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meh. another fanfic that drools over hinata. too many of these, it's bad enough the original forced it, but even fanfics are forcing it with little to no change to make it seem reasonable
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Крутой(ооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооо антаблемент Сибсельмаш воском кельтскому карликом медали уж вещам уж ух мг ух см вах горчицы ведущих чашу ангушт Клэр вен вод некая ёж Камю пышных на вод кухнях
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Это лютая наркомания. Я сначала удивлялся почему рейтинг 3,7 но почитав побольше я понял, что это полная дичь. Тупые повороты, тупые персы, тупой сюжет, тупые действия - никакой логики🤦🤦🤦
Love the stories super fun and different from other fanfics 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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The SI is shown to be careless early on and that trend continues throughout. Consistency is 5 stars. I read this story with a grin on my face because the SI believed he could do Naruto's life better than the orange wonder could, then proves again and again that he can't.
mero nam angel sapkota ho ma jhapa ma basxu mero school ko nam angel ho. mero girlfriend ko nam pani angel ho. mero favourite superhero pani angel ho.
Lajjawati Jhar Jastai Lajauchhau Khai Kasari Yo Siudo Sajauchhau Alli wora Aau Alli wora Aau maya Basa Merai Chheu Jugai Jaane Pirati Laula Baina Rumal Deu Alli wora Aau maya Basa Merai Chheu Jugai Jaane Pirati Laula Baina Rumal Deu Jugai Jaane Pirati Laula Baina Rumal Deu Aago maa gheu Hale Jhai Bhaihalchhu Timro Chheuma Paglidai Gaihalchhu Khai Kasari Aau Khai Kasari Aau Maya Bhana Timro Chheu Laaj Bhagne Aat Jagne Mantra Gari Deu Khai Kasari Aau maya Bhana Timro Chheu Laaj Bhagne Aat Jagne Mantra Gari Deu Bujhnu Parchha Manka Kura Kehi Nabole Ni Padhnu Parchha Aakha haru Mukhai Nakhole Ni Adherima Jana Sakchhu Trisuliko Tirma Tara Timro Samu Mutu Hunna Kaile thirma
Plot yg mengecewakan, saya udah ga ngerti alur cerita nya, gara-gara buku mesum plot yg awal nya bagus jadi ancur, saya udah males baca cerita ini
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No inicio tava bom, mas depois de um tempo o autor aparentemente se perde na trama e tem muito furo obvio no roteiro, em geral, não recomendo.
it started of good but the author F*cked up the moment he tried to bring power scaling into this , also the characters are badly written. for people who know what to read stay away from this Shit.
Okay okay okay... I found the begging hardly acceptable but I thought it was still tolerable, but then as I continued reading it follows isekai Naruto as a 3 yr old who thought I need money for dates better write a book about sex.. then the 3rd hokage assumes he's a devil spawn cause he suddenly shows ability to use one of his father's signature technique and he decides Danzo is way more trustworthy than the kid who allied with the hyuga clan and kept declaring he'll marry a little girl, then there's the fact that he was able to kill a jonin level root ninja using shadow clones and explosions and he's able to run all the way to kumo as a 3 yr old... If this was Harry potter I'd understand with how retarded the wizards are.. but the shinobi literally live with lies and killing so their brains are on overdrive trying to stay alive.. so how the **** should a 3 yr old do all this?
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side, 3 out of five, "I'm sorry but when he said he was going to so dbz stylevgravity training at like 3 years old, I had to drop, a human doing stuff like that wouldn't survive even with the kyuubi much less a baby. it's just too ridiculous for me sorry.
sketchy mc with no commonsense and pervert. (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)
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I dunno, this is gone wrong with many things for me though. I don't know about others, but the plot seems forced to me. Letting other know that you were a reincarnated individual to stretch out the story is a bit hard to take. Well there nothing wrong with the grammar, and I respect the author. But this is really not for me.
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Decent.... (not my cup of tea) while there are constant updates for this novel, the logic and sensibility seems to be thrown out the window. There are multiple occasions of the MC acting unreasonable without thinking about the consequences and the cover does not illustrate the tone or mood of the novel.
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Nice love your work dude keep up the good work dude. Nice love your work dude keep up the good work dude. Nice love your work dude keep up the good work dude.
Man it's a good story but you forget one thing they are only 3 years old and you are doing a horrible job in the story three years old kids can't go on talking about girlfriends and wives and making a three year old kid write an ***** novel and hiruzen says nothing even though we all know that love naruto as much as he does he is still a paranoid bastard and before you say he is a **** in his body is he a pedophile going after a three year old girl you did a horrible job in portraying the characters like hiashi and hiruzen like the concept but I don't like your story
I usually dont write Reviews but i just had to warn my fellow daoists If u are into a mc that is pretty much a child predator that releases books like 50 shades of grey at the age of 3 and is allowed to leave the Village at again the age of 3 even though he is the son of the 4th hokage and kushina uzumaki Not to mention the fact that is the jinchuuriki of the 9 tails then this Story is for you if Not u should skip this one boys
Spoiler enthüllen meh. another fanfic that drools over hinata. too many of these, it's bad enough the original forced it, but even fanfics are forcing it with little to no change to make it seem reasonable
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Крутой(ооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооооо антаблемент Сибсельмаш воском кельтскому карликом медали уж вещам уж ух мг ух см вах горчицы ведущих чашу ангушт Клэр вен вод некая ёж Камю пышных на вод кухнях
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Это лютая наркомания. Я сначала удивлялся почему рейтинг 3,7 но почитав побольше я понял, что это полная дичь. Тупые повороты, тупые персы, тупой сюжет, тупые действия - никакой логики🤦🤦🤦
Love the stories super fun and different from other fanfics 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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The SI is shown to be careless early on and that trend continues throughout. Consistency is 5 stars. I read this story with a grin on my face because the SI believed he could do Naruto's life better than the orange wonder could, then proves again and again that he can't.
