My Life As Tadano

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IsekaiAnimes

thanks kami, finally a komi-san fanfic. please don't abandon this fic kami-san. I want to blush but I have no tears...............................................................

4yr 131

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ShutTheFuckUp_

It's written by my Charlottes so i obviously will review with 5 stars :3 what got some problems? join Charlottes discord if u got some i will leave the link here https://discord.gg/y7capn8

4yr 22

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idle_enthusiast

I think the plot wise is better than your previous work and it is interesting so far. there some part that I think it still can be improved. 1. mc feel like a generic wuxia protagonist. he does many dumbass thinks, like upgrading something to the max like it doesn't matter, think some girl in the series as his own even though he does not even know her yet, provoke whole class, and saying yourself a prodigy is not arrogant but overly stupid what the point provoking teacher, arrogantly said you a prodigy and make a new formula out of nowhere even for anime standard it was over the top, most people will think you weird both in real life and anime. exaggerated flexing maybe your point is for him to gain a surprise point, but he doesn't need to like I say make new equation formula, one side beating a basketball team, if you faintly throwing this kind of events so often it will become dull. some of the interactions with other characters feel like a textbook answer of being an overall nice guy, there a little no his own personality on it and feel forced on the other character. 2.system is as bad as a wuxia-made system, you just gain normal skill by just thinking or desire it is still acceptable but you can make at least he has experienced it beforehand. and upgrade skill albeit normal skill so easy to prodigy level or monster level like point doesn't matter is bad, the mc feel no struggle form the system, he can gain anything And master anything just like that can make the story boring in long run, at least show how expensive or hard to get a prodigy level so is not like seeing people play which cheat code, is fun at first but boring after that. make him struggle to gain something to make it interesting. 3. the detail, many people say detail is not important or is just a fiction, but some case like this it is important. first, he can learn the skill to monsters level but making equation out of nowhere was too exaggerated, the fact that no reference or even mention of what kind is it make it faint and forced. same with a shonen jump, first you need at least know how is work you can just search by googling it doesn't need to be detailed at least show your mc know something, I know most fiction fill with made-up stuff but don't just make stuff that feels false outright, don't try over the top thing like explaining how good your drawing of demon slayer, you can say more detailed or something like that but don't say your detail on characters like tanjirou and nezuko, is showing your mc barely know anything. the detail is important when you make a story about someone of a certain job or fieldwork so you can show that your mc has the characteristic, skill and give the story more spice. like anime about novelist and mangaka, even the important part is their life and interaction their common knowledge on their field make it's more interesting.

4yr 15

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Timelesstrix

hopefully it doesn't turn out to be a braindead harem like Starting Life as a Mangaka... try to not fill it with too many girls cuz it gets annoying af trying to keep track of the girls that mc's with

4yr 14

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LV 11

Kenrio

I really tried to read more than 10 chapters for me to make a fair review but it's impossible.the mc have many way to develop the mc bit he got to the most cliche route we see in all other crossover fanfiction in this site. the authorship how extremely stupid he is by making e extremely awkward dialogue with many cringe lines, mc act like a retarded without any brain cell. even for a wish fulfilment fanfic this is garbage and written without any though of future plot, because of this the story have a extremely good potential (and cam attract many reader by the sinopse) and because of how badly write the actual chapters is it make you completely hate for even having expectations for this piece of trash

3yr 13

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jeanpierregerardo

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4yr 9

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R4IN

There’s nothing much to complain but if I was going to complain something, it’ll drop like a meteor. I really hate how author designed a character. especially in later part(ch.30) at first, it felt really good because they seemed alive but, at the later part, it gets really boring because he got a bit handsome, almost all the girl he meet falls in him. Also, because there’s just so many new girls appearing, (around 1 per 2-5 chapter.) some of the early girls forgotten and never appeared like a ghost. (by the way, I exxagrated that. some of them appear but some forgotten. like Saki.) Now for the second, why did author made Tadano a main character? I mean, if he were to erase Tadano’s identity of making him maybe currently the most handsome in the world (because 1 look from him made almost all girls in this novel fell for him.) also a downfall of this novel. Well overall, its fun. Maybe.

