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This work has been merged with my new wsa work, "Sorry, I Never Loved You". You might see arcs from this work be repeated over there.
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Disclaimer: I'm a friend of the author. You should know what I'm entailing by that. First of all, I'm reading this for the first time unlike with the other story. I can't compare it with a past version, so let's just take a look at what's here. Story wise: - The first arc's ending was kind of rushed. For those who dislike romance, congrats. The first arc didn't have romance even until Yue Ling died. The arc focused more around the musical elements, which I appreciate. Other stories sometimes focus too much on the romance part. That's not a bad thing, but their identity becomes.. worthless? - Yue Ling is a decent MC. We don't know that much yet, but she has some kind of secret. I've already guessed what the secret might be but let's see... - Her abilities are kind of OP. Even without learning from the System, she seem to have a cheat (?) that makes her proficient in that particular skill. Then again, it's only been two arcs, so we've only seen her pull out two different skills. - No ML in sight, at least for now. Writing wise: - Good pacing. Sometimes it gets too slow but not to the point of boredom. - Grammar mistakes are not that noticeable. - Characters are connected in one way or another, I didn't see anybody get thrown out after having served their purpose. - The chapters are pretty cohesive, but sometimes the paragraphs either get too long or there is a sudden info dump being dropped on us without warning. She tells us that she'll repeat the details over and over to make us remember, that's pretty nice. P.S: I swear to God if you don't pay me after this I- jk jk
It was awesome. Unlike any novel I had ever read yet I quite liked it. This should definitely get picked. For the grammatical errors, they weren't noticeable at all. Infact I don't think there are any major or minor errors. Also, poor Seven 😬 Anyways, I definitely want to read more. Please don't drop this novel.
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It's a light read. I had fun reading it. I have read a few chapters and I'll definitely read the rest. It's added to my library. There are s few grammatical errors but that can be fixed by proofreading. Good job!
As of chapter 14, I'm enjoying this story! Though, it's still in the early chapters of the web novel, so I can't say if I'll drop it in the future. Regarding grammar, I have no major gripes; the sentence structure is usually clear and concise, which makes it easy on the eyes. It's doesn't require you to re-read a sentence to understand the meaning, so it's not a chore to read. The only things I feel could be improved would be the character design and world building. First, the character design of the two leads: MC and ML... I hope later on into the story you'll explore the main character's past and why she was unfazed upon discovering the system, because it's strange how easily she excepted her situation. I'd also like to see more vulnerable moments from her, where she showcases actual negative emotions, instead of the feelings of her "role". (I mean that she doesn't seem to mind transmigrating to a different world and doesn't need to adjust, she's just a natural actor...) Currently, she seems slightly robotic to me because of how laid-back and carefree she is, despite experiencing an impossible course of events. Now the ML (Of the first world): So far, I kinda don't like him. He falls directly into the cliche, "I'm a possessive, cold CEO". I understand if that was intended, but, I've read it so many times that it's quite boring. I much rather would've liked: "He seems cold, but is actually really shy". It's a trope I've seen much less times and it's always adorable; But hey, that's just personal taste. Overall, It's a pretty nice story, just some parts seem cliche.
Its too early to understand the plot at this point. But the background of the story is very interesting, I can predict the story will be thrilling. Can see that with the brilliance shown in creating the plot line. Keep up the good work dear author..
Haven't seen someone with the same chapter naming style as mine here on WN. Quite the surprise. Only read the few available chapters so my opinion will be reserved, but what's there is already enough for me to know that the author knows what they're doing. Minimal errors and natural prose makes this an enjoyable read. If you like the genre, then I can safely recommend that you try this out. Keep on writing 👍
This book is really good and I love and believe in Yue Ling Superiority! This is literally the second book I've read after I finished reading the same author's book of "The Summoner's Rebirth" I'm looking forward to when Yue Ling will finally come to love the ML and not have anymore relationship, where one only had a one-sided love at first. You've done a really good effort for this book, author! Σd(✿ºั∀ºั)b
the fact that the romance takes too long to start has made me happy just for that reason this story has everything i want we have a kinda cute system we have an OP protagonist and the involvement between the two protagonists flows well it's not love at first sight on her part although there seems to be an unpleasant reason for that but I'm rooting for them
.................................................. well it caught from the first chapter . and the novel has higher potential. it seems kinda rushed in some parts but it's okay. . updating stability needs a improvement thank you for your hard work hoping for more in the future
this is a good stories and a light read, i love the interaction between mc and system 😆😆, love how the system have it own personality. love your work author-san ❤❤❤ keep it up !!!
Even though the first arc doesn't have any romance I'm quite into it the second arc are still on goin the MC is smart and not arrogant the ML we didn't know yet and thank you for creating this novel author ( ˘ ³˘)♥
I came over from this author's other story, I was surprised to know that she also liked QT stories. So far, the first arc was pretty decent, especially with how well the author described the musical parts. The second arc is still in progress. I'm excited to see how this turns out. I will probably put this in my reading list and wait until it has enough chapters for me to binge. The character development is nice, the System does not think for only profit and genuinely wishes the best for his host. MC's background is still undisclosed, but the hints are there to pick up. To be honest, the first arc felt incomplete, as if it was axed. I don't know if the second arc will also be this way, but I hope the author improves and learns how to settle the arcs better.
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Tbh, this is my first time reading a female lead book. It's really interesting! The MC is totally smart unlike those ****ty female lead who's dumb. Keep up the good work author!
Okay, this cocky-lazy-looking Yue Ling hooked me! Can't wait for more interaction between sevenXhost. If you are looking for a nasty-type main character, make sure to check this out
I love Seven! He's so cute and has a great personality despite being an artificial system. Although there are a few grammar errors it wasn't really bad enough to hinder my reading. Kudos to the author!
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Wow😍😍😍 Nice novel!! I've only read 3 chapters and im already hooked🤩. Amazing work from the author!👏👏 I can't wait to read more chapters from this novel😁😁
Shameless review from the author ʕ ꈍᴥꈍʔ Since this is my story, I will obviously give it 5 stars. I enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoy reading QT/System novels! Please give this novel some love and drop any questions below this review (=｀ェ´=)