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Wow I just realized that I never left a review for this book, so first of all, this book is incredible, probably one of my favorites despite only having 66 chapters, the author is extremely responsive and responds to criticism or questions, now there is only one part of this book that might make people drop it and that is around chapter 16, where MC acts irrational, but trust me and continue reading past that point and I guarantee that you’ll love it, please add this book to your collection so the author will continue with 2 chaps a day 🥺
First:if you at some point get annoyed at mc, because he is too dense, or does something that could make you stop, read chapter 66, as long as author doesn't replace it with a normal one, it contains a bit of explanation to what, and why happened, but don't read it too early, before chapter 10,or there will be spoilers, now about tge story. Characters are great, world is detailed, and makes sense, power systems are good, and precise, and mc, while being op, isn't boring, and not just because there is always someone stronger, but because he knows what is he doing, he has a target, and tries to get to it, overall, don't drop, the problems usually are for a few chapters at most, problems with the book, not the problems of mc
it's okay, we'll wait for you... we do not have anything else to read anyway... Good luck on your way, and may you come back stronger and with a very detailed outline ;)
Did you really have to delete all chapters?! I get you wanted to rework it, but why not just tell us in the latest chapter that it‘s on hiatus until 2021 when it actually gets redone??
No you cant just do this to me! I still use all my power stones every day to vote for this! Even if you dont update I still have hope for a new update! Dont crush my dreams now !!!
Ignore this review, A I wonder what's going on inside the Gate. Like a famous novel looking down on its Captain and laughing and smiling in our country will do our best and also this is men.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A realy good novel, hope author don't drop it so fast. The story is well writen, the MC is real op and femal lead is so cute. Awaiting for more chapters
I like it - funny with decent battles. Would recommend .........................................................................................
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I loved the story development and character development. You leveled up in writing your story but since people didn't even read further, you suffered.... New intro to world development.. but just be little clear in your writing.. Since You had vowed to never drop it, and this is cool multiverse novel with a system.... I will also visit it regularly ✌️
Binged this novel over several days (ch 77). Honestly, it was rough in the beginning. But the world building is in-depth and detailed enough without being overbearing, and the story has a light-hearted aspect to most character interactions allow for the heavier moments to hit harder. It kept my interest while the author ironed out some of the rough edges. Definitely would suggest picking this novel up. The MC doesn't spend long before being OP within his realm, and can have shades of Goku's fighting-maniac personality (I can finally go all out! *takes off self-imposed limitations*). There are S-level threats in the universe, but MC hasn't encountered them yet. Looking forward to Vol 2 and what will happen. A lot of room for this novel to grow and a lot of potential story elements I am looking forward to reading. Bonus: Author says they will not go premium. So 100% never dropping this novel.
Good read characters quite well thought out and a little humorous. I recommend that people should at least give it a try and see how they enjoy it.
Nice novel, simple but exciting plot. At first it looked dumb but the closer I read it, the better it became. Looking forward to more chapters.
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Muito bom, excelente história para quem, quer ver algo diferente sem os mesmos clichês de sempre kk....................................................................................................
I think that this books pretty good. I have a good time reading it. I really hope the author doesn’t drop this. I dunno what else to say. This is one of the most enjoyable reading experiences I’ve had after the first 12-ish? Chapters.
I like the idea of traveling worlds and maybe even the multiverse and him becoming a deity or something similar the only issue I have is the summon contract like you said maybe if you explained the ramifications especially since he was pretty much murdered. more for it or make it more like a party system instead it would be better than signing a contract with someone you barely know especially when everything is new to him it seems like a risk 90 percent people wouldnt take without being influenced by external forces but even with that it was still a good read considering she doesnt abuse his trust. I also would like to see a little bit of fanfiction in this novel maybe he goes to worlds that he previously thought were fiction I would also like a more indept explanation of magic and his powers he seems to do a lot of things instantly when other people struggle maybe explain his strengths a bit more along with a more in dept power system. These are just my opinions though but everything about this novel is very well written so Ill give 5 stars along with a blessing that you continue the novel or rewrite it.
I enjoy the MC and the characters in this novel. The writing started off a little to forced and the MC became too OP. I almost dropped it, but wanted to see if the MC would change. I felt at about chapter 20 the author got their rhythm, and made me look forward to the next volume. I hope you keep writing.
The story is unique and creative while also using common tropes quite well. The characterization is a little weird at the beginning but it gets better. The best part of this story is the worlds building.
