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Почему так долго не входит новая глава, я хочу новую главу 😅😅😅ᕦ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕤ(⑅ᵒ̴̶̷᷄ωᵒ̴̶̷᷅⊞ོॢ)fෆr yෆu⋆*⋆✩ಠ_ಠ(๑ↀᆺↀ๑)ʕ´•ᴥ•`ʔ.*.｡ଘ( ᐛ ) ଓ+(*´﹀`*)..｡*ﾟ+
Writing feels a little rushed. The main character is pretty bland and basic with him jist becoming a tag along of the main character. Would have been a little better if the main character broke away from canon or just did things more differently.
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Yo author! It's been 360 days, any updates? I hope you're doing okay. ..................................................................
O autor morreu? Ou ele vive em uma linha do tempo diferente pois esses são os 5 dias de haito mais longos que eu ja vi😂😂😂(fod@ se esses limites de letras)
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Amazing!!! When I read this I got the chills from how good it is I hope that you update soon can't wait for next chapter to come out so I can binge read it.!!!
Estaba muy bueno todo hasta que llegaron wakanda, ahí lo abandoné, es chevere tener cosas nuevas que te sorprendan y todo eso, pero algo tan excesivo noooo, pudo haber Sido algo de otra novela de masmorras o algo similar, pero wakanda no, entonces hasta aquí llego yo
Bonjour ! o/ Je souhaite que vous puissiez continuer a écrire car c'est certainement la meilleur réadaptation de Danmachi que j'ai jamais lu !
The writing is not bad, especially for this site, however the MC is incredibly cringe and yet all the women fawn all over him despite knowing him for a whole 5min. If you like wish fulfillment and narcisistic MCs give it a go. I have to give it a pass...
At first the novel was good, even if it was Harem for no reason. Then this weak drama appeared to us. I am disappointed in this novel.......
I understand why you wrote the chapters about wakanda but it ruined the story for me. just comes out of nowhere and ruins whatever plot was going on since this is literally isnt in danmachi and doesnt make sense. wakanda forever but not in this fanfic. wouldve rated higher if it was an omake or whatever but not if it is part of the story
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the story is good, but the MC is a stupid pu-ssy, he is just too much of a good-hearted man, he speaks of not killing and being understanding to his enemies, if you like this type of MC this the story for you
the cover is picture of Shi Feng, RSSG. well the purpose his live is unknown. maybe author just writing for fun. it's mix up, good but bad
The story is great but if your someone like me that dislikes one nightstand be warned. It only happens once. jnnnnnnnjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
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Maybe it’s just me, but it feels like 90% picking up girls and about their emotions. Don’t misunderstand me, the harem theme can work out, but 6+ love interests in 22 chapters is more than fast and the actual story (dungeoneering) might lack at some point. Don’t take it to heart, it’s just my impression that the focus might be a bit too much on collecting women. They might give the impression of being only one of his women instead of an individual. Writing quality: 5. It’s in the upper end for fanfiction on this site. Updating stability: 5. 1-2 chapters a day. Story development: 3. The story centers around growing his harem and a bit dungeoneering. The first part lacks depth and the second is too small as of yet imo. That might and probably will change in the future. Character development: 3. Nothing to say to the existing characters. New ones are often inspired by others, but it’s clear the author put some thought into their status. Love interests need some more individuality. The Mc has a hero complex but this might work in Danmachi and didn’t influence my rating. World background: 5. Nothing outstanding to say about that. It’s Danmachi and I didn’t spot any big mistake about that. I’m a fan of some originality, but it is not a necessity. Overall score: 4.2
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I like this book. I hope Ad(MC) will fix his habit for help people without thingking. I like it when there is a gradual character development. AND i want more chapter quickly, i like when 2 chap/day. good work!!!
The main character is OP and so is the rest of his Familia. So far I've seen no rehashing of the Bell plot of saving Lily or meeting Welf. Instead, we are treated with a whole new cast of OCs to round out the Hestia Familia. Currently, none of them have gone through any major character development, but time will tell if they amount to anything beyond filling out the roster.
I don't understand how people are unable to write dialog the correct way and instead do it the lazy way. it makes it impossible to read and hard to follow because dialog usually ends up being way too fast paced and hard to follow. besides that I have no other complaints because I was unable to get past the first chapter.
For the moment it's a good Fan-Fiction, looking forward to the continuation. Hehe hoping you won't abandon him ^^ more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Amazing. Finally a good Danmachi Fan fic that doesn’t have a 15 year old beta male protagonist. HdhdhdhO bbshYzjjxdguzhxbsjzu hdhdjzizhbshxgbsnz
I thought you did an excellent job i'm guessing you used wakanda as a way to show a change in character but felt out of place but I get it overall it's a fun read
Почему так долго не входит новая глава, я хочу новую главу 😅😅😅ᕦ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ᕤ(⑅ᵒ̴̶̷᷄ωᵒ̴̶̷᷅⊞ོॢ)fෆr yෆu⋆*⋆✩ಠ_ಠ(๑ↀᆺↀ๑)ʕ´•ᴥ•`ʔ.*.｡ଘ( ᐛ ) ଓ+(*´﹀`*)..｡*ﾟ+
Writing feels a little rushed. The main character is pretty bland and basic with him jist becoming a tag along of the main character. Would have been a little better if the main character broke away from canon or just did things more differently.
