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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionSimply put its a great nove/book(whatever you want to call it)the character is really realistic and the world is detailed without doing the really random and without reason going over the basics and common-knowledge in the middle of the year thing(i see that a lot ) Overall if i picked this up off my shelf i would not complain one bit great work and i hope it can continue
Very deep world background, deep challenges and character development mainly focused on the MC, Claude. A Human turned beast. The ones who did, changed him to make him an ally, but he now became the only one of the lost race that is seen as their biggest enemy. True trusted ones are few, his oldest one a pitwolf, pet, ally, companion and friend trusted more than a brother would. A shapeshifter under Humans, with more and less observative friends. His Astral trainer, both a help to become strong and a future enemy to overcome. Will he grow survive and beat everything to come? Will he find his way to live in society, become a beast of the wild or perhaps something else? How long will the curtain hold and what will happen the moment it falls? To be honest I still didn't read up on most chapters before he enters the astral world. My opinion: one of the top 3 free Novels on this site, that'll (hopefully) finish.
Amazing hidden gem, the premise is interesting and the characters are more fleshed out than usual
One of the best novels I've read on this platform thank you to the author for his amazing creativity
wonderful absolutely amazing, thank you for this wonderful novel and I am excited to see the other novels you create
short review:Well written, original world building(powers, clans ...), slow paced (which can be good or bad for you depending on your preference), the author seems really passionate about his story, it's completely free and I genuinely can't find a criticism for these book.Definitely worth reading and deserves way more recognition in this app.
Bro, i love this book. I really hope it becomes one with 1,000+ chapters. My favorite book, amazing in all fields. If u could get a grammy i would go to war till u get ur earned recognition.
This story ist so good man i cant geht enough, i follow this story over 2 or moor years, the development is exiting. I Hope the story will continue for way longer, this is the only story that i realy Like and is for free. (I apolologize for my grammar Englisch ist Not my main language)
very good story just I find it difficult to support an MC who literally spends his time being traumatized by everything, I can understand wanting to create a realistic character but seeing an MC for 90 chapters being victimized and barely replying it's hard
I am not a werewolve lover but I loved this story. But I love druids. Love it. Good plot. Good everything I reccomand. Lover the power system and the world building
Your novel is literally my favorite book I have ever read. The way you show the troubles and hardship one must face in their day-to-day lives is what I love most. When I am reading I feel the anxiaty of the main character, when he loses I lose and when he wins I celebrate with him. You're gonna go far and I can't wait to see more of this book. You are 400 chapters in this book and I hope I see many more. When you are stressed take breaks so you can be refreshed and don't let it weigh you down. I like how Claude stays focused even when the world is falling. He has made it far and I am happy to be there to witness his rise. This is the type of book others could learn from due to the way you get an in depth look upon Claude. The way he deals with stress, what's on his mind, his plans, his fears and many more. I love what you do and keep it up.
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Well. Here I am again at the end of another Volume! Feels good, I’m excited to keep building this world I’ve made. Now, for those interested in reading and scrolling through the reviews, allow me to come with some hard hitting realism once more. I have grown from the first volume and the end of the second. But I’m still not where I want to be as a writer. There’s still cringe moments, I’ve learned I have a tendency to mystery load that can become exhausting to a reader very quickly and I dilluted this story with a lot of heavy darkness. Naturally, it’s a dark story, but it should come in waves and be reasonable. TDLR I have room to grow, and I know exactly what I need to do. So, is this a good read? Like I said before, not at first, but it gets better and it will continue to. It’s all about your own tolerance which I cannot gauge. Anyway if this review led you astray and you find that you still don’t like the story, come back and tell me why. Help a brother grow fr 🙏 Also, some guy named Lucifersrevenge left a really goood realistic review but I can’t seem to see it so go off that if you can.
