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very nice and enjoyable novel and had a lot of potentials but sadly it is dropped. I don't know if you are even active anymore but if you ever see this than I hope you continue it back.
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I think the only bad thing about this novel is the fact that no matter how hard you try to "change" things, it always revolves around the main story and the characters. Yes, it is a little different from the original story, but everything is still centered on Rias. The main plot remains the same, nothing really different or outstanding, with the difference that the MC is an angel with powerful parents. Although the fact that it is not a harem is not bad at all, it does not eliminate the problem that most fan-fics have. The MC has little to no influence on canon, making it seem like he's not needed at all and there is only this one as a supporting character 😕.
Spoiler enthüllenLike the setting 👀🤔🙂🙃😉👀😉🙃😘😉😘🙃😉🙃🙃😉🙃😉🙃😊😉🙃😉🙃😊🙃😉🙃😊🙃😊🙃😉🙃😉🙃😊🤔😉🤔😉🤔🙂🤔🙂🤔🙂🤔😊🤔😊🤔😊🙃😉😊😊😀😊😍😀😀😉
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You know what? here take 5 star for only having no harem tag IN DXD WORLD!!!! You know what? here take 5 star for only having no harem tag IN DXD WORLD!!!! You know what? here take 5 star for only having no harem tag IN DXD WORLD!!!!
I was a little skeptical at first, but after catching up on the story I have no complaints. Good writing, good narrative, good character representation and acceptable OC. Overall a great story.
the story is very unique... a dxd without harem is already rare enough much less so when the mc here is an angel... so please don't drop this...
Thanks for the chapter And can't wait to see next chapter...👍🏻👍🏻👿👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
I must agree with some comments. Why create an oc protagonist if the plot will continue in the same way? It will revolve around the "protagonists" and around the city of Kuoh! And as far as I can remember he has a high position in the hierarchy of heaven, so he was simply sent to look at a city (to help with canon events, of course)? It seems like a fanfiction law that every dxd story should revolve around Rias and his devil friends I find hilarious the people with such disgust for the harem , beacause this isa world basically made for the MC to have a harem hahahahahaha. Well, not that I care, it makes no difference to me!
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This story is great its one of the only story's where the grammar isnt ****ed up. The main character isnt rushing to make a harem and and the characters actually have personality
Really had potential cuz DxD story has no backbone and barely any world building so really could have done something here but alas story still mainly revolve around Rias and her peerage but only 20 chaps so that could change hopefully
No matter how much you try to 'change' things, it still always revolved around the main story and chracters. Yeah so what if its just a little different? All DxD story always centers around Rias. The main plot is still the same, nothing really different or stands out.
A very frequent problem, same as most of the fan-fics. The MC has little to no influence on canon which makes it feel like he is not at all required and like a sidekick.
DXD and not a harem. Immediate 5 stars. Writing quality and plot development both 5 stars. Its an interesting story and I hope that it is written to completion.
I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM HERE 😬😬😬
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very nice and enjoyable novel and had a lot of potentials but sadly it is dropped. I don't know if you are even active anymore but if you ever see this than I hope you continue it back.
Good ……………………………………….."……………………………………………………………………………………… … … … … .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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I think the only bad thing about this novel is the fact that no matter how hard you try to "change" things, it always revolves around the main story and the characters. Yes, it is a little different from the original story, but everything is still centered on Rias. The main plot remains the same, nothing really different or outstanding, with the difference that the MC is an angel with powerful parents. Although the fact that it is not a harem is not bad at all, it does not eliminate the problem that most fan-fics have. The MC has little to no influence on canon, making it seem like he's not needed at all and there is only this one as a supporting character 😕.
Spoiler enthüllenLike the setting 👀🤔🙂🙃😉👀😉🙃😘😉😘🙃😉🙃🙃😉🙃😉🙃😊😉🙃😉🙃😊🙃😉🙃😊🙃😊🙃😉🙃😉🙃😊🤔😉🤔😉🤔🙂🤔🙂🤔🙂🤔😊🤔😊🤔😊🙃😉😊😊😀😊😍😀😀😉
Spoiler enthüllenXP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP
You know what? here take 5 star for only having no harem tag IN DXD WORLD!!!! You know what? here take 5 star for only having no harem tag IN DXD WORLD!!!! You know what? here take 5 star for only having no harem tag IN DXD WORLD!!!!
I was a little skeptical at first, but after catching up on the story I have no complaints. Good writing, good narrative, good character representation and acceptable OC. Overall a great story.
the story is very unique... a dxd without harem is already rare enough much less so when the mc here is an angel... so please don't drop this...
Thanks for the chapter And can't wait to see next chapter...👍🏻👍🏻👿👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
I must agree with some comments. Why create an oc protagonist if the plot will continue in the same way? It will revolve around the "protagonists" and around the city of Kuoh! And as far as I can remember he has a high position in the hierarchy of heaven, so he was simply sent to look at a city (to help with canon events, of course)? It seems like a fanfiction law that every dxd story should revolve around Rias and his devil friends I find hilarious the people with such disgust for the harem , beacause this isa world basically made for the MC to have a harem hahahahahaha. Well, not that I care, it makes no difference to me!
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Jamon............................................ ............Jamon................................ ........................Jamon.................... ....................................Jamon........
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good.
This story is great its one of the only story's where the grammar isnt ****ed up. The main character isnt rushing to make a harem and and the characters actually have personality
Really had potential cuz DxD story has no backbone and barely any world building so really could have done something here but alas story still mainly revolve around Rias and her peerage but only 20 chaps so that could change hopefully
No matter how much you try to 'change' things, it still always revolved around the main story and chracters. Yeah so what if its just a little different? All DxD story always centers around Rias. The main plot is still the same, nothing really different or stands out.
A very frequent problem, same as most of the fan-fics. The MC has little to no influence on canon which makes it feel like he is not at all required and like a sidekick.
DXD and not a harem. Immediate 5 stars. Writing quality and plot development both 5 stars. Its an interesting story and I hope that it is written to completion.
I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM I AM HERE 😬😬😬
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Spoiler enthüllen. . .good fanfic. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . M.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .needd moree
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