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Tomb Raider New Game
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I have seen too many anime fanfics. I want to change that by adding video game fanfic based on the tomb raider games and comic book. I am also first writing fanfic, so go easy on me when criticizing. Also, English is not my primary language, but I live in America long already to know some basic English.
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An ex-military assassinated when playing his last game, tomb raider. when asked what, would he wish would be, he asked God to erase his memories but keep his knowledge of his past and skills (i don't want him to know the plot of the game, but he will have plot armor as power, but that's it no superpowers like Sharingan or devil fruit just pure John Wick gunplay, maybe)
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because I only played the recent three games that come out and read the comic book, I will be the focus on that end of the story (i.e., concise story) but if I feel like adding new game entry I might take a while as I need to do some research older games that will add as the three games don't follow the Lora Croft of the past (I mean that she dual wields handguns and backflipping from the old sets)
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Hi author,I like the story is original and not the typical system harem etc...I think that you should slow down the pace of the story to put more details and describe the situations better and a little more dialogue with explanation of feeling to make it more realistic. With that said I love the story thanks Keep writing please
Five stars because it is different and on this site different is needed also great read Why 140 characters? ............................
What kind of fucking dumbass asks his memory to be erased when he is asking to be reborn in a world of his own choosing......seems like the author cudnt think anything more creative .......
Hello guys and gals. Do you like some misery p*rn? Then I got the book just for you. Do you want the misery of the Mc from Re:zero but without its charm and writing quality? Then this book is your cup of tea. Do you want your joy get suck out of you and make you feel like garbage? Then why come on to this piece of trash. This novel will make you feel exhausted just by the sheer amount of sh*t the Mc will go through without a satisfying payoff. But seriously I don't like misery p*rn and reading this novel made me feel exhausted and feels like a chore to read. It has readable grammar at least but story is just tiring to get through. So if you like that the go ahead and read it but for me it's not my cup of tea.
ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย) ฉันชอบผลงานของคุณมาก (นี้คือรีวิวแรกของฉัน ฉันเป็นคนไทย)
author, FUCK your plot armour author, FUCK your plot armour author, FUCK your plot armour author, FUCK your plot armour author, FUCK your plot armour
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Self - insert MC - moody, paranoid, strong but not strongest, unstable mind. World - Alternate Earth mix of SCP mythos, Tomb Raider Reboot game, Uncharted Trilogy game and authors original world build. Characters - You can see different type of characters here, surely characters that show was the one above and other characters in different series became OOC that you can relate plus authors original characters. What to expect when reading this fic. Trust me some of you may annoyed on how author develop his MC characters but if you're fan of the above title maybe just give it a shot it start good anyway. MC life was full of tragedy that his mind became a little bit unstable, always cautious to surrounding and moody close to become edge lord. Oh spoiler alert if you reading this I'm at chapter 46 and from what author said and I remembering it right there's upcoming tragedy to authors life again getting closer enough to snap MC out of his mind.
Just by reading the description of the book I knew something was wrong when I realized I never played the first of the reboot games and I was introduced to the series on the second of the reboot series Holy crap my life is a lie.
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good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Please give us more, it's pretty interesting so far. 4.5/5 Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Volumen 1
- 1 The Three Factions 4 years ago
- 2 Squad Members 4 years ago
- 3 Chapter 6 4 years ago
- 4 Himura's Sparring Practice 4 years ago
- 5 Start Of a Journey 4 years ago