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4yr 8

LV 4

Penemue

Spoiler for future chapters. First time reviewing so bare with me. I thought the start of the fic was okay. I generally don't like too many mixed world's in one but I stuck through. It was enjoyable enough. The system in the fic was okay, but why didn't the MC just max all his skills is beyond me. Now what I'm gonna say are just what I personally didn't like. Chapters 68 and up. I was already getting a headache when you told us(the readers) to go read an NTR doujin to understand the future chapters for one character. Putting Saki from 'that' doujin was already pushing it for me, but also adding characters from series that relies on action and super powers was also another petty bit I didn't like. Don't get me wrong I like DxD but just adding them for the sake of making the MC's harem bigger is just what?, also the first lemon wasn't with his official girlfriend of a few days bugged me. Hurdur you saw my dildo, I am horny, let's ****. What??. Also to add that Sakura has no idea about the other girls that he'll eventually add to the harem apart from Saki because of the Karaoke chapters. Now to continue, chapter 68 and up, I personally don't like body swapping. Idk where the hell this plot point came from? Maybe you discussed it on your discord or whatever but it seemed forced as hell. But I still forced myself to read it. But after getting through those gruelling chapters I just lost motivation on reading. Especially when the body swapping is going to be a reoccurring thing. I stopped at chapter 77. Lastly, this is just me being nit-picky but there's too many A/N and E/N through the chapters. It broke my immersion, like a lot.

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3yr 7

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noobageddon_

Its soooo good... in the beginning. in the latter chap it become cringe. Dialogues become cringe. Then author over exaggerate his ‘simple’ action that it become cringe. Im ok with the over exagguration, but the dialogues... 🥶 I dunno if ita always like this, or its just the latter chapters. Cuz i really enjoy the first few dozens of chapters.

3yr 7

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CheatHacker

I like the novel, it really fun to read and I beg you author save saki😢😢😢😢...and i love your work ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

4yr 7

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Asura_Vajra

I'm a simple man, I see Komi-san… I simp. This story is very much similar to most other Webnovel fics that feature reincarnation into an amalgamated world of different anime franchises ( Start by Becoming a Mangaka and Sis-con being wholly reminiscent ) and though it's not the most original it is nonetheless an entertaining read. Its not groundbreaking or anything, but I personally like th author's choice of having the Komi-san series as the focus. We're already seeing some of the cliché developments such a MC deciding to be a mangaka, and theres nothing wrong with that. I look forward to seeing where the author takes this and how he implements the differenct series'.

4yr 7

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Waqas

I like the story it reminds me of neet receives a dating sim however dont make him like christine just because he became handsome like come on what about all the resentment you have built.in meet recieves a dating sim he goes out with the landlords daughter because he is a different person but you have actively taken her **** for however long and your just gonna suddenly like her. Okay finally you can probably add a summoning system or introduce magic but I'd suggest not to it will go too out of control. Btw I wrote this on the toilet so dont mind my grammar

4yr 7

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Akahime_Y

I am the exp of my sword Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless review... Unknown to death, nor known to life... Have withstood pain to create many reviews... Yet, those hands will never hold anything... So, as i pray...Unlimited Exp Works!

4yr 4

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1tsMalevich

I really have a lot to say about this book. There are a lot of good and bad points in the book. And i understand that this book just started. BUT MC IS NOT FUCKING TADANO. From Tadano mc just have name thats all. Tadano is a kind guy with a normal appearance and the ability to read the atmosphere, "read minds" and notice the usual little things. But MC is the different person. So please or change mc or change the book name.

4yr 3

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LordKram

Super good, #savesakichan \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥

4yr 3

LV 13

Thissmithy_Manga

was really enjoying this fan fic but it just feels constantly derailed, also the body swap thing was too much for me couldn't finish it after that.

3yr 2

LV 11

AbyssalHeaven1313

Ok I'm not gonna write much but here goes. The story is great, I love it so far, I couldn't ask for anything better. The character development is good I like the comedy to it as well. English is not bad it's pretty good, the creativity is very good oh and your update speed is great, all in all I give you 💯% I'm just gonna use this bottom half don't mind me. Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem, Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem. Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem. Harem, harem, harem, harem, harem. Harem x 10000000...... to be continued...😁😁😁✌️ Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp, Exp Exp x 1000000.......to be continued 😁👍👍

4yr 2

LV 5

ANARCHI57

Good story. Could be better if the author made leveling up skills harder and the character transition from normal to handsome take a month. So that everyone doesn't look at the MC and ask if he has always been this good looking or something like that. Also the author should pace how many girls he has met so far.

4yr 2