’s really good, i hope it doesnt drop🙏👍 …..................................... …..................................... ….....................................
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I love this novel. Best novel I have read yet about a shop owner + system + cultivation + pet/contracted monster. I recommend reading this novel. The synopsis of the novel does not do it justice. My most liked points: - MC is thinking and behaves resourceful and makes smart decisions. He is the focus of the novel and with every chapter one can see him growing and progressing. - System is not sentient and every feature of the System the MC has to first unlock. Which makes every appearing feature satisfying, since the MC has to earn them. System does not tell the MC what his goal is and forces him to do anything = MC is an active one and any of his actions are his choice(very important fact, since I hate passive MC's that are shoved around by the plot). - Interactions with his contracted beast and sister are realistic and pleasant - I like the author's writing style and I have noticed only a few typos.
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