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WHY DID YOU DROP?!?WHY DID YOU DROP?!? WHY DID YOU DROP?!?WHY DID YOU DROP?!?WHY DID YOU DROP?!?WHY DID YOU DROP?!?WHY DID YOU DROP?!?WHY DID YOU DROP?!?
Yo author! It's been 360 days, any updates? I hope you're doing okay. ..................................................................
O autor morreu? Ou ele vive em uma linha do tempo diferente pois esses são os 5 dias de haito mais longos que eu ja vi😂😂😂(fod@ se esses limites de letras)
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Spoiler enthüllen Amazing!!! When I read this I got the chills from how good it is I hope that you update soon can't wait for next chapter to come out so I can binge read it.!!!
Estaba muy bueno todo hasta que llegaron wakanda, ahí lo abandoné, es chevere tener cosas nuevas que te sorprendan y todo eso, pero algo tan excesivo noooo, pudo haber Sido algo de otra novela de masmorras o algo similar, pero wakanda no, entonces hasta aquí llego yo
Bonjour ! o/ Je souhaite que vous puissiez continuer a écrire car c'est certainement la meilleur réadaptation de Danmachi que j'ai jamais lu !
The writing is not bad, especially for this site, however the MC is incredibly cringe and yet all the women fawn all over him despite knowing him for a whole 5min. If you like wish fulfillment and narcisistic MCs give it a go. I have to give it a pass...
At first the novel was good, even if it was Harem for no reason. Then this weak drama appeared to us. I am disappointed in this novel.......
I understand why you wrote the chapters about wakanda but it ruined the story for me. just comes out of nowhere and ruins whatever plot was going on since this is literally isnt in danmachi and doesnt make sense. wakanda forever but not in this fanfic. wouldve rated higher if it was an omake or whatever but not if it is part of the story
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the story is good, but the MC is a stupid pu-ssy, he is just too much of a good-hearted man, he speaks of not killing and being understanding to his enemies, if you like this type of MC this the story for you
the cover is picture of Shi Feng, RSSG. well the purpose his live is unknown. maybe author just writing for fun. it's mix up, good but bad
The story is great but if your someone like me that dislikes one nightstand be warned. It only happens once. jnnnnnnnjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Maybe it’s just me, but it feels like 90% picking up girls and about their emotions. Don’t misunderstand me, the harem theme can work out, but 6+ love interests in 22 chapters is more than fast and the actual story (dungeoneering) might lack at some point. Don’t take it to heart, it’s just my impression that the focus might be a bit too much on collecting women. They might give the impression of being only one of his women instead of an individual. Writing quality: 5. It’s in the upper end for fanfiction on this site. Updating stability: 5. 1-2 chapters a day. Story development: 3. The story centers around growing his harem and a bit dungeoneering. The first part lacks depth and the second is too small as of yet imo. That might and probably will change in the future. Character development: 3. Nothing to say to the existing characters. New ones are often inspired by others, but it’s clear the author put some thought into their status. Love interests need some more individuality. The Mc has a hero complex but this might work in Danmachi and didn’t influence my rating. World background: 5. Nothing outstanding to say about that. It’s Danmachi and I didn’t spot any big mistake about that. I’m a fan of some originality, but it is not a necessity. Overall score: 4.2
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I like this book. I hope Ad(MC) will fix his habit for help people without thingking. I like it when there is a gradual character development. AND i want more chapter quickly, i like when 2 chap/day. good work!!!
The main character is OP and so is the rest of his Familia. So far I've seen no rehashing of the Bell plot of saving Lily or meeting Welf. Instead, we are treated with a whole new cast of OCs to round out the Hestia Familia. Currently, none of them have gone through any major character development, but time will tell if they amount to anything beyond filling out the roster.
I don't understand how people are unable to write dialog the correct way and instead do it the lazy way. it makes it impossible to read and hard to follow because dialog usually ends up being way too fast paced and hard to follow. besides that I have no other complaints because I was unable to get past the first chapter.
For the moment it's a good Fan-Fiction, looking forward to the continuation. Hehe hoping you won't abandon him ^^ more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Amazing. Finally a good Danmachi Fan fic that doesn’t have a 15 year old beta male protagonist. HdhdhdhO bbshYzjjxdguzhxbsjzu hdhdjzizhbshxgbsnz
I thought you did an excellent job i'm guessing you used wakanda as a way to show a change in character but felt out of place but I get it overall it's a fun read