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Hello, guys, this shameful author is here again. I need y'all support, I have a new piece running for WSA, and I need y'all honest reviews and loyalty as it has been with this one. Thank you guys, please support me.
TBH i rlly like this story, tho it can do some more work with better grammar and speech. also keeping more to the mc would be much much better and not having too many povs. having some povs is ok but keeping it in a low number is better and not having too many povs. keep writing and share more stories with us.
there was some mistakes in the writing and also some bold text, but most if not all the mistakes espetialy in the early chapters was corrected, so overall pretty decent writing espetialy without editors, the development of the story is slow at first but it pick up the pace after the 9 months skip or in the 15 to 20 chapter i don't remember, even thought some characters are bland or they seem so at first the main characters are mostly fun and interesting, no matter who you are you will relate to at least one character, the author updates the story daily and cares about any helpfull reviews, and the world is very interesting, the only bad thing about this novel is that if you don't pay attention and read between the lines you will get confused with the character swiches, so read it with an open mind, what i can say is that even thought it has some rought edges here and there, i defenetly recommend , its a very rich story so read it when you have alot of time like this cat
It might just be me but Your writing jumps everyWhere to the point where its too confusinG i love Your book but pls establish the main stOryline or guy fiRst than introduce more pEople
This book has a great idea and theme behind it. I love the concept and the story as it progresses. My big issue is there are a lot of spelling errors in nearly every chapter. other times really weird choice of words. last the POV switches are extreemely frequent and very confusing.
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The book is well written and has a good plot but....... It is also really confusing with POV switches that doesn't tell who's perspective it is and keeps switching between characters
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read it because webnovel recommends it, and reading until chapter 25. quality of the novel is okayish. cons: pov changes is frustrating to be honest. too often and confusing. author needs editor for sure, too many typo, and it is annoying. thank you
I will be revisiting the earlier chapters with time because of the frequent errors and the cumbersomeness, so bear for awhile, also this story involves a selfish and bad protagonist at the beginning who learns and grows to become better, so if you don't like your protagonist being imperfect from the beginning...probably not for you, this novel also has alot of other characters who have a role or the other to Play, plus I the novel is still in its foundation building stage, I haven't even plunged into the real package
MC is not even around half the time, always some random person somewhere far away trying to build plots.....................................
Very poorly written novel. Please read over your work and do some editing / rewriting. I really tried to continue to read more but it's too confusing
Love the story, the character is well designed and except for the POV changes I absolutely love the story. The power up, the emotional parts. Hope to see many more chapters to it. (Just my thought : I want the author to post 2 chapters daily)
Though it was confusing at first it's still a really nice and inspirational novel. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.................
ok this could be a really cool story if you stuck with the mc but you don't. I can't stand stories that do this. we read the synopsis and its about the mc not 10 other characters . give an example , the mc is in a school right now, we read a chapter and then 3 or 4 chapters pop up about a war before you get to the mc again. this totally ruins the flow of the story and I honestly have been skipping chapters to get back to the mc. I could care less about are war or a guild that the mc is not involved in and he has not interacted with any of the other characters except for the bully from earth. wth was the whole baldy thing, they gets called out of a pub by a kid, who the heck are they we don't know they just popped up..... anyway stick with the mc and only him unless the mc has contact with them.
pos porque esta bien hecho la verdad es muy simple si esta muy bien hecho esta muy bien hecho y ya esta y bueno ahora ya que no me deja mandar escribire un monton de cosas porque si
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I believe there is more where this came from. You should keep writing and it can only get better. Nice write up overall. Keep improving 👏🏾👏🏾
Nice story, not bad actually. The story development is what made me intrigued, at first i felt like the broad character creation was not needed but later i had to consider if the author was trying to create a very large world like naruto or one piece, anyways the later chapters will tell if i will stick to it, so far so good; it’s been pretty normal to me
This a nice novel with great prospect, I'll be pinning this and watch the author grow it before getting at it. Good work author but this still got a long way to go on my opinion
The synopsis looks interesting. Bookmarked to be binged later on ...............................................................................................................................................................
The book is well written and has a good plot but....... It is also really confusing with POV switches that doesn't tell who's perspective it is and keeps switching between characters. Author please fix this but other than that all is good keep up the work
I'm the author of this novel and will sincerely love to see you all reviews and opinions, I believe the novel has gotten nowhere yet, but i will really love to see reviews on the previous chapters, you power voting will go long way for me
This is the author again, first I want to thank all readers that has been keeping up with my writing even though it can be annoying, for keeping up with my story, I did remember saying for a long time that the story was still in the formation stage but that's over now because now the real story has begun from here onwards its enjoyment galore, my writing is still lacking has I've not gotten an editor but the story has gotten a big step up, it has finally reached the stage I anticipated, thank you all and please continue to read and share you powerstones.