I really liked the story At this point I’m just trying to increase the character amount so the site will let me post this review all I want to say was I like the story
I loved this book. I'm disappointed that other people couldn't see where the story was going but I think you were really on to something. I will definitely read your other novels. Thank you for the work you put in and best of luck with your other books.
I LOVE THIS ahhhhh idk what to say this is what i always wanted in a book omg pls dotn stop writing take all my stones !!!!!!!!!! im not good in discribing but give it a try pls its just realy what i love
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While I hesitated early one, I have come to appreciate this. I suggest to keep at it man, you have a good story here with a lot of fun with tropes and some parody. Its honestly fantastic. The writting is spot on, and you keep the characters growing and maturing. I greatly appreciate this. I hope you continue this work. I can honestly say folks, give this story a chance and read all the current chapters. Trust me, I am for the most part super picky, read this story.
First of all I'd like to say that I normally prefer main characters who are "evil" and there are some parts of the story that I personally disliked but the character stays true to himself. You can twist logic into whatever direction you wish with enough effort so I won't go into the character being dense and doing unnecessary things when there are far more efficient paths but I really like that stubborn humanity here. Other than me liking the character there was growth. I made a mistake dropping Overgeared because I disliked the main character but ended up not only liking the journey of growth but also the development of the whole story. I really like this story. The world isn't exactly described in great detail but things aren't left completely empty either. The progress is rather fast considering how fast 6 years passed but I really enjoyed that time skip that showed milestones instead of explaining things in hindsight. I'm not going to spoil it but the revenge was fitting for the character. I personally would have gone far further with my enemies but it was somewhat similar to the writing itself. Extremely smooth but very meaningful and not a light punishment by any means. Overall read it ffs! Also Salt I don't think you made a mistake with your writing...I think people need the patience to read at least 60 chapters. I'd be a total hypocrite to say that you need to do that at minimum when I have stopped reading simply due to a single thing that I really didn't like but this story definitely deserves at least those 60 chapters. Hopefully you can still keep writing this with passion and hopefully people will enjoy it like I did. Looking forward to more chapters.
Warning: Let go of all logic when you read this book! This book’s mc is so overpowered you already know he’s gonna win. This is only for those who enjoy seeing overpowered characters who become even stronger as the story progresses. It is really satisfying for me to see such an absurd power growth. Writing Quality: I did not see any grammatical errors or mistakes that ruined the reading experience for me, so I would rate it 5 stars. But, there were some dialogues between clones that were pretty confusing. I do not know if that was intentional. Updates: I read this is one sitting so i don’t know how fast and good the releases will be. Story Development: The story is very easy to follow and it makes me expectant for more. Character Development: For the author, fleshing out the characters is done in a simple back story, and that’s it. Most of the character development is with the MC, and that’s perfectly okay. I like MC-centered novels. I think the sacrifice of significant fleshing out of characters for the development of the story is worth it. World Background: The setting of this novel leaves a lot of potential, as it is after all on a universal scale. This could go well or it could go poorly. I am excited to see how the MC becomes a universal powerhouse! :)
Brilliant! Ever read Low Dimensional Game? This novel gives the same vibe. Virtuous cycle of empire building and power growth. Some love stories. POV of side characters. Recipe for the good novel. There was a bug in author-sama thinking at around 16 chapter. Don't worry, keep reading. Don't let confusion sway you away from this gem.
Really great WIP and didn’t get the attention it deserved. A lot of negative reviews because of how some characters’s personalities, but there can’t be any growth if there aren’t any flaws at first. Daisy was a ditz and super carefree, but realized she’s gunna fall behind and become useless. Dumbass noble is typical dumbass noble, but that let more intelligent noble have a role. This story has a lot of room for growth, a lot of potential, and it’s one of the few that I think can actually live up to that potential.
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Good story, terrible synopsis. A few early MC decision "flaws" are explained over the story which shows a good bit of planning and character consistency, but webnovel readers tend towards low patience, so it could maybe do with a bit more explanation of protagonist thought process for some decision making moments. For those wanting a better synopsis, see below: After a string of bad luck and persecution from corrupt mobsters, John had little left apart from his life and he was about to lose even that. So when he got the option to join the Mission Worlds, he chose "yes." Now a powerful pyromancer he knows he can get his revenge. The new question is can he survive his new lifestyle? And how can he rescue his parents? Anything is possible in the Mission Worlds. You just have to be strong enough to take it. Includes: system, power growth, somewhat OP MC, clever MC (but not-socially-robotic), empire building.