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I love the story the world it is set in is beautiful the character development is gripping it is a beautiful book that I can't wait to continue reading.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. All in all Happy One Mill
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye
Spoiler enthüllenThis novel is a breath of fresh air on this site. The storytelling is very well done, you can see there is a plan throughout. There are also quality descriptions, a rarity on Webnovel and something the author has executed brilliantly, though sometimes they can be fairly lengthy, this is however managed by the long chapter lengths so you still get content. The characters are diverse and interesting, they all have their own stories and motivations to explore. The world building relies on established myth e.g. Fenrir from Norse mythology, set in a regressed post apocalyptic society but the myths are given their own twist to liven up the story and keep you guessing. The author does tend to have some issues with pacing especially in the earlier parts and there are chunks of poetic imagery which can slow the reading down but these are kept out of high octane action scenes and are usually kept in reflective chapters. Additionally, Claude (MC) does spend a long time in varying levels of self-hatred but is finally growing out of that circa 360 to embrace the rich heritage he finds himself a part of and the circumstances he has found himself in. This isn’t to say he refuses to act just that his attitude and choices reflect this Some small grammar mistakes your vs you’re etc. But still they are very minor and don’t impact the flow too much, however the language can get very verbose which could be an issue for people who have difficulty with English. Overall a great read that I would strongly recommend, with quality fitting a published novel it should definitely be up there with the big names on this site and maybe beyond…
I'm a buff baby that can dance like a man, I can shake-ah my fanny, I can shake-ah my can! I'm a tough tootin' baby, I can punch-ah yo buns! Punch-ah yo buns, I can punch-ah yo buns! If you're an evil witch, I will punch you for fun!
Ight im on Chapter 130 and i really like this book the mc Has really Good Progress the power system, and world structure kinda confused me but i still enjoyed it. i highly recommend
I am currently caught up to chapter 286, The story starts out a little wonky/slow, but it gets better as you go. Avatar seems to have a plan and executes it amazingly. He also uses the advice and suggestions us readers give to make the story better. So read the story yall!!!
1,000,000/10 for this one! I absolutely love reading this book for sure DEFINITELY RECOMMEND READING All chaps are free so far, its very creative entertaining and vivid, keeps track of multiple characters throughout it all and even gives good insider views on bad guys side Even the author and other readers are fun to chat with in comments haha Anyways... If you like revenge, love, hate, and a good fight both mentally and physically... then this book is def for you (even if you don’t like that kinda stuff i’d still recomend reading it bc its really good in some aspects i might’ve not included lol)
Welp. I think it’s time to write another review at the end of my first volume. Almost a year later. Crazy fr. Anyway, for those that are looking through the reviews and wondering if this novel is worth a read let me tell you rigjt now. I’ll try to be as real as possible, it is— but not at the start. if we’re being honest, my writing in the start sucks. A lot of repetive words and sentences, a couple spelling errors and a little cringe. Maybe more than a little cringe tbh. But, i grow. I dont become shakespeare or anything but my progress is visible in many areas. Some of the main ones being; my ability to paint pictures and describe sceneries as well as make character interactions fluid and designs original. Both of which could be debatable but I digress. Also, my world design is very original and not crazy or complex and something you’ll learn more of naturally. I will say though, the novel can feel slow at times, something i plan to fix in volume 2. So, by now if you read this, hopefully all the faults ive stated are fixed to some degree. If you still find that you dont enjoy it then I wish you happy reading elsewhere. Dang im rambling. Anyway feel free to ask any questions i’ll try to answer wothoht too much spoiling.
If you a webnovel where the MC awakens a coquettish System and becomes an overpowered, arrogant and insufferable person with a fortune mark over his head, with the antagonists making what they think are ingenious schemes in robotic conversations one second only to become smacked to death the next second and make him look mighty, the supporting character's role only to look pretty and lie on his bed while you're still in the dark about his environment and world, then my suggestion to you is.........drop the novel, don't even open it. Because in this novel you get to feel and see everything they do, think,see,and feel. He gets pitted against people who clearly outclass him in more ways than one while he struggles with his inner domons while trying his best not to stray from his ideals on his journey as he learns joys of friendship and grief from the loss of friends. The story development is solid and fast-paced without inconsistencies and the world building gives you a clear picture of the environment he thought he wasn't in and sheds light on the world he finds himself in. I recommend it to those who love werewolf or supernatural themed novel.
Bacon pancakes, Makin bacon pancakes, Take some bacon and I'll put it in a pancake, Bacon pancakes thats what its gonna make, Bacon pancaaaaaaaaake!
right I think it's time for a another review I'm at this moment on chapter 149 and where should I start, cluade is just a beast(😉) his character development is superb he is so fleshed out it's basically a biography, the side characters are amazing apart from the leech, who don't get me wrong is a good character, but we the readers and fans kind of hate her 🤣 as I was saying there isn't really any badly written people in this novel, so if you are interested in an amazing book, this might be the one for you🤟
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
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For now, it's a story with potential and it's up to the author to keep it going. It looks like it had a thought out path that it follows and i like that. It's a hidden gem.