Hello, guys, this shameful author is here again. I need y'all support, I have a new piece running for WSA, and I need y'all honest reviews and loyalty as it has been with this one. Thank you guys, please support me.
TBH i rlly like this story, tho it can do some more work with better grammar and speech. also keeping more to the mc would be much much better and not having too many povs. having some povs is ok but keeping it in a low number is better and not having too many povs. keep writing and share more stories with us.
there was some mistakes in the writing and also some bold text, but most if not all the mistakes espetialy in the early chapters was corrected, so overall pretty decent writing espetialy without editors, the development of the story is slow at first but it pick up the pace after the 9 months skip or in the 15 to 20 chapter i don't remember, even thought some characters are bland or they seem so at first the main characters are mostly fun and interesting, no matter who you are you will relate to at least one character, the author updates the story daily and cares about any helpfull reviews, and the world is very interesting, the only bad thing about this novel is that if you don't pay attention and read between the lines you will get confused with the character swiches, so read it with an open mind, what i can say is that even thought it has some rought edges here and there, i defenetly recommend , its a very rich story so read it when you have alot of time like this cat
It might just be me but Your writing jumps everyWhere to the point where its too confusinG i love Your book but pls establish the main stOryline or guy fiRst than introduce more pEople
This book has a great idea and theme behind it. I love the concept and the story as it progresses. My big issue is there are a lot of spelling errors in nearly every chapter. other times really weird choice of words. last the POV switches are extreemely frequent and very confusing.
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The book is well written and has a good plot but....... It is also really confusing with POV switches that doesn't tell who's perspective it is and keeps switching between characters
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read it because webnovel recommends it, and reading until chapter 25. quality of the novel is okayish. cons: pov changes is frustrating to be honest. too often and confusing. author needs editor for sure, too many typo, and it is annoying. thank you
I will be revisiting the earlier chapters with time because of the frequent errors and the cumbersomeness, so bear for awhile, also this story involves a selfish and bad protagonist at the beginning who learns and grows to become better, so if you don't like your protagonist being imperfect from the beginning...probably not for you, this novel also has alot of other characters who have a role or the other to Play, plus I the novel is still in its foundation building stage, I haven't even plunged into the real package
MC is not even around half the time, always some random person somewhere far away trying to build plots.....................................
Very poorly written novel. Please read over your work and do some editing / rewriting. I really tried to continue to read more but it's too confusing
Love the story, the character is well designed and except for the POV changes I absolutely love the story. The power up, the emotional parts. Hope to see many more chapters to it. (Just my thought : I want the author to post 2 chapters daily)
Though it was confusing at first it's still a really nice and inspirational novel. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.................
ok this could be a really cool story if you stuck with the mc but you don't. I can't stand stories that do this. we read the synopsis and its about the mc not 10 other characters . give an example , the mc is in a school right now, we read a chapter and then 3 or 4 chapters pop up about a war before you get to the mc again. this totally ruins the flow of the story and I honestly have been skipping chapters to get back to the mc. I could care less about are war or a guild that the mc is not involved in and he has not interacted with any of the other characters except for the bully from earth. wth was the whole baldy thing, they gets called out of a pub by a kid, who the heck are they we don't know they just popped up..... anyway stick with the mc and only him unless the mc has contact with them.
pos porque esta bien hecho la verdad es muy simple si esta muy bien hecho esta muy bien hecho y ya esta y bueno ahora ya que no me deja mandar escribire un monton de cosas porque si
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I believe there is more where this came from. You should keep writing and it can only get better. Nice write up overall. Keep improving 👏🏾👏🏾
Nice story, not bad actually. The story development is what made me intrigued, at first i felt like the broad character creation was not needed but later i had to consider if the author was trying to create a very large world like naruto or one piece, anyways the later chapters will tell if i will stick to it, so far so good; it’s been pretty normal to me
This a nice novel with great prospect, I'll be pinning this and watch the author grow it before getting at it. Good work author but this still got a long way to go on my opinion
The synopsis looks interesting. Bookmarked to be binged later on ...............................................................................................................................................................
The book is well written and has a good plot but....... It is also really confusing with POV switches that doesn't tell who's perspective it is and keeps switching between characters. Author please fix this but other than that all is good keep up the work
I'm the author of this novel and will sincerely love to see you all reviews and opinions, I believe the novel has gotten nowhere yet, but i will really love to see reviews on the previous chapters, you power voting will go long way for me
This is the author again, first I want to thank all readers that has been keeping up with my writing even though it can be annoying, for keeping up with my story, I did remember saying for a long time that the story was still in the formation stage but that's over now because now the real story has begun from here onwards its enjoyment galore, my writing is still lacking has I've not gotten an editor but the story has gotten a big step up, it has finally reached the stage I anticipated, thank you all and please continue to read and share you powerstones.