- 6 Chapter 9 4 years ago
- 7 Chapter 10 R-18 4 years ago
- 8 Chapter 11 4 years ago
- 9 Chapter 12 4 years ago
- 10 Chapter 13 4 years ago
- 11 The Weapon of Dr. Amari 4 years ago
- 12 Site-14 Part 1 the Elevators 4 years ago
- 13 site-14 part 2 Final Part!!! 4 years ago
- 14 Conclusion and New Beginning 4 years ago
- 15 Family Meeting 4 years ago
- 16 Sanjouno Haruhime's day 4 years ago
- 17 Elena Fisher 4 years ago
- 18 New Bionic Arm 4 years ago
- 19 Meeting Nathan Drake 4 years ago
- 20 Uncharted Part 1 4 years ago
- 21 Uncharted Part 2 4 years ago
- 22 Uncharted Part 3 4 years ago
- 23 Uncharted Part 4 Final Part!! 4 years ago
- 24 Conclusion and New Problems 4 years ago
- 25 The Holy Grail Part 1 4 years ago
- 26 The Holy Grail Part 2 The Holy Knights 4 years ago
- 27 The Holy Grail Part 3 4 years ago
- 28 Title At The End of The End Chapter 4 years ago
- 29 Himura's thoughts 4 years ago
- 30 Being a Single Father 4 years ago
- 31 "Shopping" with my Daughter 4 years ago
- 32 Haru's Plan 4 years ago
- 33 The Woman I Bumped Into 4 years ago
- 34 Lara Croft 4 years ago
- 35 Two Strangers 4 years ago
- 36 Haru's New Mommy Plan 4 years ago
- 37 Is Mommy Pregnant 4 years ago
- 38 Drunk Lara R-18 4 years ago
- 39 All Good Things Must Come To An End 4 years ago
- 40 Kathmandu 4 years ago
- 41 Reunion 4 years ago
- 42 Captured 4 years ago
- 43 Mental Breakdown 4 years ago
- 44 Chloe Frazer 4 years ago
- 45 Realization and Escaping 4 years ago
- 46 Yeti 4 years ago
- 47 Road to Shambhala Part 1 4 years ago
- 48 Road to Shambhala Part 2 Final 4 years ago
- 49 Conclusion 4 years ago
- 50 Becoming a Cameraman Again... 4 years ago
- 51 Two fate intertwined 4 years ago
- 52 Joseph's Secrets 4 years ago
- 53 Sam's Plan 4 years ago
- 54 The Real Lara Croft 4 years ago
- 55 Dragon's Triangle 4 years ago
- 56 Shipwreck 4 years ago
- 57 A Race Against Time 4 years ago
- 58 Your "Princess" Is In Another Castle 4 years ago
- 59 Lara's worries 4 years ago
- 60 Lost and Sacrifice 4 years ago
- 61 The Monster Hidden Within 4 years ago
- 62 Sniper 4 years ago
- 63 Cage 4 years ago
- 64 The Man in Red 4 years ago
- 65 Fall 4 years ago
- 66 Trust Your Instincts 4 years ago
- 67 Lara's Guilt 4 years ago
- 68 Night Raid 4 years ago
- 69 Oni Part 1 4 years ago
- 70 Oni Part 2 Final 4 years ago
- 71 I Love... 4 years ago
- 72 Ace Pilot 4 years ago
- 73 Guilt and Regrets 4 years ago
- 74 The Four Calamities 4 years ago
- 75 Dragon Syndicate 4 years ago
- 76 Professor Williams 4 years ago
- 77 Kidnapping 4 years ago
- 78 Heading Back to Yamatai 4 years ago
- 79 Disrupting the Ritual 4 years ago
- 80 The Hidden Threat 4 years ago
- 81 Getting a New Pet 4 years ago
- 82 Assassination Contract 4 years ago
- 83 The Dragon Emperor and The Cursed Sword 4 years ago
- 84 Concentration Camp 4 years ago
- 85 Escape 4 years ago
- 86 Shangri-la Part 1 4 years ago
- 87 Shangri-la Part 2 4 years ago
- 88 Sangri-la Part 3 4 years ago
So I was pretty excited going into this. I just recently finished playing the 3 recent tomb raider games back to back so the timing was perfect. However, my excitement was quickly shot down and curb stomped into the ground. Made some lame wishes but that's whatever, didn't care much. I was just too excited to get into the story. I even ignored the subpar English. You made it clear early on that this would not be exclusively Tomb Raider, and would also be including some other series like Uncharted and Indiana Jones. This is fine because all these series' are similar in the fashion that they are mostly grounded in reality with some supernatural sprinkled on top. I'm completely fine with making this a crossover, I thought it was a nice twist. What I am NOT okay with though is when you started adding a bunch of other weird shıt and even started adding some goddamn anime characters... Like, really bruh? You said in the description that you read too many anime fanfics, which is why you decided to write a Tomb Raider fanfic. So, why would you do this? Sigh.. The story hasn't even gotten to the Tomb Raider part yet, but I no longer even care about that. After all the plots and elements introduced the Tomb Raider storyline now feels meaningless. The icing on the cake for my disapointment is added when you decided to incorporate a system. Unnecessary and unwanted. As if his 'powers' weren't lame enough already. The cherry on top is when his girlfriend dies and is reborn as his daughter. That shıt is just weird. I don't know if I'll continue this or not. Can't really find the motivation to do so. Maybe if it starts getting better, idk.
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