Wow I just realized that I never left a review for this book, so first of all, this book is incredible, probably one of my favorites despite only having 66 chapters, the author is extremely responsive and responds to criticism or questions, now there is only one part of this book that might make people drop it and that is around chapter 16, where MC acts irrational, but trust me and continue reading past that point and I guarantee that you’ll love it, please add this book to your collection so the author will continue with 2 chaps a day 🥺
First:if you at some point get annoyed at mc, because he is too dense, or does something that could make you stop, read chapter 66, as long as author doesn't replace it with a normal one, it contains a bit of explanation to what, and why happened, but don't read it too early, before chapter 10,or there will be spoilers, now about tge story. Characters are great, world is detailed, and makes sense, power systems are good, and precise, and mc, while being op, isn't boring, and not just because there is always someone stronger, but because he knows what is he doing, he has a target, and tries to get to it, overall, don't drop, the problems usually are for a few chapters at most, problems with the book, not the problems of mc
it's okay, we'll wait for you... we do not have anything else to read anyway... Good luck on your way, and may you come back stronger and with a very detailed outline ;)
Did you really have to delete all chapters?! I get you wanted to rework it, but why not just tell us in the latest chapter that it‘s on hiatus until 2021 when it actually gets redone??
No you cant just do this to me! I still use all my power stones every day to vote for this! Even if you dont update I still have hope for a new update! Dont crush my dreams now !!!
Ignore this review, A I wonder what's going on inside the Gate. Like a famous novel looking down on its Captain and laughing and smiling in our country will do our best and also this is men.
Spoiler enthüllen Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A realy good novel, hope author don't drop it so fast. The story is well writen, the MC is real op and femal lead is so cute. Awaiting for more chapters
I like it - funny with decent battles. Would recommend .........................................................................................
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I loved the story development and character development. You leveled up in writing your story but since people didn't even read further, you suffered.... New intro to world development.. but just be little clear in your writing.. Since You had vowed to never drop it, and this is cool multiverse novel with a system.... I will also visit it regularly ✌️
Binged this novel over several days (ch 77). Honestly, it was rough in the beginning. But the world building is in-depth and detailed enough without being overbearing, and the story has a light-hearted aspect to most character interactions allow for the heavier moments to hit harder. It kept my interest while the author ironed out some of the rough edges. Definitely would suggest picking this novel up. The MC doesn't spend long before being OP within his realm, and can have shades of Goku's fighting-maniac personality (I can finally go all out! *takes off self-imposed limitations*). There are S-level threats in the universe, but MC hasn't encountered them yet. Looking forward to Vol 2 and what will happen. A lot of room for this novel to grow and a lot of potential story elements I am looking forward to reading. Bonus: Author says they will not go premium. So 100% never dropping this novel.
Good read characters quite well thought out and a little humorous. I recommend that people should at least give it a try and see how they enjoy it.
Nice novel, simple but exciting plot. At first it looked dumb but the closer I read it, the better it became. Looking forward to more chapters.
Spoiler enthüllen Muito bom, excelente história para quem, quer ver algo diferente sem os mesmos clichês de sempre kk....................................................................................................
I think that this books pretty good. I have a good time reading it. I really hope the author doesn’t drop this. I dunno what else to say. This is one of the most enjoyable reading experiences I’ve had after the first 12-ish? Chapters.
I like the idea of traveling worlds and maybe even the multiverse and him becoming a deity or something similar the only issue I have is the summon contract like you said maybe if you explained the ramifications especially since he was pretty much murdered. more for it or make it more like a party system instead it would be better than signing a contract with someone you barely know especially when everything is new to him it seems like a risk 90 percent people wouldnt take without being influenced by external forces but even with that it was still a good read considering she doesnt abuse his trust. I also would like to see a little bit of fanfiction in this novel maybe he goes to worlds that he previously thought were fiction I would also like a more indept explanation of magic and his powers he seems to do a lot of things instantly when other people struggle maybe explain his strengths a bit more along with a more in dept power system. These are just my opinions though but everything about this novel is very well written so Ill give 5 stars along with a blessing that you continue the novel or rewrite it.
I enjoy the MC and the characters in this novel. The writing started off a little to forced and the MC became too OP. I almost dropped it, but wanted to see if the MC would change. I felt at about chapter 20 the author got their rhythm, and made me look forward to the next volume. I hope you keep writing.
The story is unique and creative while also using common tropes quite well. The characterization is a little weird at the beginning but it gets better. The best part of this story is the worlds building.