mero nam angel sapkota ho ma jhapa ma basxu mero school ko nam angel ho. mero girlfriend ko nam pani angel ho. mero favourite superhero pani angel ho.
Lajjawati Jhar Jastai Lajauchhau Khai Kasari Yo Siudo Sajauchhau Alli wora Aau Alli wora Aau maya Basa Merai Chheu Jugai Jaane Pirati Laula Baina Rumal Deu Alli wora Aau maya Basa Merai Chheu Jugai Jaane Pirati Laula Baina Rumal Deu Jugai Jaane Pirati Laula Baina Rumal Deu Aago maa gheu Hale Jhai Bhaihalchhu Timro Chheuma Paglidai Gaihalchhu Khai Kasari Aau Khai Kasari Aau Maya Bhana Timro Chheu Laaj Bhagne Aat Jagne Mantra Gari Deu Khai Kasari Aau maya Bhana Timro Chheu Laaj Bhagne Aat Jagne Mantra Gari Deu Bujhnu Parchha Manka Kura Kehi Nabole Ni Padhnu Parchha Aakha haru Mukhai Nakhole Ni Adherima Jana Sakchhu Trisuliko Tirma Tara Timro Samu Mutu Hunna Kaile thirma
Plot yg mengecewakan, saya udah ga ngerti alur cerita nya, gara-gara buku mesum plot yg awal nya bagus jadi ancur, saya udah males baca cerita ini
5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 5
No inicio tava bom, mas depois de um tempo o autor aparentemente se perde na trama e tem muito furo obvio no roteiro, em geral, não recomendo.
it started of good but the author F*cked up the moment he tried to bring power scaling into this , also the characters are badly written. for people who know what to read stay away from this Shit.
Okay okay okay... I found the begging hardly acceptable but I thought it was still tolerable, but then as I continued reading it follows isekai Naruto as a 3 yr old who thought I need money for dates better write a book about sex.. then the 3rd hokage assumes he's a devil spawn cause he suddenly shows ability to use one of his father's signature technique and he decides Danzo is way more trustworthy than the kid who allied with the hyuga clan and kept declaring he'll marry a little girl, then there's the fact that he was able to kill a jonin level root ninja using shadow clones and explosions and he's able to run all the way to kumo as a 3 yr old... If this was Harry potter I'd understand with how retarded the wizards are.. but the shinobi literally live with lies and killing so their brains are on overdrive trying to stay alive.. so how the **** should a 3 yr old do all this?
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
side, 3 out of five, "I'm sorry but when he said he was going to so dbz stylevgravity training at like 3 years old, I had to drop, a human doing stuff like that wouldn't survive even with the kyuubi much less a baby. it's just too ridiculous for me sorry.
sketchy mc with no commonsense and pervert. (ノ｀Д´)ノ彡┻━┻(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)(눈‸눈)
Spoiler enthüllen I dunno, this is gone wrong with many things for me though. I don't know about others, but the plot seems forced to me. Letting other know that you were a reincarnated individual to stretch out the story is a bit hard to take. Well there nothing wrong with the grammar, and I respect the author. But this is really not for me.
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Decent.... (not my cup of tea) while there are constant updates for this novel, the logic and sensibility seems to be thrown out the window. There are multiple occasions of the MC acting unreasonable without thinking about the consequences and the cover does not illustrate the tone or mood of the novel.
decent good nice decent good nice decent good nice decent good nice decent good nice decent good nicedecent good nice decent good nice decent good nice decent good nice decent good nice decent good nice
Nice love your work dude keep up the good work dude. Nice love your work dude keep up the good work dude. Nice love your work dude keep up the good work dude.
Man it's a good story but you forget one thing they are only 3 years old and you are doing a horrible job in the story three years old kids can't go on talking about girlfriends and wives and making a three year old kid write an ***** novel and hiruzen says nothing even though we all know that love naruto as much as he does he is still a paranoid bastard and before you say he is a **** in his body is he a pedophile going after a three year old girl you did a horrible job in portraying the characters like hiashi and hiruzen like the concept but I don't like your story
I usually dont write Reviews but i just had to warn my fellow daoists If u are into a mc that is pretty much a child predator that releases books like 50 shades of grey at the age of 3 and is allowed to leave the Village at again the age of 3 even though he is the son of the 4th hokage and kushina uzumaki Not to mention the fact that is the jinchuuriki of the 9 tails then this Story is for you if Not u should skip this one boys
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