Simply put its a great nove/book(whatever you want to call it)the character is really realistic and the world is detailed without doing the really random and without reason going over the basics and common-knowledge in the middle of the year thing(i see that a lot ) Overall if i picked this up off my shelf i would not complain one bit great work and i hope it can continue
Very deep world background, deep challenges and character development mainly focused on the MC, Claude. A Human turned beast. The ones who did, changed him to make him an ally, but he now became the only one of the lost race that is seen as their biggest enemy. True trusted ones are few, his oldest one a pitwolf, pet, ally, companion and friend trusted more than a brother would. A shapeshifter under Humans, with more and less observative friends. His Astral trainer, both a help to become strong and a future enemy to overcome. Will he grow survive and beat everything to come? Will he find his way to live in society, become a beast of the wild or perhaps something else? How long will the curtain hold and what will happen the moment it falls? To be honest I still didn't read up on most chapters before he enters the astral world. My opinion: one of the top 3 free Novels on this site, that'll (hopefully) finish.
Amazing hidden gem, the premise is interesting and the characters are more fleshed out than usual
One of the best novels I've read on this platform thank you to the author for his amazing creativity
wonderful absolutely amazing, thank you for this wonderful novel and I am excited to see the other novels you create
short review:Well written, original world building(powers, clans ...), slow paced (which can be good or bad for you depending on your preference), the author seems really passionate about his story, it's completely free and I genuinely can't find a criticism for these book.Definitely worth reading and deserves way more recognition in this app.
Bro, i love this book. I really hope it becomes one with 1,000+ chapters. My favorite book, amazing in all fields. If u could get a grammy i would go to war till u get ur earned recognition.
This story ist so good man i cant geht enough, i follow this story over 2 or moor years, the development is exiting. I Hope the story will continue for way longer, this is the only story that i realy Like and is for free. (I apolologize for my grammar Englisch ist Not my main language)
very good story just I find it difficult to support an MC who literally spends his time being traumatized by everything, I can understand wanting to create a realistic character but seeing an MC for 90 chapters being victimized and barely replying it's hard
I am not a werewolve lover but I loved this story. But I love druids. Love it. Good plot. Good everything I reccomand. Lover the power system and the world building
Your novel is literally my favorite book I have ever read. The way you show the troubles and hardship one must face in their day-to-day lives is what I love most. When I am reading I feel the anxiaty of the main character, when he loses I lose and when he wins I celebrate with him. You're gonna go far and I can't wait to see more of this book. You are 400 chapters in this book and I hope I see many more. When you are stressed take breaks so you can be refreshed and don't let it weigh you down. I like how Claude stays focused even when the world is falling. He has made it far and I am happy to be there to witness his rise. This is the type of book others could learn from due to the way you get an in depth look upon Claude. The way he deals with stress, what's on his mind, his plans, his fears and many more. I love what you do and keep it up.
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Well. Here I am again at the end of another Volume! Feels good, I’m excited to keep building this world I’ve made. Now, for those interested in reading and scrolling through the reviews, allow me to come with some hard hitting realism once more. I have grown from the first volume and the end of the second. But I’m still not where I want to be as a writer. There’s still cringe moments, I’ve learned I have a tendency to mystery load that can become exhausting to a reader very quickly and I dilluted this story with a lot of heavy darkness. Naturally, it’s a dark story, but it should come in waves and be reasonable. TDLR I have room to grow, and I know exactly what I need to do. So, is this a good read? Like I said before, not at first, but it gets better and it will continue to. It’s all about your own tolerance which I cannot gauge. Anyway if this review led you astray and you find that you still don’t like the story, come back and tell me why. Help a brother grow fr 🙏 Also, some guy named Lucifersrevenge left a really goood realistic review but I can’t seem to see it so go off that if you can.