I really liked the story At this point I’m just trying to increase the character amount so the site will let me post this review all I want to say was I like the story
I loved this book. I'm disappointed that other people couldn't see where the story was going but I think you were really on to something. I will definitely read your other novels. Thank you for the work you put in and best of luck with your other books.
I LOVE THIS ahhhhh idk what to say this is what i always wanted in a book omg pls dotn stop writing take all my stones !!!!!!!!!! im not good in discribing but give it a try pls its just realy what i love
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While I hesitated early one, I have come to appreciate this. I suggest to keep at it man, you have a good story here with a lot of fun with tropes and some parody. Its honestly fantastic. The writting is spot on, and you keep the characters growing and maturing. I greatly appreciate this. I hope you continue this work. I can honestly say folks, give this story a chance and read all the current chapters. Trust me, I am for the most part super picky, read this story.
First of all I'd like to say that I normally prefer main characters who are "evil" and there are some parts of the story that I personally disliked but the character stays true to himself. You can twist logic into whatever direction you wish with enough effort so I won't go into the character being dense and doing unnecessary things when there are far more efficient paths but I really like that stubborn humanity here. Other than me liking the character there was growth. I made a mistake dropping Overgeared because I disliked the main character but ended up not only liking the journey of growth but also the development of the whole story. I really like this story. The world isn't exactly described in great detail but things aren't left completely empty either. The progress is rather fast considering how fast 6 years passed but I really enjoyed that time skip that showed milestones instead of explaining things in hindsight. I'm not going to spoil it but the revenge was fitting for the character. I personally would have gone far further with my enemies but it was somewhat similar to the writing itself. Extremely smooth but very meaningful and not a light punishment by any means. Overall read it ffs! Also Salt I don't think you made a mistake with your writing...I think people need the patience to read at least 60 chapters. I'd be a total hypocrite to say that you need to do that at minimum when I have stopped reading simply due to a single thing that I really didn't like but this story definitely deserves at least those 60 chapters. Hopefully you can still keep writing this with passion and hopefully people will enjoy it like I did. Looking forward to more chapters.
Warning: Let go of all logic when you read this book! This book’s mc is so overpowered you already know he’s gonna win. This is only for those who enjoy seeing overpowered characters who become even stronger as the story progresses. It is really satisfying for me to see such an absurd power growth. Writing Quality: I did not see any grammatical errors or mistakes that ruined the reading experience for me, so I would rate it 5 stars. But, there were some dialogues between clones that were pretty confusing. I do not know if that was intentional. Updates: I read this is one sitting so i don’t know how fast and good the releases will be. Story Development: The story is very easy to follow and it makes me expectant for more. Character Development: For the author, fleshing out the characters is done in a simple back story, and that’s it. Most of the character development is with the MC, and that’s perfectly okay. I like MC-centered novels. I think the sacrifice of significant fleshing out of characters for the development of the story is worth it. World Background: The setting of this novel leaves a lot of potential, as it is after all on a universal scale. This could go well or it could go poorly. I am excited to see how the MC becomes a universal powerhouse! :)
Brilliant! Ever read Low Dimensional Game? This novel gives the same vibe. Virtuous cycle of empire building and power growth. Some love stories. POV of side characters. Recipe for the good novel. There was a bug in author-sama thinking at around 16 chapter. Don't worry, keep reading. Don't let confusion sway you away from this gem.
Really great WIP and didn’t get the attention it deserved. A lot of negative reviews because of how some characters’s personalities, but there can’t be any growth if there aren’t any flaws at first. Daisy was a ditz and super carefree, but realized she’s gunna fall behind and become useless. Dumbass noble is typical dumbass noble, but that let more intelligent noble have a role. This story has a lot of room for growth, a lot of potential, and it’s one of the few that I think can actually live up to that potential.
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Good story, terrible synopsis. A few early MC decision "flaws" are explained over the story which shows a good bit of planning and character consistency, but webnovel readers tend towards low patience, so it could maybe do with a bit more explanation of protagonist thought process for some decision making moments. For those wanting a better synopsis, see below: After a string of bad luck and persecution from corrupt mobsters, John had little left apart from his life and he was about to lose even that. So when he got the option to join the Mission Worlds, he chose "yes." Now a powerful pyromancer he knows he can get his revenge. The new question is can he survive his new lifestyle? And how can he rescue his parents? Anything is possible in the Mission Worlds. You just have to be strong enough to take it. Includes: system, power growth, somewhat OP MC, clever MC (but not-socially-robotic), empire building.