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Schreiben Sie eine Rezensionthis is really amazing and amusing I am loving the story looking forward to what comes next πππππππpost more chapters u r doing way to well to stop now
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Love it. Has well described action which is very rare. I actaully know what is going on while reading it which is a W. Great choice of girls and decent pacing although a little rushed at some moments. Much love author keep it up.
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First off it isnβt that bad if you ignore the harem ****. like seriously we came here for Spiderman stop catering to horny 13 year olds. Its just a good way to make your novel become irrelevant and boring after 50+ chapters. nearly all of the good long lasting novels on here do not have a harem. stop.
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Great but Just needs more chapters. ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ
The author can write, but he has no story there is literally no balance between Peter and Spider-Man. Every chapter is a fight, there is barely any semblance of interaction but the girls are super thirsty for him. So much room for improvement.. would be better if you plan a storyline and expand characters
One of the best marvel fanfic ever.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπ
Spoiler enthΓΌllenA great Spider-Man SI for all my fellow men of culture with an author who I'm surprised hasn't collapsed from how fast he's writing and releasing these chapters. Although it is a little fast developing it is still tons of fun 4.95/5
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this is really amazing and amusing I am loving the story looking forward to what comes next πππππππpost more chapters u r doing way to well to stop now
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Love it. Has well described action which is very rare. I actaully know what is going on while reading it which is a W. Great choice of girls and decent pacing although a little rushed at some moments. Much love author keep it up.
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First off it isnβt that bad if you ignore the harem ****. like seriously we came here for Spiderman stop catering to horny 13 year olds. Its just a good way to make your novel become irrelevant and boring after 50+ chapters. nearly all of the good long lasting novels on here do not have a harem. stop.
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Great but Just needs more chapters. ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ ββββββ
The author can write, but he has no story there is literally no balance between Peter and Spider-Man. Every chapter is a fight, there is barely any semblance of interaction but the girls are super thirsty for him. So much room for improvement.. would be better if you plan a storyline and expand characters
One of the best marvel fanfic ever.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be readπ. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farπ
Spoiler enthΓΌllenA great Spider-Man SI for all my fellow men of culture with an author who I'm surprised hasn't collapsed from how fast he's writing and releasing these chapters. Although it is a little fast developing it is still tons of fun 4.95/5
In ranking so high just because u made the right choice with starting at the beginning @-@-@-@-@--@@-@--@-@-@-@-@-@--@-@-@-@-@-@-#-$-%-&-$-#-@@-#--$-$-%-&+%+$+#-@-@-#-$-%-+&-$-#--@-
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I really love this story so please keep it up.!