It’s been 4 mouths AhahbabahahJHAAHAHAHAHHhhHhhHahahhahahahahahaajhaahahajahjajajaajajaajshssuusuJajajajJJjhssjsshhshshshshshshshwwhshw
I love the story the world it is set in is beautiful the character development is gripping it is a beautiful book that I can't wait to continue reading.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. All in all Happy One Mill
We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye
Spoiler enthüllenThis novel is a breath of fresh air on this site. The storytelling is very well done, you can see there is a plan throughout. There are also quality descriptions, a rarity on Webnovel and something the author has executed brilliantly, though sometimes they can be fairly lengthy, this is however managed by the long chapter lengths so you still get content. The characters are diverse and interesting, they all have their own stories and motivations to explore. The world building relies on established myth e.g. Fenrir from Norse mythology, set in a regressed post apocalyptic society but the myths are given their own twist to liven up the story and keep you guessing. The author does tend to have some issues with pacing especially in the earlier parts and there are chunks of poetic imagery which can slow the reading down but these are kept out of high octane action scenes and are usually kept in reflective chapters. Additionally, Claude (MC) does spend a long time in varying levels of self-hatred but is finally growing out of that circa 360 to embrace the rich heritage he finds himself a part of and the circumstances he has found himself in. This isn’t to say he refuses to act just that his attitude and choices reflect this Some small grammar mistakes your vs you’re etc. But still they are very minor and don’t impact the flow too much, however the language can get very verbose which could be an issue for people who have difficulty with English. Overall a great read that I would strongly recommend, with quality fitting a published novel it should definitely be up there with the big names on this site and maybe beyond…
I'm a buff baby that can dance like a man, I can shake-ah my fanny, I can shake-ah my can! I'm a tough tootin' baby, I can punch-ah yo buns! Punch-ah yo buns, I can punch-ah yo buns! If you're an evil witch, I will punch you for fun!
Ight im on Chapter 130 and i really like this book the mc Has really Good Progress the power system, and world structure kinda confused me but i still enjoyed it. i highly recommend
I am currently caught up to chapter 286, The story starts out a little wonky/slow, but it gets better as you go. Avatar seems to have a plan and executes it amazingly. He also uses the advice and suggestions us readers give to make the story better. So read the story yall!!!
1,000,000/10 for this one! I absolutely love reading this book for sure DEFINITELY RECOMMEND READING All chaps are free so far, its very creative entertaining and vivid, keeps track of multiple characters throughout it all and even gives good insider views on bad guys side Even the author and other readers are fun to chat with in comments haha Anyways... If you like revenge, love, hate, and a good fight both mentally and physically... then this book is def for you (even if you don’t like that kinda stuff i’d still recomend reading it bc its really good in some aspects i might’ve not included lol)
Welp. I think it’s time to write another review at the end of my first volume. Almost a year later. Crazy fr. Anyway, for those that are looking through the reviews and wondering if this novel is worth a read let me tell you rigjt now. I’ll try to be as real as possible, it is— but not at the start. if we’re being honest, my writing in the start sucks. A lot of repetive words and sentences, a couple spelling errors and a little cringe. Maybe more than a little cringe tbh. But, i grow. I dont become shakespeare or anything but my progress is visible in many areas. Some of the main ones being; my ability to paint pictures and describe sceneries as well as make character interactions fluid and designs original. Both of which could be debatable but I digress. Also, my world design is very original and not crazy or complex and something you’ll learn more of naturally. I will say though, the novel can feel slow at times, something i plan to fix in volume 2. So, by now if you read this, hopefully all the faults ive stated are fixed to some degree. If you still find that you dont enjoy it then I wish you happy reading elsewhere. Dang im rambling. Anyway feel free to ask any questions i’ll try to answer wothoht too much spoiling.
If you a webnovel where the MC awakens a coquettish System and becomes an overpowered, arrogant and insufferable person with a fortune mark over his head, with the antagonists making what they think are ingenious schemes in robotic conversations one second only to become smacked to death the next second and make him look mighty, the supporting character's role only to look pretty and lie on his bed while you're still in the dark about his environment and world, then my suggestion to you is.........drop the novel, don't even open it. Because in this novel you get to feel and see everything they do, think,see,and feel. He gets pitted against people who clearly outclass him in more ways than one while he struggles with his inner domons while trying his best not to stray from his ideals on his journey as he learns joys of friendship and grief from the loss of friends. The story development is solid and fast-paced without inconsistencies and the world building gives you a clear picture of the environment he thought he wasn't in and sheds light on the world he finds himself in. I recommend it to those who love werewolf or supernatural themed novel.
Bacon pancakes, Makin bacon pancakes, Take some bacon and I'll put it in a pancake, Bacon pancakes thats what its gonna make, Bacon pancaaaaaaaaake!
right I think it's time for a another review I'm at this moment on chapter 149 and where should I start, cluade is just a beast(😉) his character development is superb he is so fleshed out it's basically a biography, the side characters are amazing apart from the leech, who don't get me wrong is a good character, but we the readers and fans kind of hate her 🤣 as I was saying there isn't really any badly written people in this novel, so if you are interested in an amazing book, this might be the one for you🤟
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
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For now, it's a story with potential and it's up to the author to keep it going. It looks like it had a thought out path that it follows and i like that. It's a hidden gem.