Reviews of My Space-Time System by xImpulse - Webnovel

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s_eid

Are you planning to finish the novel....

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SorcererCat

Well worth the read! Nice power progression. Interesting story. Writing quality is quite good as well. - - - - - - - - - Well worth the read! Nice power progression. Interesting story. Writing quality is quite good as well.

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Someone_Or_Other

The story is okay, the characters are mediocre, the world building is good, and the technical writing skill is above average with few mistakes (mostly homonym errors). As far as updating stability is concerned, I have no idea since I’m writing this review with a ton of chapters left before I catch up to current when it becomes apparent. One major negative is that - at least as of chapter 75 - the author repeats the last few hundred words of one chapter at the beginning of the next. I’d say about a fifth of each chapter is pasted in from the chapter before it, which inflates the word count and, by extension, the cost in coins (or fast passes) to unlock them.

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Baka_asta_

quite good,a little to fast but yeah can be corrected in the future

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Daoist537142

I love stories like this,it gets my brain thinking if this stuff for happens when we die .

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Do_u_know_God_Grid

Writing Quality: Author needs an editor, either that or he needs to go back to previous chapters to fix issues. Missing chapters, lack of continuity, wrong use of words and even missing words that make it very frustrating to read. An example of lack of continuity is one part where it was clear stated a character took out a staff as a weapon, but in the next chapter that same character was using swords. Character Design: Recurring characters, even those close to MC, have little to no solo screen time or background info. World Design: Information on the world is given piece by piece, making hard to understand character’s pov. I want to continue reading to see where it goes but it is getting more and more frustrating to follow the story.

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keith_playz

i love this novel i am always here reading when a new chapter come out dkxkckcndndnddndnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxxjdjdjfjjvjvvjbjvbbbbhhgfjfjfjfj

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emrade

I'm sorry author but this book was just average for me. Not exactly sure why, maybe it's cuz I have read through a lot academy arcs or I just don't resonate with the characters of the book... They have spent too much time at the academy, its been over 300 chapters and they are still in the same place, yes they go out for adventures and all but they still spend most time in school. I would have loved if their gaming experience kinda helped them out, at least they use a lot of tactics when playing games but I am not sure that's the case, the MC is smart but our heroes don't exactly tap into their earthly knowledge for anything at all. Anyway, good job author and keep up the good work. This book not resonating with me might just be personal and not that anything specifically is wrong with it.

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Jujumaster

Nice novel my man exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

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Gecko26

In my opinion it has solid world and character development shown throughout the whole 388 chapters, I have read this far. Even "Nobody"-Backgroundcharakters sometimes get their moments and their background is explained which at first seemed overdoing it but after so many chapters I get to enjoy every last bit of world background, charakter development and every background story, no matter if about our beloved mc, the world, some sidecharakter or one of the friends of the protagonist. There are some mistaked and evey now and then the measurements don't make that much of a sense, because in the beginning it was switching between them every now and then, but for the last few chapters I did not find anything like that so, even that got solved :)

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Poeta_Negro

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LordKittyCat

Author pls change the name of the novel it’s deceiving and has nothing to do with the nov at all Author pls change the name of the novel it’s deceiving and has nothing to do with the nov at all

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DaoistxBOuEj

Im am only making the daily challenge ok not take that serious cjjffvzzjfkshffciijfjdhffjffjdhxhhchdjdhhvhhbbbvvhhhhgggggggggggggvgggcvgccccccggcggcccggggggccccc

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BlurryBee

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Lyx_Aris

Chapter 83 was a repeat of 82, but never fixed meaning information is missing when you get to 84. ........…....……………....…………...............

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Good_Man_2395

One of my favorite book is this. I love the system though there can be an improvement in the pace. Love it still though and I recommend anyone to read it

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escobe

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the_last_shadow

Unnecessary dragging of chapters. Sick of it. It says it should be more than 140 characters, so don't know what to write. Please skip this!!

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ghost_wolf25

Cdc buggy and I will be there at the same time I don't have a car so I can get a ride to the gym and I tutty the I have gtg to bed now but I by chance you can notification that I can gift card to

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WuBai

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aDreamer

I wanted to like it. and it's not like it's bad or anything, it's just far from what it could be. The mc got a pretty op pathon day one but never uses it. I think it was used only once or twice by chap 70 even though there's so much that it could be used for. instead, the mc is so reliant on the system for anything and everything, even stuff that his own power could be used for. This is supposed to be some top notch gamer but in his new world, all he does is basically use the wiki and a walkthrough. The mc needs to think for himself rather than have an all-knowing system spell every little thing out for him. --- Possibly spoiler below--- back to his starting path, it's so op if he even thinks about it for a second. He can find literally anything he wants but instead uses the system for everything he could be doing himself. locate enemies nearby? his path could do it but uses the system instead. find an enemies weak point? that's something that his power could do. find a good place to cultivate? find some good treasure? find the beast core? find the best spot to hit the hammer while smithing? literally anything to do with locating something, he should be able to do with his path, yet he has the system to do all of that and more anyways. what's the point of giving him op powers if he literally never uses it? and look, maybe he finally decides to later on. who knows? he hasn't used it by chap 70 so anything else is just too late. too bad because it could have been much better

I'm out of words for this novel, it blew my brains although it's has it own share of problem but that doesn't change my mind on saying this book is a masterpiece I wish the author can release more chapter thank you for this great book I pray u go far with this book

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Tyler_Gilbert

Overall great story. World building is great along with character design. The mc isn't dumb and he has personality. There are some unexplained things in the beginning but you find out as the mc does for the most part.